Maybe I Am Lonely│Spoken Word Poetry

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Mel's Thoughts

Mel's Thoughts

6 жыл бұрын

I wrote this while feeling an intense loneliness and it pretty much wrote itself. Sometimes we can be surrounded by loved ones, have many friends, or a special someone, and yet still feel so alone.
Written & Performed by: Melissa Paiz
Background music from freesound.org by the user connum
Follow me on Twitter: @xMoonlight.Melx

Пікірлер: 296
@Khartoum29
@Khartoum29 6 жыл бұрын
"I'd rather disappear and go silent than feel like I'm bothering some one" i can relate to this and I'm still trying to figure this out.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
Oh yes it's very hard to feel that way and I've been trying really hard not to do that these days
@applesong01
@applesong01 5 жыл бұрын
Here too...
@saruchhetri8540
@saruchhetri8540 5 жыл бұрын
Same here.
@ohdetslilzi4394
@ohdetslilzi4394 3 жыл бұрын
Same
@thoelalger2244
@thoelalger2244 Жыл бұрын
Love apples
@jamlessarmi1821
@jamlessarmi1821 4 жыл бұрын
"I sigh when I see a group of friends having the time of their lives or couple holding hands" that's me, then I try to cover my jealousy.
@mariea82
@mariea82 4 жыл бұрын
“I hesitate to call or send a message because I feel like I’m annoying “ god I absolutely felt that , like 100% of the time which is why I hardly do it anymore 🙁
@Blueschy
@Blueschy 5 жыл бұрын
This is exactly how I feel
@tiny3641
@tiny3641 3 жыл бұрын
Same :(
@aye._.20
@aye._.20 5 жыл бұрын
hey love 🦋🖤 “If you’re sad remember you’re just having a bad day not a bad life “ “I don’t know you but I love you “💖🖤🐝 Sincerely just a little reminder 🖤🍓🍇🐛
@anone03
@anone03 4 жыл бұрын
Oh this is nice..
@oluaamarachi2993
@oluaamarachi2993 3 жыл бұрын
Why doesn't the sad day want to end😔
@marthalongwe8863
@marthalongwe8863 2 жыл бұрын
I love you mel
@darksidelovedarkness8135
@darksidelovedarkness8135 3 жыл бұрын
"Not wanting to become clingy and dependent on others for a piece of happiness" This is one part I relate too, and I'm trying my hardest not to cling to others..
@shahidarif7816
@shahidarif7816 6 жыл бұрын
hey! you just gave words to my inner person now i can hear myself..
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
Haha, that's great!
@insanedictater2271
@insanedictater2271 5 жыл бұрын
Holy crap. That’s probably the most relatable poem I’ve ever heard! Bout word for word. Thanks for the smile at the irony! Lovin’ these poems! Please, keep em coming
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
Aww thanks!
@kalaichelvithayalan9292
@kalaichelvithayalan9292 5 жыл бұрын
Elan life best Holland nicht singe ich tamil Mann spricht
@cyrileli9129
@cyrileli9129 2 жыл бұрын
@@MelsThoughts i can relate 💯🔥😢
@emilymartinez5502
@emilymartinez5502 4 жыл бұрын
I always feel alone. I always wanna call someone to feel better, but don't wanna be a burden. It's hard for me to share my thoughts when I'm too deepen with my emotional thoughts. I have friends, but who knows if they see me as their friend. I'm lonely.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын
I'm sorry to hear that :( I've been feeling the same lately. I want to reach out to friends, but then I hold back because I feel like they won't want to talk to me. It's a hard and lonely thing to go through
@dheerajrajput2093
@dheerajrajput2093 4 жыл бұрын
7011694595
@nursyarahadiba6128
@nursyarahadiba6128 6 жыл бұрын
I understand the feeling, I feel it too. Thank you for saying the thing I cant put it in words
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
Nur Syarah Adiba You're welcome :) I'm glad to hear that you liked it!
@parkjaehyun9724
@parkjaehyun9724 5 жыл бұрын
Your not alone..... I feel the same way....
