Alone │ Spoken Word Poetry

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6 жыл бұрын

Sometimes the feeling of loneliness creeps up on us and it's so easy to feel alone. Negative thoughts can really drive a person against a wall and can make it harder to see one's own self value.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
Background music from freesound.org by the user herbertboland
Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx

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@changminkang1980 5 жыл бұрын

They ask. "How are you doing?" But what they mean is "Are you over it yet?" My lips say, "Fine, thanks", but my eyes tell a different story, my heart sings a different tune, and my soul just weeps.

@ralv- 4 жыл бұрын

선화 that is so sad but life is not the same happiness there’s pain, and sadness

@alexkoopman9203 4 жыл бұрын

this hits me so hard

@hannahh8119 3 жыл бұрын

How are you really? I wish you a good day today!

@priyaljain8360 3 жыл бұрын

We know pain we know happiness please choose what makes u happy our opinion shouldn't change because of other but I know u have choice smile and say I am on correct path

@Lesy_11 7 ай бұрын

I can relate

@aimeemundy2501 4 жыл бұрын

They say, ‘Do what makes you happy.’ But, *what if you’re not happy?’*

@pratisthaghimire5127 4 жыл бұрын

What when you've forgotten what it is to be happy what when things that made you happy once do not make you happy any longer

@misssimmly 3 жыл бұрын

I did that once recently, lost all my friends.. now I’m alone

@oolala1193 2 жыл бұрын

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@nevaehs2582 5 жыл бұрын

I feel that way too, My friends think In always this Fun, nice girl but inside I feel like crying and Screaming 😭

@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын

It's a real struggle >.< It's easy to make others think we're okay, when really we aren't

@magnusgabriel6710 4 жыл бұрын

And I'm the "fun nice boy" 😖not true but they don't get it how am I real that I'm in pain because they don't like me they just love me 😔

@lemons-and-anarchy 4 жыл бұрын

Me to but I have 1 friend

@Siyaya_D_Sphe 4 жыл бұрын

Lilah Foote I’d rather have one true friend than 10 fake ones

@RoseAnnaStarz888 4 жыл бұрын

Same here

@leanneprentiss8248 4 жыл бұрын

“How can I describe the feeling of believing that I have no one by my side in but in fact I do?”

@Taort647 4 жыл бұрын

Leanne Nunnemaker the difference between me and u is because I actually have none

@alutemidayo7030 3 жыл бұрын

@@Taort647 oops Yes, ALL good things come from God. God makes this plain and clear in James 1:17 - “Every good thing given and every perfect gift is from above, coming down from the Father of lights, with whom there is no variation or shifting shadow... So don’t panic if you’re lonely cause the right person is making his way down to you very soon hun

@sajjadhshihab4343 2 жыл бұрын

Very sad mrs / miss beautiful 🙃

@samthebutcherrodriguez763 2 жыл бұрын

Leanne, the name of the woman who broke what was left of my heart… Once you find your worth believe me you’ll never be alone. Happiness comes from within and then comes back 20X back at you 😌😉

@nurulhusna6971 6 жыл бұрын

IF ONLY I COULD LIKE THIS FOR 1 MILLION TIMES

@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын

Aww thank you!

@elizaash358 4 жыл бұрын

Yes it's a masterpiece 🤗😇

@nickysairem8846 6 жыл бұрын

I'M numb too I can't fight it anymore I'M so tired

@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын

Nicky Sairem I completely understand. It does drain you after so many ups and downs, but hang in there! :)

@TE-em5kj 5 жыл бұрын

Me too...

@jaguarraider7761 5 жыл бұрын

Hang in there till they get tired of you.

@trymehoe2535 5 жыл бұрын

Me too :’(

@mikelowe7576 4 жыл бұрын

Nickey sairem know this you are not alone and i know very well what its like to want it all to end. I know so very well what its like. Believe me when i say your not alone and you are so much stronger than you know. I do hope your still here. You have a value in this world we all do. I believe that though i am not sure of mine. But i know my reason. I just wish one day to have that which i cannot. But you have time you all do actually. Time to find not only your reason but your someone. I ask you to hold on because i know what its like to lose someone way to early. Try to find a reason to smile each day if only a small one. Its there if you look hard enough. Take care and know none of you are alone.

