HOW TO COMPARE TWO POEMS OR TWO TEXTS IN A GCSE ESSAY: GRADE 9 MODEL ANSWER FRAMEWORK & EXPLANATION

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Struggling with comparing two texts in your GCSE exams? Maybe you have to compare two different poems or two different types of texts - but you don't know where to begin or how to even plan this type of essay? Not to worry - we've got you covered! Barbara, a qualified English teacher, walks you through a framework which will help you secure Level 9 marks in your essay if you practice and apply this framework in your essay writing!

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@safadams9685
@safadams9685 3 жыл бұрын
Really helpful have my assessment in like 10mintues
@abusyofficial
@abusyofficial 2 жыл бұрын
lmao
@mirshathmohamed2814
@mirshathmohamed2814 2 жыл бұрын
How did you do
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@Kabbaylamay
@Kabbaylamay 4 ай бұрын
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@meera9902
@meera9902 2 жыл бұрын
This was super useful!!!!! This will definitely stick in my mind whenever im doing comparison essays in class or exams, and ill definitely remember this when im doing my english lit GCSE!
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@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
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@_a_v_j
@_a_v_j 2 жыл бұрын
ive wanted a framework for so so long, my teacher couldnt give one in time and this is so useful, gbu
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@Zak-tm6mw
@Zak-tm6mw 7 күн бұрын
Got my mock exam for English literature in 2 hours. Wish me luck! This really helped by the way:)
@harry_1527
@harry_1527 2 жыл бұрын
This was really helpful as I have mocks soon and we are practicing this next week so this is gonna help loads, thank you again!!
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@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
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@joehill9720
@joehill9720 2 жыл бұрын
good luck lad
@harry_1527
@harry_1527 2 жыл бұрын
@@joehill9720 thank you mate! appreciate it
@ars5485
@ars5485 2 жыл бұрын
@@harry_1527 how did you do harry styles
@harry_1527
@harry_1527 2 жыл бұрын
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@mehakmalik1579
@mehakmalik1579 2 жыл бұрын
Thank u so much that really helped I’ve got my English mocks 1st thing in the morning today and u really helped thxs
@yassinahmed7595
@yassinahmed7595 2 жыл бұрын
This was very usefull for my gcse in june. Thank you so much. :))))
@n4rcissiq
@n4rcissiq 2 жыл бұрын
This is so helpful omg its 11:05 PM and I have my english semester o level exam tomorrow this helped a lot!! ❤
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@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
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@damnimstillalive8310
@damnimstillalive8310 Жыл бұрын
thank you so much! i always had problems with this topic
@mehh_01
@mehh_01 3 жыл бұрын
Ah yes my first paper is tomorrow and i find this today
@indigo-nk2iu
@indigo-nk2iu 3 жыл бұрын
omg how did it go
@mehh_01
@mehh_01 3 жыл бұрын
@@indigo-nk2iu it was quite ok we got beyond the sky and earth.
@indigo-nk2iu
@indigo-nk2iu 3 жыл бұрын
@@mehh_01 ohh i think that's a different anthology, mine is power and conflict :) ughhh got my paper tomz
@mehh_01
@mehh_01 3 жыл бұрын
@@indigo-nk2iu oh ok good luck then :D
@justmeditate98yearsagoedit23
@justmeditate98yearsagoedit23 3 жыл бұрын
@@indigo-nk2iu same power and conflict only in yr 9 now but have eoy exams next Monday
@em_ignite
@em_ignite 2 ай бұрын
Thank You So Much!!!
@Chula92
@Chula92 4 ай бұрын
Hunni !!! You are fantastic!!! Thx so much for teaching. Very detailed and informative .
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 4 ай бұрын
You're welcome!
@errii1669
@errii1669 2 жыл бұрын
I absolutely loved this, thank you so much I didnt know how to structure a poem very well and now you have taught me. Thank you.
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
You’re welcome 😊
@Mxn6y
@Mxn6y Жыл бұрын
this was super easy to understand now thankyou
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
Good luck!! 😃
@evllax4358
@evllax4358 Жыл бұрын
omg this actually helps fr I wish teachers explained it more briefly how like u
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
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@bengruzelier
@bengruzelier Жыл бұрын
Great video and very helpful. I like how applicable it is to any comparison question, very well done and well explained
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@husnamomand3958
@husnamomand3958 2 жыл бұрын
this is just great i cant belive i didnt come sooner to watch this!
@randall1242
@randall1242 Жыл бұрын
got my mock tommorow morning very helpful for how to start
@charmsd.5903
@charmsd.5903 Жыл бұрын
Thanks!! This is really helpful
@Karaselfgrowth
@Karaselfgrowth 2 жыл бұрын
This was so helpful. Thank you so much!