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you ❤ I've been feeling this poem a lot these days
@parkjaehyun9724
@parkjaehyun9724 5 жыл бұрын
@@MelsThoughts You can really feel the emotions
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
I'm glad to hear that :) I try my best to write how I feel
@saramorando6545
@saramorando6545 3 жыл бұрын
This poem has touched my heart. This is how I feel but never could describe it.
@Diana-gt1rv
@Diana-gt1rv 3 жыл бұрын
Whoever feels like this, don’t be sad, just be yourself and always remember, you are loved and you are loved because you are precious and because you are special! 💖🥰
@-JAVY-
@-JAVY- 7 ай бұрын
I've said every word u spoke this whole year. Every day. Every moment
@shovansarker5403
@shovansarker5403 3 жыл бұрын
Those words are so relatable, I also don't wanna bother anyone when my closest people misunderstood me, rather it feels better to disappear. Thanks a lot for the poem :)
@kevinholliway8521
@kevinholliway8521 2 жыл бұрын
I just wanted to tell you that you are an amazing person and anyone who knows you in life are blessed your words make me feel like I'm not alone thank you so much Mel. 😎 a kindrid spirit.🙏
@emnaellefi3083
@emnaellefi3083 6 жыл бұрын
maybe i don't belong..maybe i'm afraid of being forgotten and replaced...
@dalejoreye839
@dalejoreye839 Жыл бұрын
Wow!! Beautiful. I can relate.
@pragya0164
@pragya0164 6 жыл бұрын
This is actually beautiful! I wish I impress people through my videos as you impressed me! 🐣
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much! 😊 I'm happy to hear that you liked it!
@shreyanigam5576
@shreyanigam5576 4 жыл бұрын
Goodness... You are totally my soulmate... You are expressing my feelings that even I can't express... I'm a poet too... But I've never got enough words to explain me... But today listening to your poetry made me cry, not because you are like me, but because you could express me... The way I also couldn't... I love your poetry... Thanks for writing this...
@lejlav__
@lejlav__ 3 жыл бұрын
I am bawling my eyes out rn, this is so fuxxing relatable
@hannah1234xo
@hannah1234xo Жыл бұрын
What you said about feeling like you are bothering someone is what I feel all the time... I love your poetry. I write poetry too, keep it up.
@hailiethompson2034
@hailiethompson2034 4 жыл бұрын
I have this one on repeat! I can relate so much, I really love your work. It’s beautifully done. Love it 😊
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!!!
@kaisiigeorge8958
@kaisiigeorge8958 4 жыл бұрын
Simply amazing~mel....luv it👍
@zoh3ri638
@zoh3ri638 5 жыл бұрын
This is the same feeling I'm going through. Even though I didn't get the answers I needed at least I know I am not alone. Thank you.
@KorgenJurai
@KorgenJurai 3 жыл бұрын
This is so relatable.
@maliksmith6561
@maliksmith6561 2 жыл бұрын
You literally just said everything I’m going through. I’m not good with saying what I feel. But Loneliness is the worst
@al-kisah257
@al-kisah257 3 жыл бұрын
mapuh kerah ghinii.. huaaaaa...TOKSE DOHHHHH... PADE GU..TOKSE DOHHH.. Peritt
@sahanagv5136
@sahanagv5136 Жыл бұрын
This touched my heart❤
@vanejahvanejah2311
@vanejahvanejah2311 3 жыл бұрын
This video brings me tears😳Please don't stop doing videos
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 жыл бұрын
@marianaschuler182
@marianaschuler182 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Melissa 💜 you hugged me
@samhitagollakota
@samhitagollakota 5 жыл бұрын
I'm in tears, thank you for this.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome! :)
@mirabasnet9546
@mirabasnet9546 5 жыл бұрын
I feel like u r speaking my inner words ... u r jst amazing
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :D
@F3ARTHEKHAOSJBaiz
@F3ARTHEKHAOSJBaiz 4 жыл бұрын
i feel this so much .... 😥
@sinukumari4246
@sinukumari4246 3 жыл бұрын
Why i found you this late ?? All these lines ,it' like i'm feeling them in my skin,as i go through the same...Thank you so much for voicing out so many people's feelingz into words..
