Imagine how pissed gabbie would be to know a valid & Intelligent critic respects Trisha's poetry more than her's?
@hiitsnicetomeetyou4 жыл бұрын
I think part of why she prefers Trisha's poetry is actually exactly that. Trisha seems self aware and like she just uses poetry as an outlet, while Gabbie seems convinced that her poetry is just good, no need for actual effort on her part. Gabbie really takes herself too seriously in my opinion.
@OYJluv4 жыл бұрын
Everybody respects Trisha more than Gabbie in a lot of aspects 😂😂😂😂
@relent-lass75104 жыл бұрын
Shed make a video asking why
@allywallyeffect4 жыл бұрын
Brit Ann of course not, she’s too much of a KiNd PeRsOn
@mckennabokhoven75664 жыл бұрын
It dosent matter, we must all be highschool bully’s 😭✨
@starfish06074 жыл бұрын
Neither one's poetry is good, but Trisha's seems a lot less pretentious
@JohnDoe-xf8ew4 жыл бұрын
Agreed, Trisha's feels more raw because she seems less concerned with catering to an audience and is unapologetically herself (trolling/real emotion. Gabbie's seems so polished, her style doesn't feel her own. It's empty observations that reek of a dishonest cash grab.
@lazerinth3 жыл бұрын
Second reply✌🏻😳
@graydonpanzica3302 жыл бұрын
Gabbie's feels like the kid who skated by in school because they had really good ideas and never had to execute, where Trisha feels like the kid with real talent who got overlooked because she didn't seem to try.
@natalijastepanovic22274 жыл бұрын
i love how Trisha is a better poet than Gabbie 😂
@RoseNoel194 жыл бұрын
Seriously!!!!😂
@AmaniCarson4 жыл бұрын
It's not hard to be a better poet than Gabbie tbh
@natalijastepanovic22274 жыл бұрын
@@AmaniCarson true that
@amyd.51684 жыл бұрын
yeet yeet I feel like most of gabbies felt superficial and while Trishas weren’t that good they felt more real and emotional
@natalijastepanovic22274 жыл бұрын
@@amyd.5168 exactly,Gabbie was presenting herself as a real serious poet but honey she did NOT deliver
@matthewcarlson95914 жыл бұрын
I really like how in that first poem she uses “through” and “thru”. It’s like when guys let her “thru” she’s at a drive-thru. It’s a transactional relationship just like the transaction you’d get at a drive-thru.
@criminalkey22594 жыл бұрын
... damn
@RickReasonnz4 жыл бұрын
Maybe. Still so.... teen angsty.
@brittanygeren88814 жыл бұрын
I love that interpretation. Well said
@mirandaa65514 жыл бұрын
i just thought it was because she was rhyming a word with the same word... so she spelled it differently
@skweexer4 жыл бұрын
@@RickReasonnz analizing poetry can have some deeper meaning that may seem angsty, but sometimes it does have meaning
@astrogirl9274 жыл бұрын
The line "because no one cares about a whore and a whore doesn't care about you" I actually gasped that this came from trisha and honestly, I find some of these poems to be rather good. Way better than gabby's honestly.
@growingoaks2 жыл бұрын
I know! I wasn't paying attention to who wrote it and i rewound it and she said it was Trisha and I was like "oh, no shit?! shes actually rather intelligent considering how she acts on camera"
@WynnWynn-gl3fk3 ай бұрын
Why? It was so basic and stupid.
@nitikitti88174 жыл бұрын
This wasn’t as bad as I thought it was gonna be. I think Trisha’s smarter than she lets on. 🤔
@CatieMaria4 жыл бұрын
she definitely is. i think her entire online presence is a character she plays, even when she's supposed to seem genuine.
@aloeleaf4 жыл бұрын
Niti Kitti trisha is very intelligent. she's a business woman and she knows what she's doing
@lauchzwiebel4 жыл бұрын
She is really smart
@charlisebar-shai26134 жыл бұрын
Absolutely. Her online personality is crafted in order to gain attention, and that can only be thought of by a smart person.
@kishinumaayumi4 жыл бұрын
She definitely is
@connermcintosh43224 жыл бұрын
I wonder how Gabbie would feel if she knew Trisha’s poetry was better than hers.
@noraozer28004 жыл бұрын
Conner McIntosh same
@sugarcandy6544 жыл бұрын
She'd probably send her 38 text messages ranting
@OYJluv4 жыл бұрын
Oh she must know... 👀👀👀
@faithharris56944 жыл бұрын
Simon Rubero Ugh, I hate her (Gabbie)
@ishanafondekar63344 жыл бұрын
I think Trisha’s work is more respectable (not good definitely) bc despite not being an objectively good poem it does display her passion and her intentions are very clear so i can see why it would entertain people. Gabbie’s stuff is just pretentious and ridiculous so it entertains people by being just that crappy
@bonesandhearts56834 жыл бұрын
I feel like this type of poetry should have its own genre. Like, I recognize that technically it isn’t skillful or good, but it still incites the same feeling of relatability as skillful and good poems that I like. It’s like “camp poetry” maybe. Not really beautiful or tasteful or skilled, but you feel what the writer feels and you wouldn’t quite feel it if it were just prose.
