TOEFL Writing: Writing for an Academic Discussion (New Question)

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Күн бұрын

Here's a new sample TOEFL Writing for Academic Discussion question with two answers.
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@ninochapidze6819
@ninochapidze6819 4 ай бұрын
Hello! I owe you a big thanks. I am convinced that your videos and suggestions played a pivotal role in helping me score 108. Thanks again
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 4 ай бұрын
Great job! I am so happy to have helped a bit! What's next for you?
@lisatsui37
@lisatsui37 25 күн бұрын
In my opinion, there are many benefits to remote work. First, similar to what Ronald mentions, people may be more productive when working at home because they are not bothered by their coworkers. From my personal experience, I find myself studying more efficiently when I am not with my classmates. I would just keep chatting with others if I were surrounded by them. Second, working at home provides a flexible schedule and eliminates commute time, which can also contribute to productivity. Furthermore, remote work offers a good chance for parents who need to take care of their children while working at the same time. Considering these advantages, I support the idea of remote work. Thanks for providing these videos and study materials!!
@usmanismail4130
@usmanismail4130 7 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thanks for this, I got to your channel based on a friend's recommendation. This is my first trial on the TOEFL writing without any tips: Remote work has its advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, it is beneficial to both the companies and the employees. First, remote work will reduce the cost of huge logistics to be prepared by the companies in order to accommodate their workers physically. This same importance goes to the workers as they will be saved from the extra expenses and stress of commuting to work daily. On the other hand, remote work will reduce productivity if not properly managed unlike in the case of physical work setting. Also, it will not foster workplace togetherness as employees will not interact physically. In conclusion, companies need to be very wary of the pros and cons before deciding on adopting remote work styles.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
Don't mash the enter key after every sentence. Write a real paragraph!
@sabasoltani-su7of
@sabasoltani-su7of 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for helping us. This is my response: While some may think that working in an office workplace is a good idea, I believe that remote work is a beneficial feature for employees. To begin with, people can save huge amounts of money by working from home because they do not have commuting costs, and they can spend their income on important things such as exercising in order to be in good shape and maintain their physical and mental health. As a result, staff’s working efficiency and productivity will improve, making an outstanding contribution to a better working atmosphere. Besides, remote working would be so useful for both the environment and people because there is no need to use cars and transportation that puts a lot of CO2 into the atmosphere and leads to various illnesses and environmental issues.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I would just say "is beneficial for employees." That is more natural than sticking "feature" in there. I would say "stay in good shape." The sentence beginning with "as a result" is mangled. I would say: "As a result, they are more efficient and productive, and help create a better atmosphere overall." There are other issues, but I will leave it at that. Overall, I think this one might score 22 or 23 points.
@vladanvasic3233
@vladanvasic3233 9 ай бұрын
Hey Michal, I am very thankful for your videos. They really help me prepare better for this new task. Here is my response: The topic of remote work caused much discussion in recent years. My personal beleif is that working form home brings so much advantages that outweigh disadvantages heavily. For example, when the covid-19 pandemic virus emerged, many companies were in danger because their employees could not travel to the office. If they did not move to remote working, the business would have stumbled, their net worth would have decreased significantly and there would be tons of layoffs. The remote work was a kind of saviour in that situation as businesses kept running normally. I totally agree with Ronald's ponits and would like to add that everyone can make their home office comfortable and convenient for work. Moreover, many people complain about stress and anxiety when working in the same office with colleagues. A lot of people do not like at all when their work is being closely watched and monitored. But, when working from home, everyone can create their perfect environment when they can be the most productive. Also, they do not need to stress out whether they made enough progress because nobody is watching them in person.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This is good, but you might want to slow down and focus more on grammatical correctness. There are a few errors like: "caused much discussion" (should be "HAS caused much discussion") "so much advantages" (should be "so many advantages") "to the office" (should be "to their offices") There are more, but I think you get the point. Overall, this one would probably score about 22 points.
@la_luna_08
@la_luna_08 5 ай бұрын
Hi Michael! Thank you for your kindness! Here is my response, can’t wait to hear back from you: I believe work from home is more beneficial than detrimental. I agreed with Ronald when he said that it increases productivity because less distractions from being in the office and having other duties with coworkers. I don’t believe work from home affects relationships, promotions or prevents from getting raises. I actually believe push people to work on those skills to communicate through other ways, like chats, where you can actually respond when you have time. Work from home is beneficial for moms. They can balance motherhood with working. I support working from home, and I believe more companies should push for this.
@manavranawat6712
@manavranawat6712 9 ай бұрын
Hey Michael, thanks for taking your time. This is my response: This is a challenging topic, but I think that working remotely is more beneficial and a good idea. I strongly agree with Ronald that remote work saves a lot of commute time and is very flexible. I'd add that while working, we can spend some quality time with our family. For example, when working from home, when we take a short break, we can go for a short walk or have a relaxing lunch with our partner, children, or even a friend. This will help us take our minds off work and, hence, concentrate better on it later. Karen raised a valuable point that it is harder to collaborate and build relationships with colleagues, but she misses that nowadays, teammates can connect via Zoom video calls and collaborate easily. There are even social media apps that help them stay connected.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This is pretty good, but there are some grammar and language use errors. Like: "saves a lot of commute time" (should be something like "reduces the time we spend commuting") "This will help" (should be "This helps") Otherwise, I'm pretty happy. Just try to avoid repeating words too often. I think this one would score 25 or 26 points. Nice work.
@thematrix1308
@thematrix1308 10 ай бұрын
I would argue that remote work is beneficial in multiple ways. To illustrate, One of the drawbacks of working in an office is that it limits employees to spend less time with their families. Spending quality time with family is of paramount importance for individuals. Therefore, workers should have the right to be with their loved ones more often. This can be achieved when employees should work from their homes. Take my father, for example. He works in CRS, a charity organization in the USA. Before the pandemic, he used to work from his office every day. He barely had time to spend with us. However, right after the pandemic, he could not continue working from his office due to the difficulties and limitations of the time. As a result, he had to work from home. It has been four years since then. Now he has more time to spend with us, which is superb.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Watch out for simple typos like the capital on "One." Note the proper usage of "limits." You should have said: "it limits employees from SPENDING time with their families." Otherwise, I like your work a lot. I think it would score about 26 points. Just try to use a few more coordinating conjunctions to add complexity to your grammar.
@helyasehat5501
@helyasehat5501 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for your help. This is my response: While it might seem appealing to denounce remote work because of its few drawbacks, I personally believe remote work outweighs office work. Remote work will allow the workers to manage their schedules flexibly and strike a balance between their jobs and other aspects of their lives. In a remote job, employees spend less time in traffic to get to work and get back home, and in this way, they are more energetic both during work hours and after that. Take my experience as an effective example. I have done remote work for the past few months, and I feel healthier and more delightful because now I have enough time to go to the gym and visit my friends in my free time after work hours, which I could not manage to do due to the hours I need to spend commuting to work and back home and the feeling of fatigue afterward.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Don't say that something "outweighs" something else. The proper use is more like "the advantages of XXXXX outweigh those of YYYYY." This is a decent answer, otherwise, and would likely score about 24 points.
