IELTS Writing Task 2 Lesson: From Band 6.5 - 8

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IELTS Advantage

IELTS Advantage

5 жыл бұрын

IELTS Writing Task 2 is the second part of the writing test, where you are presented with a point of view, argument or problem and asked to write an essay in response. Your essay should be in a formal style, at least 250 words in length and you should aim to complete it in under 40 minutes.
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Task 2 can be a little tricky for many doing the test.
One of our students tried 4 times and got 6.5 every time. When she came to us she was desperate to get at least a Band 7 in her next writing test.
We identified that she was doing some very basic things wrong and we decided to teach her the basic principles of IELTS Writing.
These key principles were all linked to the IELTS Writing Task 2 Official Marking Criteria. This helped her get inside the mind of an examiner and understand exactly what they want on test day.
In this lesson, we show you her previous essay and compare it with her final one before she did the test.
She managed to go from a Band 6.5 to a Band 8 in quite a short period of time.
Here's what I'll teach you:
03:08 Why you need a principled approach
04:36 The essay question
05:49 The 3 stages to IELTS Writing Task 2
07:06 Plan your Task 2 essay
08:26 Think about the question
10:03 Understand what the examiner wants you to do
11:08 Generate ideas
14:43 Structure planning
17:58 Key Principles for the Thinking Stage
22:09 Paraphrasing
22:15 Writing an effective introduction
24:30 Main Body Paragraphs and idea development
35:00 Writing effective conclusions
37:20 A checklist of key elements
39:02 Improving your grammar in IELTS Writing Task 2
41:00 Improving your vocabulary in IELTS Writing Task 2
39:02 Editing
I've also added a question at the end of the video. Post it in the comments below and I will select a few samples and give detailed feedback in our next video.
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If you need any help or advice, feel free to get in touch- chris@ieltsadvantage.com

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@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 5 жыл бұрын
Post your essays here. I look forward to reading them.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 5 жыл бұрын
@@kashifahmed3594 thanks for posting but this isn't the question from the lesson.
@kashifahmed3594
@kashifahmed3594 5 жыл бұрын
Oops,sorry!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 5 жыл бұрын
@@kashifahmed3594 no worries :)
@ossamaeltemsahy6932
@ossamaeltemsahy6932 5 жыл бұрын
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@wisteriavids194
@wisteriavids194 5 жыл бұрын
done
@rurazak
@rurazak 5 жыл бұрын
From the bottom of my heart, thank you so much. I managed to score band 7 for the writing component. Taking 10 minutes to adequately plan and come up with a structure for the essay helped me tremendously. I will forever be grateful for your tips.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 5 жыл бұрын
Congratulations!
@PlantswithCoffee
@PlantswithCoffee 2 жыл бұрын
Band 9
@user-qg6mr8tn5t
@user-qg6mr8tn5t Жыл бұрын
👍
@ruchaparekh2840
@ruchaparekh2840 4 ай бұрын
Did you take their course or on youtube videos only??
@naveedhaider3112
@naveedhaider3112 5 жыл бұрын
Believe me guys. This is the video you should be looking for. It has got everything you need to do for your writing tasks. I got my results today Overall 8.0 Listening 8.5 Reading 7.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 8.0 This is the video that helped me modifying my essay structure in the last few days. I would say Thank You....
@naveedhaider3112
@naveedhaider3112 5 жыл бұрын
Highly recommended
@vimanbatth6516
@vimanbatth6516 9 ай бұрын
@@naveedhaider3112 Hi Naveed, could you please advise me about the writing part from your experience. I need to get 7 but I got 6.5. Much appreciated! Could you shed some light on few essential things that one must do in order to get band 7. Looking forward to your answer
@mehereenakhter3352
@mehereenakhter3352 3 жыл бұрын
Hey Chris, I just wanted to thank you. I prepared for 2 weeks before giving my ielts and I was confused with the overwhleming amount of online materials and advice. Thankfully I stumbled upon your free writing course which seemed more simple and straightforward than most. So I mostly followed your advice and scored a 7.5 in writing, 8.5 overall. So just wanted to thank you for all the help you made available!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
Congratulations! We are so happy to have played a small part in your success. Good luck with your future!
@aizereserikova3000
@aizereserikova3000 Жыл бұрын
@@Ieltsadvantage where can I get free writing course?
@cleverkeily776
@cleverkeily776 Жыл бұрын
In ur first attempt?