@kayhaven47104 жыл бұрын
Emily Kipp I agree. I may not like Trisha Paytas a whole lot, but I still felt a connection to some of what she said. The emotion is there, it just needs to be polished up a bit.
@bonesandhearts56834 жыл бұрын
Kay Haven yeah I agree about Trisha she’s done and said some fucked up shit. But when it comes to her poetry, it’s kind of like ‘naïve art’, y’know? And I actually think that if it was polished up it might lose something. Like it reminds me of my horrible middle school poetry but in a way that evokes emotion, and I’m not sure that a polished piece could do the same.
@thanich97604 жыл бұрын
Emily Kipp Lang Leav called it “pop poetry”. I think that’s a pretty good term.
@venessavillanueva24534 жыл бұрын
Emily Kipp this is exactly what abstract or ugly art is, people think it’s ugly, without rhyme or rhythm, but it moves some people truely.
@pinkpink-kb6dl4 жыл бұрын
@Hans Hanzo i think of pop as pop art tho. Like with pop culture references and palatable colors that everyone can enjoy and understand. Which i think suits it very well, where pop as in pop music agreeably doesnt
@marywallace33784 жыл бұрын
You know that era from 2012-2015 when every youtuber was coming out with an autobiography or advice book of some sort? I think the same thing is happening with poetry. And I am simultaneously annoyed and entertained.
@louisamuller47564 жыл бұрын
I think it's because earlier, KZfaqrs were always trying to be the "older sister/brother" or "best friend" and now they're self-concious bc everybody thinks they're not working hard, so they want to be taken seriously and seen as "real artists".
@miagrace92404 жыл бұрын
the amount of time you spend talking about trishas poems compared to gabbies is really telling about gabbies poetry 😭 like even if trishas poetry isn’t necessarily good or well written/thought out, there’s so much emotion in it to unpack that it automatically makes it a lot better than gabbies. trishas just feels real and gabbies feels forced lol
@butwhatif...74273 жыл бұрын
Trisha’s WHOLE career has been “wait, is this..... bad or good?” “Is she serious?” “Is this intentional?” It makes sense her poetry would reflect that.
@armagedonnis4 жыл бұрын
First time I see someone referring to Trisha Paytas as "thought provoking" I agree with you, tho
@cam-tw8eq4 жыл бұрын
I mean she is definitely thought provoking
@annecyan12274 жыл бұрын
I didnt see it coming when i click on this video though:))
@noone-kv7yc4 жыл бұрын
666th like
@ffion76704 жыл бұрын
She is thought provoking as in her poetry still evokes emotion, I think if it were to be polished it would lose its emotional nature so it’s not like the work of Emily Dickinson or E.A. Poe but it’s unpolished which could add to the atmosphere of her poetry.
@OYJluv4 жыл бұрын
Trisha is like an onion. There are layers to her.
@nyx16764 жыл бұрын
I wasnt looking at the scren and was like "huh whats that growling noise" only to see your dog at the mic
@saharamoon77004 жыл бұрын
deadass same
@Miimiia4 жыл бұрын
Kyra's piggy noises are so adorable
@ellens91004 жыл бұрын
Same lol
@elle90464 жыл бұрын
read onision’s books. you could tear them all apart so easily
@kayhaven47104 жыл бұрын
elle but our goth queen strange aeons has already done so.
@andersonsmith86254 жыл бұрын
@@kayhaven4710 And our Lord and Savior Krimson Rogue
@blackpinkluv98694 жыл бұрын
Nah, she has more class than that
@LingLing-pn3us4 жыл бұрын
elle BAHAHAHAH 😆😆😆😆😆😆
@crowskinned4 жыл бұрын
if she gives any of her money to onision i'd be so mad
@Tb405564 жыл бұрын
I love how Trisha shamelessly publishes everything and I kinda love the confidence of it
@claycube95914 жыл бұрын
Sometimes I wish I had Trisha's confidence because she doesn't give a single shit but at the same time it can kinda be her downfall
@privateacademymoonshine6719 Жыл бұрын
fr!!
@hopehurley11514 жыл бұрын
i am a creative writing major and i had a professor tell me, "if it made you feel anything, no matter what the feeling, could be negative, then it did its job. that's art. art is meant to draw feeling out of you." true, i don't think she did this seriously. just from the first poem, i think it's trolling. but who knows honestly?
@possummagic13414 жыл бұрын
I really try to write my poetry by this rule, it has to make the reader feel something. I'm slso considering doing creative writing in uni, not sure what it's about as a course though.
@hopehurley11514 жыл бұрын
@@possummagic1341 I don't know how every college is, but my creative writing course went over 3 styles of writing. Fiction, poetry, and creative nonfiction. I got pushed out my comfort zone for sure. But my school also wants us knowledgeable in literature and language. So it's more than just writing. Though again, i'm not sure how every other school is.
@possummagic13414 жыл бұрын
@@hopehurley1151 huh that's interesting def will still consider it.
@hopehurley11514 жыл бұрын
@@possummagic1341 i recommend it. it's so fun! and, english nerds are some of the best people and friends you could have. 💜
@cissi1684 жыл бұрын
mOist moisT moIST. I made 99% of people reading this uncomfortable. ART
@BrainFreezeWave4 жыл бұрын
In her first poem, you pointed out the bit about religion and using the capital H in 'His' and 'Him' to refer to God. I know Trisha isn't a great poet and I don't mean to defend her but the way you explained it, I interpreted 'he' in the opening sentence to refer to her ex boyfriend. Like you said, she's done idolizing him, but 'He's going to do this to me?' I thought she did 'talk to God' in that sentence. Like the "Why me, God?". But maybe I'm overthinking it.