@emnsl4549
@emnsl4549 3 ай бұрын
Hi Michael. Thanks for your advices. This is my response : People are divided into two on this issue, but I strongly believe that remote work is beneficial. There are lots of reasons why I feel this way. First of all, on remote work since you don’t have to go to office every day, you will save time. While saving time, you save money and your company doesn’t have to rent a parking lot or give you an allowance for commuting. Second, people can be more creative while working freely at home. There is no one to disturb them. However, I agree with the one who opposes remote work at one point. It is that it can not be adopted to every work. For instance; as an officer, you can’t fight at home; or you can’t clean the streets while working at home as a cleaning person.
@pascalsander5284
@pascalsander5284 8 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for helping us. This is my response: While some people might believe that remote work can benefit the overall productivity, many forget to consider the distractions and the loss of social interaction which can occur. Since you do not have to travel to work and save a lot of time, the productivity might increase in some cases. In my opinion, one has to clearly separate the job from the private life, in order to truly maintain focus while working and be effective. Not to forget there is a huge temptation to multitask and take more and longer breaks, so from my point of view there are very little to no benefits from regularly working from home.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
This is good. But make a few adjustments like : "your productivity might increase..." and "separate THEIR job from THEIR private" Also, aim for about 120-130 words if you can. I think this one is a bit short.
@premsadre3921
@premsadre3921 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for helping us. This is my response: Whether remote working or working in an office depends on various factors, including the nature of work, personal preference, and job requirements, in my opinion, working remotely is much better than working in an office as it offers great flexibility in terms of when and where you work. You can set your work environment as per your requirements also it saves time and money by not having to commute to the office. I strongly agree with Ronald's idea that People find them more productive when working from home as they are not distracted by their co-workers, I'd add that working remotely, helps you focus on the work more as there is less distraction. Hence, working remotely is beneficial.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
There are just too many grammar and punctuation errors here to score much more than 18 or 19 points. You need to study grammar.
@ronn-qo4lu
@ronn-qo4lu 10 ай бұрын
Thank you Michael🎉
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 10 ай бұрын
Any time!
@mohammad_gheidi_1998
@mohammad_gheidi_1998 10 ай бұрын
In my opinion, remote work is a mostly positive trend. I strongly support Ronald when he mentions the increased flexibility and productivity at home. For example, when employees work from the convenience of their home, they do not have to dress formally, so they can choose a dress that they are more comfortable with. In addition, while they are at home, they can spend time with their family members during breaks. Not only does this refresh their minds and recharge their batteries, but it also provides them with more work-life balance. Karen suggests that workers have to be physically present at the workplace, so they can build relationships, but she doesn't take into account the fact that collaboration and networking can easily be achieved using video calls and social media. In conclusion, I am of the opinion that the advantages of remote work far outweigh its minor disadvantages.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This is good work, but there are errors here and there. Like: "at home" (should be something like "of working at home") "choose a dress" (should be something like "choose an outfit") Otherwise, I like this a lot. I think it would score about 26 or 27 points. Nice work!
@amjadtawfik
@amjadtawfik 8 ай бұрын
You're doing a great thing to us thank you sooooooo much
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
Thanks for your kind words!
@ppp34
@ppp34 9 ай бұрын
Hi, Mr. Michael, thanks for taking your time. This is my response. From my perspective, I agree with Ronald's idea that remote work is beneficial to employees. As mentioned by Ronald, people do not have to allocate time to commute if they are allowed to work at home. Without the limitation of geographic distance, employees are able to engage themselves in work without spending time taking a taxi, finding a parking lot, and walking to their offices, thus sparing a large quantity of time on their jobs. Apart from what Ronald has raised, I add that home-working helps people save a lot of money as well. It is well-known that most employees, living distantly from their companies, tend to drive private cars or take a train to work, by which they should spend some money on traffic fees such as gasoline and tickets; on the contrary, such expenditure will not exist if citizens are able to work at home. Therefore, due to these advantages, remote work, without doubt, should be advocated.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Good evening! This is pretty good, but you have room for improvement. Don't use "from my perspective" AND "I agree with." Just pick one, as using both is redundant and awkward. Change "allocate time to commute" to "spend time commuting," which is more natural. Change "living distantly from their companies" to "living far from their companies." There are other little issues, but I think you get the point. Overall, I think this one would score 23 or 24 points.
@ethanqiu4994
@ethanqiu4994 9 ай бұрын
Hello Michael, thanks for your time. Below is my response. I totally agree with Ronald that remote work is a positive trend. Commute is definite a key factor. Take myself for instance, every day I have to spend almost 2 hours on commuting, which is not only time-consuming but also exhausting. Each time I arrive my office I feel tired and sleepy, and it will always take me some time recovering from tiredness. I also agree with that working at home can be more productive. In addition to not being disturbed by co-workers, working in a comfortable and flexible environment can make people more concentrated and efficient. Through Karen presented a compelling argument that remote work is not helpful to collaborate effectively, nowadays technologies have already greatly improved the situation. With the help of online meeting and other electronic equipment, people can easily communicate and cooperate with their colleagues without meeting them personally.
@ethanqiu4994
@ethanqiu4994 9 ай бұрын
*though Karen…😂
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Hello! This is pretty decent, but there are some grammar and language use errors you should watch out for. Like: 1. If you want to use "take myself for instance" it should be a standalone sentence. Stick a period after "for instance." 2. "Every time I arrive" is more natural here than "each time I arrive" (don't ask me why) 3. Better is "does not help people to collaborate..." There are other issues, but I will leave it at that for now. Overall, I think this one would score about 23 points.
@user-zt4rw1nf3z
@user-zt4rw1nf3z 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for your help ! This is my response : While I appreciate the points mentioned by Ronald and Karen, I think that remote work can both beneficial or bad depending on the circumstances. First, remote work is great for international companies that have clients and employees all over the world. In other words, remote work helps reduce work travel and contributes to making meetings more efficient for people connecting from different countries. For example, a client contacting a lawyer from another country for a specific transaction involving this second country, would be very pleased to know that meeting and working remotely is possible. However, remote work also leads to isolation and a weaker team spirit. Indeed, simple interactions in the every day office routine help build bonds between colleagues. For instance, when working in the office, people take common breaks, chat and have lunch together. Hence, remote work seems to be occasionally a good idea.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
You really ought to pick a side. Don't write a response that tries to support both sides of the discussion.
@Clover-ed5pl
@Clover-ed5pl 9 ай бұрын
Hi, Michael. Thanks for your nice channel. It really helps! This is my response: This is a challenging topic, but I believe remote work brings more positive influences than negative ones. I strongly agree with Roland’s perspective that working from home saves annoying commuting time and provides flexible work schedules. I would further add that remote working makes it possible to work everywhere. With convenient online connections, companies can hire qualified people without the constriction of geography. While Karen raised the relevant point that face-to-face interactions can maintain a better relationship, she ignored that colleges can exchange ideas efficiently via social media. Moreover, they can even use video meetings to see each other like physical ones.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
This is pretty good, but you have a few awkward sentences like: "brings more positive influences" (should be something like "has more positive effects") "saves annoying commuting time" (should be something like "eliminates annoying commutes") "without the constriction of geography" (should be something like "without geographic restrictions") There are others, but I will leave it at that. Overall, I think this answer would score about 23 points.
@Clover-ed5pl
@Clover-ed5pl 8 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources Thank you very much!
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
My pleasure! When will you take the test?
