Stuck at 6.5 in IELTS Writing Task 2? Try This!

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In this video, Ex-IELTS Writing Examiner and E2 IELTS Teacher Mark gives a lesson on how a simple change to your essays can improve your IELTS Writing scores. In particular, Mark focuses on the Task Achievement criteria for IELTS Writing and provides strategies and examples to getting a Band 7 or above in this criteria, by ensuring that you maintain a clear position throughout your entire essay. Watch this video to learn everything you need to know about writing a clear position in your IELTS Writing Task 2 Essay.
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00:00 Intro
00:50 Criteria
03:24 Today's Question
03:59 Note Taking Tips
05:32 Examples of Student's Introductions
07:51 Clear Body Paragraphs
11:55 Improving Unclear Body Paragraphs
25:21 IELTS Writing Feedback
25:58 Recap and Final Tips
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@E2IELTS 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks for watching everyone! Stay Tuned for some big surprises coming soon! 👀

@bongeatingpassport3463 3 жыл бұрын

It has explained beautifully.

@satveervirk 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks

@Queen-qn8fv 3 жыл бұрын

Please upload video how to solve reading passage 🙏🙏

@helmyseby3771 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you sir

@teddybear-mm1zv 2 жыл бұрын

Please upload more videos on writinh by mark..its humble request

@jisoohusband99 3 жыл бұрын

I was taught many about techniques of writing impactful essays. As far as I know, your way of explantion to write high score essay is fantastic. GREAT JOB.

@brownrover1827 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you e2 team. Got my 7,7,7,8 lately. Couldn’t happen without your teaching. Blessings

@michelle1993624 Жыл бұрын

This is REALLY helpful. No beating around the bush. It totally hit the spot.

@azmauk3265 2 жыл бұрын

The most wonderful IELTS EXPERT I have ever watched and understood. Waiting for more videos!

@daisylebra 3 жыл бұрын

Love this video so. Much!! Hope you can post more videos concerning Writing. Making contrast between good ones and less good ones is the best way to illustrate what good is.

@user-ed6wz7dy7e 3 жыл бұрын

It was very helpful to achieve the score we wish to get from writing. The power of the introductory sentence is very great as it may play a big role while deciding to put the mark. Thank u a lot

@UdyBee 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much Mark for this lesson. I stumbled upon it a week to my IELTS exams and it helped me a whole lot in improving my writing skills. Thank you E2 for all you do. You guys are the best.

@dheeru021181 2 жыл бұрын

Excellent video... I was looking for an end to end guidance on building ideas and their impact in IELTS. Thanks a lot.

@MM-uj8fu 3 жыл бұрын

Really insightful and comprehensive. Thank you.

@samraiqbal3907 2 жыл бұрын

The videos from E2 are great to get the idea, it's been an education

@saeed577 Жыл бұрын

What a video, it amazingly covers the criteria that I had problems with. Now I think differently while writing. Thanks a lot.💙

@zeezFPS Жыл бұрын

I've got 7.5 overall with writing being 6.5 and dragging the overall band score down. This video is helping me a lot to analyse my mistakes. Thank you a lot, hopefully I will get 8 using the resources you are providing! Cheers!

@shrutipandya2959 3 жыл бұрын

This was one of the most helpful videos for me personally! Thanks a ton E2 ❤️

@poojabhole9153 Жыл бұрын

you explained all the concepts so beautifully and simply. thanks alot.

@Kiddieshomefunplace 2 жыл бұрын

I just want to say thank you for your good work and clear purpose.👍

@prawashasingh9242 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks a lot just clear and precise explanation about writing great job👍

@sweetsandy4758 3 жыл бұрын

I rarely leave comments on KZfaq, but, this time, I had to do so. This is the one I have been looking for so long! I am looking forward to the other one, 'Coherence and cohesion' next time. I genuinely appreciate your efforts. Mark, you are the best!

@rheaalaveenacastelino3960 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for your time and efforts. Sir, this session was truly helped me a lot 🙏🙏🙏

@quarantinedota6873 2 жыл бұрын

This video is one of the main reasons i got 7 in writing. I cant express how valuable your videos were to me. I got 7.5 overall from my first attempt. Thank you so much for everything you’re doing. Im recommending e2language to everyone i see.