@philliey4 жыл бұрын
Exactly my thoughts as well!
@crypticcorvid4 жыл бұрын
That's the way I interpreted it too.
@destinyedmonds96274 жыл бұрын
I thought perhaps the shift between the two could represent the back and forth nature of being done with someone, then wanting them again. Damning them in your mind in one thought but worshipping them again in the next.
@SydneyPlays4 жыл бұрын
This is what I read it as. God is letting her down instead of giving her someone who cares, she’s upset with the man but also with God.
@killingqueen6664 жыл бұрын
Omg I literally just wrote the same comment, that's what I originally thought as well!!
@morgie43784 жыл бұрын
Your dog trying to convince you to play with her is a great addition to the video haha. Fell in love with her.
@ilisten2thecureandcry4 жыл бұрын
i feel like you’re not giving trish enough credit. trish is a lot smarter then people think.
@erinoriordan98084 жыл бұрын
It's not that she isn't smart, it's just that she should have hired an editor to clean up her book before she put it out there.
@AlienZizi3 жыл бұрын
i think shes smart and that assuming she doesnt know a lot about the technicals of poetry (and so being unsure if shes using some of those subtle tricks) doesnt take away from how smart she is. being smart doesnt mean youre good at poetry lol
@3xitthissid32 жыл бұрын
@@smellslikelayne isn't she like this with all other insta poets, though? I don't think Rupi considers herself at the levels of classic poets or claims to be, not to mention the problem with her poetry in the critiques is that it's too short and doesn't have that structure of classic poems (line stanza breaks, different rhyming schemes, etc.) - all of which she can't do bc the poem is litterally to short. Rachel (and other insta poet critics like her) has a hard time accepting that there's just a different style of poetry that exists nowadays and people are trying to convult it into something that it's not. consistently in the critiques I'm seeing is that this insta poetry is just not done in the way that published, literary poems are done (which is a more abstracts and technical take on poetry) and people are clinging onto it so much hence why negative reviews. Many of these insta poets I don''t think they take themselves as seriously or claim to be as good as professionals/on a professional level. I'm not even sure if Gabby Hanna considers herself a poetic genius - but her reactions can be understandable if you've ever been a writer yourself where you've poured hours into your work and where what was an improvement for you was still not good enough for others; the thought realizing that you'll never be better than mediocre (which makes me question if people with that skill level means aren't allowed to publish books and their works bc it feels undeserving or as a cash grab? Like are we gate-keeping poetry rn?). People are invested in their creations that's why it hurts so much to receive bad reviews.
@edayavuz16674 ай бұрын
She's smart but rly insecure
@Koley4114 жыл бұрын
I feel like I actually like Trisha’s poetry. I don’t know nearly as much about poetry as Rachel does, but I think Trisha’s stuff, at least some of it, is good, technically speaking. She uses imagery, metaphors, hyperboles. There’s not really a lot of method or revision to her poetry, but I kind of like that. She almost just word-vomits in a free verse style. It’s raw. Rachel’s issue with Gabbie’s poetry was that there were no layers to it, and it was very face value. In contrast, Trisha’s has Rachel diving in for deeper meaning. I don’t know, I think it’s good poetry technically speaking. One thing for sure is that Trisha’s poetry is way better than Gabbie’s! Some of Gabbie’s poems were half-assed, and all the rest were so try-hard.
@joelle14534 жыл бұрын
Mariset Moone same
@graciebelk72914 жыл бұрын
I wish I could watch Trisha read her poems out loud. I think they are almost written in a way to be performed.
@leliza84774 жыл бұрын
**Rachel reads Trishas poem** Me: oh that wasn’t too bad Rachel: that was terrible. Me: Yes. Terrible.
@elizabethbloom33134 жыл бұрын
I cba to come up with a username soz when I watch Gordon Ramsay eat something
@MickeyJames20104 жыл бұрын
@@elizabethbloom3313 Exactly what I was thinking!!
@denji54263 жыл бұрын
@@elizabethbloom3313 my first thought
@noemers69163 жыл бұрын
HELP SAME
@growingoaks2 жыл бұрын
🐑🐏🐑🐏🐑🐏🐑🐏🐑🐏🐑🐏
@morganlippencott1234 жыл бұрын
Lana Del Rey is about to release a spoken word poetry album, that might be something fun to analyze! Love these poetry videos! Keep up the good work 💞
@mayarm69244 жыл бұрын
yes PLEASE omg
@sunshineramirez77664 жыл бұрын
And Florence Welch has a poetry book out too. I love that woman's writing.
@lwilson40844 жыл бұрын
I love lanas poems!!!
@salsanchezi.c.14704 жыл бұрын
@@sunshineramirez7766 Franz Cantu has a poetry book too The Harvard Prince: Poems & Observations www.amazon.com/dp/B084DH5J44/ref=cm_sw_r_cp_apa_i_HGhxEbAQ87PSS
@sarastories80744 жыл бұрын
666 likes, can't ruin it 😌
@TwiCaCaX3 жыл бұрын
the creepshow art shoutout aged like fucking milk.