@SHASHANKKESARWANI-jp2ol
@SHASHANKKESARWANI-jp2ol 3 жыл бұрын
This is exactly me, every single word describes me perfectly
@skriaz2501
@skriaz2501 5 жыл бұрын
I feel exactly same....each words decribes me....!!!
@minerva7699
@minerva7699 3 жыл бұрын
I love this. Something I can resonate.
@rhanneaudreydelacuesta8897
@rhanneaudreydelacuesta8897 4 жыл бұрын
God! Stop being so relatable😥😟😭Finally...you express what I really wanted to say Thank you😊
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын
@cassandramarkiewicz8221
@cassandramarkiewicz8221 6 жыл бұрын
I love this, thank you.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
Live Happy Thank you for checking it out! 😊 you're very welcome!
@pompomkitty306
@pompomkitty306 4 жыл бұрын
Soooooooooo relatable!!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
@zarachoudhry4784
@zarachoudhry4784 4 жыл бұрын
This melt my heart
@anipiece3758
@anipiece3758 3 жыл бұрын
Why it is so relatable
@heykari_5926
@heykari_5926 3 жыл бұрын
'Loneliness brings along jealousy'. That's true, sometimes I compare my life to other. It's like I hurt my self. Loneliness is nothing, my mind said. But deep my heart can't lie.
@judylockhart9503
@judylockhart9503 3 жыл бұрын
I feel this too
@cassiusfelix2805
@cassiusfelix2805 4 жыл бұрын
you can feel lonely even if your with someone that's the scary part.
@yennguyen-uj3ri
@yennguyen-uj3ri 2 жыл бұрын
You’re right, I’m married for 24 years and most of the time I feel lonely
@tamryngreen6265
@tamryngreen6265 2 жыл бұрын
I am connected to this
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 жыл бұрын
you have a beautiful story to tell
@siankyoung
@siankyoung 2 жыл бұрын
I send you love.xx I have seen the darkness of loneliness
@hantuemm
@hantuemm 5 жыл бұрын
wow i never related to anything more than this. this is written really awesome.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much!
@maganouusiku2202
@maganouusiku2202 4 жыл бұрын
I’d rather disappear and go silent than feel like I’m bothered someone “... oh this talks to me 🙌🏾
@sharifahannurrahimah620
@sharifahannurrahimah620 3 жыл бұрын
Me too..
@chembomuke2419
@chembomuke2419 2 жыл бұрын
Art❤️
@kirstyy7572
@kirstyy7572 3 жыл бұрын
Every words that you've said hits me:
@jamiepersona
@jamiepersona 2 жыл бұрын
This hit me hard.. very relatable
@shreyaseemistri3517
@shreyaseemistri3517 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for sharing my thoughts to me❤️
@pangetko22
@pangetko22 4 жыл бұрын
Your poem hit me this is me 😢😢😢
@MS-pl5gv
@MS-pl5gv 2 жыл бұрын
Each and every word said here relates to me… i wish that i could meet the person who has written this …😞
@abdullahsherq8550
@abdullahsherq8550 4 жыл бұрын
Wish I had someone who could read my mind like you.. THANK YOU!!!
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын
@mahmoudmarouene1402
@mahmoudmarouene1402 3 жыл бұрын
That's exectly what i feel and i could never describe it I really hate myself I love your peoms keep going ♥️
@jskk0507
@jskk0507 5 жыл бұрын
Same feeling🤞🤗
@theunknown9745
@theunknown9745 5 жыл бұрын
This is exactly what I feel.
@theunknown9745
@theunknown9745 5 жыл бұрын
Wowww. Thanks.
@leidaefes6115
@leidaefes6115 3 жыл бұрын
"i sigh whenever i see a group of friends having the time of their lives.." and then i started crying
@RhythmAddictedState
@RhythmAddictedState 5 жыл бұрын
I can relate so much, thank you!
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
No thank you for checking it out! :)
@user-pn5jq3zs8c
@user-pn5jq3zs8c 4 жыл бұрын
It's really amazing poem..