@nazaninrabani
@nazaninrabani 4 ай бұрын
Hi Michael. Thanks for your advices. This is my response : While this is certainly a controversial topic, I believe that remote work has beneficial impacts on human life. By engaging in remote work, humans can spend more time with their families, thereby reducing the distance among them. I appreciate Ronald’s idea that remote works enables us to have more flexible hours. I would add that when individuals can work from home, they save effective time to do other high priority tasks such as exercising or reading books. Karen raised a relevant point that remote work may prevent us from promoting in our jobs but she may not be aware that as long as tasks are completed properly, income potential can still increase, even while not physically in the office.
@levsiii
@levsiii 9 ай бұрын
Best TOEFL Teacher!
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Thanks for the kind words!
@poonamkundnani2393
@poonamkundnani2393 9 ай бұрын
Hi! I appreciate your efforts thank you. In my opinion, remote work is beneficial. I strongly concur with Ronald for holding the stance on the benefits of remote work, including avoidance of energy-draining commutes and office distractions. I would like to add that by remote work people can work in international companies, which is an amazing opportunity that individuals should seize. For instance, If an individual making a transition to a new country, he will have to pay for all the living expenses. However, remote work cuts down the expenses and allows people to receive invaluable experience from their home country. While Karen has raised a pertinent point of holding people back from earning promotions or a raise and about the lack of room at home, she might have overlooked other privileges. Thus, I believe remote work is beneficial.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
There are a few things I would change: "concur with Ronald for holding the stance on the benefits of remote work" (should be: "agree with Ronald's stance on the benefits of remote work" "by remote work" (should be: "thanks to remote work") "all the living expenses" (should be: "all his living expenses") There are more issues, but I will leave it at that! I think this one would score about 22 points.
@AlirezaGhafouri
@AlirezaGhafouri 8 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for helping us. This is my response: This is challenging topic due to the advantages of both situations, but I would go for choosing remote work because of its frequent advantages. First, I believe that remote work can overcome many issues of today’s society. For instance, nowadays we face traffic problem in most of the cities and it can get employees into difficulties to arrive to the company’s location. Therefore, remote work can help employees to save their time considerably, as Ronald mentioned. Moreover, workers can save a lot of money by choosing remote work, thanks to the advancements of the internet, technology, fast communication applications, etc. Thus, workers do not need any more to spend much money to take themselves to the company that can be so far from their home. Another great benefit of this approach is providing the chance for employees who may suffer from illness since they can stay home and do their duties without putting their coworkers at risk. In conclusion, numerous advantages of remote work outweigh its adverse effects and this is a better choice in my vision.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
This is pretty good. Just don't use "I would go for" as that will always be awkward. Try simply "but I would choose remote...". I also dislike "many issues of today's society" which is awkward to me as well. I would say "can help us overcome many issues in modern society." Don't use "etc." I think this one would score about 23 points.
@AlirezaGhafouri
@AlirezaGhafouri 7 ай бұрын
Thank you very much💙@@Toeflresources
@mahdirezaie3380
@mahdirezaie3380 9 ай бұрын
Hii Michael, thank you for helping. This is my response to this question.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Checked!
@mahdirezaie3380
@mahdirezaie3380 9 ай бұрын
I totally agree with Karen that relationships are made by working in the same working environment with our colleagues and, I would add that directly contacting with coworkers helps individuals more in order to receive promotions. In addition, employees can benefit from other experts by constantly attending work every day so, they are more likely to succeed by this procedure. While Ronald is right about flexible hours in working from houses but, he ignored working continually at home will be remarkably boring and enduring that is more challenging comparing to working in offices. Overall if we attend the offices instead of working from home, we are really more prone to advance in our future.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Remember to put the comma BEFORE "and." Not after it. Just use "directly contacting coworkers." Don't use "with" in there. But the comma BEFORE "but." Not after it. I think this one would score about 21 points, but I bet you can do better!
@marcoj3309
@marcoj3309 8 ай бұрын
thanks alot🙂
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
Most welcome 😊
@user-jz2cr3jf2q
@user-jz2cr3jf2q 9 ай бұрын
My personal belief is that remote work is a desirable development, empowering both the companies and employees to ease their financial burden. For one thing, work from home means the decreased demand for physical positions and possibly less need for other assets like computers, tables and chairs. For another, employees who don’t commute often don’t need to bear the cost of public transportation fares or taxi. Both sides could allocate the money saved in other areas, so this is definitely a win-win situation. On the face of it, there may be less teamwork and less opportunities for promotion. However, this is only because that some staff are still not accustomed to this working pattern. They will eventually adapt themselves well into this new atmosphere and make contribution as in the physical office. What's further, in the light of employee motivation and development, there will still be reasonable evaluation mechanism from the management in the long run, ensuring a promising and sustainable career development for all staff.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Thi is pretty decent, and would probably score about 24 or 25 points. You are weak when it comes to articles, though, so spend some time studying that aspect of English grammar.
@animals5280
@animals5280 9 ай бұрын
Hi Micheal, thanks a lot for all the helpful feedback I got 113 in toefl, with listening: 30, reading: 29, speaking: 27 and writing: 27
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Great job! I am so happy to have helped a bit! What's next for you?
@animals5280
@animals5280 9 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources hoping for 320+ gre score
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Best of luck to you! Let me know how the GRE goes. :)
@kerkenikhouloud6515
@kerkenikhouloud6515 8 ай бұрын
thank you so much for your enourmous work Michael, this is my response While I appreciate the points mentioned by Ronald and Karen, I am convinced that whether remote work is serendipitous or not depends on personal circumstances or interests. First, what works for me may not work for you. For example, for some people, whose houses are really noisy and full of distractions coming from toddlers or neighbors or any other source, working from home is a bad option for them. But for others, let's say someone who has more than just one job, they don’t have time to spend it on commuting from one workplace to another, and if they do it would be so strenuous for them especially in the long run, so it is so much easier for them to just get their tasks done at home. Also, and this is mostly about introverts or people who lack a given experience, or skills, particularly social communication skills. It's a rewarding course of action to attend the workplace, surround themselves with their coworkers in order to learn from them, train to express themselves more clearly or to be more persuasive, build a network and make friends, learn from their colleagues’ mistakes or their own mistakes.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
Pick a side. Pick a side. Pick a side.
@kerkenikhouloud6515
@kerkenikhouloud6515 8 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources @Toeflresources sounds like a prevalent mistake that many students make. Ok sir, i will do that, though i'm not convinced why. because the test measures my English proficiency not my opinions and it's just 10 mins. Thank you anyway Sir ☺
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
Yeah, I agree that measuring English proficiency is the main purpose of the TOEFL. But you do have to answer the question you are given. Honestly, you MIGHT be able to get away with not picking a side, but it isn't worth the risk.
@kerkenikhouloud6515
@kerkenikhouloud6515 8 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources understood, thanks a lot ☺
@gayaneshekoyan1132
@gayaneshekoyan1132 9 ай бұрын
Hii Michael, thank you for helping us. This is my response to this question. While I can see where Roland is coming from, I am confident that remote work is not beneficial for both employers and employees. Remember that working remotely, many people will face health issues since they spend time sitting in front of a computer, and without even having a chance to commute. I believe that spending time traveling from home to work ensures some physical activity which will help workers be in shape. I strongly agree with Karen's point of view that working in place will help create relationships between employees and employers. I would add that managers usually look carefully at their staff members while they are working. Thus, working remotely will not give the whole image of a team. It is also worth mentioning that when people work together in a particular area, they are likely to make friends and spend time with each other.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
There are a few little errors. Like: "not beneficial for both employers and employees" (pretty good, but better is: "...for EITHER employers or employees." "which will help" (better is "which helps") "working in place" ("working in an office" or something similar) Overall, though, I like this a lot and think it would score about 26 points.
