IF YOU DISLIKED THE VIDEO, GO AHEAD AND TYPE 'DISLIKE' AS A REPLY TO THIS COMMENT SO THE PUBLIC AND SEE HOW MANY PEOPLE HIT THE DISLIKE BUTTON. Let's give the Like button meaning again.

Fun fact, all the stats you came up with are pretty spot on. Also thank you so much for the deep dive! It means a lot. I’m a big fan!

"Do not underestimate the size of my library." Oh, no. I don't think I can imagine just how many books you must have, considering you made a _throne_ out of them.

It is so nice to hear Krimson not have a mental breakdown over a book - I'm so happy for you man, you didn't suffer this time!

"I don't want to start drama, we're both too old for that." Krimson, this is the internet. A veritable fountain of youth where no one grows up xD

"The building was on fire and it was not my fault." is my favorite book opening line. It's pretty much Dresden files in a nutshell.

My art teacher told me once "There is a difference between 'learning how' and just 'learning.' When you read books on theory, you start learning how to paint, but only by taking a brush and painting on the canvas, you will learn to paint the same way you learn to walk." So, practice makes perfect. Theory can help so much, but it's not everything, and perfectionism is the death of confidence. I write fiction too, and I thought that I could write an epic fantasy series just by reading K. M. Weiland's books, "Self-editing for fiction writing" and "The anatomy of story." They are very good resources, but I took on a project that far surpassed my actual capabilities and got frustrated. I was wrong, and I admit it. I now write short stories focused on one thing at a time. My epic novel series will have to wait until I have learned to write. Anyways, it's my observation.

Sorry folks, for some reason youtube screwed up with the HD version of the video. It was supposed to be 1080p, but I guess two days isn't long enough to process an HD version. Hopefully this will solve itself in a short while.

I can tell Daniel Greene is passionate about writing. But on a sentence by sentence, word by word level, this book was really really rough. The prose and world building more or less fall into the same banalities a lot of contemporary fantasy falls into but in a more amateurish way.

I respect Daniel as a person greatly because his videos are incredibly humorous and his book recommendations have introduced me to some of my favorite series. And my respect for him grows a little more because he is actually open to criticism. Unlike some authors that you’ve reviewed in the past.

I thought the book felt like an prologue more than a novella. Not a bad prologue, mind you, but it felt incomplete. Still haven't read my copy of Rebel's Creed yet, so I'll see if it pays off. Also, so cool to see a trailer for my Blackcoats books in your video!

Krimson, just wanna say, thanks for the extra long videos, they’re awesome to listen to while drawing :3

I think the reason why he went for a novella is because he wanted to make short and sweet. Let's admit. Some novels do drag on and on until it's over

I swear, in a fantasy world I'd be that one character that spends all his time reading and collecting tomes and sending adventurers to collect more for me. Then when they begin to realize what I'm doing...the town is destroyed and I'm flying

"Does being a booktuber guarantee being able to write a book of your own?" I'm 2 minutes in and the amount of tabs makes me pretty confident on the answer

Somehow this reciew has given me inspiration to start writing my book again.

Daniel admitted, his book needed more editing. Anyway, I'm happy for him that he got his work out. And that he got Book Jesus to review it.

It's nice hearing Krimson with this joyful voice and high paced energy

"The Company of Death" by Elisa Hansen (aka Maven of the Eventide) is actually a really good read, as long as we're talking about books by youtubers. A zombie, an android, a vampire, the literal Grim Reaper and some guy all go on a road trip across zombie-infested USA to get Death his powers back. Admittedly though it's the first book in the series so it's a lot of set-up, but still really good.

This novella had potential but feels like a first draft. It needed an extra rewrite or two to flesh it out and tighten the writing.

Off topic slightly, but I’m an officer, and I have prosopagnosia. It makes my job extremely difficult, especially for bolos, as I have an even harder time identifying people from photos and translating that into a 3-d image. And it’s rough because I can’t identify someone from one interaction to another unless there is an extremely distinct characteristic. Like a facial tattoo. Or that they wear the same thing every day. I know it gets on my co-workers nerves…needing help identifying people all the time… but I try to make up for it in other ways-like my intensely good sense of smell. Anyway: just happy you brought attention to “face blindness” and the struggles that people like me have to face… even just in passing. ☺️

I don't even remember how many years I've been watching your videos (must be at least 6 years by now) but they're always a joy to watch. You're doing great :)

Amazon can send him to interview the stars of they show they made in London, but can't give us more than 3 days off a quarter without worrying about loosing our job.

The way I see it, being critiqued by you is a huge honor. The sheer amount of time you devote to divulging in a book, going into both what you like and dont like and even WHY, plus offering totally actionable feedback...at times you give far more insight than professional editors. Someone spending that much time on books that arent always NY Times Bestsellers when they could literally be doing anything else is imo a big service to indie writers just starting out like myself. I take lots of notes when watching your vids and already used several of your pointers in my novel. So thanks x100 KR!