@mansikhandekar7138
@mansikhandekar7138 5 жыл бұрын
this touched me
@dheerajrajput2093
@dheerajrajput2093 4 жыл бұрын
❤❤
@joegonzalez6189
@joegonzalez6189 5 жыл бұрын
This is nice. I might have to start posting my own I have a book of them.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
You should!
@mellisakirabo3547
@mellisakirabo3547 2 жыл бұрын
The words in this poem were one of the last words or sentences that XXXTENTACION aka X the late rapper whose death was unxpected said before his death and it makes me feel lighter that my name sake MELISSA wrote most of them in this poem coz l felt dead after his death coz he really motivated me and made me feel loved and less alone but ever since he died l have never felt the same I was heartbroken coz he really motivated many depressed youths like me but now am looking up to ur poems coz they legit remind me so much about him😞😕😭😭🤧 RIP XXXTENTACION 💗💯
@angelabrown7966
@angelabrown7966 3 жыл бұрын
You need a friend, I'll be that person. BECAUSE, I believe you're a blessing whether your happy 😊 or sad 😥. Everyone is precious & unique in your own way. And You're truly, deeply respected & appreciated by the one's closest to your heart. Never underestimate your value, worth. BECAUSE, whenever your not around, you're truly missed. Everyone has issues. And sometimes (friends) may seem neglectful,but I believe they're having problems also. You're a blessing not a burden. And if you need,time for yourself cool. But don't distance yourself. BECAUSE, family & true friends will always be there holding your hand & waiting. If you feel lonely, do whatever you can to improve that situation. Fill your life with friends, hobbies, projects. Engaged yourself with things, you like doing. Don't ever give up, because life is a beautiful thing. And situations change , just like the weather. We all experience the ups & downs about life. Nomatter the situation, we're stronger than we think. And nomatter where you're at, Theirs someone that appreciates & recognize (you), as a precious friend. Have faith & cling to hope. It will guide& maintain your strength & courage. God will listen & bless your life with the things you deserve. You're worthy of kindness, respect & friendship. You just have to believe in yourself.
@subhabratadatta790
@subhabratadatta790 5 жыл бұрын
This touched my heart
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
@melindapemberton999
@melindapemberton999 4 жыл бұрын
Mel mitch and I love your poems butbi know how you have felt in my years long time ago but with Gods helped me I'm so.much better but everyone gets depressed one time another if they say they dont say they dont telling you the truth cause everyone gets that way one time or another but it isn't exactly depression is it but it ant I forget what the dr cause that but everyone has been though it so I'm proud of you whatvyiu have complexed you on the race so stay girl I'm very proud of you me and mitch is both is so keep writing the poems and we will keep reading them im.proud of you my friend thanks
@kushoautar353
@kushoautar353 3 жыл бұрын
Beautiful words
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for listening :)
@queenofheart1603
@queenofheart1603 2 жыл бұрын
Open your heart
@jesuanthoniyammal2832
@jesuanthoniyammal2832 2 жыл бұрын
I believe it
@yourfavoritebandaid
@yourfavoritebandaid 4 жыл бұрын
I relate to this so much its sad.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 4 жыл бұрын
@herlife2585
@herlife2585 3 жыл бұрын
🤧😭😭😭i m already crying
@yesuilee1092
@yesuilee1092 4 жыл бұрын
I'm not feeling useless but I'm just feeling like I will annoyed someone even with just my existence in the same room so yes maybe I am lonely
@mj0745
@mj0745 Жыл бұрын
this is soo me...
@queenofheart1603
@queenofheart1603 2 жыл бұрын
Sometimes when you share your deeds what you have done is batter then to keep it because you said you have a family and a few friends but because of that happen you are not ok and feeling alone you need to talk instead to keep. That’s better for you live a batter life which you and everyone deserve
@lawrenciasoglo5922
@lawrenciasoglo5922 Жыл бұрын
This feeling where you with friends but still feel lonely
@riddhiaggarwal6889
@riddhiaggarwal6889 3 жыл бұрын
Same😔
@tabathagilbert201
@tabathagilbert201 4 жыл бұрын
You need your soulmate and it could be the best thing because a soulmate will love you for who you are.