@MusanaShah 9 ай бұрын

Can u please give some guidences for reading🥹

@harmandeepsingh9805 9 ай бұрын

Can we add personal example and personal pronouns in writing task 2 ? im confuse about this.

@MostafaAlsayed1988 3 жыл бұрын

One of the best videos on the cannel 👌🏼

@sandybell6906 3 жыл бұрын

You re fabulous...Thanks a million Mark

@NewIndianguy 3 жыл бұрын

This video helped me soooo much... I scored 6 in writing and overall 6.5.... Thank so much E2 👌

@OhiSandhu Жыл бұрын

But this was not for u btw..chlo congrats bro fir bhi

@azainaldeen9834 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you very much indeed, sir. You're really much of a help🌺

@TramNguyen-to3pm 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you E2 IELTS for helping me improve my IELTS skills a lot. I just got my test result today and surprised with the result. Really love the materials.

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@sharmajii1563 3 жыл бұрын

Big fan sir!🙌🙌🙌.. I consider this video as a motivation because there are a number of teachers who choose a topic and make it clear to us and finish their work whereas the way you teach it's really motivated me😊...Thanks

@kinreshpatel2261 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you Mark. I got 7.0 band in writing for the first time using these techniques. Awesome tips. Thank you again.

@khushbushah3581 Жыл бұрын

How u practice

@khushbushah3581 Жыл бұрын

Can u please help

@khushbushah3581 Жыл бұрын

Give me ur telegram id

@ahilm.p856 2 жыл бұрын

This class is just awesome!!.... uber easy.... professional... Thank u so much E2Language

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

Watch this video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@ploiproz Жыл бұрын

So helpful, thank you so much 😊

@satveervirk 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks for this most helpful video finally now all my doubts are clear

@adesinaseyifunmi1218 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks mark This is really helpful I'm always stuck at 6 in my 2 sitting now I know what to work on..God bless

@soniajasmine7254 2 жыл бұрын

Try this method it really helps!

@simran1810 3 жыл бұрын

You all are the most brilliant tutors, i never got bored during session and love the way you all taught ❤️

@JasleenKaur-zz3mv 3 жыл бұрын

I usually do not comment on any of the videos but this is worth giving a like and a comment Thanks for such a superb video which helped me a lot to clear my doubts on writing task

@coachobispersonalworkoutti2223 3 жыл бұрын

Following These IELTs lectures on different platforms has helped me a lot in my PhD thesis. I have been faulted many times for not being clear and that's because I state a point and don't give any reason.( no justification)

@10yearsago84 2 жыл бұрын

This was very helpful. Thank you !

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@sukhveerkaur5113 3 жыл бұрын

thank you mark now i understand my problem of my writing why i stuck .

@azinkatiraee6684 3 жыл бұрын

Was perfect, I hope to be better in clarifying my essays ✅✔

@jashanpreetkaur1535 2 жыл бұрын

Thanks for this awesome explaination. You made it very clear.

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@devjariwala2903 3 жыл бұрын

What a session, it gives more clear view Btw thanks for that sir 🙏

@thaonguyen012 Жыл бұрын

It helps me a lot. Thank you!

@sziahussain 2 жыл бұрын

I really accept the benefits of this learning is not limited to ielts while in content writing , blogging and business writing will also improve.

@meenusahotau2445 2 жыл бұрын

Love your video.. First time i came across this idea... Thanks to u

@krishsri4854 Жыл бұрын

Trust me guys, these are the essential tips to score 7+. I improved my score from band 6.5 to the desired 7 through e2 videos. Thanks a ton !!

@bayastantursaliev7142 Жыл бұрын

What level of English did you have when you passed IELTS?

@devikaweerakoon6901 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for this precious lesson

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@rumanadeemkhan 9 ай бұрын

This is so helpful & clear hehe thankie you💫

@dazzlingmichael6855 3 жыл бұрын

this is great... it says a lot how examiners grade our essay. In my last Ielts exam, I scored 6.5 only, Just like what he said in this video--- I could say that I have a strong grammar and vocabulary but my position, body paragraph structures is weak and vague as it was my first ever written essay. I have never practiced writing an essay before my exam. I was not able to add conclusion too. What he is saying here are all true.