@ParvathySasi
@ParvathySasi 8 ай бұрын
In my view, the shift from traditional work arrangements to remote work holds numerous advantages. I strongly agree with Ronald’s assertion that remote work enhances productivity and flexibility. For example, when employees work from the comfort of their own homes, they have the freedom to dress in a manner that suits their comfort. Additionally, remote work allows them to use their break time to spend with their families, refreshing their minds and reducing stress. Furthermore, remote work minimizes distractions from co-workers, fostering a more focused work environment. While Karen raises concerns about remote work's impact on relationships among colleagues and career promotions, it's essential to consider the benefits of remote work in this digital age. Collaboration and networking can be effortlessly achieved through various online platforms and social media. In conclusion, I firmly believe that the advantages of remote work far outweigh its minor disadvantages.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
I like it! I think this one would score about 27 points. Just remember that this isn't an essay. Try to shove it all into one paragraph. Delete the conclusion.
@YixuanZhu-ql3wy
@YixuanZhu-ql3wy 9 ай бұрын
I think remote work definitely has both benefits and shortcuts, so the company can decide whether or not to implement the policy based on the type of job the person is doing. What I mean is, that if the kind of job really requires teamwork, it is better to set regular working hours and meetings for colleagues to communicate with each other. I believe it will not be as productive if people are working remotely and sending emails. On the other hand, if the type of work is solely individual, such as writing codes, the company can let the workers choose the way they prefer. Therefore, people can manage their time based on their schedules and be more proactive and willing to finish the task at the time and environment they prefer. Overall, these changes will help the company gain more productivity and benefit the enterprise in both the short and long run.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Good evening! I think this one would score about 22 or 23 points. There are a few grammar and language use errors that are hurting your score. Like: "benefits and shortcuts" (should be something like "benefits and disadvantages") "writing codes" (should be "writing code") "the task" (should be "their tasks")
@emircanozturk8345
@emircanozturk8345 8 ай бұрын
Hey Man thanks for all the videos. Thanks to them I Got 102/120 from toefl which was more than I needed. You are awesome
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
Brilliant. I am so happy to have helped a bit! What's next for you?
@emircanozturk8345
@emircanozturk8345 8 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources Going to apply to some architecture graduate schools. Wish me luck :)
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
GOOOOOD LUCK
@user-ym7og7ev1f
@user-ym7og7ev1f 7 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for evaluating my responses! While I appreciate the points mentioned by Ronald and Karen, I think that remote working can benefit employers since the fixed costs of operating the company can reduced greatly. For example, the rentals of office spaces are no longer needed. The rentals in big cities, such as Chicago and New York City, cost an arm and a leg; however, if all the workers work from home, the employers could make use of the saved money to hire more efficient employees to create higher revenues. Overall, I would say that not only workers but also bosses can gain ample benefits from working remotely.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
This has really nice language use, but I fear it is a bit short. I think it would score about 24 or 25 points. I could be wrong, though, as it is hard to guess what the "penalty" is for writing a short response.
@roxanasoheilian3765
@roxanasoheilian3765 9 ай бұрын
Hi there, thank you for your time. Here is my response: This is a challenging topic, but I think that remote work would not benefit as much as is widely assumed. I strongly agree with Karen’s idea that being physically present at the office with colleagues and building strong relationships are obvious advantages that can’t be reached when working remotely. I’d add that today, most jobs should be done in groups. In order to participate in teamwork efficiently, it is necessary to be in an environment where other members of the group are making efforts as well. Therefore, the team members would be in harmony with each other, track one another’s activities, and help each other whenever one is in trouble. In this case, it is highly likely for the group to achieve their goals as a team and make significant accomplishments.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 22 points. There are a few errors like "would not benefit" (should be something like "are not as beneficial") and "can't be reached" (should be "can't be achieved") and "highly likely for the group to achieve" (should be "highlighly likely that the group will achieve").
@angelloera1342
@angelloera1342 9 ай бұрын
My answer to the question, thanks for your feedback! Remote work has its benefits and drawbacks. The former are more obvious to most workers, especially the younger ones. They might be more acquainted with technologies that ease communication, and usually make remote work possible, such as videoconference or instant messaging devices. By contrast, workers who have largely performed in face-to-face environments, might have trouble adapting to a “new normal”. Regardless of staff’s preferences, companies are likely to have both technology savvy workers, and others who feel more comfortable in the workplace. What they need to focus on is productivity; thus, they should ask themselves: how are we more likely to meet our goals, through remote or in-person work? Which positions would bring advantages if carried out from home? If the answer to those questions is online working, then there is room for remote work; otherwise, there is no point in discussing that.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This response doesn't really respond to the question. You lack a clear thesis. You aren't really defending a position, but rather just saying a lot of things about the topic. That could be a big problem. Next time you practice, try to advance a clear position on the topic.
@hosseinmehdipour2996
@hosseinmehdipour2996 6 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for helping us. This is my response: While I can see the benefits of working remotely, I believe showing up to work and being under the same roof as your coworkers is extremely beneficial. As Karen stated, working from home decreases the chances of promotion for the employees. But I want to add that studies have shown that just being in a place your mind associates with a particular activity, in this case, working, so people’s productivity will automatically go up when working from the office. Furthermore, this way people will actually have to come out of their house and get some fresh air, or even a light exercise, which can be beneficial for their health as well.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 6 ай бұрын
This would probably score about the same as the other one you posted here. It is solid, but I fear it is somewhat short. Also, you must not start sentences with coordinating conjunctions like "but."
@roaahossam188
@roaahossam188 7 ай бұрын
While some may argue that remote work is better than office one, I beg to differ. There are a couple of reasons supporting my perspective. First of all, working remotely can be flexible in terms of working hours but office is more definig as it sets a time routin that's filled with effeciency. Consequently, improving productivity and lowering the rate of distractions that can happen at home. Furthermore, It leaves the rest of the day open to add more activities like going to the gym or spending time with your family. I recall the years I spent at home working during corona virus, and they were hellish for me as I was delaying tasks all the time until the work load had become unbearable for me.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
Don't try to turn this task into a mini essay. Don't waste time on a transition like "there are a couple of reasons...". Just get to the point.
@user-jg6kc6wh4c
@user-jg6kc6wh4c 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for helping us. This is my response :Both options have real advantages, but I’m convinced that remote work would be useful for both employees and employers. In fact, remote work helps both employees and employers save time. In other words, instead of spending a lot of time on transportation, they can be in their home and spend more time on their work. Moreover, remote work also leads to less burnout due to no prolonged exposure to traffic jams, then it can improve their efficiency. While Karen is right about remote work can make it harder to build relationships, I believe that she misses a critical point. I’d like to say there are many social media, making communication much easier than anything else. Overall, I’d like to state remote work due to less exposure to traffic jams and subsequently less burnout is beneficial for both employees and employers. Please tell me if I need more supportive reasons?
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I think you can say "is useful for both...". You aren't talking about a theoretical or hypothetical thing, but rather something going on right now. Otherwise, this is really solid. I think it would score about 27 points.