@yuu65643 жыл бұрын
yea
@crownclowncreations Жыл бұрын
Wait when was that?
@PPBbunno11 ай бұрын
@@crownclowncreations 0:39
@TheWeirdGirlMe4 жыл бұрын
The occasional growls in the mic give me life.
@kso40684 жыл бұрын
Same
@urmom1313.4 жыл бұрын
That sounds sexual in a way and I’m uncomfortable 😂
@TheWeirdGirlMe4 жыл бұрын
@@urmom1313. No one on the internet knows I'm a furry. (Jk, please don't tell my Mom)
@saraht.m.84784 жыл бұрын
6:39 I think she’s saying it’s been six months since her last real relationship, but only six minutes since she was last intimate with someone. Which fits with the theme in the poem of “I’d rather be a whore than be in love”.
@iplaywaytomuchogwartslegacay694 жыл бұрын
She has said in multiple videos that she wrote this while she was struggling with a drug problem. That is probably why they seem like she is trying to make them bad.
@AlyaKovalev3 жыл бұрын
"Go send some love to CreepShow Art." Well, that didn't age well.
@ScorpionFlower953 жыл бұрын
the "send creepshow art some love" part aged badly. no matter what though, i loved this review too and your analysis on trisha's poems :)
@Blue_Avatar2 жыл бұрын
Why? (Genuinely asking)
@real_nightcrawler2 жыл бұрын
@@Blue_Avatar creepshow has been since exposed has having done objectively terrible things. I personally don't know much about it but you can find videos about it pretty easily
@ScorpionFlower952 жыл бұрын
@@Blue_Avatar CSA turned out to not be a good person
@minxilly1575 Жыл бұрын
@@Blue_Avatar She's been stalking and copying her partner's ex for YEARS... as well as threatening to expose her childhood photos (explicit) as in underage
@Heroltz9984 жыл бұрын
I have the same Edgar Allan Poe black collection book. It's weird noticing it and for a split second thinking "wait, isn't that supposed to be in my appartment?", even though after that it's obvious that it is a silly thought.
@saharamoon77004 жыл бұрын
me being in a car and seeing another car very similar to the car I am in
@Eskapismus4 жыл бұрын
@@saharamoon7700 Your apartment must be huge! Ha ha... Ha. 😅
@rachell3814 жыл бұрын
Me too!!! My Edgar Allan Poe black collection book is one of my treasures ❤️
@thoughtfuldevil60694 жыл бұрын
I suddenly wanna finish MY poetry book, because I see that I can do so much better than some of the people Rachel's been featuring on her channel.
@RachelOates4 жыл бұрын
I believe in you! Good luck ❤️
@thoughtfuldevil60694 жыл бұрын
@@RachelOates Thanks Rachel! 🍻
@beetlebugs4 жыл бұрын
lmao this is similar to how i felt after i watched an on*sion book review. like, "well whatever i write won't be as bad as this at least"
@thoughtfuldevil60694 жыл бұрын
@@beetlebugs Same here. Part of the reason I published my first book is because I saw other, lousier writers making a living off it. I figured I could write stories just as surreal or creepy, but with decent prose, storytelling and characters. Dunno if I succeeded entirely, but I didn't write Stones to Abigail!
@smithmarina9704 жыл бұрын
That's the spirit!!
@liv-qz4cx4 жыл бұрын
maybe when she said he with a capital H she actually meant God, it makes sense. that's why it wasn't consistent. she maybe felt like even God has betrayed her "He's going to do this to me?". it would be an interesting choice, very subtle. also, when she said " It's been six months since my last, but only \\ six hours since my last" she clearly meant that it's been months since she had something meaningful, a real "last", but only hours since she a physical relationship, an idea which fits perfectly with the other verses. Sorry for any spelling/grammar/punctuation mistakes, English is my second language. With that being said, I really appreciate your analysis. You have such a calming energy, I love your videos! Keep up with this amazing content Greetings from Romania!
@katesnyder96344 жыл бұрын
The "hours since my last" also sounds like the introduction to a confession which is so interesting when comparing her relationship with pain and sexuality and religion
@meghansullivan68123 жыл бұрын
@@katesnyder9634 that's what i thlught!
@c4ts0nm4rs54 жыл бұрын
no one: kyra: *I N T E N S E G R U N T I N G*
@danoott_4 жыл бұрын
In the chat you asked us viewers about if art has to be intentional. Here is my view on it. Art doesn't have to be intentional. You could put down a brush stroke on a canvas you did not plan on adding to your painting. You could see it as a mistake and try to fix it, or take a step back and see it as something that is a part of the journey of creating the art and letting it stay. I once heard someone say: 'It's not about fixing the mistakes you make while creating art, but giving those mistakes meaning and making it about so much more than failure.' I think that counts for life as well. Making those unintentional choices makes creating art more fun. If you would plan everything and make it intentional it would take the beauty, realness and humanity of art away. That's the part I personally like most about it, the flaws, the realness and beauty that humanity brings to the world.