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@SAN1C2855
@SAN1C2855 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much this helped me a lot
@user-ik3jc8ck8l
@user-ik3jc8ck8l Жыл бұрын
thank you so muchh :))) i was going to go in that exam and structure it so wrong now i can do it xx
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
You're welcome! 😊
@ayahjabr8906
@ayahjabr8906 3 жыл бұрын
This video is so underrated, it helped me a lot. Thank you.
@luvs4m_
@luvs4m_ 2 ай бұрын
thank youuu!
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 ай бұрын
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@sadsupremebrick3530
@sadsupremebrick3530 3 жыл бұрын
Hair is on point dayum
@dalmapeller2285
@dalmapeller2285 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you. This was very helpful :)
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
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@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
Sign up for our GCSE AQA 'Ultimate English Language and English Literature' Revision Course: www.firstratetutors.com/gcse-course Struggling with comparing two texts in your GCSE exams? Maybe you have to compare two different poems or two different types of texts - but you don't know where to begin or how to even plan this type of essay? Not to worry - we've got you covered! Barbara, a qualified English teacher, walks you through a framework which will help you secure Level 9 marks in your essay if you practice and apply this framework in your essay writing!
@fionakarayianni2200
@fionakarayianni2200 3 ай бұрын
super helpful. thanks :)
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@Zoe-br6cq
@Zoe-br6cq 2 ай бұрын
Thanks ❤
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@kamabokogonpachiro6797
@kamabokogonpachiro6797 2 жыл бұрын
tysm i think itll be helpful tmr
@harrye290
@harrye290 6 ай бұрын
got my mock tmrw this helped fs
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 6 ай бұрын
Good luck!
@elijahchangaya4458
@elijahchangaya4458 2 жыл бұрын
thank you so much i honestly had know idea how to do comparative essays
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
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@leonidaschalkias
@leonidaschalkias 6 ай бұрын
so useful and help me understand the structure
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 6 ай бұрын
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@andreimanaila7755
@andreimanaila7755 3 жыл бұрын
This was very concise and easy to follow. Good job!
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 3 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! :-)
@Muhammadshiyam
@Muhammadshiyam 2 жыл бұрын
Tnx for helping
@lilgueon3794
@lilgueon3794 Жыл бұрын
cheers barbara got my exam tmr
@soph8396
@soph8396 3 ай бұрын
Using this structure you can this use the follow layout for each point paragraph: PEPEEEL - Point, Explain, Point, Explain, Evidence, Evidence, Link
@waw57
@waw57 10 күн бұрын
Soo helpful thank you!
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 9 күн бұрын
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@niamhvarma9129
@niamhvarma9129 Жыл бұрын
Tomorrow is my gcse thank you for this🙏🏼🙏🏼
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
You're welcome! ❤️
@aliza_asif12
@aliza_asif12 Жыл бұрын
Helped frrrr, I'm in year 9 this is basically finding gold to me
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
That's awesome!!!! Glad it helped 😃
@CarterFridd
@CarterFridd Жыл бұрын
thank you, would you add in points about rhyme scheme and type of poem/context when introducing idea in points or after embedding quotes?
@firegb9851
@firegb9851 2 жыл бұрын
thank you !!
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
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@bealtruisticbealtruistic1056
@bealtruisticbealtruistic1056 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you. Bookmark 4:01
@DrNirmalaH3N
@DrNirmalaH3N 2 жыл бұрын
Awesome explanation!! Helped me a lot
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! :-)
@beracahumoru5199
@beracahumoru5199 Жыл бұрын
Thank you..
@TM-mv3vx
@TM-mv3vx 2 жыл бұрын
my mock exam in 10 hours, very helpful
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
Best of luck!
@yy.500
@yy.500 2 жыл бұрын
super thankful for this I have a literature mock in two days 🙏🏽
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
You're welcome and good luck!!
@futeditz1628
@futeditz1628 Жыл бұрын
thank you so much
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
Welcome 😊
@JLUK
@JLUK Жыл бұрын
The problem is I can’t find similarities or differences between the texts, are there any tips?
@systemloading45
@systemloading45 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you this is extremely helpful! If possible where could a sample/ model answer be found? That would really help thanks!
@ivywong-tebbitts2586
@ivywong-tebbitts2586 6 ай бұрын
Most useful 10 minutes and 17 seconds of my life
@haltsg6723
@haltsg6723 2 жыл бұрын
Really helpful...thankyou
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
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@safe4675
@safe4675 2 ай бұрын
im cooked
@allardnaomi
@allardnaomi 2 жыл бұрын
omg she is so beautiful!!
