"Something is Wrong" Creepypasta
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9 жыл бұрынWarning: this one is... disturbing.
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@zackm.9700 6 жыл бұрын
Creepy Aunt: He's on a business trip Me: He hella ded
@jacobberry5138 5 жыл бұрын
* dead
@anthonyfox585 5 жыл бұрын
Jacob Berry no
@JDP2104 5 жыл бұрын
No one goes on business trips on Christmas 😂 I guessed it to
@sweekyp1306 5 жыл бұрын
SAMEEE 😂😂😂
@glitch30k 5 жыл бұрын
True
@ethpling165 7 жыл бұрын
She didn't have the heart to kill her own child but she could kill her husband and feed him to said child
@cpi3267 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the spoilers jackass
@DwynTwo 5 жыл бұрын
If you're reading the comments before you watched the video, you're doing it on your own risk lol just watch the video first instead of blaming people for talking about the story
@francesscat2783 5 жыл бұрын
Whats the point of the comments if people can't talk about the story? You're the jackass that came to the comment section first. That's why you listen first than come here. People want to talk about what they just heard or ask questions. If they can't do that here, where else are they supposed to?
@sjj3lemon267 5 жыл бұрын
Name shut up
@sjj3lemon267 5 жыл бұрын
Roxy Retreat and shut up
@mistertitanic33 9 жыл бұрын
I like how the ending was just like "I suddenly know how everything happened with the little information I have"
@WinterSteele 9 жыл бұрын
mistertitanic33 I know, right? I'm genuinely surprised this story is getting such positive comments.
@abigailclaybrook5764 9 жыл бұрын
mistertitanic33 I'm not sure. The narrator obviously knew what a perfectionist their aunt was. The newspaper article revealed a lot and as soon as it mentioned the child hanging the basement you could figure out what had happened. Some of the details were a bit more specific than that but I got the jist of it pretty quickly. Then again, viewers come in knowing they're about to listen to a horror story so they expect certain things. I dunno, that's just my opinion
@LB-qs3bt 9 жыл бұрын
mistertitanic33 I thought it was rather lovely.
@justiniani.4501 9 жыл бұрын
Fishfingers and Custard it had a rather lovely ending
@kanekitokyoghoul4392 9 жыл бұрын
It was obvious
@ellenrose101 9 жыл бұрын
I'm not gonna even try make a pun about this one, that's just plain fucked up..
@sierrasmith6636 9 жыл бұрын
john smith noice
@santson1620 9 жыл бұрын
The content of the tale was "retadedly" spooky.
@nelsonsmith8814 9 жыл бұрын
Ellen Mcguinness Why thank you, as the writer of this story I am very pleased by the reception and feedback. For a pasta that is even more disturbing than this one, check out "Broken Mirrors" on the creepypasta wikia. As a matter of fact, I'll leave a link for you... creepypasta.wikia.com/wiki/Broken_Mirrors Thanks again! (;
@charliemiller8164 9 жыл бұрын
Nelson Smith Hi friend
@nelsonsmith8814 9 жыл бұрын
charlie miller Do I know you? In any case. hello to you as well.
@MissionCow1 8 жыл бұрын
At first, I was like: "How is this a creepypasta? This is adorable. It's just about family." Then I was like: "Oh."
@Eo-Io 8 жыл бұрын
XD
@Kai-nv4db 8 жыл бұрын
Lol this comment made my day
@key-is-cool6564 8 жыл бұрын
Omg same here XD
@rateme5650 7 жыл бұрын
"Dad, mum," I whimpered, "help..." My grandma Narcissa had locked me in her closet, just for her enjoyment! I hadn't eaten for three days. The closet door opened and my grandma Narcissa grabbed me by my hair. "LET ME GO!!" I screamed, she yanked me to my feet. She pulled me across the room and shoved me into a plain wooden chair. She tied my hands to it. She twisted my arms so that my palms were facing her. I screamed in pain. She took a box cutter from her side table. "What are you doing??" She pressed the tip of her knife to my wrist. "Don't do this..." I whimpered. She dragged the tip across my wrist. I screamed again. She did the same thing with my other wrist. She grabbed my hair and yanked my head back. I let out a choked sob. She dragged the tip of her knife across my neck. I screamed again and again.The pain faded into blackness, along with everything else. -- I woke up in my mum's arms. My wrists had been bandaged and a shirt had been stuffed under my chin. "Mum..." I whispered. "Scorpius, are you OK?" mum broke down in tears. I nodded.
@breadbrothers4487 5 жыл бұрын
@@rateme5650 WTF 1 YEAR LATER AND THIS IS WHAT I SEE ON THIS VIDEO, THANKS FOR THAT NIGHTMARE.