@mehereenakhter3352
@mehereenakhter3352 Жыл бұрын
@@cleverkeily776 yeah
@aafrinmalek1299
@aafrinmalek1299 Жыл бұрын
What was ur English level? Are good in English?
@nancyramirez1196
@nancyramirez1196 4 жыл бұрын
I just want to say thank you! I got 7 in my first attempt and I can start my master now. Your videos were so helpful.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
That's fantastic, congratulations! That's really great to hear. Best of luck with your bright future :)
@abhijeet2642
@abhijeet2642 3 жыл бұрын
I need 7 bands. Help me Nancy
@jonadalosa2276
@jonadalosa2276 3 жыл бұрын
Nagtake kba s review center sis? San ka nagtake ng exam mo? Aq nextmonth na kasi exam q dto s taiwan.
@bibliophileseduce
@bibliophileseduce 3 жыл бұрын
@@Ieltsadvantage we love you
@sahidulislam1829
@sahidulislam1829 3 жыл бұрын
That's good
@kanikakukreja6433
@kanikakukreja6433 3 жыл бұрын
Hello Chris, I just started preparing for IELTS Academic a few days back and I was in fear of how I will use complex words and synonyms to look my essay impressive to the viewer and you cleared all my doubts in the video which will surely help me in preparing for it as I understand the matter should be crisp and clear without many fancy words. Thanks a lot for the video, I really appreciate it. Have a nice day ahead!
@DSulaiman93
@DSulaiman93 4 жыл бұрын
This man right here is a legend. I can't thank you enough Chris for your help. I was stuck at 6.5 in writing, shattering my confidence of giving the IELTS ever again. I had the exact same issues faced by this student i.e. not understanding the question clearly, using fancy words to impress the examiner, not planning the structure, and the list goes on. Thank you once again. :D
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome! Thank you for your compliments.
@heminshah257
@heminshah257 5 жыл бұрын
This video is absolutely amazing,it clarifies almost all of your doubts. I think the tutor has showcased through out the video that simplicity is your best weapon for scoring more in this ielts writing task. I am really thankful and recommend people to follow it. Thanks Mate!
@legalattorneyblog
@legalattorneyblog 5 жыл бұрын
Good job! I am not exaggerating but you are one of my best tutor, particularly the way you try to tell us to be mindful of the things we watch and memorise on KZfaq even without mentioning name. Thumbs up my teacher. Please more of this, am more challenged on reading and writing. Cheers.
@urssya951
@urssya951 7 ай бұрын
Thanks Chris Pell and the whole team of Ielts Advantage! Much appreciated. ❤
@izauraoliveirasarmento265
@izauraoliveirasarmento265 5 жыл бұрын
I am so glad that I found your youtube channel. Have been sarching for a good ielts video tutorial because I will have my very first ielts test next week.I hope your tips really help me.Kisses from Timor-Leste
@utsavvanodiya2273
@utsavvanodiya2273 4 жыл бұрын
Such a great help about writing. I was just about to make same mistake like her but you stopped me from doing that. Thanks a lot.
@dipeshbhattarai9022
@dipeshbhattarai9022 4 жыл бұрын
You are really awesome!! Thanks for your 5 days free course, with in 1 day I am soo confident to write opinion essay. You really make work so easier. Love from nepal
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome! Glad you're enjoying the free course!
@shauryaparanjape
@shauryaparanjape 4 жыл бұрын
Structure planning is really important! Can't emphasize that enough. Read your essay structures article on the website and helped me get a 7.5 in writing. Thanks a lot for your help!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
Congratulations! We are always happy to help.
@anjumunnisa389
@anjumunnisa389 2 жыл бұрын
@@Ieltsadvantage Could you please tell me where I can find this article of yours? I couldn't find it on the my.ieltsadvantage.com website. Thanks :)
@AnkitKumar-ey1qs
@AnkitKumar-ey1qs Жыл бұрын
Can u suggest me how I can score 7+ in writing ???
@nguyetanhphanthi529
@nguyetanhphanthi529 11 ай бұрын
4 days later i will have a test but i feel so grateful for your videos, you're great teacher
@rejoicingnow
@rejoicingnow 11 ай бұрын
how was it
@akashhm958
@akashhm958 9 ай бұрын
How was it?