@user-ut6ci9uf6t
@user-ut6ci9uf6t 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for your video. This is my response: Although some people think remote work can cause problems, personally, I believe remote work and flexibility during working hours are significant advantages for employees as well as companies, so I would rather with Ronald. He aptly pointed out about home office and I would like to add that remote work would provide astonishing opportunities for employees to travel around the world and also it can reduce the costs of companies. For example, If Google provides remote work for their employees, they can allocate office expenses on research and development or provide other facilities for their employees. While Karen mentioned a relevant point about physical space, she did not mention that on-site work can limit the flexibility of employees and this might affect their performance. By and large, I am all for doing remote jobs, due to its staggering number of benefits.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Good evening! This is a pretty good response that I think would score about 24 points. Just a few things come to mind: 1. Drop the comma after "personally." 2. Change "flexibility during working hours" to "flexible working hours." 3. Change "so I would rather with Ronald" to "I agree with Ronald." There are other issues, but I think you get the point!
@user-ut6ci9uf6t
@user-ut6ci9uf6t 9 ай бұрын
Thank you very much! I really appreciate your feedback 😊
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
My pleasure! When will you take the test?
@Shirin_Ilami
@Shirin_Ilami 10 ай бұрын
Hello Michael and Thanks! Here's my essay: While I appreciate the points made by both Ronald and Karen, in my opinion, remote work is one of the best things that has happened to us. Although I understand Karen’s concerns over less socializing and peoples’ complexity to accomodate a room as an office work space, I believe she misses another critical aspect. I think that working from home in times like an epidemic has led us all to grasp the fact that we have the ability to not be under complete supervision and still do our best, if not better. I want to add that another key factor to consider is that many people have been promoted themselves or thrived into starting a career on their own since they saw their potential as a leader or a boss. This has brought a broad amount of new livelihood opportunities and startups. These turn of events have convinced me to feel that nowadays remote working can begin its role as the new normal in our world.
@user-zs6dv6hh4x
@user-zs6dv6hh4x 9 ай бұрын
How can you write all this in 10 minutes 💀
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This is pretty good, but there is some awkward phrasing like "concerns over less socializing and people's complexity to accomodate a room as an office work space." Honestly, I can't even begin to rewrite that. Otherwise, I think your grammar is pretty good and there are just a few errors. I'd say this one would score 23 or 24 points. Nice work.
@Shirin_Ilami
@Shirin_Ilami 9 ай бұрын
Thanks for your time, Michael. I really appreciate it. 🥰@@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
My pleasure! When will you take the test?
@MMD6794
@MMD6794 9 ай бұрын
While I appreciate the points mentioned by Kelly and Andrew, I think that environmental protection is more crucial to deal with recently. Since all the global warming consequences that affect our global like flooding, wild fires, heat waves and so on, it become more important to find solutions to protect the life of humans, animals and plants in order to survive. For instance, putting some strict environmental rules to reduce the pollution by reducing the greenhouse gases emission will protect our planet from further severe impacts. Moreover, planting more trees, recycling plastic and paper, converting to more sustainable energy sources is critical in protecting the environment. Hence, after being able to live properly on the earth, then we can consider education. Thank you so much Michael, I really appreciate your kindness.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
There are just too many grammar and language use errors here. I can see more than one in every sentence. I think you should try using something like "Grammarly" to learn about the mistakes you make most frequently. This answer would score about 18 points, I think.
@alibayat2914
@alibayat2914 9 ай бұрын
Although most of the people believe that working remote increases productivity, In my opinion this aproach would reduce the function of workers. This is because working in a workplace would make a synergy. Employees coworking in a work atmosphere have grather results than they work seperatly at their homes. Moreover, I am of the opinion that commution between home and workplace is essential for people. In this way, they have to exit from their hose and expose themself to the nature, particularly the sun's light. It is a well-stablished scientific fact that sunlight exposure would bring the individual to proper hormounal level. For instance, during the corona pandemic, when I have to work from my apartment, I bareky went outside; as a result, after several weeks I felt low energy and depression.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 18 points. There are just too many grammar and language use errors here for you to score much more than that. Submit your work to something like "Grammarly" to get an idea of the sorts of mistakes you are making.
@Monaleung0615
@Monaleung0615 6 күн бұрын
I strongly agree with Karen’s idea that remote work may affect our promotion chance and the relationship with colleagues. I’d add that remote work may relatively affect our health. Ronald raised the relevant point that remote work is more flexible and productive, but he didn’t mention that the disadvantages which long time of remote work will seriously weaken our health. A case in point, during the Covid period, I work all day long at my home. Sure, my schedule is more flexible as I don’t need get up early and commute. However, I felt extremely tired and exhausted every day. Because of remote work, I had to do everything with laptop such as meeting, communicate with my colleagues, and presentation. As a result, I suffer from eye fatigue.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 4 күн бұрын
I think this one would score about 20 points. Your arguments are good, but there are a lot of little grammar errors. You should have said: "affect our chance of getting a promotion" "and our relationships with colleagues" "may affect our health somewhat" (or something similar) Run your answer through something like Grammarly to get a complete list of errors.
@Monaleung0615
@Monaleung0615 41 минут бұрын
@@Toeflresources thank you so much Michael! I'll try to improve my grammar!
@mehdiashayeri1533
@mehdiashayeri1533 10 ай бұрын
In my opinion, the benefits of remote work outweigh the drawbacks, and companies should provide their employees with such an option, which is consistent with Ronald's viewpoint. In this regard, I want to add that people have different productivity during the day, and when they are allowed to work from home, they can find the best time they have higher productivity. This can help them to perform their tasks more efficiently, which is beneficial not only for employees but also foe the companies they work in. Karen mentioned an important point: people in their workplaces can better communicate and cooperate with each other, something that does not happen through remote work. However, she overlooked the fact that with the use of technological tools, many employees can interact and collaborate with each other. In fact, nowadays, many successful international firms have staff members living in different countries, and they have no difficulty in their work.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I don't think you need to stick "which is consistent with Ronald's viewpoint" at the end of your first sentence. That looks awkward and clunky. I would also delete "in this regard" which is also awkward here. Watch out for typos like "foe the companies." Don't use colons. They are usually out of place in tasks like this. I think your answer would score about 23 points, but I think you can do better.
@shaimaaalshakarchi6086
@shaimaaalshakarchi6086 8 ай бұрын
This is a challenging topic, but I think working from home will be a great idea in the future theme of work. I strongly agree with Ronald’s idea about the positive effect of remote working. He states that the worker will be more productive and creative when they work in a private spot without the negative effect of the surrounding environment. For the manager, the working outcome is the priority for the job, not the communication with others. I’d like to add that any one to be productive in the work needs a quiet and separated area if at work or at home. On the other hand, Karen dislikes this idea. In which she states that working from far away from colleagues will reduce any chances to grow up in the work and get promotions. But she did not mention that nowadays even meetings can be by zoom or far away. Remember that any work has different circumstances to handle and make it successful.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
This is okay, but there are some awkward phrases like "will be a great idea in the future theme of work." I really can't even guess what that means. Also stuff like "without the negative effect of the surrounding environment." I think you mean something like "without distractions." You might be trying too hard to write long and fancy sentences. I think this one would score about 21 or 22 points, but I think you can do better.