@RachelOates4 жыл бұрын
Ooh I love this interpretation! Turning mistakes into something we can learn and grow and create something beautiful from is so important ❤️
@Romanticoutlaw4 жыл бұрын
as a wise man once told me, we don't make mistakes. Just happy little accidents. Then we beat the devil out of it.
@yeet_20714 жыл бұрын
There are no accidents - Master Oogway
@Miimiia4 жыл бұрын
My best artworks are never intentional. Studio art classes messed with my head because every line, colour and material you used had to be tied to a meaning. I always used to just sit there like '....But why can't I just draw something i think is pretty why does it have to have months and months of thinking of meanings and analysing other artworks for ideas before we can even start?' I can most definitely say that I got away with not doing any of that by giving everything meanings afterwards and be like 'Oh I meant for that to happen because im 14 and this is deep' LOL
@brittanygeren88814 жыл бұрын
On this note, my favorite piece I've ever painted is a 5 panel scene. In one corner a tiny piece of hair got on my canvas. My spouse saw it and thought it was an intentional stylized R hidden in the picture. I loved that idea so much I've since adopted the symbol in my new works. Art is a beautiful amalgamation of mistakes that create a new understanding
@MaB-ku4rz4 жыл бұрын
This is one of my favorite channels at the moment, so glad I stumbled upon it. These videos remind me of my literature lessons (which were SO good. the best moments of my week) in high school and make me think of how much I like poetry. Thank you so much for this, Rachel! I find you incredibly smart and well spoken, and I already admire you so much. Keep up the awesome work! Love from Brazil
@RachelOates4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so so so much! ❤️
@aineha21534 жыл бұрын
Couldnt agree more :)
@denaerangel4 жыл бұрын
agree!
@staceyc26814 жыл бұрын
me TOO
@Vaishnavi-sq4tx3 жыл бұрын
Yea these videos reminded me of my love for poetry again
@SadTurnips4 жыл бұрын
The second “He” with the capitalization may actually be her referencing God. When people are hurt they may ask God “why me” or “why are you doing this to me.” She could be questioning why God has let this hurt happen?
@kiwifit6204 жыл бұрын
Ooo! I like that.
@katie63844 жыл бұрын
I hated poetry at school with such a passion, but the way you read and dissect these poems makes this come alive for me. I can actually see and understand my own reactions to them. I love how you compare the poem you're analyzing to one about a similar topic by someone else because it helps me see what you mean when you talk about depth and layers, imagery, pace, etc. Really enjoying this series and I hope you do many more Trisha poems in the future!
@quinn7992 жыл бұрын
I like poetry and it’s my strongest form of writing (I think) but god poetry in school sucks. I had an assignment for a sonnet once and after I finished it and took it to the teacher he made me re write it because it wasn’t about love. Wtf? My mom is an actual poet and she called bullshit too lol
@eisleywatson3444 жыл бұрын
I bet this is gonna be a wild ride...
@kso40684 жыл бұрын
True lol
@scholar33384 жыл бұрын
You won the bet
@liam38144 жыл бұрын
You mean a Wilde ride? ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
@johnnytibs4 жыл бұрын
You should make a video where your subscribers send you in their bad poems
@iheartquestionmark13134 жыл бұрын
yess
@MsRox424 жыл бұрын
The poems from my emo teenager years... *shudders in horror*
@pikdame4 жыл бұрын
Or even their good poetry. I think this style would also work with good poems, or alright ones, because she could still compare them to 'famous' poems
@emmalouisesrensen3114 жыл бұрын
Fab idea
@destinyedmonds96274 жыл бұрын
Yes
@miagrace92404 жыл бұрын
trishas poetry is better and 100x more interesting than gabbies and that’s rlly sad for gabbie lmao
@poke88364 жыл бұрын
She is the last person I would expect to try to write poetry.
@poke88364 жыл бұрын
Just Ryan - my reasoning is: from my view she has never shown herself to be artistic in really any form. She wrote songs but they were surface deep and mostly satire, other than that the art of poetry seems out of her realm.
@MagicDemonCookies3 жыл бұрын
I like the line “this is why I result to being a wh*re, for no one cares about a wh*re” like that’s not a common thing to say in poetry and it’s really interesting to me
@orangejuice7824 жыл бұрын
ok but why did the first poem resonate with me edit: when she said Hes going to do this to me with a capital H she might have meant that trisha questioned if G-d was doing this to her
@RachelOates4 жыл бұрын
Ohhh!
@sofiaj3084 жыл бұрын
I saw it as her refering to the guy the way she did before the betrayal. She used to see him like a man with a capital H, and is He going to do this to me? Am I making sense?
@amyd.51684 жыл бұрын
orangejuicedude yeah I’m shook because I like really liked the first one. Maybe it’s because I felt the emotions without all the complicated analyzing that I hate in poetry.
@user-cq9vw9we8r4 жыл бұрын
why would you censor god?
@princessofstars6664 жыл бұрын
@@sofiaj308 I think either interpretation is valid!!
@alexiasrei35944 жыл бұрын
I clicked this video thinking "Sweet! A poetry book just as bad as Gabbie Hanna's!" but I'm honestly surprised with Trisha's writing. It's nothing amazing but I mean, I actually got some feelings while reading them? It really seems like Trisha actually put in effort to her book. Weird as they are, I do think there's a lot of genuine emotions put in the poems. Gabbie on the other hand is just barfing words on paper thinking they'll be edgy and artistic.