@Rk-dw6su
@Rk-dw6su 5 жыл бұрын
This is a great video... I am right now suffering in putting my ideas relating correctly with the question asked. "Brainstorming while writing" my ought most concern I repeatedly do again and again. And finally I get disappointed with my essays. I will write an essay and send to you working with the structure you have taught in this video. Thank you Chris.
@amanydubai7880
@amanydubai7880 5 жыл бұрын
Glad to come through your Channel, great job.
@betterdayswillcomepat
@betterdayswillcomepat 4 жыл бұрын
first of all I would like to thank you for this video and secondly I want to say that unfortunately real IELTS instructors like you who explain things specifically are rare, I was following an American lady on you tube who claims has been an IELTS instructor for 15 years, now that I see your video I understand her videos are only misleading because whatever your student told you that she was recommended to do and were wrong are the things I heard and saw on her videos, it is really hard to find '' real'' experts such as you, I appreciate the info you provided us with in this video again, Good Luck to you
@pristine6584
@pristine6584 5 жыл бұрын
This is a spectacular IELTS WRITING tutorial and analysis. Thanks so much. 😘 🤗
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld
@SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld 11 ай бұрын
Excellent Mr.Chris. Definitely you are the best IELTS expert and teacher on KZfaq 👍 Thank you so much 🙏
@kolaswathi12
@kolaswathi12 4 жыл бұрын
you are one of the best top teachers in social media(KZfaq)
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@noname-qn1lf
@noname-qn1lf 2 жыл бұрын
On*
@Rama_Rajesh89
@Rama_Rajesh89 4 жыл бұрын
I start my ielts preparation with you. Thanks for the useful info.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
We are happy to help. You're very welcome!
@amandamacgregor4215
@amandamacgregor4215 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Chris I followed your free lessons here and I got 7.5 in my writing. You are the best out there
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
Congratulations!
@silmiyafarook7345
@silmiyafarook7345 5 жыл бұрын
I am waiting to hear from you Chris. I need a feed back for my essay please.
@user-iq7vr9cn9y
@user-iq7vr9cn9y 8 ай бұрын
Your ways of giving explanations of this topic are very natural.
@lara5286
@lara5286 4 жыл бұрын
I just watched this video and I only have one word: THANKS!! I am one of your VIP students. I have done the IELTS twice and I didn't get the score that I need. Now I realized that all the time I was in a hurry and the last time I did the exam my brain was so stressed because of some families problems. I feel ready to begin again, I will focus on every word that you said!! Thanks again!!!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome! Hope you're enjoying our VIP Course.
@meylis12233221
@meylis12233221 4 жыл бұрын
Appreciate the lesson! Wonderful advices were given! Hopefully, this strategy will help to improve my writing skills and get a higher score 👍
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
Glad you enjoyed it!
@anjanadhakal46
@anjanadhakal46 3 жыл бұрын
Thank You so much sir for your wonderful advice.
@harjinderkaur7425
@harjinderkaur7425 3 жыл бұрын
Now it seems realistic to achieve 8 bands in writing . Thnku so much, keeping faith in u n following evrything u advice.
@deeppahwa3291
@deeppahwa3291 2 жыл бұрын
I have seen lot of your videos. You are truly top mentor, thank you for your guidance. High respect.
@Alpha-qc5om
@Alpha-qc5om 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much, Sir! This has been really helpful, I am looking forward to similar lectures in your future videos. :)
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
That's great! You're very welcome.
@oantrang2174
@oantrang2174 10 ай бұрын
Hi Chris! I had scored 7.5 in IELTS Writing just by following your reliable advice! You are an awesome teacher who dedicated all of your time and effort to help improving students’ scores, so I hope you can keep up the good work and stay healthy 🙌
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 10 ай бұрын
Well done! Congratulations!
@encyclopaedia641
@encyclopaedia641 9 ай бұрын
Coming back here to give a testimonial I am three years in the UK now. I remember when my life’s hope was hanging in balance and my fate was going to be determined by this single exam. I can never forget the invaluable help and support I got from this channel that helped me to scale my ielts exam I’m grateful for the existence of this channel. Chris keep up the good work. You’re so loved I remember paying $1 for access to all the course materials i really can’t thank you enough I said I would come and find you when I get to the UK that still holds I wish to meet you some day. Haha I actually just saw my comment 4yrs ago under this video. 😊😊
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 9 ай бұрын
Hi there, hope you are doing well. All the best to you!