@kabalsinghsandhu6389 3 жыл бұрын

Really appreciated e2 language team

@archanas3628 3 жыл бұрын

Hi Jay, I would like to thank you for your selfless help and extensive study material. I want to know if I upgrade to Express, will I get access to toolkit material. Regards

@pheno_1 2 жыл бұрын

Amazing, everything is satisfying. You make methods easy and apparent,. thank you for your lesson, i appreciate😁😁

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@j4jenna527 3 жыл бұрын

You have given a meticulous idea about essay writing,,, thank you somch,, I am. Still hang on 6 5 in writing,, I hope it ur xplnations will help me

@Nori-kc1oc 3 жыл бұрын

I’m actually stuck at 6.5. I shared my ideas a little more detail in introduction. I should briefly mention my ideas in introduction💡 I see.

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

Watch this video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@physicswithtony3102 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you for your efforts

@redhot4976 2 жыл бұрын

Mark thanks for this video . It is indeed a lot of helpful writing tips for most of us

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@Adnan-ss1ol 3 жыл бұрын

Great session well explained

@Simran_kaur990 Жыл бұрын

Marvelous information 🔥🙌🙌🌹

@thinkingfast6648 3 жыл бұрын

Pls make more videos like this especially on WR t2

@nnr.6131 11 ай бұрын

I got a 7.5 for writing because of this video. Thank u so much 💕

@HBACPradeep 2 жыл бұрын

I received my desired result after struggling a few tries because of your reasoning system. Thank you very much !!!

@kimleilah545 2 жыл бұрын

Hello, I have had few tries i need your advice on how you managed .

@jjintovyy 3 жыл бұрын

watching this the night before my exam✌🏼😌

@hgsports3815 3 жыл бұрын

Oh my God, how you do that? For me, it's a very tense time before the night of the exam.

@mayazita6565 2 жыл бұрын

Me too and my exam is in few hours ☺️

@hashanchandrasekarakarasin2598 3 жыл бұрын

Well, a clearly pitched video, except the conclusion. Still trying to adapt to Jay 's way but Mark's way of conclusion is a bit complex; however, he is talking from an examiner's point of view and that could be the reason, people like us stuck at 6.5. I believe you will upload more videos to help us understand writing "conclusions". Thank you very much. "Stay home & Stay safe"

@Gurleen_brar 2 жыл бұрын

I also have same prblm 😑😑😣

@darkdemise02 2 жыл бұрын

That's a very much clear concept abt writing task.Thanks a lot.

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@alanbaskaev3907 2 жыл бұрын

Damn! I am a fan of this dude. He's a great teacher

@siamakalaei1148 Жыл бұрын

Thanks for the tips. Best wishes 😍😍😍😍

@prawashasingh9242 3 жыл бұрын

I stuck at 6 in ielts writing always but this will surely help me thanks a ton

@syedimtiyaz2853 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you for the wonderful explanation..I would like to opt your classes especially in writing, please let me know where we can connect on this.

@RavinderSingh-nh6th 2 жыл бұрын

i love you from bottom of my heart. I really loved the way you taught

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@smilinglass1556 7 ай бұрын

Thank you so much Mark I scored 7.5 in writing because of you, Jay and Alex Trust me guys, if you stick to E2 IELTS VIDEOS you dont need any other material for your IELTS prep. Dont get overwhelmed by watching thousands of viddeos from several channels.

@jenny_hills 2 жыл бұрын

Great session, Thank you Mark

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

Watch this video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@ranonumonova6522 Жыл бұрын

Thank you very much. İt would be better if the conclusion was added

@doctorrain54 3 жыл бұрын

This is so useful!!!!!!!!

@kennastaffi6072 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you sir. Your explanation sinks indicating your passion for teaching.👌🏼👌🏼opinion essay has how many paragraphs? how I wish I get a complete combined answer for this lecture.

@CEFR_LESSONS_OFF_ON_e_c 7 ай бұрын

A huge thanks !!!!

@sanjaywankhade1259 2 жыл бұрын

Dear Mark, You have made quite smoother and easier..

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@anushuyaadhikari7536 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you for sharing such an information video

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

Watch this video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@zahramanafi4793 Жыл бұрын

It's bad that I can't hit the like bottom more than once. This video is definitely life-changing!