@eevamks4 жыл бұрын
When you pointed out the first sentence with "h" and how she doesn't pull through later on with "H" - I feel like she does: To me it reads like she is asking why God would do this to her.
@amielmorris25494 жыл бұрын
Eiko I was thinking the same thing!
@maliavirtue29584 жыл бұрын
To me it also reads a little bit like a continuation of a half-heard sentence
@gloriaf4024 жыл бұрын
After having watched the majority of Trisha's videos, I personally think that she's smarter than a lot of people think. She has created this overdramatic, attention-seeking, crazy character that successfully brings her attention and views, and she has not really changed through the years... You're completely right about the fact that her content is a mix the Real Trisha, her real thoughts and feelings, and her "trolling" vids. But what I love about her at the end of the day, is that she keeps doing what she loves and tries new things she finds exciting, such as her music vids (despite the negative feedback she may receive), her new podcast channel, her adult content... She has flaws and I disagree with a lot of think she has said in the past, but after following her for a long time, it becomes easy to know when she's not really herself, when she's the troll everyone hates and reacts to. I just hope she will realise one day she doesn't need to use her "persona" to attract attention and the love she really seem to crave for! (Sorry my English is bad and this is way too long.....)
@emmakayisnotok73224 жыл бұрын
You made so many good point, and I honestly agree. Shes a confusing figure in media. Also, your English was fine
@thesleepydot4 жыл бұрын
Gloria Folidis Your english is good! Also, while I myself don’t really like her and enjoy her content, I do also think that she isn’t really herself in her videos. Sometimes it’s because it’s easy to just brush off bad actions with “It was a joke!”. Other times, I think she’s afraid of people not liking her true self. If she isn’t taken seriously, at least she won’t get her true self insulted?
@nicolepalumbo46404 жыл бұрын
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@princessofstars6664 жыл бұрын
Like others have said your English is good. I agree for the most part. I just think when Trisha uses real issues people face for her trolling is when it becomes not okay (the trans incident and the DID incident is what I mean.)
@summersmells4 жыл бұрын
I'm of the belief that any poetry written in a moment of true pain and anguish is good on a basic level. Crafting poetry from words to be clever and enjoyable is one art form, but spewing your heart out in short form is another kind of art entirely, if that makes sense. It's kinda garbage, but like you said, it's raw and real, trite rhymes and hyperbole included. It makes us feel and connect with one another and that's what art is all about, even when it took fifteen minutes instead of fifteen hours/days/weeks/years. Idk, I'm a big fan of poetry-as-therapy and while I don't think Trisha would win any awards for this, I do commend her for expressing herself and being open and honest about her feelings. Does that make sense? I'm having trouble articulating how I feel about this lmao. I deff agree that Gabbie is slightly better technically but Trisha has her beat in the emotional department, hands down. TL;DR: I agree with everything you said and these videos are really great :)
@summersmells4 жыл бұрын
The main difference between gabbie and trisha, for me, is that Gabbie is very performative, "look how creative and artistic and deep I am," whereas Trisha is just straight up distraught and goin through it. There's so much more emotion.
@k8terbellz3934 жыл бұрын
This was like a ted talk. I came here to learn about trishas poetry and I’m leaving feeling like I should change the world
@applebygfriend2 жыл бұрын
The creepshow art thing aged so badly this is sad 😭
@iamscaredofbread43574 жыл бұрын
Rachel is the English teacher we didn't deserve but were blessed with
@minxilly1575 Жыл бұрын
Ooof the Creepshow shout-out didn't age well, with her being a stalker..
@caitlin.74 жыл бұрын
Great now Trisha’s Jesus song is stuuuuck in my head JeeEzzZussS
@alyziar4 жыл бұрын
If it had lesss autotune would it be stuck in your head?
@ellabajae4 жыл бұрын
if I ever do something really bad I just want Rachel to say to me “that’s absolutely ok” 🥺
@renzossosa4 жыл бұрын
I love this series of "poetry". Review some of Rupi Kaur.
@chrystianaw82563 жыл бұрын
Rupi Kaur is just....really bad. Very instapoetry
@killjoytw1nk4 жыл бұрын
Wait, Trisha writes POETRY? WHYYYYY?
@ivys19914 жыл бұрын
My exact thought when this showed up on my feed.
@ApatheticBlogger4 жыл бұрын
Bet she writes it sitting on her kitchen floor
@LittleMissLounge4 жыл бұрын
She has also written a novel.
@ivys19914 жыл бұрын
@@LittleMissLounge dafuc?
@chandelier60194 жыл бұрын
idk who allowed her
@Kaimli2 жыл бұрын
oh not seeing the creepshow art shout out after all that went down
@nealeyheely43674 жыл бұрын
As someone who writes poetry, the new trend of KZfaqrs writing poetry books is so obnoxious, yet so funny.
@user-tl3sl2tu7e4 жыл бұрын
The thing is Trisha had been writing poetry all throughout her relationship and before that. She just decided to publish it, but she was specifically trying to make a book
@bababadookdookdook4 жыл бұрын
I feel like she really might have intended all the “good” elements since they’re there- why assume she has them coincidentally?
@tuide97714 жыл бұрын
I feel like I should read the bible just to get all the references in art.