@himanshipal3469
@himanshipal3469 5 жыл бұрын
I'm in tears right now because it's looks like this poetry was about me. 😥😥😥💔💔💔
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 5 жыл бұрын
Don't cry, but at least you know you're not alone with this feeling
@sintah3855
@sintah3855 3 жыл бұрын
story of my life
@dhrubapatgiri3986
@dhrubapatgiri3986 3 жыл бұрын
We are not alone😥❤️
@nicodemuspeterson6263
@nicodemuspeterson6263 6 жыл бұрын
thank you
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
NightMaiden Any time 😊❤
@marthalongwe8863
@marthalongwe8863 2 жыл бұрын
I love you mel
@Kei-ew8uh
@Kei-ew8uh 4 жыл бұрын
Mom: are you ok? Me: yeah, I'm ok. Mom: I'm glad you're ok Me: 🙃
@Good_Y3llow
@Good_Y3llow 2 ай бұрын
In the depths of solitude, a lonely soul resides, Embracing the silence, where darkness quietly hides, A yearning for connection, a longing to be seen, Loneliness, a companion, where the heartache convenes. In the vast expanse of emptiness, a void unfolds, Where echoes of laughter and warmth have been untold, The stillness engulfs, a silent symphony, Loneliness dances, in melancholic harmony. No footsteps to follow, no hands to hold, Loneliness, a companion, in stories left untold, Aching for understanding, in a world so vast, Seeking solace amidst the shadows that contrast. Yet, in this solitude, a strength takes root, Loneliness, a muse, where resilience takes pursuit, A self-discovery in the quiet and the plight, Finding solace in one's own company, day and night. Loneliness, a teacher, revealing truths untold, Deepening empathy and compassion, to behold, A gentle reminder of our human connection, To reach out and bridge the gaps of isolation. In the depths of loneliness, a seed of hope is sown, For amidst the solitude, growth begins to own, For in this journey, where the heartaches persist, We find the strength within, to rise and persist. So embrace the solitude, let loneliness be, A catalyst for introspection, for the soul to see, That in the midst of loneliness, we are not alone, For empathy and understanding will guide us home.
@DarkWolf-lz5xf
@DarkWolf-lz5xf 2 жыл бұрын
this is so true. Even though I'm surrounded by family and I have a boyfriend, I still feel lonely.
@reagansmith2497
@reagansmith2497 4 жыл бұрын
Just be u inspiration comes standard
@bhlutei9384
@bhlutei9384 4 жыл бұрын
Exactly me
@afzaalkhan5666
@afzaalkhan5666 5 жыл бұрын
Nice
@infoandmotivationaltv5636
@infoandmotivationaltv5636 4 жыл бұрын
Same the case is here
@infoandmotivationaltv5636
@infoandmotivationaltv5636 4 жыл бұрын
Your company is my best priority
@racheljune688
@racheljune688 2 жыл бұрын
I really relate to how you feel. And I love what you do. Inspiring me. I wondered what kind of microphone 🎙️ and program you use to speak and edit? Either way, I hope you are okay, and not just okay, but really truly okay 🤍😔😌
@gracelibre7635
@gracelibre7635 4 жыл бұрын
It was me.❤ maybe I'm a weird human being. I prefer to distance myself to my family, friends and everyone else. I don't know how to be me to anyone. I don't want anyone to judge me as I am. I can relate on this.Maybe I have to find myself alone. So when the times come and I'm ready to talk to someone I won't hide my true feelings anymore.💙🙏
@biswadeepramchiary3313
@biswadeepramchiary3313 6 жыл бұрын
A very warm thanks to you from India.
@MelsThoughts
@MelsThoughts 6 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@britanicoangelynkayepatris608
@britanicoangelynkayepatris608 3 жыл бұрын
maybe i am lonely. every time I'm with them i always feel that i don't exist.
@narmees769
@narmees769 2 жыл бұрын
Every words are relatable!!Hey, are you me??🥺
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