REVEALING my IVY LEAGUE Personal Statement (NO-BS Common App Essay Guide)

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Watch this video to keep your admissions officer glued to your personal statement. Trust me, don't fumble the bag with your Common App Essay.
Contents:
0:00 - Essay guide by a normal person
1:12 - An Introduction to Tonality
3:18 - READING MY ESSAY
6:18 - Crafting a CRISPY intro & closing
10:05 - The CORE Message (What Colleges NEED to know)
13:24 - W Reader retention using tone
15:11 - HUMOR: Are you actually funny or nah
17:17 - Have you genuinely dealt with hardship?
19:51 - Pacing & Ideal Word Count
22:57 - BONUS: Coming up with AMAZING ideas

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@jadakamau7341 Жыл бұрын

STOP this is such a clever, and engaging essay. I watched hundreds of similar videos and this is in my top 3!!!!!!

@BABYSTARZ 11 ай бұрын

it rly isnt

@GulalaiSher 11 ай бұрын

@@BABYSTARZ How so?

@imauz1127 10 ай бұрын

@@BABYSTARZ alright babystarz

@Charleslihan0211 10 ай бұрын

what the other 2 top essays in your list? can you share them?

@bsraelcan 9 ай бұрын

What are the other two on top three??

@scottjackson163 9 ай бұрын

I got into Stanford and Brown (the only two schools to which I applied) for graduate school. Years later, after I had completed my A.M. at Stanford, I wrote the school to get a copy of my application. I wanted to remind myself of what I had submitted as an essay. I thought the essay was pretentious rubbish. There is no substitute for luck in this world.

@TTAGGGTTAGGG 8 ай бұрын

I really hope luck is on my side on Nov 1st because without divine intervention, I’m not getting into these institutions.

@aether_444 8 ай бұрын

applying to only stanford and brown is CRAZY LOL but glad it worked out for you hahahaha

@happyleggo9904 7 ай бұрын

I'm sure the essay played a part, but you must've been a good student and an overachiever to get in those schools.

@viijackiiv9713 7 ай бұрын

Very happy that you got in, but to anyone reading this please DON'T only apply to your dream schools. Its very possible that you will get in, but it doesn't hurt to spend just a few hours adapting your application to a safety school in case that you don't get accepted.

@happyleggo9904 7 ай бұрын

@@viijackiiv9713 Definitely. I'm applying for colleges this year, and my safety is one that guarantees admission if you have a 3.0 GPA and all of the necessary credits to graduate.

@attaboyspider3129 10 ай бұрын

The most important part of a college essay is telling a story of who you are. The personal statement has to do that AND combine with activities with the ECS so college admissions can tell you are not lost. Im guessing thats what P did especially how he talked abt research and no doubt prolly had internships in research and won awards in that field which made him essay stronger.

@ilostmyearpodsbtwiamhannah815 11 ай бұрын

Literally one of the most creative essays I have heard

@matthewchen8229 Жыл бұрын

My man preaching P be straight SAVIN my essays fr. Appreciate u my brotha 🙏💯

@awesomeyoutuber173 Жыл бұрын

yo keep pumping out that fire content bro. gonna share this with the boys on the college grind bc this is straight up the best advice on youtube

@Eggysmother-ik3mh 10 ай бұрын

Wonderful video. Preaching P, you give solid advice. This video gave GREAT advice. Not only that, you went into step-by-step detail on how to write such an essay. Thanks!

@samarthram2651 Жыл бұрын

You're like my wise older brother fr. Keep making that quality content my guy.

@user-rg2kc2wc1s 10 ай бұрын

Dude, this is actually so well-articulated. Tysm!

@lolipeaches6616 10 ай бұрын

Am i the only one who finds his voice calming? Thank you man , you gave me hopes for my college applications 😊

@admissionsgames 9 ай бұрын

Solid example of using an experience from every day life that relates to what you want to do. Kudos.

@limesneeze-hypixelminecraf8633 11 ай бұрын

this is a banger essay. i'm a rising senior and this is rly helpful, thanks!

@tory3964 9 ай бұрын

This is the best, the one and only Personal Statement video an applicant needs to watch. Like there is absolutely no reason to watch other videos, this guy gave the best advice.

@insight2 8 ай бұрын

what prompt did he write it for?

@zanmar6764 10 ай бұрын

This is incredibly helpful.Thank you for making all these videos.