@Denadapro 4 жыл бұрын

Ppl around me think that I’m this funny girl with a smile on my face every day but deep inside me I’m so empty and dying little by little 😢💔

@CheerupCherrygirl 4 жыл бұрын

Same🥺😩😥😭😭❤

@michellecrowder6374 3 жыл бұрын

i understand this, that is me, it is me. i understand that feeling.

@neiliatoxic6813 3 жыл бұрын

same bro

@user-cl4uh9li9y 2 жыл бұрын

🙃🙂

@NoTalentGuy 2 жыл бұрын

Stay strong and brave. Please never give up. You are beautiful just the way you are

@Preciousdocumentaries 2 жыл бұрын

This poem speaks to me. Sending love and light to anyone who ever feels alone

@AliExE-xm7sd 5 жыл бұрын

I thought I was the only one who felt like this....holy crap....

@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын

It's easy to feel that way when you feel alone

@lizgruenloh8467 4 жыл бұрын

I’ve always thought that too. But now I know... I’m not

@ondadeadlocs3711 4 жыл бұрын

I'll be your friend...

@darthmew0215 3 жыл бұрын

I also thought I was alone in this feeling

@versexscape7540 3 жыл бұрын

Right! It's good to know I'm not alone in being alone

@robertoramirez-franco1445 4 жыл бұрын

“I’ve been singing this song, this song of my life The song I’ve had to put on pause, re-write the lyrics to, change the tempo of- And it feels like I sing to entertain and soothe the hearts of those around me Of those who love me Just to put their minds at ease and make them THINK that I am okay. I am on this stage, trying my hardest to remain here until it is time to complete my performance But lately I’ve desperately wanted to end the show “ I cannot tell you how much these words meant to me because it made me feel that I am not alone in having similar feelings.

@karieninas 3 жыл бұрын

You'll be okay. The only constant is change.

@tsakanir363 3 жыл бұрын

"it feels like my energy doesnt want to recharge. so im stuck feeling numb and distant"

@waterflow9545 4 жыл бұрын

My friend asked me and the group a question. "What's your biggest secret?" Friend 1: I joined band to be with my friends Friend 2: I lied to my cousin I took her slime Leader: well I took 20 bucks from my parents. Me:... I don't have a secret. My mind: I'm sure the scars on my arms or the fake smile and the real tears aren't enough to listen.

@RoseAnnaStarz888 4 жыл бұрын

This is so sad I hope you are well now in life but if you aren't stay strong

@lisannebehrens7915 3 жыл бұрын

The scars on my arm are the sign of my biggest mistake I trusted my best friend and told her about my scars and now she broke the friendship and I'm scared she is gonna tell someone

@legacyobsessed5908 3 жыл бұрын

@@lisannebehrens7915 unfortunately people so casually betray those secrets and somehow seemingly dont get it because it's not them being betrayed buuuut if it was them being fucked over Screaming bloody murder

@idacraw 6 жыл бұрын

i can relate to this in so many ways

@Ty-yy8cg 4 жыл бұрын

This whole poem represents me I feel alone yet I'm not I might be a poet but this insprires me to write yet I still feel alone

@theinvincible3415 6 жыл бұрын

Wow.....there is really a deep pain in your voice....loved ur all videos

@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын

Kunal Bharti Thank you very much! I'm glad you like them!

@kawaiicas9106 3 жыл бұрын

Whenever I look at the mirror I see a monster that is ugly and will never change 💔🖤

@dasanimmmoansuhhhggag1094 4 жыл бұрын

i laugh at school smile at home cry in my room i try my hardest to entertain my friends i laugh for them i smile for them i don’t show sad emotions but deep down i’m hurting i’m hurt badly but i can’t let it show to anyone if i tell someone i’m depressed they’ll ask me how i’m always smiling there’s nothing to be sad about but do you know what i’ve gone through? i feel like when i walk those halls there’s people judging me but i try my best to not cry when i smile i don’t like smiling it doesn’t fit me

@karilein100 3 жыл бұрын

Yes i understand you. Trying to look happy everytime. Trying to make everyone happy and help them. Help people is the Sensei of my life.