@ajaykumara7158
@ajaykumara7158 2 жыл бұрын
Chris, your analysis is immaculate and flawless for the benefit of your readers. From India
@bopeng1291
@bopeng1291 4 жыл бұрын
I have got 5.5 in writing for three times no matter how much I prepared. I feel self-doubt a lot and begin to be demotivated with strong sense of depression. One thing worth mentioning is that I am a Chinese candidate. As for the reason why I would like to talk about it, I would say that to get a reasonable score in S&W in China is comparatively harder than that in other countries. Here my aim is to call for fairnessfairness with regard to assessment system. Wish there will be only an unique one!!!
@rabbit0772
@rabbit0772 5 жыл бұрын
The technique used for introduction of paragraph in writing tasks , also help in Reading task questions when asked to match headings (24:05)
@SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld
@SobhanSigarudi-dr3ld 11 ай бұрын
I think this is the best video about IELTS writing on KZfaq 👍
@agnesbaga732
@agnesbaga732 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much for a very comprehensive tips on how to go about (IELTS) writing. I'll get back to you once I've taken the test. God bless to you Chris and your team!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@mehrunnisafatima9370
@mehrunnisafatima9370 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks to you i scored L 8.5 R 8 W 8 S 8 🎈
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
Congrats! We put in so much work into making the best, free resources for students and we are always delighted when they let us know that the materials worked for them. Good luck for the future!
@dk7734
@dk7734 5 жыл бұрын
You r the best teacher In world You deserve more and more
@bluesclues3024
@bluesclues3024 11 ай бұрын
Just wanted to come back and say thank you. This is really the only video I needed to watch about task 2. Combined with the task 1 video I went from a band 6.5 to an 8. Again, thank you so much. Keep up the good work! :)
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 11 ай бұрын
Glad it helped! Congratulations!
@librakhan6699
@librakhan6699 Жыл бұрын
Your website really just hits the spot. Thank you a very much
@kerrymint5579
@kerrymint5579 Жыл бұрын
Wow, the way you present the lesson is fantastic, also, your audience awareness is at another level to me. In this, whenever I have a question then you kinda answer it right away. Moreover, the student's progression is narrated really well. Thanks!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Жыл бұрын
Wow, thank you! We're always happy to help. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your IELTS exam, please feel free to contact us.
@victorblue0613
@victorblue0613 5 жыл бұрын
thanks for the video ! my test is this saturday and im actually stucking in lower than a score 6 actually, hopefully with your way i can achieve over 6 for my university entrance ! x
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 5 жыл бұрын
You're welcome, and good luck with your exam!
@sim7476
@sim7476 Жыл бұрын
so how was the test ?
@Mcpaola1995
@Mcpaola1995 3 жыл бұрын
What an amazing and comprehensive lesson. Thank you so much for this!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome! We're always happy to help. If you'd like expert IELTS guidance or feedback on your work, please feel free to contact our team here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
@ye-ym5jo
@ye-ym5jo 3 ай бұрын
this is the only IELTS channel that I've found so far that really told us about using 1 single structure for every kind of essay... and it works. I used to use 1 structure for 1 sub category and it was really confusing
@kartikpanicker9275
@kartikpanicker9275 3 жыл бұрын
What an amazing teacher he is! Such a gem for us.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@ludmilaprikhodko9795
@ludmilaprikhodko9795 2 жыл бұрын
Thank you, Chris, for your clear and useful lesson!
@fernandaalzate4616
@fernandaalzate4616 3 жыл бұрын
I found this video absolutely useful, it make me realized the different mistakes that Idid in my practice exam. Thank you very much for being so clear.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
I'm glad you find it useful. You can also join our free 5 Day Writing Challenge course. It's designed to show you the step-by-step strategy on how to get a Band 7+ on the Writing Task 2 essay. Please find the link below. 5dc.ieltsadvantage.com If you have any further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
@kingfalconkhan
@kingfalconkhan 4 жыл бұрын
This is a super duper good lesson. Thanks a lot Chris..!