@jessicamurilloc92 2 жыл бұрын

Thank you for this amazing video! As usual, it has helped me a lot in my study process for IELTS I have a question. In the case of the final paragraph, the conclusion and the "opinion" paragraph would be the same or are they different? Thank you very much :)

@poojabhole9153 Жыл бұрын

hey IELTS test taker, conclusion should reinstate your thesis statement which includes your opinion if asked, the topic sentences of paragraphs should be summed up. you can also give a prediction, suggestion or outcome.

@inese7272 2 жыл бұрын

Hi there. Should I use "we" in my IELTS essays? F.e. We should focus more on rehabilitation. Thanks for the quality videos.

@Rekha-xl8co 3 жыл бұрын

Very informative

@afastars 3 жыл бұрын

good lesson..make more video like this..

@E2IELTS 3 жыл бұрын

We'll try! 😅

@jyoti137 2 жыл бұрын

This video actually helped me to get band 7 at my first attempt. Thanks a lot:)

@pawandeep1606 2 жыл бұрын

Have u followed exact structure

@jyoti137 2 жыл бұрын

@@pawandeep1606 yes. and I saw a significant improvement in my writing. This video is actually helpful.

@lareineviktoriya6157 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks a lot for the video. Please, what should be the maximum number of words for task 2? They generally say 250 words.. ; what do you advice?

@awsumblossom4652 4 ай бұрын

Sucha top notch teacher mark is.

@anmolkaur4177 3 жыл бұрын

can you provide some lessons on vocabulary or synonyms please

@mandeepkaur1758 2 жыл бұрын

Thanku so much sir its really baneficial for me

@kamrankhan-dr3fi 2 жыл бұрын

this stuff really helps those struked in 6 or 6.5

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"

@nepcad9935 2 жыл бұрын

I got it. Now what I need to do is knuckle down more and achieve the band I am dreaming for whole day and night😁

@sdsachin24 2 жыл бұрын

Hey, thank you for this informative video, but I have a doubt with respect to the question in this video. Can my opinion be the same as what other people are believing?

@bdemir837 Жыл бұрын

ı just thought tutor mark how always being a positive also smile every second and ı learn while 24.55 secont:) he is a canadian :) and this is the reason why ı loved canadian society

@nehadave7773 3 жыл бұрын

Worth watching

@dhruvrajsinhraj9801 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you for valuable lesson... But I have a query, in body paragraph 2, can I write for my opinion?? "I and others who are against the imprisonment believe that.... "

@reubendavid1993 8 ай бұрын

Hey Mark in this video we went from Intro to Body 1,Body 2 and My Opinion... Is it ok if we end our essay like this? Or a short conclusion would have been necessary

@kazizahidhasan2679 3 ай бұрын

Sir, I can not find the renting house advantages & disadvantages which were uploaded to your channel. If you mention me on that clips it would be more helpful for me

@fatmaahmed857 2 жыл бұрын

My test is tomorrow I'm kinda panicking!! thank you for this video though 💕

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

If you are stuck at band 6, please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7" Thank you!!!

@fatmaahmed857 2 жыл бұрын

@@pratikchauhan8642 oh thank you but I already took my test and got an 8 ❤

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

@@fatmaahmed857 congratulations 🎊🎉

@toothdiaries2280 2 жыл бұрын

@@fatmaahmed857 how you practiced? Please share your experience/tips. My test is on 23rd October I'm not good at writing/reading. Thank you

@nadz1015 2 жыл бұрын

@@fatmaahmed857 What is your question

@Queen-qn8fv 3 жыл бұрын

Please upload the video realted reading 🙏😇

@user-xi1to4ph6s 2 жыл бұрын

This guy knows what is he doing.

@kosinebeks2614 3 жыл бұрын

How do they get the general score for writing 1 and 2?

@harigamer7 Жыл бұрын

Thank you sir

@yoooo111 2 жыл бұрын

I did IELTS General 2 years ago.my result was Listening 9 Reading 8.5 Speaking 7.5 and Writing 6.5, last week I took the Academic IELTS and again my result is Listening 8.5 Reading 9 Speaking 7 and Writing 6.5. I must get atleast 7 in all bands. I'm doing the test again (probably) next week. Wish me best of luck.This page had helped me a lot.....

@pratikchauhan8642 2 жыл бұрын

IF you stuck at 6 or 6.5 in writing and want a minimum 7. in general writing please watch the video with the title "IELTS GENERAL WRITING: SUREST WAY TO GO FROM BAND 6 TO 7"