@sergeantspook2970 9 жыл бұрын
It's creepy because there are people like this that actually exist.
@bullhonk6376 4 жыл бұрын
Silly Sergeant Spook, people who live like that don't exist... if they did, there would be no husband to feed to the child. if they do though, then why does she hide the child instead of putting her in an orphanage and then the two kids wouldn't have to live knowing that there mothers have killed her husband and catabolized her daughter. in conclusion, if people lived like that, you are probably one, dumbass!
@angelus_solus 4 жыл бұрын
@@bullhonk6376 🙄You obviously have not lived long or been around much, because this kind of shit does not come from a vacuum. It's based in reality. Honestly the fact that you say they don't exist, as if you're some kind of psychologist who has the authority and credibility to say that, is f-cking hilarious. 😁 What's even more rich is you base your judgement on this....one....thing. No, if anyone is a "dumbass" here, it's you. Oh and by the way, slander is the tool of the loser.🤣 Cheerio, asshat.
@scrittle 4 жыл бұрын
@@angelus_solus I don't think he's the dumbass, because you took all the credit. You literally state he's a psychologist, young, inexperienced and an asshat without any validity or remorse, plus censoring your own comment whilst stating he's an asshat is rather amusing from my perspective. Regardless, he isn't wrong, the amount of fiction within this creepy pasta is relatively above the norm, cannibalistic daughter under the stairs, tense children in the home, and other logical inaccuracies. However, it's not the small details in the story that makes out how fictional it is, it's under the classification of *creepypasta.* What he was pointing out was the story being fiction, and that was it. But on the plus side one or two aspects of the story could be possible. Such as hiding a person in the cellar, cannibal victim corpses in the cellar, and other aspects of the story which may take place somewhere in the real world individually, but never together, because who'll ever do that and get away with it?
@Brogan_Balfour_Crescent 4 жыл бұрын
Women who's siblings have children have always creeped me out.
@Brogan_Balfour_Crescent Жыл бұрын
@Scooby Sativa Thanks ✌
@Yogaji 9 жыл бұрын
I found this one kind of sad. A child not being loved because they have down syndrome or some other imperfection makes this feel a bit more like a sadpasta than a creepy one.
@kinzcrunch8188 9 жыл бұрын
Mitzukoto Yogaji it was pretty sad, probably made into a creepy pasta considering she was eating her own dad tho! 0.0
@petert6884 9 жыл бұрын
+Mitzukoto Yogaji (No1important) yes it is sad but still horrifying
@couldbe20moreironic68 8 жыл бұрын
+No_One Important Is your profile picture Shizuo Heiwajima...?
@Yogaji 8 жыл бұрын
Lord Orihara IIIIZZAAAAYYAAAAAAA
@couldbe20moreironic68 8 жыл бұрын
No_One Important So it is Shizu-chan! That's so cool!
@johndoe46446 9 жыл бұрын
Everything is fine.
@ciguana2mlgprovideo388 9 жыл бұрын
Seele HI
@johndoe46446 9 жыл бұрын
Hello.
@ciguana2mlgprovideo388 9 жыл бұрын
Seele :D
@korid1116 9 жыл бұрын
Seele Everything is perfect.
@Chaos.A 9 жыл бұрын
Dragonbite x! Everything is awesome
@isabellacondon2854 9 жыл бұрын
I have a serious obsession with this channel
@emmylynnd1429 9 жыл бұрын
Same though 😜
@drinkthecyanide3126 9 жыл бұрын
I am as well.
@migratedmoss086 9 жыл бұрын
same
@lawrencecharitar267 9 жыл бұрын
It's hard not to be obsessed with this channel
@punkvspod 9 жыл бұрын
isabella condon No shame in that.
@appleglassjuice11 7 жыл бұрын
Sum Ting Wong.
@johnmaxwell8279 7 жыл бұрын
your uncle from China
@tiffanyrose9 7 жыл бұрын
haha xD
@dakaron02 7 жыл бұрын
Applejuice JazzM of course
@gravecreations8673 7 жыл бұрын
we tu low
@ethpling165 7 жыл бұрын
Game Clover hol e fuk
@qindleton 8 жыл бұрын
Was anyone else reminded of that one Simpsons episode where Bart finds his secret twin?
