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Where is the conclusion? And you mentioned gas. But you expanded the idea with oil...! After people, you use that as a relative pronoun instead of using who...it seemed to me a bit confusing.

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hello ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion. Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution. Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur. Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time. In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

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Longer life spans and improvement in the health of older people suggest that people over the age of sixty five continue to live and active life. In what ways can society benefits from the contribution that older people can make? Elder individuals are strength for their own children and grandchildren in every condition of life. People who are above sixty five live for long time due to advancement in their health, For this, they continue to live healthy life. This essay will articulate the measures which society may take for getting advantages from the contribution that elderly can make. To commence with, there are umpteen of essential key factors which elucidate that the merits of older people's active life to young individuals. Firstly, golden bourgeois have abundance of experience about full of tribulations life, how to tackle with setbacks because, they also faced myriad of situations related to these things. Therefore, they are hub of paramount knowledge. For instance, if anyone possess any issue in their life, then they can take suggestions from their old parents and grandparents which will provide everlasting benefits to them. Secondly, older masses have all information of their rituals, tradition, custom and culture which can easily and perfectly recieved by new generation. To be more precise, in the contemporary, social and all types of old rituals are disappearing day by day as a result of which youngsters do not have any sort of knowledge about their religion and culture, whereas improvement in pensioners health may solve this problem, as people can take advantages from them To epitome, bourgeois can spend quality time with grey-haired masses coupled with gain their information about traditions, culture etc, that will always give advantageous consequences to prevent culture. To cut long story short, elderly are very precious for everyone, because they are like tree which gives shade to their loveable children in sunshine, in easy words, they are always protect their children from every deleterious obstacles. Old people are like gold which will always expensive and beneficial. Plz anyone tell me can i get 6.5band for this writting🥺

@@kaur2261 How much scores you got in actual test?

@@kaur2261 You have used so much hard vocabulary

@@piyushdaryanani8045 I have not given any exam yet.

@@piyushdaryanani8045 I think this is simple vocabulary🥺

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hello ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion. Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution. Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur. Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time. In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

Could you suggest me that can I put personal example means of neighbour, brother ,friend?

how much did you practice for writing module? I have test on 25th august and I haven't practiced writing module.

@@piyushdaryanani8045 task 1 - 3 times and 7 essays of different types, all with feedback (though not via E2 IELTS). But I used advice from some of videos from this channel, well explaned.

Honestly, few days to my test

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@@DIY_Atistik best of luck 👍🏻

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@@DIY_Atistik 3 days left for my test, wish u the best of luck

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How did it go

@@jessicanyaman8295 everything went well got 7.0 overall

Congratulations. I am here watching for my test tomorrow

hello ive recently started working on ietls writing can you guys give me some advice on this essay that I've written about topic Some people believe that increasing tax on various industries will reduce pollution whereas others believe that there are better alternative ways. Discuss both the view and give your opinion. Pollution is mainly produced by industrial facilities. Several people argued that making the taxes higher on numerous industries may decrease pollution, while others accept that different types of approaches could be made. In this essay, I will look at both arguments and suggest why replacing the regular industries with other types of mechanisms, is a better way to lessen pollution. Increasing the value of the product in industries makes it harder for them to purchase, this may result in industries no longer burning those inputs since the percentage of profit will fall. Some believe that this solution is a move as these places work either for producing electricity or heat. To contentiously work, they need to burn coal or fossil fuels which is cheaper compared to other ways of generating electricity. Once this case is implemented hence it will be harder for them to use these materials due to less profit and therefore which will push those to no longer pollute the air. In other words, fewer fabrication areas mean less pollution will occur. Constructing Eco-friendly industries alternatively, instead of usual ones, and subsequently closing those working areas could address this issue completely. Since expanding the taxes does not fully do that. some argue that these arguments should take into consideration, as wind power and solar panels do not require any special materials that harm the environment, the only needed source is either wind or sunlight in this solution. This is a better way to combat pollution, owing to not a single item being burned, and also from the point that it is cost-effective on the other hand which also does not require any human control, as a result, it will also save time. In this essay, I have discussed the effects of industries on the nation and possible factors caused by this as well as the path that should be followed. I consider that shouting down those facilities and replacing them with solar power and wind could be useful to deal with pollution rather than increasing taxes on them.

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Hi Could you please guide me

Congratulations mam...can you please guide me for reading that how you cracked it nd got these beautiful scores in your LRW

@@sonia_kapoor786 I followed the guide Jay gave. I watched almost every video, even from 4 years ago

please can I reach out to you. I plan to write

can u share the video playlist if possible?

i’m having my test day after a week,it would be really helpful

Please help me gow can you improve your reading. I have 8 days my reading Really really bad

Hi Sally, i m from India pls suggest me can I put personal example in task 2 pls reply me

@@Heepsknowledge yes, you can

Thanks Sally, can you send me your WhatsApp number ,

What things are different now than before in ielts reading?can you please explain

Omg how long have u been learning English

@@zulayhonasirdinova6578 I've been speaking english basically since kindergarten, so that would amount to more than 10 years jajaja

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Same boat

Hello sir or mam, can you please help me to achieve 8777 band 🙏🙏🙏 I am in big trouble... please

Hi how was your test