@SivaSankar25
@SivaSankar25 4 жыл бұрын
Feeding the human body and mind is one of the essential aspect for survival. People use to eat home cooked food in the past, however, in the modern society where industrialization of food has become quite popular, people prefer processed food for various reasons such as taste, saving time without knowing the effects it has on the human body. This essay will cover why people eat more processed nowadays when compared to past and its effect. Cooking breakfast, lunch and dinner is one of the time consuming activity. Nowadays, people wants to save their time, so that they could spend it on other important matters such school, work, and social gatherings. After industrialization of food, people are attracted towards processed food because of the longer shelf life, instant cooking options. This saves people’s valuable time spent in food preparation. For example, when people wake up in the morning and rush to work, this ready to cook food items become the saviour. Therefore, people are more inclinded towards processed food without bothering about its effect on their health. Although, the processed food items may sound so fascinating due to their attractive features, they come with a cost and it is inevitable, unless people begin to take care of their health. The food items we get from the super markets are highly processed at the factories which involves using many chemicals and preservatives, so that the food items has a longer shelf life, good taste. Though, these chemicals and preservatives are approved by FDA, they are not good for the human body in a long run. For example, World Health Organization conducted a research between two groups, where processed and tasty food is served to one group, whereas, other group is served with health meals which are made from organic farms. The research concluded that the average lifespan of people who had processed by decreased by 9% whereas the people who had organic food lived longer than the average lifespan without any serious illness. Futhermore, research reported that processed food known to cause many illness such has heart attack, obesity etc., To conclude, it is clear that people choose processed food for various reasons, though it is known to cause many health issues. Hence, government and organizations should take initiatives to educate people on processed food and their effects on human body , so that people choose healthy options for one’s wellbeing and for the society.
@ramilabenmistry628
@ramilabenmistry628 4 жыл бұрын
What feedback did u got on your essay??
@ramilabenmistry628
@ramilabenmistry628 4 жыл бұрын
Can u share with us?
@jacinthafernandes2562
@jacinthafernandes2562 4 жыл бұрын
Very well written.
@SivaSankar25
@SivaSankar25 4 жыл бұрын
@@jacinthafernandes2562 Thank you!
@rejoicebaku9068
@rejoicebaku9068 2 жыл бұрын
Wow. That's a good write up. I'm impressed
@urvashisingh9239
@urvashisingh9239 5 жыл бұрын
Even if I have 1000 likes. I would do that... Thank you Chris.. I joined your 5 day & one dollar challenge as well.. Your ideas are clear & simple yet perfect... Thanks again..
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much.
@jenifeerach3719
@jenifeerach3719 4 жыл бұрын
How can I join that course ??
@qizhuang6882
@qizhuang6882 4 жыл бұрын
Detailed and helpful! Thanks
@kunhuz
@kunhuz 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much Chris ! You are great teacher 👍 you boosted my confidence 🙌
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
You're welcome! We're always happy to help. If you'd like expert IELTS guidance or feedback on your work, please feel free to contact our team here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
@philipsmathew9311
@philipsmathew9311 4 жыл бұрын
Can’t get better explanation than this ... for all IELTS aspirants....this is for you
@oguzbarbaros5927
@oguzbarbaros5927 4 жыл бұрын
That's totally What I need. Thanks for effort
@TheRehoboth79
@TheRehoboth79 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the teaching in this video. It was indeed an eye-opener!
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome! I'm glad it was helpful. If there’s anything else our team of IELTS teachers can do to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com
@bhumikamakwana8260
@bhumikamakwana8260 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you for the bestest advise I ever get it! Thank you very much !
@ovoakhgbe156
@ovoakhgbe156 Жыл бұрын
Hello Chris,i am so grateful to you.i relied solely on your teachings for academic writing task2. Scored a band 7 for writing and overall 7.5 on my first attempt. You're indeed a good teacher. Thanks so much.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Жыл бұрын
Well done! Congratulations! If you need help in the future, you know where we are.
@didoraemon6233
@didoraemon6233 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you so much sir for helping us!!! From India 😍
@eunnymike4467
@eunnymike4467 3 жыл бұрын
Great Chris, your teaching is very very informative. How i wish i discovered you before now. i can`t even get out of my sit.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
We're happy to help. Thanks for watching!
@udaykhadka1033
@udaykhadka1033 3 жыл бұрын
I just want to thank you for your guidance. I got 7 on my first attempt. Thank you Chris
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
That's great! Congratulations! If you ever need our help in the future, feel free to get in touch with us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com
@vinodhrajkumar2789
@vinodhrajkumar2789 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks Chris I’m week in ielts . And previously my results are not that good.and I follow your method and today I got writing 6 , listening 6.5,reading 7.5,speaking 7overall 7 Thank you very much you are a legend.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
Congratulations! We're happy to help in any way we can.