@timothykimmel5579 8 жыл бұрын
I have that one on DVD
@mr.debusy2457 5 жыл бұрын
Hugo
@flynnrochfort2583 5 жыл бұрын
Yupppppoo
@Lavendeer201 4 жыл бұрын
Omg lol
@PeruvianPotato 4 жыл бұрын
Yeah
@jackholt668 9 жыл бұрын
it's weird but I feel really unfulfilled with the end of the story because I felt we needed more of an explanation of what will happen to the aunties children and what happened to the child they stole. I feel it needs a bit added to the end to tie up loose ends.
@lethfuil 5 жыл бұрын
They all end up in an orphanage, or families that take care of orphans, or they'll be sent to the next relatives. For the stolen child it might be just the same, as she was an orphan from the beginning on and has no parents to go back to anyway. Oh, the Down Girl could go to a special "hospital" (don't know the word), were she can be treated right.
@FrogWizard64 9 жыл бұрын
This reminds me of "we don't talk about Sarah"
@LuckyVine 9 жыл бұрын
How can Mallory be 9 when the twins are only 11? The twins were 6 the last time the narrator saw them, when their mother was pregnant with her third child. So either Mallory should only be 5, or the twins should be 15.
@bluejaytheduck1412 5 жыл бұрын
Mallory is 5
@user22072- 5 жыл бұрын
You don’t get to pick the age of the child u steal from the adoption if u want it to look like u
@colossalgoat8616 5 жыл бұрын
@@user22072- well you would think if the narrator was smart he would know that the child wasn't hers. So she should have tried to get one that looked younger
@morgankingsley8711 4 жыл бұрын
If you look at the source, Creeps read it wrong. The original story said 5
@Terribadguy. 2 жыл бұрын
It's different in the original he just misread it. Also who tf cares anyways. You're looking to hard into it.
@isabellacondon2854 9 жыл бұрын
Though this was not as harry potter as I wanted it to be
@DevunGames 9 жыл бұрын
EYYYYYYYYY I get it!
@CaliforniaWaffle 9 жыл бұрын
I kept thinking of Harry under the stairs but near the end felt horrified or Harryfied get it?
@DevunGames 9 жыл бұрын
El Aleks Smarte pante I felt harry-fied
@wild4676 9 жыл бұрын
KZfaq Inc You're*
@jonathanknobel6861 9 жыл бұрын
I my god who the hell cares. says in Peter griffin voice.
@christophervalenzuela 9 жыл бұрын
"Warning: this one is.... Disturbing" YAH NO SHIT HONEY
@EfeOnayProductions1 9 жыл бұрын
Zachary Piona?
@kyozer7549 9 жыл бұрын
Pepe the Frog GET OUT REEEEEE
@BLANDMEDlA 6 жыл бұрын
Involuntary mocked the voice. How does my brain does this
@BLANDMEDlA 6 жыл бұрын
Do*
@python1972 8 жыл бұрын
it looked like a regular coat cloest until I saw...HARRY POTTER!
@annadeily3974 8 жыл бұрын
Lel
@PopstAhri 8 жыл бұрын
«and a mini-nuke in the shape of a baby goes off»
@kamv7686 8 жыл бұрын
dude. lmao. I just commented the same thing.
@PropaneAndAccessories 7 жыл бұрын
Jake tongue My life was never the same ever since I had seen Harry Potter emerging from my closet. "You filthy gryphandor half-blood!" I screamed out as I bent Potter over my knee. I pulled down his pants showing his shiny white bottom, staring back at my reflection in those pasty white cheeks I picked up a spatula and gave one of those cheeks a nice hard slap.
@PopstAhri 7 жыл бұрын
Random Commenter What. The. Fuck.
@igrewnewlegs 9 жыл бұрын
If the baby was in an orphanage. Why steal it?
@reeseundone9943 9 жыл бұрын
Raine Johnson Because it'd be harder in a hospital maybe? I don't actually know.
@gaigeriel 9 жыл бұрын
You have to meet some requirements and other stuff along those lines.
@APimpNamedSlickack 9 жыл бұрын
Raine Johnson so there'd be no records
@baconcandysuzie1784 9 жыл бұрын
Raine Johnson Well they would need your records and if the aunts new baby was on their records, they would know and then they would have to come and do an inspection of the home and come back every few months or so until deemed appropriate and many parents come back later in life, wanting to see their babies or something or other and so on. It's just really complicated.
@roo2221 9 жыл бұрын
Because why not
@gotonewchannelitzzgaming9413 9 жыл бұрын
**reads description* pfft I got this **closed all doors** **turns off lights** **sits in middle of room** **turns on fan** BRING IT ON
@LordColPhobos 9 жыл бұрын
*gets dragged under floor by demon*
@phaztom313 9 жыл бұрын
*demon likes nachos so you give him some and listen to this creepypasta*
@growlbear9435 9 жыл бұрын
GamingBros918 The fan is the scariest of them all.