@makhdoomafuad2607 9 ай бұрын

You are a literal king for this 👑

@shadman9758 8 ай бұрын

i love this guy's channel. Bro is funny and gives good advice at the same time

@arthurzhao6678 7 ай бұрын

one of the best personal statement videos I have ever seen

@kit7475 10 ай бұрын

This is actually so fire I love it

@sssonotnosh 7 ай бұрын

this is the best essay i've ever read

@diegojiang374 7 ай бұрын

This is literally the best PS advice video

@rali6350 Жыл бұрын

The algorithm needs to help this guy’s message get out there. 10 days out from Yale EA. This is coming in clutch.

@towardsuniverse Ай бұрын

Idk why 10 second into him reading the essay I felt tears from my eyes. Idk why I was moved by his essay!❤

@xs-2004 Жыл бұрын

You are a real inspiration, I guaranteed you will go somewhere 🎉👍👍

@Jokkkkke 5 ай бұрын

My neighbor, who did her PhD in anthropology at Yale and her post-doc at Cornell, would really advise not to do this on your grad school application. He doesn't stick to what should be the focus of most peoples' grad school statement: their academic interests. On top of that, he also uses way too many A-grade synonyms and unconventional, sometimes long-winded, sentence structures. She says you have to keep it simple, yet formal because the admissions officer only has so much time

@Bunny20139 5 ай бұрын

This guy is the GOAT

@cjdenney9385 7 ай бұрын

Okay AMAZING content and congrats on ur accomplishments! But also how do you style your hair? It's exactly what I'm going for lol

@juliethlambert1841 7 ай бұрын

Thank you for this! It was super helpful

@oliviamou60 9 ай бұрын

wow your essay was incredible

@prabhatkiranchaulagain1095 9 ай бұрын

25:03 Bro, I subbed, particularly for your real laugh and sharing!

@elizustun8934 10 ай бұрын

WHATT? BEST AND MOST CLEVER ESSAY

@humanscums Жыл бұрын

Damn👀, you cracked the code bruh🗿

@gowthamnaiduponnana7331 7 ай бұрын

Exactly seeing this video after a year! Oct 21st, 2023. applying to Dartmouth as ED. Wish me best of luck and give some tips

@destdrom Жыл бұрын

love ur vids Tikha masala!

@AahilMahmood 10 ай бұрын

My fav line of this whole video "Bro! Are we in the second grade!" This killed me !!!!!!!!!

@neeeeeaae4736 5 ай бұрын

Essay was fire

@BigmanHaus 9 ай бұрын

The thing is, you probably had a very strong application outside the essay. Meanwhile there is me, who needs it to explain that I'm not the low tier idiot both my gpa and SAT point at.

@curiousglasses8924 11 ай бұрын

Quick question, when you said no quotes in the opening, did you mean no quotes like Albert Einstein said this, or did you mean no quotations like for example you're telling a story and you open with your mom dropping you off to some place saying "Make sure to text me when to pick you up!" (like that would also be a quote but I believe you meant no quotes as in an Albert Einstein type)?

@litete2512 11 ай бұрын

Probably not any of those

@MrJoey18 11 ай бұрын

Ye age meant don’t make quotes from other people but I wouldn’t suggest doing eithet

@nysajain3778 9 ай бұрын

the quote thing is so true, its overused WAY too much

@nehavivek7902 Жыл бұрын

I know you briefly mentioned it but could you make a video about your research? Like how you got your ideas, labs and how you actually conducted it? I really want to do research but I'm lost on where to start.

@preachingp Жыл бұрын

Research is a whole process in itself. I'll definitely make a vid on this topic

@Charleslihan0211 10 ай бұрын

which prompt is this?

@sceneslab Жыл бұрын

umm.. what are some of the basic things that must be present in common app essay

@caylawaddington385 9 ай бұрын

Y'all wild, I liked this video but I start my essays with quotes from me. I'm a gun violence prevention activist and I like, chant phrases for protests and it works for me. Quote yourself.

@savannahingledew4777 7 ай бұрын

thank you

@scuti7073 10 ай бұрын

No omobamaepia to hook the reader. End on a good note Vary adjectives I need to write a sob story Do not bring up your achievements unless it contributes to the story You write a little bit more then edit it to condense forces u to keep the essential

@neeeeeaae4736 5 ай бұрын

How is his essay a sob story???

@shashankmadala28 11 ай бұрын

@Preaching P what college did you attend?

@jay.r.d Жыл бұрын

Let’s gooo

@minifishy7162 8 ай бұрын

Its so funny how divided this comment section is, good luck to everyone applying in the coming months!

@lmaowww3449 10 ай бұрын

@preachingp I know you said don't start your essay with a quote...but could I if the quote is about me? Like It starts with my name.

@minifishy7162 8 ай бұрын

Honestly, drop the quote. But it's hard to imagine it won't come off as elitist. Personal Essay is not the time for accolades.