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you! :-)
@matthebditch2853
@matthebditch2853 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you this was helpful, although would it be possible to get a high grade with only a thesis and two developed points, rather than three?
@lilgueon3794
@lilgueon3794 Жыл бұрын
I got a 7 doing that in my mocks but i really dont recommend doing that
@user-kq8er5ju2n
@user-kq8er5ju2n 2 ай бұрын
paper 1 tommorow thank you
@syedamarium3471
@syedamarium3471 Жыл бұрын
I write a paragraph about poem A then one about B after because that's what ive been taught, is it recommended and ideal?
@cjbtw2190
@cjbtw2190 Ай бұрын
thx
@sm00kyrain_3
@sm00kyrain_3 Жыл бұрын
Watching this a day before my exam😂
@mialam7014
@mialam7014 2 жыл бұрын
thanks
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
You're welcome!
@indigo-nk2iu
@indigo-nk2iu 3 жыл бұрын
This is very very helpful thank you! I would just say that I think you sometimes overly repeat yourself, but then again I understand that this is also aimed to help a younger audience :)
@user-vd8uo4ov7h
@user-vd8uo4ov7h 3 жыл бұрын
Repetition is quite helpful because sometimes it goes in one ear and leaves from the other. But the Repetition helps to remember it, perhaps for some people
@ihate9777
@ihate9777 3 жыл бұрын
This helped so much thanks
@GagandeepKaur-of7fx
@GagandeepKaur-of7fx 3 жыл бұрын
My assessment is tomorrow and I didn’t quite revise I was to busy revising other things but this was really helpful thank you so much 😁
@mephistopheles2508
@mephistopheles2508 2 жыл бұрын
I was just sleeping... But yeah this is beautiful
@alirehan48
@alirehan48 3 жыл бұрын
Introduction the writers effectively present the *keywords* through a variety of literary techniques or language techniques or structural techniques then saying that the writers effectively present these either in very similar ways or in very different ways Point 1 Begin with the leading text with “Firstly” Mention how does text A states the Keywords and then in the same sentence compare it with the Text B using keywords. Quote from text A and mention techniques and again support it with your point from text B Close of the first example with a conclusion from text A and B Similar points use ‘similarly’ and use “on the other hand” when comparing different points Point 2 Repeat the same format with a different point using “secondly” Point 3 Repeat the same format with a different point using “Additionally” or “thirdly” State more points if you have time Conclusion Restate the key points from the question Conclude and give final remarks on both of the texts
@KitKat-hm5zy
@KitKat-hm5zy 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much you have helped me a lot thanks
@music-tm6xh
@music-tm6xh 5 ай бұрын
Im so confused on how to write about theme, and how to write about structure (and what structure even is 😅) is there anyway u could release a video about these?
@Zero1._
@Zero1._ 4 ай бұрын
Does ur teacher even teach ☠️
@Trevenus
@Trevenus 2 жыл бұрын
amazing :)
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
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@diamonds4454
@diamonds4454 Жыл бұрын
Just got my mock back I got a 5 outta 9 thx alot I lost marks cuz of my mistakes
@sameerahfarooqi5326
@sameerahfarooqi5326 2 жыл бұрын
Can you do more video on how to do essays for Animal Farm in 1 month Im really struggling!
@alexjames4704
@alexjames4704 2 жыл бұрын
does this also work for poems?
@afiamavis8255
@afiamavis8255 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you ❤️🥺
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 3 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! :-)
@jamiemacdonnell6929
@jamiemacdonnell6929 Жыл бұрын
well, I have my English lit in 11 hours and I am doomed, but now I know how to structure this essay so I have just gained some more marks??
@50ksubswithnovideoss
@50ksubswithnovideoss 3 жыл бұрын
EXCELLENT WORK
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 3 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! :-)
@jxstin_sxntixgo9094
@jxstin_sxntixgo9094 2 жыл бұрын
Are the devices ur comparing have to be the same e.g simile from one poem being compared by another simile
@gracesmith5961
@gracesmith5961 2 жыл бұрын
I guess it would be useful for them to be the same, but you could compare a simile and metaphor and compare the atmosphere/mood/ideas they both create
@harry_mtb3076
@harry_mtb3076 3 ай бұрын
is this a 30 marker question? english lit the comparing
@baebee9132
@baebee9132 3 жыл бұрын
can i talk about something similar about to quotes and something diffrent about those same quotes in the same paragraph
@s2_krysp1
@s2_krysp1 Жыл бұрын
can this be used for edexcel
@Blessingstevens06
@Blessingstevens06 3 жыл бұрын
can you please do a separate one for comparing poetry where u only get one text and compare because im in y10 and its my first time and my teacher did not teach us how to compare poetry and im really strugling
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 3 жыл бұрын
It's in the works :-)
@MrFunandgames123
@MrFunandgames123 3 жыл бұрын
i really struggle to find points to write from the essays, anyone got any tips?