@gotonewchannelitzzgaming9413 9 жыл бұрын
Growl Bear the fan is always there
@phaztom313 9 жыл бұрын
the fan iz loominarty
@XTestament 9 жыл бұрын
So uuuuh... either I've been watching too many of these... or this one was only a little disturbing...
@WinterSteele 9 жыл бұрын
XTestament I don't think it's you-- I found this to be pretty mediocre as well.
@nb2733 9 жыл бұрын
I don't think it's just you. It was disturbing but not hugely so. I think it was the way it was written.
@ngbescobar 9 жыл бұрын
same
@nelsonsmith8814 9 жыл бұрын
KZfaq Inc There is a definite difference between seeing bloodshed in a movie or story (like this one) and enjoying it in real life. I have seen real life violence and I can tell you for a fact that it honestly makes me quite sick to my stomach. Watching a horror film or reading a scary story isn't about taking pleasure in disturbing situations, its about the thrill we can obtain, the raise in our heartbeats and adrenaline. For entertainment. I wrote this story to entertain others, that was, and always will be my intention as a writer. Horror stories have also expanded somewhat. They can focus more on character development. Many of the most famous horror films of all time are actually very interesting character studies, a good example of this being "Henry: Portrait of a Serial Killer." Horror stories and films are also there to pique our interest. You don't have to be mentally ill to enjoy horror.
@TheSPOREREX 9 жыл бұрын
I would say its because the narration and music lacked urgency. It didn't suddenly ramp up when they found the corpses. So it didn't leave much of an effect.
@darkartsdabbler2407 8 жыл бұрын
I found this one to be leaps and bounds scarier than most of the other stories involving monsters, mysterious forces, or other far fetched unexplained phenomena.
@PsylomeAlpha 7 жыл бұрын
meh, when you've actually run into the paranormal you quickly learn not to write off stuff. Granted, the scariest shit I've encountered was when I realized my childhood friend had orchestrated over several years' time me being ostracized and hunted by some people in the local community so he could have me all to himself. The realization that he'd fallen that far into his insanity after his mom and uncle died in that car crash.
@domhecticguy9026 9 жыл бұрын
I woke up in the night from my dog licking my face. I then realised, my dog died last week.
@ryans600 9 жыл бұрын
2spooky4me
@fraglcsgoandmore4500 9 жыл бұрын
Orbit xFitii Shit, I'm caught.
@nickcapo9270 9 жыл бұрын
Humans lick too ....
@domhecticguy9026 9 жыл бұрын
Ehehe I'm so orginal ¯\_(ツ)_/¯
@fifibear2188 9 жыл бұрын
Oh sorry I thought you where a donut *walks out of room
@Snakie747 9 жыл бұрын
My objection to this one is the same as my objection to "The Psychologist", another otherwise extremely disturbing story with great atmosphere and tension buildup. Authors seem to have the idea that adding cannibalism to the end of a story with an abuse/psychological spin to it puts it over the top and makes it scarier. To me, all it does is make it feel over the top and deflate the tension and horror of it like a balloon. Its a cheap way of adding "creep factor" that a story with this type of premise really doesn't need to resort to. At least in "Psychologist" it kinda-sorta fit, even though it did take it over the top. In this case, its even worse. Why on earth did she feed her husband to the kid? How does that fit with the "she's a crazy perfectionist" storyline? You've already got a physically and mentally disabled girl in the basement, and a whole family covering it up. That's a disturbing enough premise, and they should have done more to build on it. To see a story that's this disturbing and does this great a job building up a sense of dread and fear about whats coming, resort to a cheap tactic like that. Well, it was just disappointing. Effective writers (which whoever wrote this obviously is) don't need to resort to that.
@WinterSteele 9 жыл бұрын
Snakie ITA, wish I could give this comment 50 thumbs up.
@martianbunny 9 жыл бұрын
Snakie Also, how did she have the heart to kill her husband and allow the girl to feed off of her husband when she didn't have the heart to kill the child she hated so much that she pretended she didn't have her.
@danielbuchanan6168 9 жыл бұрын
I kinda agree with you. I think it might have worked better if it described the stench of dog food as he walked in for food. I don't mind killing the husband for the story but feeding him to the girl was somewhat unneeded. Unless they're a family of crazed recycling murderers which I doubt was the intention.
@lethfuil 5 жыл бұрын
I absolutely agree. It was unnecessary and unfitting to the rest.