@Paul-kr3nr 5 жыл бұрын

This really hit deep

@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын

@jasminejas7794 3 жыл бұрын

Have you ever tested or tried that felling when you are at school and suddenly you look around you then you see them laughing playing and chatting with each others and then you want to cry because you are so lonely with no friends.. Ahh..that's so painful 💔

@ireneee7569 3 жыл бұрын

Every fucking day of my fucking life and I’m so tired. Sometimes I just want to fall asleep and never wake up. My “friends” don’t even know that I’m always in pain because I put a fake smile to try to survive, but I’m so tired. My classmates loves me, they’re my friend, but I still can’t feel a connection with them. They’re also always hanging out without me, and this hurts too. I just want everything to stop. I look at them and I don’t feel anything, I don’t feel anything at all. Sorry for my bad English but I’m a sixteen years old girl from Italy 😅

@deboramalaki6090 3 жыл бұрын

"So I wallow In the sorrow With little help about tomorrow" 😒 really hit

@tashkulkarni111 4 жыл бұрын

Never ever I found something that can express how I can feel. This one just did that. Love this.

@princerobert143 3 жыл бұрын

This really dip ...dip in my heart.....Alone 💕....

@loganduncan6886 2 жыл бұрын

I've been feeling this way for so long that everything has become numb Being able to feel something again after hearing this is a blessing even if it is just sorrow

@therayven3147 5 жыл бұрын

I relate to this... I often think that I can be in a room full of friends but still be alone... But as the years go by, I realized that I'm *NOT* alone, as I have the Lord Jesus Christ at my side... And as long as he is with me, I'm *NEVER* alone...

@musketsrule5541 3 жыл бұрын

Literally just explained the way I’ve felt for so long in a better way than I ever could, thank you for this

@Fukwadk 3 жыл бұрын

Same my parents, my mates they dunno how I'm dealing from inside and its killing me.. thanks for putting this story out to help people like me

@smokeyfromda519 3 жыл бұрын

As alone as we feel, we never are as alone as we think we are, and I know it's hard to let ppl in when we've all gone through so much negativity. Thank you for sharing your vulnerability with us, it's quite beautiful ❤️🌹💎💯

@jessfialde9983 4 жыл бұрын

365k are the people who watched this video...Imagine how many people are suffering from depression but no one is believing them and telling that "your just over reacting"...I wish I can remove this PAIN😢😔

@mae_171 4 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for writing this! I thought I was the only one that felt this way. At first I honestly thought I was becoming a psychopath because I’m so numb, then I realized all the reasons. I’ve been numb for a year now, I’m not a psychopath, and I’m scared I can’t fix it. My parents don’t really understand my fear of being in a room by myself, but it’s like a crushing sense of loneliness that just won’t go away, like I’m stuck.

@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын

Thank you for listening! :) It's easy to feel alone and feel like you're crazy when you feel depressed or numb. Just remember you're not crazy and there are people that will understand

@DelightedSoul130 3 жыл бұрын

I have found a part of me that breaths only in the moments when I am with you.

@mahikasingh4682 2 жыл бұрын

Well, you see deep down we all know that the sadness will pass, that life won't always be in this mess... But most times, the pain, the loneliness, the ache, it almost kills you before it passes... And when you are in that phase, and you hear and read these writings by other people, for me it's kinda soothing... It reminds me that i'm not alone and strangers around the world are in it with me; together, that someone somewhere understands... So, ya whatever my problems are, your writings won't solve them... But thank you for writing them because it sure makes things a little easier to bear :)

@rayboy6119 4 жыл бұрын

Gods always there

@Aggressive_carebear 3 жыл бұрын

Is it just me but the fact that's theres no background music like most videos like this adds so much meaning to what it's like to be lonely

@dannysiragusa2000 4 жыл бұрын

I just came across this. I've felt the same way for 10 years. God bless you ❤

@4evermelody967 5 жыл бұрын

I got here feeling really alone. I can definitely relate.

@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын

I'm sorry to hear that. Just know you're not alone and you're stronger than you think

@angelabrown8423 6 жыл бұрын

Hi Mel, I'm happy to help.Your not alone, ever.And now you got a friend on your list.Enjoy the rest of your day.

@Mars-tb2jr 4 жыл бұрын

At first you watch these video feeling bad for the people who relate and feel these things just to come back to the realization that you relate and feel them to.