Hey Rogue we disagree on quite a lot but im consistently impressed with your longform analysis videos. Helps you stand out for sure and I prefer this format for podcast like listening while getting a good chuckle when i glance at the screen and either see a cat or a terrible passage. Keep it up dude

" I'm sure this video was a very short one" Length--1:04:34. I tease because I love it though

I honestly think this ought to become a more common thing with mixing in a good book with the bad ones. Contrast examples of stuff done poorly with when it works.

I'm so happy you're getting into the Wheel of Time! Just to let you know, depending on where you order the books, the dialogue changes from time to time. Though they are expensive, I recommend the classical paperback versions. Those are Robert Jordan's complete originals. Just some advice :)

Babe wake up KrimsonRogue uploaded another book review

I was trying to get this read before the video dropped, but then I got sick and couldn't finish. I still plan on finishing. As someone who enjoys police procedure shows and books, the beginning infuriated me because of how much crime scene contamination is going on by the three inspectors. Based on what you said, though, I see that it's intentional rather than ignorance on Greene's part. A little nugget of world building that within our own world context makes no sense. I like that. The emphasis thing is actually something Murphy Napier has talked about in at least 1 video. "Hand-holding." The story itself shows promise, and I hope he hones his craft and keeps writing. So many people focus on macro aspects of a story--the plot and characters etc etc--that they miss the smaller micro things like prose, dialogue, and even formatting. Those are things that come with simply writing more and learning from mistakes. I genuinely hope anyone who is trying to make it as a writer doesn't give up because of minor problems like Greene's novella had. And to be honest, I've written several novellas and he easily could have put more detail into it. Breach of Peace was a VERY short novella. Someone said it feels more like a prologue and I have to agree.

I have covid and watching you tear into books always makes me smile

i would die for anyone who puts psych references in their videos. also, it’s lovely to see two youtubers actually having a considerate interaction. i’ve followed both of you for a long time, and i have to say i have so much respect for daniel’s ability to accept fair criticism without being a pushover. it’s something i look up to a lot

I think you were spot on about there being more plot than book. I think that Greene was too quick to get to his conspiracy in this book. If he wanted to write a series of novels they probably should should have been a standard cases that introduced the world and characters. I like the ideas behind the story and the world feels different from a standard medieval swords and sorcery type story. I do see the influence of something like Mistborn on the world. I hope that with Rebels Creed being a full length novel we get a smoother pacing/ story progression.

I've watched you for a while, but inserting a Red vs. Blue scene has truly elevated your work.

"North pole is exploding, and it's not my fault." -Empress Theresa

This is the opposite of a book that overstays it's welcome. The more you show of it, the more it feels like it needed to be stretched out into at least a small novel to properly explore its own ideas.

I actually listen to these reviews from Krimson while writing the second draft of the first novel in my series. I always look forward to seeing these videos. 😄

Thanks for the content. I listen to it while working and it's somehow soothing. I've watched Empress Theresa ones more than a dozen times.

everytime you post a video i’m so thankful 🙏🏻 i was just looking for something to watch over dinner, perfect timing

Honestly what a great way to start my work day. Thank you for your hard work, I needed this

Loving that you are showing us an example of a good book. It gives us a good look as to what to look for and go for.

Nothing better than a KrimsonRogue review during cooking. Especially about the book from my second favorite booktuber

That's a beautiful collection of Monster. Truly a deep cutting story and with all the plots and side plots and plots within plots and the guy manages to tie them all up in such amazing ways.

I can understand that is seems odd that she would just immediately realize it's all wrong, but I get it. As someone raised in a cult, learning it is all a lie is literally like flipping a switch. You just can't go back, even if your brain wants to go back to what's comfortable.

I'm very new to your channel and I love your content. Hopefully, you'll do more long form reviews and commentary. I find your comments, especially in regard to writing helpful and insightful

I listened to this entire novella on my drive back home. I'd be lying if I said I wasn't enthralled the whole way through, or as enthralled as a person can be while speeding down the highway at 70 MPH.

The mortifying ordeal of needing to decide whether to get the instant gratification of watching this video now or waiting so I can listen to it while at work. Either way I’m excited as usual

Can't wait to watch this in a fresh, crispy 360p!

Ahh, I met William Galaini YEARS ago when he was writing (or maybe just after he finished) Woe. So awesome to see him on your list! 👏🏽👏🏽

Every time you update, I smile 😊

I like Greene's content and even before this I was intrigued by the premise of his novella. Not the same thing, but kinda reminded me of that episode of the Clone Wars where Anakin and Asoka teamed up to solve a murder and the vibe felt very noir and pulpy. In any case, you are definitely my favorite booktuber here.

"If I wanted to start drama I'd review Linkara's books." Bold of you to assume you can just drop a statement like that on us and don't expect people to ask for said reviews in the near future.

Always happy to see you again! Good long form content when I grind in video games!

Oh boy! Can't wait.

God bless you for these long videos

god i love these videos a lot, always cool to have one of these reviews on in the background!!

i love your videos, i like the long format, because im an artist and spend all day drawing and cant watch videos, and your videos along some adam duffs are great to listen to, keep it up

So glad to see you again, Krimson

Been waiting for this!

Ah, the Rogue of Krimson still lives!