@jonathankiles6148
@jonathankiles6148 2 жыл бұрын
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@karlllllllllllll
@karlllllllllllll 2 жыл бұрын
thanks gcse literature exam in 2 days 😢
@alfie7172
@alfie7172 2 жыл бұрын
do we have to include context in our answers for grade 9
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
Yes when relevant but not in every paragraph.
@hindoloturay6761
@hindoloturay6761 2 жыл бұрын
Please do model answers
@devincfonseka1367
@devincfonseka1367 Жыл бұрын
Can this model be used for edexcel too?
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын
Absolutely
@squirrel2675
@squirrel2675 Жыл бұрын
wait so each point is equal to point mark ? so if you had a 10 marker would you need to have 10 points
@saywhatnow0073
@saywhatnow0073 Жыл бұрын
The question is level assessed, meaning it isn’t marked per point, the whole of the work is assessed and judged on its fluency and quality, if you look on AQA mark schemes you’ll see that it has levels rather than specific points
@shannen07
@shannen07 9 ай бұрын
is this applicable to the wjec eduqas exam board?
@FirstRateTutors
@FirstRateTutors 9 ай бұрын
Yes it is - any exam board 😊
@shannen07
@shannen07 9 ай бұрын
@@FirstRateTutors Thank you so much for your help!
@fwwryh7862
@fwwryh7862 2 жыл бұрын
I can't see the board.
@TechyDesk450
@TechyDesk450 2 жыл бұрын
Helpful
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@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
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@TechyDesk450
@TechyDesk450 2 жыл бұрын
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@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын
@@TechyDesk450 amazing, thank you! :-)
@TechyDesk450
@TechyDesk450 2 жыл бұрын
Keep Up The Good Work! Thanks always for your support :-)
@sebbaker7133
@sebbaker7133 2 жыл бұрын
Have trials tomorrow.
@hermelateklezghi9255
@hermelateklezghi9255 4 ай бұрын
i want you to teach me
@asmacampbell6661
@asmacampbell6661 2 ай бұрын
First paper is in 9 hour!!!!
@blair7985
@blair7985 2 ай бұрын
good luck :)
@georgebedford
@georgebedford 2 жыл бұрын
whats her name
@mehrethabtemichael3297
@mehrethabtemichael3297 10 ай бұрын
Dunno
@snowleopardpaws1618
@snowleopardpaws1618 2 жыл бұрын
:)
@hf.l.y5412
@hf.l.y5412 3 жыл бұрын
Can not see clearly the board.
@thegaminglab5686
@thegaminglab5686 2 жыл бұрын
With that grammar you are not clearly getting good grades
@adamwood8364
@adamwood8364 3 жыл бұрын
nice wig
@arch8939
@arch8939 3 жыл бұрын
Bruhhh
@aliza_asif12
@aliza_asif12 Жыл бұрын
Why bro 😭
@HassanCodA-Xod8hm.
@HassanCodA-Xod8hm. Ай бұрын
🕉 🎶🎶❤ 🔥🔥 💖🪷
@suburashiid6411
@suburashiid6411 Жыл бұрын
i just need grade 7 in english 😭
@hutchy590
@hutchy590 6 ай бұрын
Why is Blud yapping so much just say the points
@freyamcneill.
@freyamcneill. 6 ай бұрын
Why are you interacting??
@hutchy590
@hutchy590 6 ай бұрын
@@freyamcneill.not sure who you are? But I thought I would leave some feedback to help her pursue her KZfaq career, thank you. Have a good day.
@freyamcneill.
@freyamcneill. 6 ай бұрын
@@hutchy590 listen here JACK, she is a hard working woman that doesn’t need feedback from someone that finished school like 20 years ago. You’re a 40 year old man.stop.
@hutchy590
@hutchy590 6 ай бұрын
@@freyamcneill.not sure how you know my name is Jack? I am a 40 year old man. A 40 year old man that has just got back from the mines which I’ve been in for 2 weeks trying to support my family of 5! “Freya” take a long hard look at yourself and realise who you are insulting.
@freyamcneill.
@freyamcneill. 6 ай бұрын
@@hutchy590 is poetry going to help with your financial position? Think you need to set urself up an LTD and provide a better lifestyle for ur child labour family and get out of poverty! 2weeks too little pal, watch it.
@somewanderingkid3253
@somewanderingkid3253 Ай бұрын
i beg u stop waffling and get to the point
@HamRad1
@HamRad1 21 күн бұрын
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