@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын

I agree

@susankirby2104 3 жыл бұрын

Yes I feel so alone 😢

@MrBnm59 Жыл бұрын

This has been surprising the song of many, yet melting into thin air or unspoken, Human tears, inspiring life incredibly mystic. Regards for the golden pen soft flowing voice.

@malabriella 2 жыл бұрын

Oh! How i feel the life in every word you speak...

@rownee6886 3 жыл бұрын

I talked to myself to avoid being alone and it worked I became my own friend, I don't know if it's a mental illness but I start having a normal conversation with myself like "hey how are you?" then I'm like "I'm fine how about you?" yeah it sucks, but yeah, you gotta do what you gotta do man.

@welcomeWarlockWinter 2 жыл бұрын

I love her ... She had me at the write the lyrics ... Love her

@Bransthoughts 2 жыл бұрын

Just found this and can't stop listening,it speaks to me on a different level,luv your work

@asmamukaddam8501 4 жыл бұрын

Some people just don't get to know our feelings. They just feel like we keep doing the mistake, we r the wrong people. Some people try to be our friend in the front but in the back they r like a knife being stabbed in our back. IT SERIOUSLY HURTS LIKE HELLL 😢😢😢. Sometimes I feel like going far away from people going somewhere, when I can be alone

@Blueschy 5 жыл бұрын

This is exactly how I feel...

@michaelramos3616 3 жыл бұрын

My lyfe in words. Ty

@simoneduplessis2833 4 жыл бұрын

I'm so empty When someone crys I just look at them not knowing how to feel Cause I feel so empty Like there's no hope for me

@VoidNuzzle 4 жыл бұрын

This is the constant reconstruction of my innerself.

@CarlosLopez1997 4 жыл бұрын

This hit me in the deepest part of my heart and made me shed tears because of how much I can relate to this

@queanh8241 4 жыл бұрын

Dont worry, everything gonna be okay in the end.

@truckkun5540 5 жыл бұрын

Everyday is a struggle to convince yourself that you're normal. Pretending not to care what others think about you...but in the matter in fact you do. You tried to fit in society,living your life to the fullest and yet you're still alone. You take medication...but all they do is make you feel low..and the pain doesn't go away. The feeling that there's no one that we can trust or love...cause in the end they would turned their back and walk away. You wanted to scream,and tell them what you feel even you know that they wouldn't understand.

@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын

That's exactly how it is and what it feels like

@festivalofcreating875 2 жыл бұрын

How wonderful thank you

@ez_guitar_player Жыл бұрын

This is the poet i will never forget

@itsliferewritten 2 жыл бұрын

Amazing work!

@angelabrown8423 6 жыл бұрын

Dear Alone, Whatever your feeling is normal.We all feel that way.Being strong for the public, when we're hurting inside.Your not alone!! Let me share something with you.I went to work, feeling devastated because I loss my grandmother.We was extremely close.But I had to find the strength to function. It's a different scenario.But what I'm trying to say, Everyone has sadness, insecurity, pressures in life.Stop dwelling on the negatives and be positive. If you feel alone, Go out and meet people.Forinstance:Do some community service.Bea counselor at a summer camp.Being a roll model to kids that need guidence.volunteer at a old folks home.have conversations, play checkers.Theirs so much you do to help others.And return, People will respect you for your kind, devotion to others . Remember theirs always, someone less fortunate than you.Their are people out there, without limbs, without sight, can't hear, diseases, But They Never Give Up.Your a beautiful person and give yourself a chance.No worries, ok.I believe in you!!

@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын

Angela Brown Thank you very much 😊 I am feeling much better these days. Sometimes it's nice to write out my feelings and thoughts through poems. I feel less alone through some struggles when I hear that others can relate :) everything will get better ❤

@usaintltrade 3 жыл бұрын

WHEN YOU LOVE SOMEONE YOU KNOW YOU WILL NEVER FORGET AND NEVER HAVE.......

@straight2thesky 3 жыл бұрын

This one spoke the lyrics to my heart. Thank you

@MelsThoughts 3 жыл бұрын

@vanshikasingh4612 3 жыл бұрын

Its too deep and emotional 🥺🙂 touched my heart 💓

@maganouusiku2202 4 жыл бұрын

Amazing piece and relatable 🥺

@adamlane7986 2 жыл бұрын

Amazing.. just amazing.. its 5:26am where i am, and im crying to this poem, its like listening to my thoughts through a different voice.. simply amazing..

