This is a good story BUT the author had SEVERAL DUPLICATE SENTENCES. 😡
@BaLiSTicOptixАй бұрын
Most likely the duplicate is from the previews before the chapter begins. Many authors do that
@akikosaya991616 күн бұрын
@@BaLiSTicOptixWho does that many repeats
@daltonjames5687Ай бұрын
We Need Part 2 Pls
@slowmotion2.087Ай бұрын
Next pls
@knightrider6985Ай бұрын
Next part please. Hopefully it dont have duplicate sentences
@anthonyherring5329Ай бұрын
Why does TenTen's dad remind me of Major Armstrong from FMA?
@loganheart7672Ай бұрын
Same same but different. 😅😂
@Demented_LifeАй бұрын
I was thinking the same thing haha
@MegaMellowDayАй бұрын
Agreed
@abominationLlama5 күн бұрын
all i see is a "armstrong" that hes something to do with politics... reminds me of senator armstrong from metal gear rising
@coledarby5320Ай бұрын
Please make more of these videos
@robertruse6552Ай бұрын
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I do like the plot line I also like the character development I like how you took Shikamaru and made him a lot stronger than what he actually was I do wish it was a lot longer and I hope you come back make it part 2 and keep up the good work
@5269351Ай бұрын
Love the episode need more please💚💚💚
@user-fn8lf6uz4fАй бұрын
Part 2 Plz🙏
@Onyxity-2011Ай бұрын
45:36 got me good
@slowmotion2.087Ай бұрын
Same
@daltonjames5687Ай бұрын
Love like always
@demondwilson2734Ай бұрын
Part 2 plz
@kingj7588Ай бұрын
Part2
@virginiarichards6186Ай бұрын
We to make part 3
@jjerzey1Ай бұрын
The repeats that could be different perspective maybe? It's jarring.
@Dhruv_g306Ай бұрын
3 idots Movie got me for good 🤣
@travisreynolds2154Ай бұрын
this what if is so nerve wreaking all the freaking duplicates its alright but hopefully part 2 is better
@Blade-in3heАй бұрын
Name of fanfic
@user-ov3gx8mn2kАй бұрын
Part 2
@obitouchiha8216Ай бұрын
Bruh jiraya woudnt be like thag
@Captian_JinАй бұрын
Why is it every time naruto is a healer he gets shipped with shikamaro, I don't have a problem with it my just wondering
@thomasblanks2842Ай бұрын
Why is this person repeating themselves? Please redo this story. Part 2 please.
@arc1067Ай бұрын
The story probably has a recap at the start of each chapter. The bot reads some things twice because it's at the end of one chapter and the start of the next.
@brownricebro5691Ай бұрын
It's the same scene from different perspectives as far as I can tell
@defineanime5549Ай бұрын
Not offense but you did a sloppy job, you really need to do a better job next time cause at multiple times it repeats someone,
@arc1067Ай бұрын
If I had to guess, the fic that the bot is reading has a recap at the start of each chapter. When the bot reads through it ends up repeating the section since it reads it and the end of one chapter and the start of the next.
@TheThunderguardianАй бұрын
Title, author, link?
@allwhatifАй бұрын
the story name and title?
@VoltLuke1Ай бұрын
bowtie? do people not realise they are ninja and here is another person projecting there sexual preference on to a character the concept for this fic was good but its just stupid at this point
@MrCadeRayАй бұрын
I've noticed a lot of fanfics that have really interesting and well thought out plot points do this. Most of the time they turn all the males gay (i don't know why) or having a 7-13 year old Naruto get in some sort of romantic relationship with a 20-30 year old woman. Also there's no way jariaya would train Sakura over Naruto in any universe
@TheThunderguardianАй бұрын
GODDAAMMNN, I fucking hate the duplicates so fucking much! Copy and paste a.i. voice program bull****.
@SamFort-xx1koАй бұрын
Naruto x Hinata or Naruto x shickamaru
@warzony8634Ай бұрын
I hate when it’s stuff like this I just want it to normal not yk
@JohnCampbellLAXАй бұрын
@@warzony8634fr
@WojketАй бұрын
Gay?
@shanedeal5774Ай бұрын
Got a third of the way thru just to discover its another NaruHina. How droll. Zero imagination. Author plays around with a bunch of stuff to make this interesting and then decides the VANILLA pairing was the right choice. Gag me.
@brownricebro5691Ай бұрын
1... it seems like a ShikaNaru pairing, considering Shika is openly attracted to Naruto, to the point of actively seeking advice on his sexuality from Asuma. And 2 if you hate a story solely because it has the most popular pairing, then you're going to miss out on a bunch of amazing stories...