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@robertruse6552
@robertruse6552 18 сағат бұрын
Okay the story is very good I did enjoy it I like the plot line I also enjoy the character development I hope you come back make a part 2 and keep up the good work
@chriskreisl715
@chriskreisl715 Күн бұрын
Good story line , interesting character development. Would like to see it continued so Part2 please
@YugrajJannadkar-kl9kb
@YugrajJannadkar-kl9kb 2 күн бұрын
Part 2
@Dwagonslayr190
@Dwagonslayr190 4 күн бұрын
Can we talk about those nicknames for Kushina mikato and hitomi, crimson death doll maker and yuki Hana
@jeremywilson4941
@jeremywilson4941 4 күн бұрын
A friend to foxes by ravendusk
@johnathanhenderson93
@johnathanhenderson93 4 күн бұрын
Please continue this story it's an interesting story so more please
@chasonwright3394
@chasonwright3394 5 күн бұрын
It’s an interesting take on abandoned/neglected Naruto fic, but the pacing is really bad
@hotrodmoon1028
@hotrodmoon1028 5 күн бұрын
I hope you make a second part. This was good. I enjoyed every second of it.
@GunnReqwan
@GunnReqwan 5 күн бұрын
Wait a minute, what if naruto went to Kumo? His birthmarks are the same as the gold and sliver brothers. Coincidence? I think not.
@SemmelLetsPLay
@SemmelLetsPLay 5 күн бұрын
Good story
@kingslum2342
@kingslum2342 6 күн бұрын
another good incomplete story
@robbiepatterson4705
@robbiepatterson4705 7 күн бұрын
Part 2 please
@ret1sgreyes
@ret1sgreyes 7 күн бұрын
Runaway: Part One By: McCrazy23
@MichaelLee-zn6jw
@MichaelLee-zn6jw 7 күн бұрын
Part 2 please!!!
@chriskreisl715
@chriskreisl715 8 күн бұрын
Part3❤
@runthesehands4761
@runthesehands4761 8 күн бұрын
So is this an actual ehat if were naruto actually has a spine or just shitty no plot oncets trash cause every two fuqing seconds the author is going into sexual detail about a 16 year old and no old enough to kill doesn't mean old enough to fuq that line is chomo talk period
@warrickwilson5886
@warrickwilson5886 8 күн бұрын
plssssssssss part 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 and 10
@JackFuller-k2s
@JackFuller-k2s 8 күн бұрын
Part 2 pls ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
@daltonjames5687
@daltonjames5687 8 күн бұрын
PT2 pls
@SyedSuhaan
@SyedSuhaan 8 күн бұрын
i havent wacthen the vid but how da fork is a single part nearly 3 hours like i wacth the amagi and i havent seen a naruto what if that isnt over 2 hours long that isnt the whole story-
@defineanime5549
@defineanime5549 6 күн бұрын
Well these what ifs written more like a book rather than jumping from plot point to point like the amagi (which isn't bad but I think it's just a difference in the two mediums
@rodricoda4991
@rodricoda4991 9 күн бұрын
So is this a female Naruto fan fiction?
@misterrobot4782
@misterrobot4782 9 күн бұрын
Walking on fire and air😭😭💀💀💀💀. I'm out. This is pure shit
@gamerx9646
@gamerx9646 9 күн бұрын
This is quite funny.
@allanseverna4133
@allanseverna4133 9 күн бұрын
Next part please
@kemohdaramykemzomatic1547
@kemohdaramykemzomatic1547 9 күн бұрын
Pt2
@GouthamDPrabhu
@GouthamDPrabhu 9 күн бұрын
Story is good but u r dragging the story too long
@RaisingRave-bf9yl
@RaisingRave-bf9yl 9 күн бұрын
Ok I really couldn't get into it cuzz it seem more like grand standing and not getting to the point.
@user-rd1pn8to2p
@user-rd1pn8to2p 8 күн бұрын
Most of them are like this
@BlowgumMortal
@BlowgumMortal 9 күн бұрын
I’m suspicious because every time a story describes a female like this it ends up really sexual
@virginiarichards6186
@virginiarichards6186 9 күн бұрын
More please
@mathysmondersir9454
@mathysmondersir9454 9 күн бұрын
name please
@darklordausar2670
@darklordausar2670 9 күн бұрын
found its called Name: Naruto the Unknown Jinchuuriki Author: redlox2
@lharchmage6908
@lharchmage6908 9 күн бұрын
​@@darklordausar2670thank you
@warrickwilson5886
@warrickwilson5886 10 күн бұрын
dude make a part 2 plssSSSSSSSSSSSS
@derekpalmer1761
@derekpalmer1761 10 күн бұрын
Part two please
@swiftyczar
@swiftyczar 10 күн бұрын
Part 2 needed
@Lastofthesigilites
@Lastofthesigilites 10 күн бұрын
The Fox and the former Hokage is the story
@montoyamattison8051
@montoyamattison8051 10 күн бұрын
I hate Hiruzen, Danzo & their "for the good of the village" bullshit
@thekingkizen2952
@thekingkizen2952 10 күн бұрын
Im already hating this story sounds like shit with the third hokage already trying make naruto suffer
@Thatoneperson7400
@Thatoneperson7400 10 күн бұрын
Link/name?
@Strider-dm7mh
@Strider-dm7mh 10 күн бұрын
It’s a bit confusing, but I like it a lot
@jamesboone8520
@jamesboone8520 10 күн бұрын
fanfic link pls
@josh-f2b
@josh-f2b 10 күн бұрын
parts 2-90 pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@16jerrell
@16jerrell 11 күн бұрын
Can we have part 2 please
@MichaelLee-zn6jw
@MichaelLee-zn6jw 11 күн бұрын
Part 2 please!!! I love all of the divergences from cannon; especially with Kashina, Hitomei (sp), and Makota (sp). Also Hinata and Hanabae being twins, and the future Negi dynamic.
@josh-f2b
@josh-f2b 11 күн бұрын
part 2 pls pls pls !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
@tomhicks-kf2qg
@tomhicks-kf2qg 11 күн бұрын
What's the fic name
@graswho
@graswho 11 күн бұрын
Fanfic name?
@jasonnorthcutt8614
@jasonnorthcutt8614 11 күн бұрын
Like the story a lot and can't wait for part 2 to come out
@graswho
@graswho 11 күн бұрын
Fanfic name ?
@thewolfstech9866
@thewolfstech9866 11 күн бұрын
So he has Uchiha bloodline not ice and crystal release still alright story so far
@DAhardest1000
@DAhardest1000 11 күн бұрын
The story covers ice release just not crystal release I'm assuming it'll be covered in the next chapter if it's going to be another chapter
@spirittiger7985
@spirittiger7985 11 күн бұрын
Fanfic name?
@Demon_fox568
@Demon_fox568 11 күн бұрын
I like it in all but what is the fanfic link i wanna watch more of it TvT