Yeah, we enjoy this shit regularly

It really is the best ain't it?

YOU HAVE ARRIVED........ AT THE PROMISED LAND!!!!!!! ;) :D :D

Autism, my friend. Sadly, the benefits aren't worth the downsides.

Alternate? I thought this was a well-regarded documentary of the history of our future

At least he died a good death and went out like a badass. I prefer this ending for him lol

Magnus was always a good boy. He broke the rules trying to save the imperium. Had the emperor listened to his son who CLEARLY went through extreme lengths to talk to him, he could've stopped the horus heresy. Or at least massively reduced the traitor forces. :C

@@NeiasaurusCreations Has The Emperor ever listened to anyone?

In the 2nd or 3rd Horus Heresy book (I forget which) Horus states that 3 of his brothers are so completely loyal to the Emperor that it is pointless to even try swaying them: Guilliman, Sanguninius, and Magnus.

@@complex314i that's really interesting

And in typical angron fashion...Failing hard and dyin'. Angron was always the let down of the priamrchs. Who had never figured out this "leadership" or "commander" thing.

At least he goes out like a badass and his legion, along with the people of Prospero, continue to live on.

the wolfman i think is is pretty cool though how no matter what side alpharias is on he still manages to troll papa smurf in spectaculr and masterful fashion

yeaaaaaaaaaaah

wait why isnt horus aximand no longer a part of the mounival?

FUCK SPACE WOLVES! FUCKING FURRIES!

Bruva Alfabusa needs to make a special about this it would be great

Dante: "SIGGY! How ARE you doing?"

So would Fulgrim end up fucking Yvrainne instead of Guilliman

@@thatfrog05 yes... even from beyond the grave, Fulgrim claps cheeks

*sigh* If only...

Fulgrim: What of myself? What do your visions tell you of my fate? What will happen to me!? Konrad Curze: ... *Death.*

@@shadowstrider8295 poor fulgrim

why do i imagine sanguinius making pink guy moans while he fought Kurze?

@@Drew_Thompson yes inquisitor this guy right here

Konrad was always the best primarch

G the t FTChbihiibjiijiiijjbji

@@jeffbiggs9409 can we get a psychic subtitle with that? - astropath #428 who JUST sadly fizzleburnt out

Uh... Dunno what you think would happen tbh, aint like anyone is around to stop a daemon Primarch or two from murdering dear ol daddy and opening the biggest warp gate since the Eye of Terror on Terra

Will there be a sequel?

Super Savage Bros! Magnus is our boy. He was always treated much harsher than he deserved.

Super Savage Bros! MGnus deserves everything he gets.

Wait! Are you saying that Magnus deserved everything that happened to him? That is some HERESY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Neel Oak of course he did he damned his legion by not answering his brothers calls to return home. The Great Wolf tried to talk several times but Magnus just sulked and lead to the down fall of prospero.

Magnus is my number 2 fave. After Mortarion. My top 5 being Mortarion, Magnus, Sanguinius, Angron, and Horus

As an inversion of the classic meme: "Everyone always gives Kharn the reputation of being a nice guy, but he's really a total prick"

I imagine angronala celebrations include an open challenge feast of blades, where the loyalist legions send their best and brightest to fight for the honor (obviously its just a sparing match)being named emperor's champion that year. And it's televised for the entertainment if the citizens ...basically a combination of wrestelmania and the olympics

@@joseemanuelmontalvomelende5134 THIS except with space Metallica playing at Max volume whilst this is going on

@@joseemanuelmontalvomelende5134 By the Holy God-Emperor on Terra that is amazing and I love it and that would be such a moral boost (to loyalists. For traitors it'd be a terrifying sight, as it should be.)

Sexy voice Guy LINKIN LOYALISTS WOOOOO

That is an *excellent* chapter name.

@@andyb1653 Thanks. They are my current army. I've been using Space Wolves rules for the heavy close combat and been using war dogs for counts as Fenrisian Wolves

How does Horus have world breaker? World breaker was a gift for accepting the station of warmaster. Also why does Magnus have to lose.