@luhei22304 жыл бұрын
Do it, it's quite interesting.
@veve73494 жыл бұрын
I'm not religious but I've read parts of the bible every now and then and I really like some of the stories. And you're right, it's referenced so much that it's good to know more about it.
@PurplePlatypusPoop4 жыл бұрын
i’d recommend the book how to read literature like a professor! it mentions a lot of common allusions in books including biblical ones, and imo it’s applicable to almost all media
@Crybabycry8844 жыл бұрын
You should read psalms! Pure poetry 😊
@requiemoflyds4 жыл бұрын
yes I agree the psalms, proverbs, and luke I feel are very good for basic biblical metaphors and references! psalms and proverbs are pieces of art while luke contains actual words from the Christian God (it's a biography of Jesus)
@libra414 жыл бұрын
Would love to see more of Trisha's poetry, especially if you think there are any poems in particular with potential.
@BabvBlues4 жыл бұрын
OBSESSED WITH YOUR MIND!
@phuckdeezhoez3 жыл бұрын
hi ily
@antoninapetrova84564 жыл бұрын
Rachel, I love the way you talk about poetry and recommend modern authors
@melinatsalikis48884 жыл бұрын
hey there! just wanted to let u know that the pronunciation of Salome is Sah-loh-may, not Sah-low-mee. I thought your video was really interesting, I love listening to you read poetry!
@warealpha4 жыл бұрын
loving this and all your other poetry-related videos so far! you go so in-depth and communicate literary nuances and your interpretations very well and this specific video is honestly a lot more thought-provoking than I would have expected..
@Everyyoueverymiau4 жыл бұрын
I’m so happy to see your channel grow again. Looks like these poetry videos are a real hit.
@sms425094 жыл бұрын
I actually really love your poetry videos they bring me such joy and I don’t know why but they are so enjoyable.
@giadaloporto22754 жыл бұрын
The fact that Trisha’s poetry which was meant to be stupid and not serious is better than Gabby’s poetry which is supposed to be deep and good writing is hilarious 😂 I liKe sLeEp sLeEp iS ChEaP
@timaeustestified39514 жыл бұрын
Trisha is a fascinating artist and I really respect her hustle. I hope she finds stability and peace one day though
@witchflowers69423 жыл бұрын
I think trisha has immense talent for many things. it just manifests itself in highly unusual ways. She's a strange bird.
@siksparnis4 жыл бұрын
i love these poetry videos so much, especially because you include good poems to contrast with the bad ones, as well as provide a very detailed and thoughtful commentary on both types
@Michelle155564 жыл бұрын
5:41 is a tragic moment for the dog
@nicoc804 жыл бұрын
I kinda liked Trisha's poetry... I'm shocked XD Trisha, you go girl!
@SophanaR4 жыл бұрын
I'm really interested to hear what you think about Rupi Kaur's poetry. I know Milk and Honey & The Sun and Her Flowers came out years ago but I've only recently started digging into the mixed feelings people have towards Kaur's work. Would love to see you do a video on that.
@cocanoharevan7364 жыл бұрын
SophanaR why is it bad?
@enderworms4 жыл бұрын
you should totally turn this into a series on your channel where you talk about poetry by youtubers/influencers! i'd be so down to binge watch that
@scrantonrogueofthesilvertr90314 жыл бұрын
Maybe the second “he” with the capital H is referring to actual God not her ex boyfriend.
@kyleemodica59434 жыл бұрын
Scranton Rogue of the Silver Trio Omg yes! I just commented this too
@papateddy75824 жыл бұрын
I think the inconsistency with the uncapitalized 'he' VS. the capitalized "He" is actually because she's differentiating between her ex-lover and God. She's asking why God would do this to her. Why he would set her up with someone who hurt her.
@icravedeath.12003 жыл бұрын
Oof, that intro hasn't aged very well.
@laerkema76784 жыл бұрын
I really enjoy these poetry videos
@Ruby_Star_2 жыл бұрын
The creep show art shout out didn’t age well 😅
@kittiesue1234 жыл бұрын
this totally reminds me of those commercials where they feed people walmart food or whatever and they tell them it’s gourmet and the people talk about it like it’s the most amazing thing they’ve ever tasted and what notes and aromas and flavors they are getting and then the people tell them that it’s all microwaved
@itssoundproof4 жыл бұрын
ugh my poems are literally just about an emotion i feel suicidal, depressed, love, anxiety, etc i really do write like a teenager
@user-ri2qn4qo4k4 жыл бұрын
In my opinion, there's absolutely nothing wrong with that, especially if expressing those emotions creatively helps you get through them - I know for me, personally, writing through the darker emotions saved my life many times. It's an incredibly healthy coping mechanism and there's no shame in it. I'd be interested in reading your poetry, I'd probably find it very relatable and I'm sure there are plenty of others out there who would too. Keep writing and hang in there, okay? 💜
@RomanZolanski1234 жыл бұрын
I found an old Instagram when I was 15 where I posted poetry. I don’t write anymore (I’m 20 now) but I wrote way better stuff then than I ever could now.
@MrFireflies1004 жыл бұрын
Wow, crazy to see someone shout out Shannon (Creepshow Art)!! Love both of you!!!