@David.124 10 ай бұрын

Wow this confuses me because people always say to show your personality/personal life in your essay but this is more story telling

@analysis726 7 ай бұрын

there’s no one right way to do it

@neeeeeaae4736 5 ай бұрын

A GOOD ESSAY IS A GOOD ESSAY!! you’re supposed to think of your essay as a STORY and your story says a lot about YOU!!!

@DSCuber-28-01-2019 11 ай бұрын

Did you actually experience the plot of the essay, and actually made an Arduino project for it? Or was it just all from your mind. Can we make up stuff like this for essays?

@minhanhnguyen2250 10 ай бұрын

i think essay can have a degree of exaggeration but not making stuff up, thats j fake. I dont think he made up ab the adruino detail cuz its not worth the time making that up lmaoo

@michaelman6700 2 ай бұрын

which prompt is it

@MariadeLourdesAniesSanch-ze7hf 7 ай бұрын

I like change

@MariadeLourdesAniesSanch-ze7hf 7 ай бұрын

because people never choose me

@lamebudseeneye2440 Жыл бұрын

Bro makes my essay seem like a joke.

@hankhudson8736 Жыл бұрын

It’s really well written, but shouldn’t personal statements try to show off ur achievements and connect ur self to the major u intend to pursue?

@lamebudseeneye2440 Жыл бұрын

you obviously didn't watch the whole video

@hankhudson8736 Жыл бұрын

@@lamebudseeneye2440 yea I wrote it before I got to that part. Still I think the essay should at least elaborate on accomplishments and draw a connection bw them to ur intended major

@preachingp Жыл бұрын

Aight bro so I pretty much never reply to comments along these lines because I feel arguing is futile, but because I think you have good intentions I'll make an exception. If you're interested in applying to BS/MD programs, your personal statement is absolutely NOT the place to talk about your major and intended career interests. When 90%+ colleges already ask a "why do you want to be a doctor?" essay, there is no reason to redundantly add information here. Secondly, regardless of your major, the goal of the personal statement is still not to talk about accomplishments and your intended major in college. It's to provide colleges with an insight into your personality, something that is nearly impossible to convey anywhere else. There are few awards out there that would really need any more explanation for an admissions officer to understand their significance. And, if you needed to elaborate, then the additional information section is perfect for that. In regards to your major, colleges still don't really care about drawing the connection. For example, if you're applying as a CS-major and you NEED to explain to colleges how the clubs you're involved in and the awards you've won have led to this decision (i.e. it's not implicit), then there is a whole different problem here. Once you can truly understand the purpose of the personal statement, the writing just falls into place.

@hankhudson8736 Жыл бұрын

@@preachingp hey man, sorry abt the late reply I’ve been busy these last few days. I gotcha, I’m applying as an Econ Major but most of my activities and awards are music related. I think you’re right, but since I don’t hv many Econ related things, I’m going to be in the case you described where I have to connect my activities to my major - but I’ll keep it brief since the personality factor u mentioned is significant. Thanks for the advice man and keep up the banger vids. I watch a lot of self improvement channels and you are the best spoken and concise

@djpanda6133 10 ай бұрын

Personal statements which show off achievements and connect you to your essay are for UK and European colleges, US essays are completely different.

@shree__806 11 ай бұрын

Hi. I am confused how to start my essay. What can I do?

@idostuff2671 10 ай бұрын

you should probably write a hook that catches the readers' or reader's attention. I don't really know how to explain it more than that.

@neeeeeaae4736 5 ай бұрын

Think of something in your life that you problem solved

@kiannahom 11 ай бұрын

I tried looking at this video, but had unfortunately seen another video of yours (kzfaq.info/get/bejne/rc6eZJWgy97VXYk.html) which may have prejudiced me. The long length of this video may not have helped. Anyway I saw the gist - the essay itself was good. You are also a very fluent speaker and I hope you are able to develop your full potential.

@adkhambekyashnarbekov5758 8 ай бұрын

Good one

@adititiwari9509 10 ай бұрын

😩💕

@mcpsquad6647 Ай бұрын

Meanwhile me: cut down the tree

@oliviamou60 9 ай бұрын

can u help review my essays?

@hilol1364 8 ай бұрын

birds

@ryanshulman201 5 ай бұрын

bro i actually like that essay, but in my opinion the intro is a little too pretentious when it comes to the vocabulary. like you say "use your own voice" and then say stuff like "horrendous screeching... shatters my peaceful sleep," "cacophonous cry," "delicate creature." Nobody talks like that bro. I didn't say that kind of stuff and got into all the schools I applied to (including

@neeeeeaae4736 5 ай бұрын

Using rare words shows intelligence you don’t need more than 5 rare words in your essay that nobody knows