How To Write A Perfect P.E.E.L Paragraph: "PEEL" Structure Explained!

How To Write A Perfect P.E.E.L Paragraph: "PEEL" Structure Explained! | English GCSE Essay Revision!

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Not sure what P.E.E.L stands for? Unsure how to write amazing Level 9 Paragraphs? Barbara Njau explains how to write the Perfect P.E.E.L Paragraph!

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@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

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@airtroopers3656 3 жыл бұрын

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@FirstRateTutors 3 жыл бұрын

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@jonathankiles6148 2 жыл бұрын

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@leahhjeanx 2 жыл бұрын

this was so helpful, thank u!

@videovideoyeah 2 ай бұрын

Thanks for making this

@willwaters 9 ай бұрын

Thank you forever

@nadytalks6487 2 ай бұрын

Thanks for making this PEEL method so clear to me. I've understood this method really well for the very first time.

@FirstRateTutors 2 ай бұрын

Glad it was helpful!

@SirPigingstin Жыл бұрын

Thanks! This was great for my up coming assignment 😊

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

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@LiEliK Жыл бұрын

This helped me so much. Thank you, ❤

@benjaminmckittrick8905 2 жыл бұрын

Brilliant Video! Great help for my exams in January.

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

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@PotatoCatt14 2 жыл бұрын

ive always struggled with writing structure language questions as my skl teacher wud never explain how we shud write our answer. after watching this I understand now! so thank u very very much for making this video it really helped! I've got my mide terms tomorrow I feel a bit more confident now!

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

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@TensaiV 2 жыл бұрын

with that spelling you shouldn't lmao

@PotatoCatt14 2 жыл бұрын

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@mdsings_ 2 жыл бұрын

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@tomlamb8278 16 күн бұрын

Super helpful loved the video

@Slinky007 Жыл бұрын

Thank you have a test in this and then this will be covered on my exam in november

@MM-lr5hv Жыл бұрын

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@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

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@aliissad4359 2 жыл бұрын

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@jelo_gaming529 10 ай бұрын

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@dxrkcvpiid 7 ай бұрын

hi, could you guys maybe do how to write an IQA paragraph as im struggling with it in my english lessons xx.

@ngozi8475 2 жыл бұрын

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@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

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@nvxtoxic3946 Жыл бұрын

Ok how should you do it say you have more than one lot of evidence would you just stack them or get rid of link and link at the end

@chxined Жыл бұрын

Thanks! I am from a different place other from uk, and i planned to join a school which has hard english tests. This helped a ton!

@Rick-bk9ix Жыл бұрын

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@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

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@thecreativedreamers8047 Жыл бұрын

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@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

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@ammaaraholiver942 Жыл бұрын

Wow took abit long to get to the point but I got it 👍

@jfk986 2 жыл бұрын

Thanks! This video is really helpful and interesting.

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

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@davidpage411 2 жыл бұрын

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@user-lk1ne2gg6o Жыл бұрын

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@user-by9lw2xe8k 9 ай бұрын

this teacher teacher is better than my own eng teacher. thanks this video was very helpful

@FirstRateTutors 9 ай бұрын

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@alioudocta1321 2 ай бұрын

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@user-fu5po6dp4j Жыл бұрын

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@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

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@senjitsu 2 жыл бұрын

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@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

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@luvfromrosie 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you :)

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

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@shengsterino 2 ай бұрын

I'm glad the tutor didn't choose to become a Rap Star and made this video for us. 🙏🙏🙏

@iamfreddysifiso2295 9 ай бұрын

Tanks you so much mam love from south Africa because of you l. got 80/80 for my literature essay

@FirstRateTutors 8 ай бұрын

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@jxstin_sxntixgo9094 2 жыл бұрын

if you can see more things you could say about the quote that links to the q, should we write more?

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

Yes of course! This is just a general structure for your paragraphs but if you can add more then yes - the more the better

@jonathankiles6148 2 жыл бұрын

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@haslinaatif7571 2 жыл бұрын

I must say, it was quite helpful. I've been trying to find a good video like this for a while now because I have my finals tomorrow :) I also wanted to ask if there are more advanced ways in opening a p.e.e.l paragraph? Are there other ways of saying "We learn that..." or "The use of..."?