@shitneyb5562 2 жыл бұрын
Eating the husband makes everything better, in every situation (trust me I'm a stranger online so you know I don't give bad advice)
@mrs.aslashin5114 7 жыл бұрын
aw damn man that aint no big deal or scary. hell,i steal babies all the time...pfft
@grant4645 7 жыл бұрын
it's like stealing babies from a baby.
@Gooddaytobeasponge 5 жыл бұрын
I’m a prom night dumpster baby.......
@jacobberry5138 5 жыл бұрын
@@Gooddaytobeasponge What do you do now?.....Oh... Cocaine and bitches....
@LerRhann 5 жыл бұрын
@@poparttrump6822 yea but she doesn't eat them, she keeps them and pretends they are her children.
@Hawth0rne 8 жыл бұрын
The worst part is, this COULD happen in real life.
@paraballa 8 жыл бұрын
That makes no sense. Are you seriously justifying abortions with this story? Pro-abortionists are more sick than I thought.
@paraballa 8 жыл бұрын
Seth McAlister Why? Because disabled children don't deserve life? That's *exactly* why I'm saying pro-abortion is cruel.
@paraballa 8 жыл бұрын
Seth McAlister Two things. First, most people with disability are treated very well, even the ones in my school. Second, even if they were shamed, people shaming you, and you not fitting in at school isn't a good enough reason to take someones life. Also, there are ways to deal with these bullies, and taking your life isn't one of them, have you heard of schools only for disabled people. Besides, like I said that pretty much never happens. People with disabilities aren't less than anyone else, for example have you heard of the rainman?
@paraballa 8 жыл бұрын
Seth McAlister The person with down syndrome could be someone who advances mankind by alot. They still deserve a chance at life.
@paraballa 8 жыл бұрын
Seth McAlister No it's fine, in fact you're one of the least ignorant people I've seen. A regular person in the internet is too ignorant to accept anything out of their belief, even if they're obviously wrong. So I thank you for being very mature about it.
@legalsomalian8237 9 жыл бұрын
Phone line cut..... Why why does that cliché exist
@WinterSteele 9 жыл бұрын
Legal Somalian It exists so that lazy writing may thrive :-/
@marknung751 9 жыл бұрын
"Phoneline cut clishe" *cinemacins bell*
@PsylomeAlpha 7 жыл бұрын
You see, in the past phones needed to have a wire connecting them to the communications grid so they could send and receive the calls. as such, when someone would be attacked in their homes oftentimes the killer would cut the house's phone lines first so their victims couldn't call for help.
@cykakyasu8828 5 жыл бұрын
No it's more of something we call *C O M M O N S E N S E*
@LerRhann 5 жыл бұрын
Yea, should have just gone with "no phones in the house". That is rather normal now a days.
@user-wu2rb3bq6i 7 жыл бұрын
That's straight bs how she got the lock open.
@johnmaxwell8279 7 жыл бұрын
older locks can be picked with smth as basic as a knife or even the handle of a spoon/fork/etc. or a lucky chance and the particular knife had the correct curves to unlock the lock
@user-wu2rb3bq6i 7 жыл бұрын
***** the more you know....
@Rangogoat 7 жыл бұрын
its he not she what kind of girls name is jared though
@zombiesatemybirthdaycake9608 7 жыл бұрын
I'm scared of sleeping with my closet door open now, because when all the lights are out you can see the shy, staring eyes of TOM F*CKING CRUISE WHO WON'T COME OUT OF THE GODDAMN CLOSET!
@SouppaStupid 7 жыл бұрын
tgrtgfvdygfhbdj rbvdrgfbvhjfbhjbhuhklbshshgfhhyhjgfsyrshhsyhththgdshrsnrnrngrbnvfshrtsb shit sorry my dog threw my toaster on my keyboard
@chrisbadiou1407 9 жыл бұрын
Part way through I was distracted by the fact that the shingles on the roof might need to be replaced.
@Tvhiti 6 жыл бұрын
Chris Badiou the one broken window pane
@mrquin89 8 жыл бұрын
Checks closet,and there's Tom cruise
@Luzum 8 жыл бұрын
Ayy someone gets the reference. Lol.
@reapercam3213 8 жыл бұрын
Tom cruise what are you doing in my closet *Herbert the perverts voice* hchm I got some Popsicle's in my basement tom cruise what are you doing in a bear costume o3o
@phantumgrey 7 жыл бұрын
Tom Cruise won't come out of the closet!!
@Weird_but_neat 8 жыл бұрын
am I the only one that lets the ads play between creepypasta videos to calm down lol
@andreandphilippe 8 жыл бұрын
Nope, I do too lol
@robotduck212 8 жыл бұрын
I don't, I skip them
@aarontruitt6579 7 жыл бұрын
they aren't that scary
@Thetazord 9 жыл бұрын
I love your channel so much, one of the best story tellers out there.