I too have been building a world eater army as a space wolves successor. The war hounds, but 1st born marines cause fuck primaris and their lack of melee

(Thinks)... arco-flagellants aside, has the imperium ever tried making what is basically a K-9 unit for space marines? I know they have genetically engineered horses

I do like how at this point the Loyalists are essentially all offensive balanced, so you have madman Kurz, Master infiltrator Alpharius/Omagon, and then the sigebreakers Pertarbo, Angron, *and* Mortarian, arguably Magnus belongs in that group as well, as his overwhelming psychic might can be easily used from a massive distance, the only ones that don't fit that mold are Lorgar, the Indoctrinator I guess? Horus the Protagonist, and Fulgrim the Perfect, and also very dead. So you need to find a way to turn this defensive one into an offensive one, so you have discovery quick, and sabotages often, then pertarabo designing basically ambuscade points and open fields to slaughter people with devastating counter attacks moreso then hiding behind their walls, it leads to a more interesting war because those specialized in defense are the ones forced onto the offence, and vice versa, loads of behind the lines fighting, simply because of the design of the war.

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Like me with Light mode on dsicord! XD lel.

They really had to do him like that

He is still trying to get coffee... some say in the depths of the underhives of Terra you can still sometimes hear him frustratedly bargaining with distant vendors, only to vanish before you reach the source of the voice, ashamed for how long this simple task is taking him...

lol rip

He’s just like Yarael Poof and arrives when everyone died after the Siege of Terra and his dad slain and he’s just like “all my brothers are dead”

Lol funny thing with me… I listened to this during my 12 hour at work and was playing it towards then thinking about it… then on my way home I was listening to Rylanors last stand and fucking realized it… and yelled “ancient of rites” so fucking hard my throat hurt

The Inquisition would like to recruit you into our ranks.

To be honest if the loyalist primarchs were traitors I think they would win with Dorn at the helm. Such stoic champion would laugh at the loyalist traitors

@@dole-brentbayalas854 idk man i think you underestimate good ole perty

@@apreture0 Also horus. Because horus was the best of the primarchs, that's why his fall was so tragic.

@@dole-brentbayalas854 He was created to defend. He wasn’t an offensive genius, such as Perturabo. He wasn’t charming enough to convince others to join his cause. That would have failed utterly. Horus was the perfect combination of a warrior, general, and politician. Without him, even Sanguinius would struggle to have his brothers join his cause

That actually might have worked better

Truly, a hell even the Night Haunter could scarce endure

Oh god I could see The Luna wolves becoming the Ultramarine in this

Trust me dude you just made his day...maybe he is doin a sequel? Takes time writing a saga lol People are ready for theoreticus part 2 so you got alot of people that totally agree with ya on here!

Mabye in this universe he can get the help he needs.

Little Horus turns into a yes man at the start of the Heresy. Mal was more proactive and independent. It kinda makes sense for Little Horus to be the equirrey as all his thoughts and beliefs line up well with Horus whereas Mal would be more open with his beliefs and keep Horus in line. That's just my opinion though... That being said, Mal was a yes man too, but, again, less self-conscious about the whole "being an imperfect copy of his primarch" thing.

Maybe Little Horus dies against the White Scars so Mal joins up

Curze is just playing "Die Hard". Maloghurst never had the accident on 63-19, so he never had to give up his spot.

They need to wait before the next big event happens in warhammer. They need more content before they do this again. Maybe a reversed iron cage?

agree

Technically the emperor must of died from his 2 lost primarchs so chaos victory unless someone kills the 2 primarchs before they remove the emperor from the throne and plunge terra into the warp

Where did Kahn die?

Okay so Mortarion, Perturabo, Horus, Lorgar, and Alpharius are still alive.

I didn't really like most of the deaths, all the primachs who died did so too easily, imo. I think the story was a bit to close to canon, in general. I imagine it would have played out completely differently with different sides, rather than the primachs all just essentially swapping roles. Also, why did Magnus have to have his spine snapped by Russ in canon, then killed off-screen by him here (Off-page? Off-script? Not sure how to word that for a spoken story, hah). And why couldn't Magnus also teleport himself with his legion, like he did in canon? (Yes, I do play a Thousand Sons army, haha). I know grimdark is the name of the game, but there was so much room for creativity and this felt more like a shitty modern remake of older films to me, hah. I'm not saying it's bad, I still enjoyed it (Lorgar was great in this), but I feel that there were a lot of missed opportunities here for a completely new story.