Hey, a reference to prosopagnosia! I actually have that myself and some of my stories involve characters with it. While it'd be an interesting trait for Chapman to have, it wouldn't have the same impact as him not remembering the names of the officers. Him not bothering to remember their names (at least that's the impression I get from just watching the video, haven't read the novella) shows a lack of interest, or perhaps him thinking, "This is insignificant, I'm not going to waste brainpower on it." Prosopagnosia wouldn't stop him from remembering names if he actually wanted to. His reactions would probably be more along the lines of, as an example if this was how he identified people, "Uh, shoot, I THINK that's Smits but he doesn't have his pipe out and that's what I usually recognize him by, so I'm really not sure." So, while that could make for good reactions, it would give a far different vibe than him seemingly not caring about the officers' identities. Great review and video! Love the Psych clips. =)

If you're reviewing Daniel's book, Krimson, would you be willing to review one of Jenna Moreci's books? 👀

Now, I want krimson to review linkaras angel armor books.

I was so excited to see you post, thanks for the wonderful content! This is so much more interesting and meaningful than the (admittedly entertaining) rage videos

Yes, another long review!!! I’m being fed today 😻😻😻

Great Review! Great Story! Thank you so much!

yesss, I'm so glad you uploaded today. I like to listen to your videos while I work. I think they make me smarter :P

I am of the opinion that people shouldn't use direct names from 1984. It's too obvious in it's attempt to invoke dystopia, like having your caped, paragon type superhero be called Hyperman or Uberman. I can take it a bit better in fantasy worlds like this one but I get doubly annoyed when it happens in settings that are supposed to be the future of our world. That was one of my issues with the generally very good Babylon Five; if a government is trying to set up a tyranny without anyone noticing until it's too late to stop the last thing they're going to do is use language from the most well known book about tyranny.

I'm sorry, but I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT when your cats come into the camera and wants your attention. X3

One thing I never expected to see in 2022 was someone dropping a Doctor Insano clip into a video. Bravo sir.

just found out that you don't make your videos full time, i have to say all your videos are a magnificent feat krimson, big thanks and keep it up!

Must this blessing shield you from the wrath of the Holy Ones & Zeros.

Krimson mentioned Critical Drinker O.O It was so unexpecting that I'm waiting now for cats living with dogs and mass hysteria ;).

The legend has returned

My favorite first line was from Terry Pratchett = **In the beginning there was nothing, which exploded.**

Always happy when you post your reviews! And I am also happy you wear pants.

Oh shit, a red vs blue reference! Thank you so much for including it, caught my attention even more

He's back!

here before youtube finishes making this a watchable resolution lmao

I may be slightly biased as an Indie Author who made the list (SQUEE!!!) but I think it would be really cool to see that video where you cover multiple Indie authors and give your thoughts on those books. It would be really awesome to see your thoughts on some positive book experiences that you had as well! I love your long format reviews of course but it would be neat to showcase a bunch of Indie Authors and give them some love too.

Dude could you do the Percy Jackson books I would like your take since the new show is coming out

29:13 alright, that's it, you became my favorite booktuber with this editing. (I would like to know the source of this.)

Really like the long form content from krimson giving both the positives and negatives

I am jealous of the sheer volume of volumes you have in your library

God, I am so glad to see you tear into Aftermath, I can't wait for that one.

Woo! I can’t believe I missed this when it can out.

God, i miss Spoony. Great video as ever

Enjoyed this video. I'm hoping to see you review more indie/Nanowrimo writers in the future. If you are taking suggestions or samples I'd be hyped to send you my first two novella.

@KrimsonRouge First of all your hair is awesome; secondly thank you for wonderful analysis - you have kept me company through some lonely period and thirdly your book recommendations are “fire”

Ayy, new Krimson Rogue book review! Don't have time to listen to it yet, but the algorithm must know.

I’m still learning about this ‘book tube’ thing

You talking to your big boy is how I talk to my dog who's also on a diet and I normally need to trim his nails for scratching me. Good luck with the diet.

Fun fact! 'Pants' means 'underwear' in British English, so I am very, _very_ glad you showed your trouser-covered legs when you joked about being the only YTer who wears pants, otherwise I would have had an image in my head that I'm not overly comfortable with.

Love your content I need more I will take anything

I want "Do NOT underestimate the size of my library" on a shirt :D

that Psych short scene, gold!

I appreciate how krimson rogue gives more of a gentle, fair criticism when the book has potential and doesn’t advocate for terrible things. But when you got shit like “365 days” or whatever he just doesn’t hold back!

I am glad to see a new upload. (As a petty person, I was hoping this would be a scathing review, not because I know the author, but because I love the bad book reviews the most, they provide endless entertainment to me, I genuinely want Handbook For Mortals 2 to manifest into existence, and Onision to finish his next book, solely for you to review.) It has a very intriguing cover.

Hell of a deep dive. I had many of the same issue with the book, plus ones you didn't mention. I think character is the biggest problem. Beyond the elements of dialog and action you mentioned, there is no subtext whatesover. Working through book 2 at the moment and while it feels like an improvement, albeit a small one, it seems to expand on the issues I had with book 1.

Oh an hour long Krimson video we're eating good today