@narutoroxanne22 5 жыл бұрын
How can he say the girl was "no LESS than 9 years old" when they were gone for only 5 years?!!
@mayhill2378 9 жыл бұрын
I really shouldn't be listening to this at night. I guess I dont need any sleep. 😨
@AlleyCatAlex 8 жыл бұрын
This is one of those stories that is scary because it could happen
@ExserTech5 9 жыл бұрын
I always listen to creepy pastas before going to sleep it makes me feel sleepy lol
@unrealplayer5602 6 жыл бұрын
ExsertTech5 I usually regret every creepypasta I watched
@haliegh-jadeguerra3536 8 жыл бұрын
The Picture Is Moving....!!!!
@annarobinson4264 7 жыл бұрын
The pictures are always moving
@toby9444 7 жыл бұрын
Haliegh-jade Guerra The painting of the fat woman from Harry Potter?
@victoria._.5640 9 жыл бұрын
I listen to your creepy pastas at night almost all the time now because I can't sleep anyway. They're so good :)
@deathcorps8616 8 жыл бұрын
Bro I'm In Love with what you put together and the way you tell it sets it perfect keep releasing and I'll always listen
@kkNjasik 8 жыл бұрын
Every time i watch one of these videos i scroll down right away. Screw those creepy ass pictures.
@hitgirl-zj3lg 8 жыл бұрын
Lol
@annesilva3542 8 жыл бұрын
same
@fieldsofdreams8539 8 жыл бұрын
A house is creepy?
@kkNjasik 8 жыл бұрын
................
@krill9606 8 жыл бұрын
It's literally just a house..
@Blipblobit 9 жыл бұрын
Reminds me of that spookyspaghetti about the perfect baby.
@babaganoush2314 9 жыл бұрын
Blipblobit YES SPOOKY SPAGHETTI
@fraglcsgoandmore4500 9 жыл бұрын
Weirdo Killjoy Excuse me, good sir, I do believe you mean lumpy linguine.
@ryanpetersen3789 9 жыл бұрын
Terrifying tortellini!
@starkravenmarkraven4514 9 жыл бұрын
Blipblobit Yes and Raunchy Ramen was pretty bad too.
@datdamnmegabusta5604 9 жыл бұрын
Blipblobit This entire chain is a great benchmark in Internet history. I am truly blessed to have bared witness to such an event.
@demetriushoward5505 9 жыл бұрын
CreepsMcPasta this is some of your scariest and best work awesome video keep up the great work
@KaroruruYT 9 жыл бұрын
Your creepyapsta narrations are my new bedtime stories. Thanks for the great videos
@dmonikmusik 9 жыл бұрын
Shoulda kept that clawset locked.
@polterboo3515 8 жыл бұрын
OOOKAAAAY NOPE NOPE NOPE ALL ABOARD THE NOPE TRAIN
@Kai-nv4db 8 жыл бұрын
Take me with you
@p.jmusso2443 8 жыл бұрын
*misses train* FFFUUUUUU!!!!! *spirals down into watching more of these videos* (based on true events
@spookystela4661 7 жыл бұрын
Polter Boo next stop: FuckThatVille
@dashajordan6655 7 жыл бұрын
Ive heard this story but I always comeback to this and others specifically because of how you tell these stories 😊
@nadinabuena 9 жыл бұрын
Wow! So well written! Goosebumps. Great reading, CreepsMcPasta!
@RobbieRR 9 жыл бұрын
Is it just me,or does the thumbnail look like a zombified Lil Wayne?
@connorhes2246 9 жыл бұрын
Omg 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂😂
@RobbieRR 8 жыл бұрын
+Kyle Falkenberg like seriously,it does,haha
@lilgreeneyesp637 5 жыл бұрын
@@RobbieRR 🤣🤣🤣🤣...he really does....maybe he has a twin
@lilgreeneyesp637 5 жыл бұрын
@@connorhes2246 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.. he is the image of lil Wayne.. hahaha....
@imperfectamethyst9068 9 жыл бұрын
Plot twist: he looks under the cupboard and finds A WILD HARRY POTTER
@qwertdudeify 9 жыл бұрын
This dudes the best, I hope you go far on KZfaq
@fallenangle4114 9 жыл бұрын
it has been awile since I watched ur videos... I forgot how much I loved them :'D
@N3RDYG0GGLES 9 жыл бұрын
Ugh I just came home alone from shopping, dead silent, opened up my laptop and THIS was the first recommended video on youtube >_< nice bloody title.