Astartes with common sense: *"A'ight, imma head out"* 🙅🏃

And if you break the line you have a horde of World Eaters led by Angron himself waiting to greet you at the door

The Death Guard and Kreigsmen would make a great pair.

@@kenya6497 Hippity hoppity the death guard is the revan's property.

Nurgle Blood Angels are still better.

Magnus was always a sort of a good guy.

MY HEART IS HURTIN MAKE IT STOP

FOR YHE EMPORER!

Conagher Denson I feel like Magnus’ story in whatever reality will always be a tragedy.

Implying he was ever not the good guy? Magnus did nothing wrong!

yippie ki-ay, Heretic

@Iron Hands Terminator you forget that angron wished to die like a warrior in the original heresy. So yeah no biggie for him.

right? the use of Religion to deliver the most badass of ultimatums is astounding, even in our own history, "Kill them all, God will recognize his own." comes to mind

@@bladestormviking *in a Macraggian accent* "Now - I - Have - A - Boltgun".

Cringe

I hear ya. This didn't sound like Khan at all. It sounded like Magnus and he was going by the name of Khan

Yeah those men of iron who disappeared into the warp will be back after self replicating and reverse engineering/improving imperial ship tech for 10,000 years

Iron Star they’re... uh... they’re called the necrons these days... (because when messing with cannon, lets go full boar.

so... that's kind of what happened to Magnus though. like... nearly the same situation.

@@The_Murder_Party Worse now there are TWO Necrons!

Hydra dominatus, the emperor protects

HYDRA DOMINATUS

@@Sigmar_Heldenhammer Don't forget their second battle cry: "For the Emperor"

Maybe the Emperor is the Hydra? Maybe 'Hydra Dominatus' is just the XX Legion's way of saying the Emperor is the ruler of all things.

Always and forever, we are omnipresent.

ϟhitlord Untrue

We are here to do two things and two things only; Steal Shit and Purge Heretics ... and we already stole your shit so let's do this!

Ivan, hide the artifacts.

They’re already gone, fucking magpies

Do the blood ravens have red skin? If they do then definitely. They are a successor chapter. There's no other option. But if they don't, then I don't think that they could be the thousand sons only successor chapter due to Magnus having red skin (so the thousand sons also have red skin) .

marinescu0511 same only with angron falling back from Russ

Same for me, except it was "the liquid metal of his arms began to oxidise and corrode"

That's creepy

Omg same i woke up and it was just him whispering and I was well confused

Me too

actually i would see IW returning to Imperium. Out of all hereticus chapters - a) they have the least ties to chaos gods b) they have actually out of all legion good reason to be ... mad at imperium - they were a working horse of crusade, no glory, no fame, no recognition. While Perturabo all in all, while ruthless, is creature of cold logic. His "daemon ascension" is dodgy thing (he's daemon prince of what god of what allegiance - Perturabo don't really like chaos gods and mutations (see him and Fulgrim story within eye of terror) - soooo ... I think he would be talked down to return to emperium (it wouldn't be easy)

if ultramar rebelled, it would be a flat rebellion and not chaos-fueled. i could easily have seen guilliman saying "but MY empire isn't fucked up...." and just laying out of the whole deal

Lorgar got the same kind of apotheosis, so be powerful enough, and Undivided is still an option (plus it used to actually be an on table option)

The moment you mentioned little Horus I felt sad

Sad yet true. Loken fell after being located by the founders of the grey knights. He fought against Horus to save his brothers.

Why do so many ppl spell Emperor with the E and O reversed?

@@andyb1653 the way it's pronounced.

@@The_Murder_Party I suppose that's true, but you'd have to figure any 40K fan sees that particular word in print on a regular basis and would be familiar with how it's spelled?