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

Glad it helped! Of course you can use more advanced paragraph openers - for example: It can be argued that… It is evident that... A good illustration of this is… Therefore, this example shows that… This demonstrates that…. These reasons show that…… It is clear that…….. Etc.. etc! Feel free to add your own variations too

@quadradoge6417 2 жыл бұрын

@@FirstRateTutors Hi quick question, how many of the PEEL paragraphs per paragraph are sufficient for scoring 45 marks? So for context, I need to write a prose essay consisting of an introduction, three thematic paragraphs and a conclusion. Would 1 of these peel paragraphs be enough or is it necessary to repeat this structure 2 or 3 times in one paragraph to score high marks?

@kavinaa9398 Жыл бұрын

I am in university and I am using PEEL as well. It also helps you in the future, like in university. Thank you so much.

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

Love this! That's awesome, thanks for your feedback 😊

@ifrostykid 2 жыл бұрын

Underated

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you! :-)

@willwaters 9 ай бұрын

You awesome gal... mad love ❤❤❤❤

@FirstRateTutors 8 ай бұрын

Glad you enjoyed the video!

@skilled-stick3 Ай бұрын

can you use this from question 1 to question 4

@FirstRateTutors Ай бұрын

If you’re talking about the Language papers, yes you can.

@mikaylab8889 2 жыл бұрын

Your more helpful than my actual teacher

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

That's amazing, so glad this video helped :-)

@fjfjnf4589 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks

@FirstRateTutors 3 жыл бұрын

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@jonathankiles6148 2 жыл бұрын

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@swethaloukyasai6079 Жыл бұрын

Hii First Rate Tutors! Your video helped me sooo much and you deserve more then a thanks for it, I can't put it in words. I am living in Australia and I'm in year 6 in term 4 with 8 weeks left and Ik I won't be able to do THE BEST I CAN GET OUT OF MYSELF if I just started soo I was wondering if you could give me some tips for a person my age! Thanks bye!😁

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

Australia? Awesome! 😃 You're still so young and it's amazing you're so motivated. Biggest tip is get into reading more consistently (improve speed reading), practice as much as you can answering harder comprehension questions - for example Victorian extracts - using PEEL paragraphs and work on speed writing!!! You can also check out a course I made for younger students like you which includes all this stuff: firstratetutors.co.uk/p/ultimate-english-homeschooling-course 😄

@pineapplejuice1156 2 жыл бұрын

I had to play this video at half speed because she speaks so fast.

@VypaGaming 2 жыл бұрын

I do this and I only get grade 2s and 3s I don't understand what I'm doing wrong

@_anime_shawty7654 Жыл бұрын

U do?

@javeryashakeel6261 2 жыл бұрын

I started my gcse from class 10 bcz of lockdown i missed alot things i dont know how to write peel or pee paragraphs but now you helped me alot... Thank you soo much🥺❤️my finals are not so far i have only 2 months to improve my peel pee sqme peeze structure paragraphs 🥺

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

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@davismiles2765 2 жыл бұрын

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@soudalotaibi6076 Жыл бұрын

Boom! Got 70%

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

Amazing!

@elainathorne5207 Жыл бұрын

would this be the same as a peed paragraph?

@FirstRateTutors Жыл бұрын

Not sure what the "d" in PEED relates to but the structure sounds similar ☺️

@elainathorne5207 Жыл бұрын

@@FirstRateTutors it means development i think :)

@ranirani-np3fc 2 жыл бұрын

You are very good but you are too fast and the writing is very faint to grasp the detail. May be the camera is not focused or so. My apology for the comment, but I must say you are an excellent teacher

@FirstRateTutors 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you! Perhaps try listening to the video at a slower speed - you can adjust the playback speed so you'll hear me speak slower 😊

@user-tq3ec4np4r 4 ай бұрын

I want to learn how to write essays

@SKFEX Ай бұрын

this is how u do it

@jackblack5506 Жыл бұрын

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@shane.pk0 2 жыл бұрын

how tf has my teacher not said about this

@T.4.7 2 жыл бұрын

Hello

@Sahir668 Жыл бұрын

@WATCHINGTHEWATCHERS999 2 ай бұрын

Examples examples examples… That’s what both kids and parents need. My son is autistic. He needs context. Hell… I need context. Every video I watch on this fails to give example model answers. This is too abstract. I was REALLY hopeful when you started.