@Duskstone89 9 жыл бұрын
The main character is F*CKING SHARP!
@zurglichking5474 9 жыл бұрын
I really enjoy a fright almost every night thanks to you scary stories are the best crewpymcpasta
@karenolivares9532 9 жыл бұрын
Wow that was scary.Good job creepypasta you always have good stories and do a good job with the videos. :)
@cornelalexandru60 8 жыл бұрын
*me after listening* Fuc this shit im out Fuc this shit im out No thanks dont mind me.. ima just grab my stuff and leave
@Chameleon1616 7 жыл бұрын
Something is wrong... Someone moved TO Detroit.
@pieterswart1427 9 жыл бұрын
Great video! Keep up the good work!
@kikikungfukakes6639 6 жыл бұрын
This was amazing. And quite unexpected. Thanks for narrating this. Xoxoxo
@therizzonator2862 7 жыл бұрын
NOOOO!!! Not Detroit!
@mostar1219 9 жыл бұрын
I feel like any parent who is completely f**ked up in the head would do the same thing as Clarica. I've always seen myself as a fault so many times that I'm surprised I wasn't locked away from society by my own mom
@DragonBread95 9 жыл бұрын
Love the work creeps keep doing what your doing also could ya include that violin noise it's in scp 096 I love that background noise in your videos
@creepersjeepers8656 9 жыл бұрын
I really enjoyed this story. Upon closer inspection a lot of questions can be raised, but it was very well written.
@archdruidss1503 9 жыл бұрын
"Simon and Eloise" the on time someone else has the name Elouise, and it's in creepy pasta......
@trintrain7087 8 жыл бұрын
OH MY GOD ALOIS TRANCY! I'm sorry I just had too
@_shenanigans_8337 9 жыл бұрын
Every time I see one of your videos I'm like "ehh this is gonna be BORING" but then I watch it and its always great good job
@xXxmisslovelyxXx 9 жыл бұрын
I love catching this right after he posts them. I don't have to go searching!
@cian9816 9 жыл бұрын
I only have a 10 minute net,can you get me a 20 minute one so I can catch this vid?
@minnie7583 9 жыл бұрын
This gave me "We Don't Talk About Sarah" vibes
@hautxtalons 9 жыл бұрын
I was eating chicken while listening to this... bad idea :(
@brookiegee7976 4 жыл бұрын
Page I was eating baked beans
@myunicornlovesmarilynmanso8800 9 жыл бұрын
Great job Creeps. This was disturbing! I thought your voice was perfect for the narration... even though your always perfect ^-^ love you creeps
@dr.anderson1847 5 жыл бұрын
"The girl turned out to be fine" I guess being held in a cabord for nine years is fine
@ibc2997 8 жыл бұрын
Ending felt a bit rushed. Still liked it!
@roseoxlade4629 8 жыл бұрын
My brother is autistic. Listening to this I felt a stab of pain and sympathy for the girl. I imagined how I would feel if my wither did that to Bertie
@roseoxlade4629 8 жыл бұрын
*mother
@gavinthroop2839 8 жыл бұрын
+French Kiss A Bear Today the point is the mental illness
@hopeyourehavingagreatday6740 8 жыл бұрын
I listen to these story's way to late at night. I'm 18 and these still get me.
@chrisw_the_pro1642 9 жыл бұрын
Why is your voice so perfect T-T I cry every time T-T
@beccaa4946 9 жыл бұрын
Listening to this at midnight- help me dear god 😂😂...😶
@17Haxor17 9 жыл бұрын
Help...
@Grim_Haunting 9 жыл бұрын
This one is not showing up on the app for me :/
@whiprust 9 жыл бұрын
Amazing pasta, I could really feel the tension towards the end there.
@alexanderwilliamson651 9 жыл бұрын
this is one of the best creepy pastas along with "how tommy really died" that i have heard in a long time
@TheWilderCat 6 жыл бұрын
Jesus.... That story was disturbing and awesome. This writer knows his shit!
@ghostspyyy8903 8 жыл бұрын
The aunt had a miscarriage and stole the baby from the orphanage only to find out the girl she stole had down syndrome, and wasn't perfect enough for the aunt, so the aunt locked her in the basement cupboard thing and the uncle didn't like that and got put in there with the girl, the girl got hungry and ate the uncle, the aunt came to check on the uncle only to see the the little girl ate the uncle, and was punished by the aunt. just a theory.
@ghostspyyy8903 8 жыл бұрын
OH SHIT I GOT IT RIGHT.