Ryan Louis He used the energy that would be necessary for that, in order to cast a thousand powered bro-spell

Who were the two invaders?

one was corvus i guess the other was jegathai not too sure i cant really remember how is story arc ended after he fougth with horus but i think was safed by his stormseers and just fled into nothing and corvus ... idk completly forgott him

The lost and the purged. Those where the most primarchs

II and IX Legiones Astartes Prinarchs, the Lost and the Purged.

Thank you :)

Will we get any continuations to this? I would like for this alternate scenario to be explored in depth.

So who were the two invaders?

40K Theories fantastic job... Bu who was the to power armored dudes at the end? Alfarius omegon?

Schitz the lost primarchs

Painting some guys based off of this would be a fun (albeit expensive) project.

Magnus went down like a rock.

a star shaped rock ?

Magnus went down like a true hero.

*FOR THE EMPEROR!*

Konrad Kurze is basycally rambo, everything he does in this story is amazing

Lt. Hedgie AVE DOMINUS NOX

So basically Lorgar became this 40k’s version of Sanguinius but alive?

@@mut1565 Close but yeah.

Lorgar has a popemobile, except it's an enormous flagship. I like this.

Heresy!

Uriel Sedd as he should. He's a good boy and deserves that slushy.

Slurping a slushy washes away the pain in your heart because your dad is dieing

:'(

jack1701e That part hit me the hardest honestly. And then when he kills the other and the mental destruction as a result.

Is your profile picture captain Speirs from Band of Brothers?

But wait...what are those guys who wear spikes and tats around there body with similar symbols then?

Pyroskies they were cartoon characters, citizens :)

Inquisitor Thomas you lie you lied to everyone Cadia Has Fallen and people must fight back

James What? Can't hear you over the sound of all that heresy. *BLAM* *BLAM* *BLAM*

James Yeah, I checked and Cadia is fine, I spoke with Creed, super nice guy, he's in great health, turns out the reason people are saying Cadia is destroyed is because Creed is such a tactical genius that Heretics can't see the Planet. Loyal citizens of the Imperium can see it fine, and Cadia is very welcoming to tourists, unfortunately the Planet is under renovation, they're adding a Dairy Queen, and the Planet won't be open to visitors till further notice, the Cadian tourist board apologizes for the inconvenience.

CrazyLoon Magnus’s death was necessary. If Magnus lives, he could’ve taken his place on the golden thrown while The Emperor quashed Dorn’s rebellion personally.

@@briancates3576 yeah... unfortunately Magnus OP.

Abbadon is a sicret loyalist thats why he wastes chaos from inside

@@szymonbollin5074 We are Alphari...Boom!

@@iamgroobs9377 Alphariboom is my fav Primarch.

Well the difference with this is, the emperor teleported Angrons gladiators as well

tell me about it, Magnus is my man...

and the Thousand Sons get wrecked, such is life.

@@The_Murder_Party yea and people still blame them for that one thing their primarch done. Poor guy.

@@ravezon even his sin was done with the purist of intentions...

@@The_Murder_Party yea and both side wants him gone. Well technically Horus wants him gone since he was gonna tell daddy on him and accidentally he just broke daddy lego toy on the way too.

personally i'm just gad someone decided to have Angron not do something ridiculously stupid because nails. I mean not to throw hate at the H.H writers but having a MAJOR character point be "he is seriously fuck ass mad all the time" and not be holy fuck he is the ONLY primarch to never conquer his home planet never be expanded upon, or fleshed out really saddens me. He was always my favorite and after reading Betrayer, he only became better. I don't know i just don't buy the whole "I can stand Horus, more than i can stand the Emperor" bit i kind of would have liked to see him be a "rough" Primarch a war lord out to make his empire or something of the like.

i like that you critized it but did not troll it. You gave specific concise thoughts and preferences. I guess I am just so used to people hitting the dislike button or writing a short review like "This Sucks!" and then moving on with contempt that when I first started reading this I assumed this was just another example of that. But I was wrong.

