Writing Essays Walkthrough: AQA A-Level Psychology (Paper 1 focus)

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22 күн бұрын

This video discusses how I approach writing essays in psychology, and goes through an example of an 8 mark, 16 mark and 16 mark (application) essay.
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@theyluvselene 21 күн бұрын

gutted that ive found your channel so late but binge watching and thank you so much!! giving me a final clutch for p1 tomorrow

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

At least you're here now. Good to have you 🙏 Hope it went okay today. -G

@Shhhh25278 21 күн бұрын

This is very very helpful for the paper 1 I have tomorrow. Thank you so much :))

@GalbraithDoesPsych 21 күн бұрын

I'm glad it helped. Thanks for saying so. Good luck tomorrow! Go smash it. -G

@idkwhyimhere96 21 күн бұрын

ur on the youtube grind we LOVE it

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

Glad I'm helping 👍 (Btw I don't make anything out of this. Maybe one day) -G

@hirarizwan2644 20 күн бұрын

this was so helpful!! THE INSTITUTIONALISATION 16 MARKER CAME UP lol And i remembered everything in your essay thanks

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

Glad it helped! Hope the rest of the paper went well too. -G

@bria4776 21 күн бұрын

the way everyone is stressed makes me feel like i’m understressed

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

Moderate anxiety is good for recall 😎

@eyshaan53 21 күн бұрын

Need paper 2 and 3 videos! Good vids

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

Cheers 🙏 I have a few paper 2 already and more on the way. Need to start thinking about paper 3... -G

@ebs_anders 20 күн бұрын

This video was so helpful!!!!!!! The Romanian Orphanages study came up and i'm so glad i watched this before the exam!!!

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

Excellent 👌 Hope you smashed it then! -G

@myherochatnoir 21 күн бұрын

this is unbelievably helpful!! my teacher has been teaching us to do 1 paragraph per mark for 16 markers...so no wonder i could never write an answer in 20 minutes! thanks!!

@kay-mk2sl 21 күн бұрын

that’s crazy they’re tryna make y’all fail💀

@liljmm3318 21 күн бұрын

one paragraph per mark is mad😨

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

That does seem a bit crazy...! Glad you found it helpful. Thanks for saying so 🙏 -G

@kunikuzooshii 21 күн бұрын

Thank you for this! Your videos are helping to calm me down for paper 1 tomorrow :)

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

That's great to hear 🙏 Hope you smashed it today. -G

@kunikuzooshii 20 күн бұрын

@@GalbraithDoesPsych I did!! Is there any chance you would do a video on the contributions of each approach / comparing approaches before paper 2? No worries if not!

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

@@kunikuzooshii Amazing news- well done! 👍 Well I've got cognitive and I've just done psychodynamic. I'll do a comparison one too. Not sure I've got time to do the others as well though! -G

@sureshganta3248 20 күн бұрын

what a wonderful channel thank you for the help! i will be returning for paper 2

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

How kind of you to say! Welcome aboard. -G

@helpmymonitorisoff8838 21 күн бұрын

Exactly what I needed for tomorrow. Thanks!

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

Cheers 🙏 Hope it went okay. -G

@tanjirokamado8580 21 күн бұрын

This is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HELPFULL SIR OH MY DAYS TYSM!!!

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

No worries 🙂 Hope it went okay today. -G

@animeape3993 21 күн бұрын

Thank you for this!!

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

No problem! Keep going! -G

@securitybreach5182 20 күн бұрын

Test in 3 hours

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

113 until the next one 👀

@angel-lh8sh 21 күн бұрын

omg another video!! i genuinely can't express how thankful i am for your content honestly

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

Very kind. I appreciate it. Hope it went okay today! -G

@angel-lh8sh 20 күн бұрын

@@GalbraithDoesPsych yess i think it did!! although my timing was so much worse than normal😓 so going to work on that from now until paper 2 + 3

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

You can do it 💪 -G

@daisywithers5113 21 күн бұрын

Thank you for this :)

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

No worries Dais. Hope it went well today. -G

@darknightrises88 21 күн бұрын

Hi G, thank you so much for this very helpful video. I’d like to ask, if we are writing 8 markers with 5 marks for A03, or 16 markers with 6 marks for A03, must there be a balance of both strengths and limitations, or would it be fine to have strengths only or limitations only. Thanks!

@FX7yt 21 күн бұрын

it's fine to have just strengths or just limitations but if it says "discuss" then try include both

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

Thanks for your kind comment. Personally I'd try to include a bit of both if possible, but it's tough sometimes! If I've only got strengths I'll try to counterpoint a couple. -G

@cocomuffin5007 21 күн бұрын

thanks so much this is really helpful :)

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

You're welcome, thanks for saying so 🙏 -G

@cocomuffin5007 20 күн бұрын

@@GalbraithDoesPsych a Romanian orphan 16 marker actually came up aswell!!

@GalbraithDoesPsych 20 күн бұрын

@@cocomuffin5007 crazy, right?! Hope you smashed it.

@hassanrizvi370 21 күн бұрын

For the authoritarian personality Q, could you bring in other dispositional factors such as locus of control as a counter point instead of situational factors? I was thinking of trying to implement that when I thought of my own plan to answer the question, but I didn't know if it'd tie in well enough with an obedience question; I didn't know whether it affects obedience or conformity. Also, the main study that I know which supports this is Spector's study, but this involves conformity, which I thought may be difficult to integrate into an obedience question.

@GalbraithDoesPsych 21 күн бұрын

Yeah I think that's absolutely fine. Nice. But Spector isn't a good source of evidence, as you point out. You want Holland (1967). Google it 👍 -G

@rosiesdevils576 21 күн бұрын

personally for the effects of institutionalization, I would mention Bowlby's critical period to further back up why the 1 year old child could recover vs the 6 yr old. Is this correct?

@GalbraithDoesPsych 21 күн бұрын

Can definitely see where you're coming from as an attachment can still be formed due to still being in the critical period right? Not sure I'd include it here myself though as you need to apply knowledge of institutionalisation, and that doesn't include bowlby so I don't think it would be credited. I do think you're right though. -G

@rosiesdevils576 20 күн бұрын

@@GalbraithDoesPsych Thank You!