@HadeerNagah
@HadeerNagah 8 ай бұрын
In my opinion i strongly support the idea of working from home. As there are a lot of benefits for that type of work. First of all, through working from home we can increase our creativity and thus get more promotion in our work. Secondly, we can take our rest during work and not bothered by anyone else. Additionally, we can stay with our beloved people and not get far from them which in turn reflect in our work by feeling more comfortable. Furthermore, nevertheless we are tired or stress we can bear our exhaustion and continue in working. Also, working from home increases our ability to finish work more quickly than working far from it. Moreover, we don't have to worry about our clothes as we can wear any type of clothes regardless whether it is formal or not.
@ekhlasal-maghrebi9687
@ekhlasal-maghrebi9687 8 ай бұрын
In spite of the fact that many people prefer going to office and start work, in the pretext of being more active. personally I haven't had such an experience before, but If I have to choose between them I would rather have remote work, for many reason, the main cause is that remote work saves your time and energy, for example you will not need to consume your in transportation or lose your energy in a sunny day, and the same thing would happen when you are back to home, another reason is that you may be more creative and effective in your home due to the calm atmosphere you would have it while you are at home.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
Note my comment last time about using the recommended template. :)
@Mahboba-zi7be
@Mahboba-zi7be 6 ай бұрын
hi From my point of view, it is more beneficial for employees to work far away from their home because they experience varity of places. They become able to work in diverse environments which become familiar with different people, and they can learn new things from them. Having a far work assists workers to concentrate on their work which cause to positive outcomes for the company. The workers are far from their family which help them to focus on their work much more. They also will have an authentic backgroud which make them able to find new jobs simply in the future. Finally, it is better for workers to have a remote job for several reasons which I mentioned above.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 6 ай бұрын
This one is decent, but it has a few grammar and language use errors. Like: "because they experience varity of places" (should be something like "because they can work in a variety of environments") "which become familiar" (should be something like "and when they become familiar with different people, they are able to learn new things from them" "having a far work" (should be something like "working in an office") I will leave it at that, but you get the point. I think this one would score about 18 points.
@VallabhEv
@VallabhEv 6 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thanks for your videos on speaking and writing. I followed your tips, and I was able to get a perfect 120.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 5 ай бұрын
Great job! I'm impressed! What's next for you?
@saleempharmacist8584
@saleempharmacist8584 9 ай бұрын
hi Micheal Please respond to my answer I definitely love to work remotely and agree with Paul that it is a positive trend to work from home I would like to add further that we feel easy and stress-free while working from home One of the biggest stresses which everyone faces is traffic most of the people has to get up early morning approximately need one hour for only 10 km to reach their offices where they can normally travel within 5 to 10 minutes in their cars beside this road blockage A daily accident gives people so much stress that they hardly sleep at night time and feel tired every morning which affects their performance in the office, In addition, I must say that while working at home we can better manage our time like if your spouse is working too you can look after your children too like drop off and pick up from school and even in emergencies you can be a valuable asset to your families that's why in my opinion it is better to work from home
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
There are no periods in this answer! You need to end every sentence with a period. Really! I think this one would score about 20 points, but I am sure you can do better.
@KamalVerse
@KamalVerse 5 ай бұрын
As far as I am concerned, I would probably like to do remote work for a couple of reasons. First is the factor of environment. I like to be in a peaceful remote area breathing fresh air and enjoying my life at the fullest. When I try to remember the city area where I had to maintain a early schedule to get to office fast. Traffic jams also takes away lot of our valuable time reaching to our respective offices. As a result, we can be moody due the frustration and our relationship status friend, families and colleagues can be affected very badly,
@dikshant48
@dikshant48 2 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, Please rate me for my response mentioned below: In my opinion, remote work is very beneficial for employees as well as the companies. Primarily because companies incur expenditures in thousands of dollars to set up a large physical working place. However, if companies allow employees to work from home they would save a lot of money that can be used for hiring more people, conducting research, or increasing the marketing. I understand Karen’s concern of people not able to collaborate effectively while working from home but with the ever increasing technology it is indeed possible nowadays for people to stay connected with the same effectiveness through video calls. Additionally, as mentioned by Ronald working from home would not require travelling but it would also save money for the employees.
@umeshprasadsingh9648
@umeshprasadsingh9648 7 ай бұрын
UNIQUE IDEATION IN TOEFL ACADEMIC DISCUSSION.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
Yeah, totally.
@Cheng222
@Cheng222 11 күн бұрын
Hi Michael! Thank you so much. And here is my response,I would really appreciate it if you could give me some feedback: From my perspective, negative effects that the remote work brings to us are more than positive influences. Firstly, no one is an isolated island so the relationship interpersonal is indispensable, especially the actual and physical connection. When people work in the company together, they can talk with each other face to face. Thus, this enhance the relationship as well as the cooperation among the colleagues. Apart from this, the remote work may not be very effective and efficient given that it largely depend on the technology. Once the connection is unstable or there is some technological problems, the process of work will be interrupted and thus, the quality of work would not be that high as they work in the physical company.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 11 күн бұрын
To be honest, there are multiple grammar and language use errors in every sentence. That will really hurt your score, so I think this one would score about 18 points at the most. I recommend using something like "Grammarly" to check your grammar.
@Cheng222
@Cheng222 11 күн бұрын
@@Toeflresources I see🥺 Thank you so much!😊
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 10 күн бұрын
When will you take the test?
@Cheng222
@Cheng222 10 күн бұрын
@@Toeflresources tomorrow…🙀🤣
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 10 күн бұрын
@@Cheng222 Oh gee! Best of luck to you! Let me know how it goes.
@user-zf9qg7vc1s
@user-zf9qg7vc1s 9 ай бұрын
Hi, Thank you for your time:) Here is my response: While I appreciate the points mentioned by Ronald and Karen, I think that remote work is really helpful. First of all, through remote work, we can overcome the location limitation. Like digital nomads, we can work around the world. Secondly, companies can easily hire lots of smart people around the world. These companies encourage online meetings to communicate with employees. It can be a great chance for companies. Some people, including Karen, don’t think remote work should become the new normal, I think it should be a new trend.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I fear this one might be a bit too short. I didn't run a word count, but I want to see about 120 words for this task. There are also a few awkward phrases and errors like "we can overcome the location limitation" (I am not sure what you mean) and a lack of conjunctions. I think this one would score about 21 or 22 points, but I am sure you can do better.
@user-zf9qg7vc1s
@user-zf9qg7vc1s 9 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources Thank you for helping me :) 😊
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Happy to help! When will you take the test?
@user-zf9qg7vc1s
@user-zf9qg7vc1s 9 ай бұрын
​@@Toeflresources I'll take the test in November 🤗 Your videos are very helpful to me. Thanks a lot!
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
@@user-zf9qg7vc1s good luck!
@Reyhane-ys2eu
@Reyhane-ys2eu 8 ай бұрын
Hello Michael, Thanks in advance for your feedback. In my opinion, remote work brings a number of benefits. I strongly agree with Ronald's idea that with teleworking, unnecessary commuting will be eliminated. I'd add that teleworking enables people to decrease their footprints on the Earth. To delineate, people often commute to the workplace by their personal automobiles, and car emissions have detrimental effects on Mother Nature. Chemical substances released by automobiles, such as carbon dioxide, are among the greenhouse gases causing global warming. Moreover, air pollution contributes to a wide range of diseases from allergy to lung cancer. Not only does the home office conserve the environment, but it also helps boost our physical health. Karen raised the relevant point that remote work prevents people from expanding their social circle. However, she did not mention that in today's modernized world, through the Internet, individuals can communicate with others no matter how far they are.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
This is really good, except for a few awkward phrases. I wouldn't really use "reduce their footprints on the Earth." I would probably just say "reduce their carbon footprint," since that is what you are talking about. I would also say something like "Not only is working from home environmentally friendly" as I find "conserve the environment" to be a bit akward. Also, I would just say "in the modern world." Overall, I think this one would score about 26 points. Nice work.