I can answer the first question. The mechanics, while many do believe the emperor to be the machine God/ominisichia(which yes, are different however it is unclear to what degree. Similar to different Christian philosophies. Some of which claim Jesus(ominisichia) to be different while others dont). Many did not, especially before the hearsay and the fabricator general was known to want an independent mars and did not think the emperor was either.

H240909 Its obvouis that the emperor is reunited with two sons and how they acted I would say by logic what happens next. The emperor Protects.

We'll never know now

H240909 the 2 lost primarchs

I read a version where Angron still got the butcher's nails, but the emperor teleported him and his Gladiators to the ship earning his Loyalty

I can’t remember if it’s this version or another one but I remember one where they got to him before the nails

I think this is the Dornian Heresy version of him. Horus convinced the Emperor to take to the field of battle, rather then just teleporting Angron away, earning his loyalty, which was then cemented with the removal of the Butchers Nails, since they weren't fully embedded yet. This caused him to be more compassionate, and trained his legion to be disciplined martial soldiers, rather then bezerkers.

I mean Angron hated this dad but he hated cowardice, weakness and anything other than melee combat more. Despite that being the perfect storm for a fall to Khorne, remember that Angron never actually really made the choice for himself. Given no one other than Lorgar was known to really hang out with him, it makes sense that a loyalist Lorgar would do the same thing he did in cannon but the opposite, make the target their weakeness, and the hound of war was ready to kick some ass. I fully believe Angron could have stayed loyal even with the brain nails if the circumstances around the heresy kept the traitors away from him for a while

@@ianharrison5758 Angron kinda was a failure of a primarch. He got caught, and enslaved. Than lead a rebellion that was doomed. And than blamed everyone else for it. Yes the emperor didn't help him. But it wasn't the emperor who chose to rebel, or commanded the rebellion poorly. That was angron. And Angron would continue this trait of horrible leadership all through the great crusade and horus heresy. Costing his own legion, and the other legions dearly time after time. And even when Russ tried to correct it by showing him what 'tactics' mean, he didn't get the message. Taking away that he "won the duel". But it was obvious to everyone else that Russ won, and could've had angron killed at any moment through superior tactics. A traitor russ is actually MORE terrifying than a traitor Angron. Because Russ was calculated, and smart. He was also made for execution of astartes. I like angron, but I kinda feel leaving him in charge of a single squad is probably too much responsibility. He should've never been given ANY form of command ANYWHERE, EVER. And instead paired with the lion. Used as a champion for the lion. This would also open a path to a loyaltist Angron and world eaters. If they were more or less embedded into the backside of the lion to avoid them being....Well angron and the world eaters. They likely would've just stayed with him. And the lion was probably one of the primarchs most dangerous to the traitors. They naturally feared him. He was also the only one that truly matched Horus. Well one of like three. The other two being Dorn and Fulgrim. Horus admitted that lunar wolves fighting the imperial fist/dorn in their element would be unending and unwinnable. Heck Dorn with usually sub 3 legions, fought 9 legions for 7 years, and was starting to win on Terra. As for Fulgrim, well Fulgrim's legion was small. But they were argueably one of the best legions of them all. Fulgrim was more or less given a challenge when being allowed to use the Aquila. To live up to the speech and vision for his legion. And he did. His first campaign proves it, when he crushes an enemy multiple other legions couldn't really do, by himself. And while he did suffer great losses, that doesn't take away that the job was supposed to take up multiple full legion deployments. And instead Fulgrim and his small legion did it, and did it well. Another example is when he crept up on Horus and nearly ended the entire thing if not for the blade's corruption. It was the moment Horus came closes to complete failure. Horus hit the jack pot when he scored Fulgrim, not least of which meant he actually survived that encounter. So I think embedding an Angron into the backside of a loyalist Lion, is probably the best way to deal with it. Have the lion controlling both legions, and angron being allowed to just do angron things. He'd probably even be happier that way.

Tommy Breitwieser well I don’t know about the other three but I think the one to replace Lucius would have to be Dante

Loangrimnar for champion of the blood god?

Azriel as Ahriman

jose emanuel montalvo melendez nah, bjorn the fell hand

@@pailhorsegaming6762 but Bjorn helped Ahriman.

Glad you liked it :)