How To Write A Perfect Admissions Essay (Statement of Purpose)

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In this video we share the secrets of writing successful motivation letter (some universities also call it admissions essay, and if you are applying for a bachelor program the correct name would be Statement of Purpose also known as SOP). If you want to get into American University and get full ride scholarship it has to be outstanding.
Pretty much the same tips can be used when writing an essay for any university, because many European universities have adopted American kind of application essays.
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@zahraa100 5 жыл бұрын

1. Sell yourself 2. Make sure the letter fill the rest of application 3.Shape to your audience 4.Specify the place 5.Show you as individual

@user-jr2he7dr3o 3 ай бұрын

People might have the false impression of the video as a whole. The person in the video is explaining things broadly rather than narrowly.

@oliverfraful 6 жыл бұрын

Great Video! I saw down in the comments a few brazilians thanking you and I am also one of them. I am currently applying for a Computer Science MS up in USA and your channel has been helping me a lot! Keep it up!

@TimesResumes 4 жыл бұрын

The first important lesson a student must learn from this video is that one ought to write a unique motivation letter for each university application. It means that one must write six unique motivation letters or statements of purpose for application to six universities after conducting in-depth research on what each of the six universities has to offer. Thanks!

@luthfianurrahmi 5 жыл бұрын

I stucked with my Admission Essay and found this channel, it's so hellpful ! Im a future special education curriculum consultant and will apply this year. Wish me luck!

@rubalsonal1861 Жыл бұрын

😊

@barbaragrison1081 4 жыл бұрын

this was the only video I watched that showded me a different perspective. Thank you!

@joellekanyana5874 3 жыл бұрын

This is the most helpful one of these I have watched. Thank you!

@veerlegeraets146 8 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much for this channel! I am from the Netherlands and want to apply for a master program in Italy. All of these admission things such as GMAT, motivational letters and TOEFL are new to me! These things are very uncommon in the Netherlands so I struggle to find help and information about this. My friends and family have no experience with this either. So really, thank you for this channel and I hope you will keep up the good work!

@Y_Surniaiev 7 жыл бұрын

How is it going now? Did you succeed with your application?

@mariellvillafuerte3787 9 ай бұрын

I am from Peru and want to apply for Netherlands please help me

@sibhatafewerki4406 7 жыл бұрын

It is great advice and guides to write SOP. What I want to say in short is that when he refers to considering your self as a character from what I understand is that your SOP to represent your self as you represent in person to new institution staff. Its not the voice missing I thing you misunderstand him and may be other can take it in that way which is not good. Thanks!

@christogunussunday 7 жыл бұрын

I am so happy after i have listened to you. Thank you very much

@mirelafcardinal 7 жыл бұрын

I'm a brazillian psychologist who will apply for master's degree programs at US. Thank you for this channel, all your videos help me a lot! Keep with your good work! :)

@sekgametsimaloa 5 жыл бұрын

Hey, how did the applications go? Any positive feedback?

@Drannn54 3 жыл бұрын

@raqueljardim5966 3 жыл бұрын

E aí, deu certo?

@guilhermechaves3833 Жыл бұрын

Notícias???

@MauroCamoranesi16 8 ай бұрын

It’s ok if it didn’t work.

@diegomarshall Жыл бұрын

Excellent, detailed explanation of how an admission essay is preferred to be written. It's hugely valuable for me in order to transmit these guidelines to my applicant students. Thank you very much indeed from Buenos Aires, Argentina.

@mykidsaresupercute 6 жыл бұрын

Thanks, that answered a big question of mine!

@kiramorgan9831 8 жыл бұрын

Thanks for such accurate and profound tips! It would also be very helpful to learn about how to ace a competence interview 🙏🏼!

@MrAndrei099 6 жыл бұрын

Your video was really helpful! You're the best!

@patriciacorro5614 7 жыл бұрын

Privet Marina! Nice channel with useful videos, thanks for sharing! Regards from Panama!

@kelvinize 8 жыл бұрын

Thank you Marina I subscribed to your channel just 3 days ago and I already love it Just today i was doing some research about scholarships in the UK and how to apply to them, and then you upload a video about it haha It will be really useful thanks again

@abimbolaadebo6120 6 жыл бұрын

These tips are very useful, I have been battling with how to write the letter, thanks so much.

@danielprokopowicz8570 4 жыл бұрын

A lot of useful information, I will try to write a motivation letter for myself just like a task.

@AzaliyaSan 3 жыл бұрын

That's a great advices...thanks a lot Marina!!!❤

@raulantoniocamargoblanco7800 8 жыл бұрын

I am just a teenager, but this is a very useful video. thanks!