@yourhealingspace8840 2 жыл бұрын

This touches me in so many different levels.

@marciakirkbride4210 3 жыл бұрын

Always in strength...🙏✝️🌹♥️

@someoneinthecrowd3162 2 жыл бұрын

I've had enough. I thought I was not fighting alone but I now understand that I was completely wrong. I thought someone understood me. I was wrong. She didn't even know me. I shared my everything with her but she didn't even know me. I was told, "Don't use your depression over me." And that's enough. I should have never started talking. I should have never open my heart and mind. I should have never thought I could fight near someone and get over it. I was wrong. It's better to fight alone than get hurt in such a way. It's over. I'll never ever tell my dark feelings and thoughts to anyone. Because they don't understand even when I think they do. I'm tired of that.

@Kush._187 3 жыл бұрын

Your thoughts/ poetry are just wow I mean they are freaking amazing you know what I write some of them in my diary they are just......I don't have words ❤️

@ismaelvasquez2598 3 жыл бұрын

This is me.. It's choices i regret when i disconnect from people that care.

@spokenword5512 4 жыл бұрын

I feel this. 😭

@jared3370 Жыл бұрын

I cried to this. Thank you for this

@khushikatiyar1990 10 ай бұрын

Mee too

@Khartoum29 6 жыл бұрын

I'm crying,its so hard to keep a strait face as i listen to this i relate too well.

@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын

Aww I'm sorry to hear that :( It'll be okay!

@Shihab1979 3 жыл бұрын

Excellent thank you so much. Merry Christmas to you 🎄🎄🎄🙏

@subhashbold 4 жыл бұрын

Spot on.

@versexscape7540 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks for sharing. It's good to know I'm not alone in being alone

@esthete44 3 жыл бұрын

You speak my heart Thankyou for making me feel relief making me feel like home

@aniquagallimore4418 5 жыл бұрын

I felt every word☹️

@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын

@kailieankney2682 4 жыл бұрын

Me too

@etlearn7599 3 жыл бұрын

You're an amazing writer u said it all what I'm feeling I could never express my self like these ur blessed and gifted

@MelsThoughts 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks for listening :)

@sais_7199 4 жыл бұрын

This made me cry because it's exactly what I'm dealing with, being alone.

@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын

@Tacia437 4 жыл бұрын

this poem hit me deep inside all the words that you said i couldn't have said them better u say it like you are talking to me

@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын

@Lesy_11 7 ай бұрын

Im in tears seeing the fact im not alone..😢

@skilled1015 6 жыл бұрын

This made me cry so much

@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын

It's okay to cry. Just keep holding on and hoping for the best

@ewangaming4884 4 жыл бұрын

this is how i feel everyday

@ewangaming4884 4 жыл бұрын

yes im so sad

@freshbean6813 5 жыл бұрын

I’m so sick of fighting. I just want it to end.

@DrineThePoet 3 жыл бұрын

Can definitely relate...well done

@kevizokhorino1276 3 жыл бұрын

I'm speechless with what you said about, but still there is a hope for everyone

@waynewortham5240 3 жыл бұрын

loneliness is like falling in to a bottomless pit

@samthebutcherrodriguez763 2 жыл бұрын

As long as you’re happy with the person you’re with alone, you’ll have a friend forever

@narendrarai6978 4 жыл бұрын

Awesome.... Wow!!!!

@TKHSSuicideSurvivor 3 жыл бұрын

I relate to this too so much

@hatihattencoat5268 5 жыл бұрын

Thank you for saying this

@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын

@naimchowdhury8128 3 жыл бұрын

This made me cry! 😥 I'm feeling exactly the same way. Alone Alone Alone.

@supravietuitoriblog547 2 жыл бұрын

Hi! I don't want to bother you or something, but I saw your comment and I wanted you to know that you're not alone in this. If you want to talk to someoane who understands, i'm here for you.

@naimchowdhury8128 2 жыл бұрын

@@supravietuitoriblog547 That's so kind of you. I really appreciate it. ❤️

@supravietuitoriblog547 2 жыл бұрын

@@naimchowdhury8128 Always!