@Reyhane-ys2eu
@Reyhane-ys2eu 8 ай бұрын
@@ToeflresourcesI would just like to convey my heartfelt thanks for your constant help and support.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
Aw. Thanks for your kind words. They mean a lot to me.
@claritamoyanocenteno4804
@claritamoyanocenteno4804 9 ай бұрын
For most of the companies remote work has turned into a new practice after covid. I personally believe remote work is positive for most of the employees in a company. First of all, it is a good way to manage your own schedule. While you are at home you can check on your home, your dog, your maid and at the same time you are doing your work. Secondly, it might give people more confidence. Working from home give the employee the option not to dress formal; for some people this would be really positive. Lastly, employees can even be more productive. There are many researches that show people work better if they do not have their manager looking at them all the time.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 20 points. Your grammar is weak. I think you should consider putting your work into something like "Grammarly" to get an idea of the sorts of mistakes you make most frequently.
@Nisha-ib9sg
@Nisha-ib9sg 9 ай бұрын
In my opinion, the pros of working remotely surpass its cons. I concur with Ronald’s point that people tend to be more productive while working remotely. I’d add and talk for myself that I’ve been working remotely for a year now and I’m much more efficient and creative in my work now than I was when I used to go to my workplace every day. This is because I’m an introvert and when I used to work from an office, I’d have to interact with my colleagues formally or informally, and that would completely rip me off my cognitive capital. Consequently, I would feel too exhausted to focus on my work and come up with innovative solutions. But now that I’m working from home and don’t have to meet and greet my peers, I never run out of energy, and I invest that energy into being productive and active, which has also led me to get promotion twice a year. Overall, I believe working from home is better than working in an office.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I'm not crazy about "its pros... its cons." I guess it is fine, but it often looks awkward and clunky to me. Don't use "I'd and and talk for myself." Just say "I'd add that I've been...". Your version is really awkward. Don't use "rip me off my". I don't know what you mean. Probably just "would completely destroy my cognitive ability." There are other issues, but I will leave it at that. Overall, I think this one would score 22 or 23 points, but I think you have the grammatical ability to do much better. Just avoid weird expressions. Just be clear and concise!
@longinusmzrag3382
@longinusmzrag3382 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael here is my response While I appreciate Karen's ideas regarding the significance of a positive work environment and relationships, I strongly believe that remote work is better suited for individuals in modern systems, particularly in light of the COVID-19 pandemic. Time management and flexibility are crucial factors, and Ronald makes a valid point about these issues that I personally agree with. Remote work provides an opportunity to complete tasks efficiently and quickly without much hassle, and we can use our free time to spend with our loved ones. In my opinion, offering fewer work hours and encouraging employees to spend more time with their families is the best way to promote their mental and physical well-being, which in turn will allow them to work more efficiently and with greater ambition. In summary, remote work has numerous benefits that employees should prioritize.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This is really great. I would just change a few things. Like: "remote work is more suitable for individuals in modern situations." And "we can spend our free time with our loved ones." Overall, I think this response would score about 26 or 27 points. Nice work!
@guguecheng4892
@guguecheng4892 8 ай бұрын
Hello Michael, Here is my respond. In my opinion, remote work shouldn't be continue after pandemic period, I strongly agree with Karan, human being should have physical communicate route in daily life. I'd add that home is just to so spend time with family members by relaxing and chilling. Ronald raised the relevant point that coworker could be acting a bit distract, he didn't mention the work place shouldn't mix with personal space. For example, during the quarantine period, I had to work from home. I live in a tiny little apartment, which is completely hall style without wall and rooms, with my wife and my newborn baby. Whenever I have a meeting, my little boy had cried as his nature. My wife tried my best to keep her baby not to cry. It didn't work out very well. I have been scold by my superior. As I can't perform well on my job, I was needed a friend to chat about difficulties. I couldn't do it either because of covid. I had a terrible experience about remote work, so I like to work only on my deck in the office.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 18 points. There are grammar and language use errors in just about every sentence, so you should start running your work through something like "Grammarly" to get a better idea of the errors you are making.
@srujanapillarichety
@srujanapillarichety 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you for your videos. Here's my response. While I completely agree with Karen, I think we should also consider Ronald's point of view. People work better in an office environment when all the collaboration and team building happens. However, most people have good mental health when they spend more time with family and can save a lot of time when they cut back on commuting to work. Hence, in my opinion, the best mode of work would be to work from office for a few fixed days in the week and have a personal preference on whether to work from home or office for the remaining days of the week. This way, we don't have to compromise either on our work culture or on the personal betterment of ourselves.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Good evening! I don't really like your opening line. It seems like you are agreeing with both people without really stating a strong personal opinion. Just pick a side. Your part about "when all the collaboration and team building happens" is unclear. I think you mean "where collaboration and team building can occur." Same for "and have a personal preference." I think you mean something like "and then choose whether to work..." Overall, I think this one would score about 22 or 23 points, but I am sure you can do better.
@srujanapillarichety
@srujanapillarichety 9 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources Thank you for your feedback.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
My pleasure! Have you scheduled the test yet?
@Eduardomingaarias
@Eduardomingaarias 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael, thank you so much for all the information, resources and recommendations you provide for many students around the world. I find your youtube channel spectacular. Can you please rate my writing? "Many people disagree about working from home. I personally believe that it has multiple benefits, not only for the company but also for the employee. I strongly agree with Ronald’s idea that it has more flexible schedules. I will add that working from home also helps to reduce costs for the company, therefore the budget increase for the next year. I will add that it also provides a peaceful environment to tolerate more stress during working hours. Home as your comfort zone provides you with a peaceful environment to work. Furthermore, arriving at the time for a meeting will be instantly, due to instant messages, video conferences, and other useful programs. For these reasons, I believe that."
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This is pretty good, but there are a few issues. Like: 1. You should say "companies" and "employees" since you are talking about them in general (not about some specific company or some specific employee) 2. I think you mean "it gives employees more flexible schedules" 3. I don't really know what you mean by "therefore the budget increase for the next year." I will leave it at that, but I think you get the point. Work on your grammar and language use as much as possible. I think this one would score about 22 points, but I am sure you can do better.
@DuaaHasan-zg9dj
@DuaaHasan-zg9dj 7 ай бұрын
Here’s my response: While I appreciate what Karen said, I share Ronald’s perspective. Remote work is certainly beneficial and adventageous. The time and the energy wasted on transportation can effectively be dedicated to the improvement of projects and issues related to the development of the company. I’d add that working in the company with many co-workers constitutes a serious problem and obstacle for various introverted people who don’t feel comfortable when they work in a social environment. Therefore, working from home offers an ideal solution for this type of people to work in a cosy atmosphere which can lead to more creativity and productivity. Micheal raised the relevant point that since the employees don’t work in the same physical place, cooperative relationships are difficult to be established among them. In my opinion, however, people nowadays are incredibly accustomed to communicate via social networks, and connections can easily be formed without the need to work in the same place.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
This is decent, and I think it would score about 24 points. But you are weak when it comes to articles. Consider studying articles a bit.