@420fatconesforharambe3 8 жыл бұрын
+Mintheicecream fuck why did i read this before i listened to it
@ghostspyyy8903 8 жыл бұрын
Cone Puller Mike 420 youtube comments ruin everything
@mah0817 8 жыл бұрын
Shit why did I read that not even 2 minutes in?!
@ZombieSlayer876 8 жыл бұрын
The aunt didn't have a miscarriage, she gave birth to a child with Down syndrome, locked them up since they event perfect, then stole a new one from an orphanage. The uncle tried to stop her, so she killed him and left the corpse with the child that she would need to eat to survive.
@elpretender1357 6 жыл бұрын
This was the first creepypasta I heared in english, I've learned a lot since, believe it or not, this had improved my conversational english understanding a lot. Thanks for this creepy pasta
@LilyS1031 8 жыл бұрын
This is the only one that I've listened to in a long time that simultaneously scared the p out of me and also has a relatively happy ending. Love it!
@shingosawatarihgx8345 7 жыл бұрын
yeah, something is wrong: creeps still hasn't done a face reveal
@oscarolmebo568 9 жыл бұрын
Whats with the two dislikes tho
@metthereaper 9 жыл бұрын
I missed creepypastas
@aubreyking8931 9 жыл бұрын
You are seriously my favorite KZfaqr. And your stories are indeed creepy but In a awesome way. How in the world do u sleep at night creeps!??!?!? 😈
@Bogsman 9 жыл бұрын
Nooooo....I fell asleep!:( Your voice is so calming and nice it's like you should be telling me bedtime stories
@terrythedragon3638 9 жыл бұрын
You never respond to comments :'( You've broke my heart in so many pieces :( I looOoOOve your channel, Good job☺️😘😃
@cian9816 9 жыл бұрын
You are confusing me so much :( why? I like turtles and cheese
@terrythedragon3638 9 жыл бұрын
Why am I confusing you? :/ I love dragons and pizza :)
@sockmonkey062 9 жыл бұрын
Ur so annoying :/ Jk ur funny
@CaliforniaWaffle 9 жыл бұрын
You're wry rude Jk, I'm hot.
@duvaldjoutsa4253 9 жыл бұрын
JetTunic Games high school of the death
@redorangejuice7281 4 жыл бұрын
This is one of my favorites, I could've never expected the ending and it was really nice. :D
@iBenjamin1000 4 жыл бұрын
thanks for the warning in the description. Even if I didn't listen to it.
@mario_maker_pro2963 9 жыл бұрын
Your voice is just, fuckin perfect!
@zooley_g8492 8 жыл бұрын
watching in 2016?
@shanepye5211 8 жыл бұрын
+chris mcClellan yea man
@HeyWelcomeToMyWorld 8 жыл бұрын
it's 2028 over here.
@perigrot7565 8 жыл бұрын
+HeyWelcomeToMyWorld are you sure? Where I am it's 12AD mate
@tolazytochoseanamethefurry1466 5 жыл бұрын
No 2018
@forceej 9 жыл бұрын
Nice posted about 15min ago, earliest I ever been viewing a recent upload.
@xoticalpha432 2 жыл бұрын
It took me a minute to remember this creepypasta. It's either aged really well or I'm nostalgic
@phoenixblade8315 Ай бұрын
I was searching for this one for years but couldn’t find it. The story could’ve been more impactful if there wasn’t as much explanation at the end. The author could have allowed us as the readers to come to the conclusion. The mystery is what keeps these stories unnerving and creepy. If you got rid of the paragraph about the aunt’s motivation and let the readers come up with the conclusion but the ending line where “she’s out there looking for a perfect family” would have made this story more unsettling.
@ninajohns4740 9 жыл бұрын
No one can b perfect no one
@GoodestKitty 9 жыл бұрын
I think I know where she is. My step mom should be a prime suspect. She's crazy af someone help
@babe5989 8 жыл бұрын
Wow, I really liked this one. It's very well-written, with (finally) an original plot.
@trickstrgod911 7 жыл бұрын
This one was horrifying, my god... Good job, CreepsMcPasta.
@rucealexander2848 8 жыл бұрын
the aunt kidnapped Malorie because she had a micarriage, didn't she I'm not even halfway through this, but I'm starting to be able to predict these things
@mikesiford4549 8 жыл бұрын
well ya wrong
@rucealexander2848 8 жыл бұрын
I was pretty close though
@kittokattxx 8 жыл бұрын
Well, I originally thought that, I read this comment, saw the "pretty close" "and well ya wrong" and I predicted the actual thing.
@kamv7686 8 жыл бұрын
ye same
@codyj5204 7 жыл бұрын
Karianne Alexander gotta be quicker than that
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