@user-ir2zg5vn7v 5 жыл бұрын

Good! It s great thank you for this information!

@hichem493 8 жыл бұрын

thank you for the work you are doing, this is great . i would like to know if you can give us some tips for the GRE exams

@vinsetaangel 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much this helped me a lot!

@sb8205 8 жыл бұрын

This is very helpful. Thank you very much. I hope it will help me to make my motivational letter. :)

@samuelquayson2037 5 жыл бұрын

thanks much. great stuff we've got here.

@KoVaLtesg 8 жыл бұрын

Спасибо, как раз думал на этим. Просветили тему.

@chitrarajagopal8504 6 жыл бұрын

Hi Marina, Could you please tell me if I should mention my first research paper which was in cryptography in my SOP. I want to study in the field of AI and machine learning so is it a good idea to mention a different work in SOP?

@riyanshbuktar854 Жыл бұрын

This was really really helpful...thanks a lot

@farazahmed8263 6 жыл бұрын

u r doing some real work immpresive

@abdulraheembaharetha8426 8 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much Linguamarina.... it's very crucial to gain such these things to be accepted at universities.... Thanks

@linhknguyen2389 7 жыл бұрын

I'm going to apply to bachelor's course in Netherlands next year and i find really hard to write a motivation letter. Thank you for making such a useful video like this :)

@yasmenalsham401 6 жыл бұрын

Thank you and I hope that you answer my question: ok if I explain about beriod and why I have bad score caused by problems in that beriod is that rong to mention it in the letter.... .....thank you again

@irsaatta1926 6 жыл бұрын

Is it important to mention job leaving reason in motivational letter for scholarship? Need guidance.

@fizanbajwa2693 4 жыл бұрын

Check “ beacon of hoppe “ to how To write motivation letter, and scholarships and application process in European countries and how to find universities in Europe. And many more information is coming every week.

@prasunanand4330 7 жыл бұрын

should I be mentioning that my grade is low because my school use absolute grading instead of relative grading or would it feel as if I am giving excuses while applying for internship programs in universities

@samueloseibonsu5111 5 жыл бұрын

I am a Ghanaian applying for a Masters program in both France and US. Thank you for the insights, I hope they help me draft the best letter and get admission as well.

@sergi1788 2 жыл бұрын

did you get it?

@binnyvarghese5667 6 жыл бұрын

How to write letter for internship? What I need to focus on cover letter?

@himland2951 6 жыл бұрын

what is missing? at 3:01 "your VOICE is missing actually" lmao great just great!

@brownproud8511 5 жыл бұрын

him land - lmao I was likeeeee whatttttt come on girl you are running this channel you have a fully funded scholarship and you give such lame answers

@mrinmoyroy269 6 жыл бұрын

As you suggested not mention specific professor , what if it is instructed in the university website to mention name of potential supervisor in STATEMENT OF PURPOSE?

@dilkhan7320 6 жыл бұрын

Hello bro what are doing the systems exams is great levels so baby I know that sessions very well priorities written ground slowly

@NiteshKumar-sd2cz 7 жыл бұрын

ur channel helped me a lot

@nevenatanaskovic3563 6 жыл бұрын

This is the third video I'm commenting on, I could've as well sent you an e-mail haha. Are there any MA programs that you're more likely to get scholarships for?

@feliceboy1510 5 жыл бұрын

THANK YOU!!!

@khadidjadadi9196 6 жыл бұрын

Hello Marina, would you please send me a motivation letter sample I really need it to apply for a scholarship.

@mohammadnikanghorbani9940 5 жыл бұрын

Thank you Very Helpful

@09TechInfo 7 жыл бұрын

very informative LIKE !!

@samsonkidane9829 6 жыл бұрын

I need to be clear the difference between motivational letter and statement of purpose. Would you please clarify them ?

@noamaanshaikh5702 4 жыл бұрын

It's same

@mohamedali-tz5zu 4 жыл бұрын

It's really good and useful advices thank u

@adityashinde7287 7 жыл бұрын

hey Marina i am doing diploma in civil engineering so i will have some knowledge about civil engineering. Will this help me to getting into my desired institute?

@jaswanthchowdary2086 7 жыл бұрын

Nice one...&thankyou...

@brandomiranda6703 6 жыл бұрын

do you guys provide writing services for SOP?

@Sweetamber222 4 жыл бұрын

Already submitted mines, but still watching vids to "see how I did" .

@ravimn4637 6 жыл бұрын

Thank you!

@mintida3112 6 жыл бұрын

Do u have an English online course ?

@thanhatbuio6860 9 ай бұрын

Should I write about my personal interest? For example, "Communication through photography" or so...