@rabiafarhan6306
@rabiafarhan6306 5 жыл бұрын
you are one of the super teacher in this world
@rawanmatar1727
@rawanmatar1727 9 ай бұрын
Let me express my endless appreciation for your mindset, understanding, and how you are explaining it all just made me more confident and less stressed out. Truly big thank you.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 9 ай бұрын
You're very welcome. If you have any questions or need our team to help you prepare for your exam, please feel free to contact us.
@oganurseandeverythingmotiv7789
@oganurseandeverythingmotiv7789 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you. This was really helpful.
@alvarinenelson5243
@alvarinenelson5243 4 жыл бұрын
Hi Chris just want to say thanks i did my ielts and got a band 6.0. I got 7 in speaking , 6.5 in writing , 5.5 in reading and listening. I could have done much better but time was against me.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome, we're always here to help.
@qasemabuomar8800
@qasemabuomar8800 4 жыл бұрын
I just want to ask about the second Q in the video it says effects ( plural form ) does that mean that i have to write 2 ideas like fatigue and compromise health or just one like you did?
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
Just one is fine!
@geoffreycurrie9582
@geoffreycurrie9582 3 жыл бұрын
effects is plural right......
@1980Dyana
@1980Dyana 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much Chris your lectures give us ability to think that we can pass this exam finally :)
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 5 жыл бұрын
I hope they do.
@iozmen
@iozmen Жыл бұрын
most useful content on task 2 ever. big ups !
@maitrayparikh321
@maitrayparikh321 4 жыл бұрын
Really appreciate your work from heart❤️❤️❤️
@mansisharma2662
@mansisharma2662 10 ай бұрын
Writing was always very tough for me nd getting 7 was next to Impossible which I can’t even imagine but came across your videos few days before my test nd Got 7 now❤
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 10 ай бұрын
Great job! Congratulations!
@nanphyutun
@nanphyutun 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the video and its really useful.
@rahimasultanahossain6019
@rahimasultanahossain6019 5 жыл бұрын
Your videos are great assistance for us.
@kamalmechatron
@kamalmechatron 4 жыл бұрын
There are no video can't teach you as this, for free of cost... Thanks #IELTS_Advantage
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!
@MO-uy8pe
@MO-uy8pe 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot for the video. Essay : People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects of this? Answer: People consume a lot of canned meals nowadays, compared to past trends. This essay will state the reasons for this recent trend of eating greater processed meals and their consequences. It takes less time to prepare processed food and get the meal ready for eating. This is because most of them are either half or fully prepared, thus requires little or no cooking time. Some canned food such as pringles are readily edible. Statistics shows that working mothers with very busy schedules patronise processed food stores than stay at home mothers, this has helped them conserve time and increase their productive working hours. Also, packaged food are quite affordable in countries like the United Kingdom and the United States of America, unlike fresh food which cost more due to the costs incurred in producing and distributing them to their users. Also, fresh food produce do not enjoy government subsidies hence they tend to be pricey. Materials for producing packaged meals such as flours and sweeteners are cheap and available in markets. Studies show that for the past few years, packaged food stores have recorded more sales compared to those selling fresh food because they are reasonably priced and accessible. One of the consequences of people consuming more canned meals nowadays is that it poses a risk to their health and fitness. Not only do they suffer from being overweight due to the fatty and oil content of processed food but also, they contact heart related problems like high blood pressure and short breathing. In effect, packaged meals do not contain the requisite vitamins and nutrients the body needs to function optimally because the chemicals and preservatives used to preserve them reduce their potency. People have also become lazy and sedentary because they do not exert energy in cooking their food, as fetching groceries and making meals can be a good way of exercising one's body. According to a health organisation in the United States of America, cases of obesity and high blood pressure is forty percent more prevalent in recent times than it was a decade ago, and this was attributed to individual's bad eating habits like eating too much of processed food. In conclusion, individuals consuming greater canned food because of the time it saves them and affordability portends a health and fitness risk to them.
@truemessage77
@truemessage77 8 күн бұрын
I just realized that in my first IELTS test I had no structure and statements that would clearly support my idea. Thank you for all your videos. I find this approach of analyzing the common mistakes as the most effective and useful.
@sharongreyling8500
@sharongreyling8500 4 жыл бұрын
thank you I found this very informative and helpful. Now to put into practice the principles given.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!