@Mk-ty5rk4 жыл бұрын
About your question on what art is: to me this is like comparing rembrandt to pollock. Rembrandt could spend years revising and redoing parts of a painting to make it look as technically perfect as possible, while in the process making it void of emotion, whereas pollock flings paint at a canvas for a day, and evokes complete emotion in a viewer. It all depends on your definition of art. To me, pollock holds more artistic merit because even though he lacks technical skill, he makes you feel sonething
@thepinatafightdani4 жыл бұрын
🤔 Interesting, because then what would you call Rembrandts art ? Rembrandts work was meant to provoke emotion and awe on the spectators through the representation of the world as we see it. Also, the concept of representing emotion in art (idk much abt literature so idk if its the same) is so recent, and it is a response to the changes of the world, so I understand the idea of giving merit to emotion more than accurate representation.
@Mk-ty5rk4 жыл бұрын
@@thepinatafightdani of course rembrandt was something new and awe inspiring at the time, and he definitely has an audience today, but he was the first person who came to mind when I thought of technical ability over emotional appeal, as most of his paintings are stark representations of reality with dull colour schemes and not much style, meant to showcase real settings and his skill. This is just my opinion though, and I definitely understand the people who disagree
@Mk-ty5rk4 жыл бұрын
@@xdlr22 yeah definitely. And you're totally entitled to that opinion, and I know rembrandt is one of the most popular artists so a lot of people probably disagree with me. My point was pretty much just that art doesn't have to be about technical skill or talent; it can also be about emotion and meaning that the piece evokes in the viewer
@doone18813 жыл бұрын
Hey Rachel, i love your videos and i know you probably didnt know the troubles with creepshow art when you promoted her here. Just wanted to drop a note about that bit. Have a lovely day.
@fanboy_artist36452 жыл бұрын
That creep show art comment aged badly lol😅
@ogcrazycatlady4 жыл бұрын
"Deliver me from workers of inequity and save me from bloody men. " Psalm 59:2 KJV, perhaps helped Wendy formulate the title a bit?
@elizabethdesruisseau78264 жыл бұрын
OG Crazy Cat Lady interesting! I didn’t think of that
@ash-xj9it3 жыл бұрын
0:55 this didnt age well
@makardeku4 жыл бұрын
this is 40mins of kyra trying to get you to play fetch lmfao i love that pup
@lurb15574 жыл бұрын
The question you raised about art and our appreciation of it was an interesting one. I remember my English teacher once telling me that art is not owned by the artist. Even if you interpret a poem in an entirely different way to how the poet intended or pick apart depth when what they wrote was shallow it doesn’t matter because the beauty comes from the interpretation of it. I always struggled with this because I thought it wasn’t fair that some people just got ‘lucky’ but now I’m older I think I’m beginning to agree.
@maritzarodriguez51064 жыл бұрын
"... Woman should be chaste, not the chaser" that really hit me like a ton of bricks. That's the mentality I'm trying to break in my own life.
@radicalrainbowlooming37204 жыл бұрын
So happy to see you referencing Creepshow Art. She’s so underrated.
@rx500android4 жыл бұрын
Rachel watching CreepShowArt makes me happy idk why
@vitoriaazevedo73843 жыл бұрын
boy did this age like milk
@yikeslmaoo4 жыл бұрын
I love these videos, your opinions are always really well thought out and intelligently formulated. It's clear that you are quite familiar with the genre, and it makes me want to read more poetry. I also really appreciate the fact that you try to look for the good parts as well as the bad parts when it comes to the work of Trisha and Gabbie. I feel that a lot of people hate on them just for the sake of it and don't even bother to look at the positives! I'm really looking forward to more content! :))
@SophTheLyrical4 жыл бұрын
you should definitely take a look at some of amberlynn reid’s poetry - there’s a LOT to unpack there 😭😭
@SophTheLyrical4 жыл бұрын
ASarcasticTulip she does indeed...
@therealfinnaspring85853 жыл бұрын
Still feel like Amberlynns is better than Gabbies.
@amberbaulch59674 жыл бұрын
Yes! I would love to see another Trisha Poetry video, or any poetry analysis video! ❤
@larsyx4 жыл бұрын
PLEEEEASE MAKE A PART 2! This video was great and im honestly so glad I watched the whole thing❤️❤️
@ameesloesarwij55184 жыл бұрын
You really take one for the team, every time you buy youtubers books and read them, cus then I won't have to do it
@leannewilliams64854 жыл бұрын
"It's been six months since my last, it's been six hours since my last" Personally I believe that she is referring to the six months as a relationship and six hours since she was last let down 🤔😔
@rileighsmiles4 жыл бұрын
Leanne Williams I took it as six months since last emotional connection, six hours since last physical connection
@leannewilliams64854 жыл бұрын
@@rileighsmiles whatever it means, it's a shame that she feels like she's had to put it on paper. Nobody should feel that way. Ever
@CastellonZamora4 жыл бұрын
I'd love to see some of Orion's poetry reviewed!
@edreamcast3 жыл бұрын
YES
@justadolphin89324 жыл бұрын
Please make another part! These are so interesting to listen to, and as an aspiring poet it honestly helps me to develop my own writing
@r.j.penfold2 жыл бұрын
Oh oof the opening where she shows support for Shannon aged like sour milk... Hopefully she knows what went down.