@joechu7935 7 жыл бұрын

help a lot ! thanks

@venkatkanaparthi2375 7 жыл бұрын

may I get sample SOP of some one else for MBA..

@noubaddi8567 4 жыл бұрын

Thanks for this video

@MAFANcrew 4 жыл бұрын

Great intel Thanks

@felipec.925 7 жыл бұрын

Lingua, I have a question. Can I be accepted with a good GMAT score, good TOEFL score but not so good at GPA at Stanford Business School?

@bubatouray3382 5 жыл бұрын

Great work

@sriwahyuningsih5185 3 жыл бұрын

Thank you so much.. btw could you correction my personal statement? I am not sure it is a perfect or not... Thanks 🙏

@urvishmistry1632 5 жыл бұрын

I'm a future aspirant for a MBA program still undergraduation (2nd year) can you advice me how I should plan from now for top B school

@amadounomogo4642 6 жыл бұрын

Im Malian studing English Language for master degree if there is any

@mmxsingh2024 6 жыл бұрын

i want to collect my bsc graduation degree from the college who can i writte impressive application to the principal

@tobiaszb 4 жыл бұрын

What does it mean to sell yourself?

@gaming_with_rachit_tyagi9088 3 жыл бұрын

Thanks

@molliemoko9673 6 жыл бұрын

THANKYOU!!!

@tendulkartoni2499 5 жыл бұрын

If it's possible show some sample letter

@venkatkanaparthi2375 7 жыл бұрын

may I get sample SOP of some one else..

@yousufazad6914 6 жыл бұрын

you inspire me Ms. Marina ^_^

@brandomiranda6703 6 жыл бұрын

are there any good online services for writing SOPs?

@jakeperetson9598 6 жыл бұрын

try essays-king.com

@sainani5150 7 жыл бұрын

Please give information about gre

@itrstt66 Жыл бұрын

Where can i contact mr. walker?

@user-og8ye9bq9f 8 жыл бұрын

МАРИНОЧКА КАК ВСЕГДА ШИКАРНА!!!!!!

@abdullahnaeem749 3 жыл бұрын

Kindlly make a video on UGRAD cultural exchange program

@mastersavenue8760 6 жыл бұрын

Have a look at this handy guide on how to write a successful motivational letter for a masters: www.mastersavenue.com/articles-guides/how-to-get-in/motivational-letter

@saurabhmoon5312 6 жыл бұрын

Can you review my SOP?

@sufyanrahmat3220 5 жыл бұрын

hello i have been watching all of your video since long time but now im going to graduate now could you please help me out how should i prepare myself for master programmed in USA scholarship as well. can i have a your gamil.id

@jaiprakashshukla9911 6 жыл бұрын

I wrote about my struggle with trigonometry. Is this a common topic or it is unique?

@keyrusalia6735 2 жыл бұрын

Can you send me a sample SOP please?

@fdggfgdfgd251 5 жыл бұрын

Thank you from Tiagauras. Come visit

@santojacobkoshy3618 3 жыл бұрын

thanks

@therealilyaskhan 5 жыл бұрын

can't focus on audio

@bissketng213 6 жыл бұрын

without sub after 4:30

@purneshsingh8174 3 жыл бұрын

Haven't any body noticed something different/ similarity in the thumbnail of this video ?

@eliz18122001 6 жыл бұрын

What city in Russia do you live in?

@beamarie8041 6 жыл бұрын

This guy looks like Ben Miles. Peter Townsend from The Crown

@pradhumanpatel8527 7 жыл бұрын

Can i know how to make sop for master in pharmacy

@linguamarina 7 жыл бұрын

+pradhuman patel it still needs to be about you as a person really, remember moments/books/people that made you choose pharmacy

@pradhumanpatel8527 7 жыл бұрын

Am good in chemistry during school days.. So i choose pharmacy as my core course

@LivinWithNineRegrets 5 жыл бұрын

they're trying to act interested in college entrance letters when underlying they just want to hook up.

@ruxshonafayzullayeva6915 4 жыл бұрын

I don't understand🤨 If I want to study in US or UK's universities I must write a motivational letter

@olaimadhalawanii3790 4 жыл бұрын

Can I send my SOP and to be reviewed by you guys for free?

@creativesavants596 5 ай бұрын

We provide It's evident that you understand the challenges students face when writing their Statement of Purpose. if you need any help come for inbox

@ayubaalim2201 3 жыл бұрын

if u r going to master or PhD program ..........they interested to know exactly ..........HOW YOU ARE PREPARED........WHY YOU INTERESTED IN THIS PARTICULAR PROGRAM.........i need clarity!!!