@makeiteasywithlilu6662
@makeiteasywithlilu6662 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you, so much for this video, I really like this format! Please, could you keep posting such videos on your channel)
@MohammadArman-mv8wn
@MohammadArman-mv8wn 3 жыл бұрын
In my dictionary I don't have enough vocabulary to express my gratitude to you for making such an outstanding explanatory video... Almighty Allah bless you...
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!
@user679jk7
@user679jk7 Жыл бұрын
This is so helpful! Thanks for sharing.
@user-bd5ew7qq7q
@user-bd5ew7qq7q 2 жыл бұрын
Chris, u are such a wonderful teacher of Ielts.
@asalmoeini4285
@asalmoeini4285 3 жыл бұрын
omg I was just making the same mistakes like her and I got band 6 which was unbelievable to me because my English isn't that bad to get this such a low score
@realenglishteacher6062
@realenglishteacher6062 3 жыл бұрын
Many teachers in Iran push studnets toward making those mistakes and that's just sad.
@suvashreesadhukhan1506
@suvashreesadhukhan1506 4 жыл бұрын
Nowadays, people are more inclined towards readymade food than past due to fast pace lifestyle. Needless to say, there is a long term side effect on health. we have observed that people eat more processed food due to the hectic schedule in their day to day life. Whereas in the past even around 15-20 years back people had time and energy to cook fresh food and prefer to consume in that way. However, things have been changed drastically were due to lack of time people are preferring the option to pick the food which is ready to cook or ready to eat. It has a vast impact on human health. remarkably, people who eat processed food have more heart conditions, obesity, and stomach related issues. In conclusion, we can say that to accommodate timings in our day to day life, people are preferring packaged and processed food over freshly cooked food, which has a health impact in the long run.
@sabahatkamran3583
@sabahatkamran3583 2 жыл бұрын
Q
@Nikko.Sunshine
@Nikko.Sunshine 3 жыл бұрын
Extremely useful! Thanks!
@ramshapari9953
@ramshapari9953 8 ай бұрын
Thumbs up and thanks a lot you really gave us a path that leads to right direction for getting our desired scores
@nidan904
@nidan904 3 жыл бұрын
This video has been very helpful. Thank you very much for sharing :) I had a question: What if you are not able to think of any relevant example? Can you make one up?
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
Hi there, this article will help answer your question: www.ieltsadvantage.com/2015/08/04/using-examples-in-writing-task-2/ If you have further questions or need our team of IELTS teachers to guide you through your IELTS preparation, please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
@ajsoifer
@ajsoifer 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you for your lesson, Chris! I followed your advice and went from 6.5 to 7 in Writing! However, I also went from 7 to 6.5 in speaking. I asked for a revaluation as I need to score both 7s.
@arbazmajazi7168
@arbazmajazi7168 4 жыл бұрын
Feeling sad 😥
@pgi_thaparubina3338
@pgi_thaparubina3338 2 жыл бұрын
and did you get a 7 in speaking after the re-evaluation ?
@jessicankenne8804
@jessicankenne8804 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks a bunch for this video, I have learned much and I hope it will help me get a band 7+ in my upcoming ielts test
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!
@okwuchukwuogbodo606
@okwuchukwuogbodo606 3 жыл бұрын
Great work Chris, thank you.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
Very welcome! If you'd like our team of IELTS teachers to guide you through your IELTS preparation, please email us at chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
@soniaparvin1718
@soniaparvin1718 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you Chirs ! you made me to laugh. 41:30 i am just loving u. :D Stay bless.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
Thank you!
@kramynohtnacayabyab2821
@kramynohtnacayabyab2821 3 жыл бұрын
I am taking my IELTS exam this August, hoping to pass this exam. I don't know but i feel nervous. Well, I am not good in english to be honest but i will try my best, wish me luck 🙏🙏🙏
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 3 жыл бұрын
Best of luck! If there’s anything else our team of IELTS teachers can do to help you further, please feel free to contact us here: chris@ieltsadvantage.com.
@JustVibe88
@JustVibe88 Жыл бұрын
All the best💫
@sabihasultana5393
@sabihasultana5393 Жыл бұрын
@@Ieltsadvantage hi
@zareennaz6810
@zareennaz6810 Жыл бұрын
Thanks Chris, as you helping from the day one of my IELTS journey.
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage Жыл бұрын
You're most welcome! If there's anything else our team can do to help you, please feel free to contact us.
@pmichchamaz3318
@pmichchamaz3318 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks for the lesson, I learnt a lot. I am beginning to get enlightened on how to write good essays
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 4 жыл бұрын
You're very welcome!
@tamim5776
@tamim5776 5 жыл бұрын
Spectacular lesson... sir 😍👏👌 Love from #Bangladesh
@Ieltsadvantage
@Ieltsadvantage 5 жыл бұрын
Thanks!
@tamim5776
@tamim5776 5 жыл бұрын
God bless you sir. Stay healthy and keep giving us such amazing idea's and important lessons. You are pretty popular in our country. Me and my friends follow your lessons closely and try to discuss and correct our mistakes based on it. You are a blessing for students like us who did not got benefited from private tutors and practice centers.
@jackboss8605
@jackboss8605 Жыл бұрын
You are best ielts teacher on KZfaq
@clementinabanda7267
@clementinabanda7267 2 жыл бұрын
This is so helpful, thanks Chris
@yemisifemi-pius7502
@yemisifemi-pius7502 5 жыл бұрын
Consumption of processed food is much higher among people now compared to the past. This is because they are readily available and easily accessible. This increased consumption leads to a rise in the occurrence of chronic health conditions in those who eat these foods. Nowadays, people eat more of fast foods due to the fact that they are easy to access. This is because they are produced to become ready-to-eat and this helps to save time from cooking. They are often prepackaged making them convenient for the consumers. As a result of busier schedules of most people, this easy access makes these foods attractive and thus increases its consumption. A recent study in Lagos metropolis in Nigeria, showed that the number of fast food outlets have quadrupled in the last decade and these outlets experience higher patronage from the general populace. People who consume a significant amount of processed foods are likely to develop chronic health conditions. This is because these foods contain high amounts of sugar, sodium and fat which lead to obesity, heart disease and high blood pressure when they are consumed significantly. Also, the physical and chemical processes that these foods undergo causes their nutrients to be released easily when they are eaten. This makes the people that eat them to be more predisposed to developing these diseases. A recent research revealed that diets rich in fat and sugar cause obesity and processed foods are the major source of food in obese patients. In conclusion, increased consumption of fast foods is a result of easy access to them and these higher consumption has led to the occurrence of chronic health conditions.
@yang5616
@yang5616 5 жыл бұрын
how many scores can be given to this essay? 7 or 8?
@realestzan
@realestzan 4 жыл бұрын
@@yang5616 8.5 i guess
@yang5616
@yang5616 4 жыл бұрын
ilikeskies really?
@sehrishahsan5321
@sehrishahsan5321 5 жыл бұрын
People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects? It had been observed that trend has been shifted from cooked to processed foods and is significantly increasing when compared to the past.This essay will discuss the probable reasons behind the change of food eating habits and it’s possible consequences. Gruelling and hectic working hours have left people with limited relaxation hours for themselves.People tend to prioritize their leisure time by spending more on meditation,exercise,entertainment and with their families than utilizing it in making dishes.Thus people prefer preserved foods at homes as well as on their work places instead of making them at home which is tiring and time consuming at the same time.Moreover,these processed foods are easily available and one can easily get hold of them from any near by utility score since they can be instantly prepared and consumed. Processed foods are canned or stored food items packed with preservatives to increase their shelf life.The preservatives in most canned foods are actually chemicals that require optimum temperature to maintain the product half life.For instance a research at king’s college London has reported the development of diabetes in canned food consumers because of use of sugars added in the product.These ready made food products have other deleterious effects on human body,increased cholesterol levels and obesity to name a few.If these canned products are not maintained in optimum conditions,the additives can serve as an ideal medium for bacterial growth and reproduction producing infections in its consumers it is exemplified by botulism infection seen in people consuming food products that are not adequately subjected to cold storage. To conclude consumption of processed food needs to be contained by individuals to avoid lethal diseases and infections in human race.
@anmolpreetsingh3870
@anmolpreetsingh3870 3 жыл бұрын
This only based one present life or times not past. Therefore, compare present with past. Otherwise, this will effect your TR score. All in all this is good essay. Keep it up.👍
@1zunkechi49
@1zunkechi49 Жыл бұрын
Helpful tips. Thank you Chris
@ravindraacademy1999
@ravindraacademy1999 4 жыл бұрын
Fabulous!Thanks a lot for this great effort to provide such valuable comparison of writing .it is most productive .
@ravindraacademy1999
@ravindraacademy1999 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks a lot for this great love.
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