@mahmoudkargar180
@mahmoudkargar180 9 ай бұрын
Your feedback is appreciated; Personally, I believe that remote work would be beneficial for several companies and I agree with Ronald. Working online has its advantages such as having enough time to do our tasks and also spend our time with family or friends. For example, working remotely will let us save the time we need to go to work and also it will remove the usual traffic jams that we face every morning and afternoon on the way to and from work. So, we can use this spare time to do our tasks instead of getting stuck in traffic jams. Although Karen puts this notion that presence in the work atmosphere will provide us with the opportunity to collaborate with other coworkers and lead to our promotion, it is important to consider that we can still be in touch with our colleagues during work time using online apps and also, we can connect them out of the workplace. Overall, in my opinion, working remotely would be beneficial due to removing transportation time to work.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Focus on improving your grammar. There are a lot of minor errors here. They will all add up. Avoid starting sentences with "so" or any other coordinating conjunctions. The e-rater doesn't like that. Don't use "puts this notion." I don't really know what you mean. You could try using my template: www.toeflresources.com/writing-section/toefl-writing-templates/ Overall, I think this one would score about 21 points, but I am sure you can do better!
@mahmodelshabrawi5278
@mahmodelshabrawi5278 9 ай бұрын
Although I agree with Ronald's perspective that working from home can save us time by eliminating the daily travel, I still endorse Karen's opinion. I'd like to add that shadowing experienced people and interacting with colleagues can strengthen our skills, improve our communication, and enhance our thinking and creativity, eventually leading to promotions. For example, two years ago, I began a new job with no experience and knowledge about the nature of the work. However, after shadowing my coworker and actively seeking guidance by asking many questions, I was able to elevate my level to a degree that left a positive impression on everyone, resulting in a raise in a relatively short period. Therefore, I strongly agree with Keren's viewpoint because the benefits of remote work outweigh the disadvantages.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This is a fantastic response. I think it would score about 27 points. Consider eliminating your repetitive conclusion, though, and replacing it with additional details in support of your argument.
@user-wt6gp1ek2n
@user-wt6gp1ek2n 9 ай бұрын
Some people may feel that working from home is an amazing option, but I think it is actually not a good idea. Ronald raised a relevant point that some people may feel more productive at home. However, I believe that a large percentage of people would say that they are more distracted because of family members, kids, pets, or other distracting sounds, which can be avoided at workspaces. Moreover, I’d add that being in a work environment, where everyone is busy doing their job, prepares you for getting in a work mode, helps you stay more focused, and motivates you to finish the work faster. Overall, I’d say that both options have real advantages, but I am convinced that working offline is better than working remotely.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This is pretty decent, but there are a few little issues. Like: "raised a relevant point that" (should be "raised the relevant point that") "avoided at workspaces" (should be something like "avoided when we work away from home" because a "workspace" can also be the place at home we work) "prepares you for getting in a work mode" (unclear) Overall, I think this one would score about 23 points.
@Bambi-kook
@Bambi-kook 7 ай бұрын
Hey Michael, These videos are of great help to me. Thank you so much. Keep up the good work. Much love. Here is my sample essay. Please let me know your feedback on this. Thank you in advance. While, I appreciate the response given by Ronald and karen, I think that remote working is quite beneficial compared to traditional working. Because many people who were unable to proceed further in their career for the sake of some commitments like wearing the responsibility of being a mom, or a daughter to a ill parent can have a new opportunity to kick start their career again. So, remote working is like a boon to working moms who will get to spend a lot of their time with their kids along with advancing in their career. It acts same way for people with very old people who needs constant care from someone. Hence I think remote working is very beneficial and should be adopted in as many sectors as possible to open new doors for people that are seeking new opportunities. Some people may argue that the quality of work may decrease, but personally I think it is quite opposite as workers are working in their comfort without any care for appearance, attire etc, they tend to be more focused on work and are expected to be more productive.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 20 or 21 points. I spotted multiple grammar and language use errors in just about every sentence. Try using something like "Grammarly" to get an idea of the sorts of mistakes you make most frequently.
@Bambi-kook
@Bambi-kook 7 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources Thank you so much for your useful feedback
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 6 ай бұрын
My pleasure! Have you taken the test yet?
@miladayatynia7844
@miladayatynia7844 8 ай бұрын
Hi michael. Would you please rate this? While I think working in an office can be to some extent advantageous, in mjy opinion, the benefits of working remotely can outwheigh its drawbacks. For one thing, by staying at home during the work hours, we could help the natural environment improve drastically. to explain more, in order to get to their work place, people have to use their private cars or puclic transportaition. These means of transprotion burn a lot of fossil fuel to work, and emitt green house gases into the atmosphere, which consequently result in the contamination of the environment. So when people avoid leaving their houses in order to go to their oficces, they can contribute to save the environment.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 20 points. I recommend that you try my template for this task: www.toeflresources.com/writing-section/toefl-writing-templates/
@Amir2Mahdi
@Amir2Mahdi 7 ай бұрын
Hello dear Michael, please have a look at my answer as well. I do like to talk about both students view points. Do you recommend it? "Whether remote work is a beneficial or detrimental phenomenon is a worldwide matter of debate. In my opinion, remote work is massively advantageous in today’s work and could positively impact our lives in various aspects. For example, it could hugely reduce the time we normally spend every day while traveling to the workspace. In this sense, I fully agree with Ronald’s idea that rightfully addresses remote work’s merit in enhancing productivity by obviating the need to commute a lot. Karen brings up a relevant point, concerning the potential negative impacts of remote working on social relationships. However, I believe she simply overlooks the fact that relationships could also be built online and people do not necessarily have to be in the exact same physical space to socialize and enjoy togetherness."
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
I recommend that you actually pick a side and state it right at the beginning.
@user-ll2kf4su5e
@user-ll2kf4su5e 9 ай бұрын
Hi. Thank you for helping us. This is my response. Can you please rate this response. The topic of remote working has generated much discussion in recent years. In my opinion, remote working is not a good concept if done on a regular basis. When a person is present physically in the office, the work environment allows him to focus well, and the overall productivity improves. This is not possible while working remotely. I understand Ronald’s concern about the disturbance from coworkers, but he misses a critical point of physical interaction with coworkers, which is important for overall personality development. To sum up, remote working should be considered only as a short-term option till physical presence is not possible due to unavoidable reasons.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Just call it "remote work." There is no need to use a gerund form here. Try "their office" and "their work environment" here since you are not talking about a specific office or specific environment. Indeed, you should probably spend some time studying articles as that may be a weak spot for you! I think this one would score about 22 points.
@fardoshianni1750
@fardoshianni1750 9 ай бұрын
Could you plz tell me, how to use ETS e rater AI to evaluate essay?
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Click and scroll: www.ets.org/toefl/test-takers/ibt/prepare/practice-tests.html
@sofizuniga148
@sofizuniga148 5 ай бұрын
Hi Michael! Thank you so much for the lesson. Could you please review my essay. I’d really appreciate it. If I were forced to choose, I would definitely say remote work is a negative development in the world today. My personal belief is that when people work from home, it decreases social interactions. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has been profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. For example, many people forge friendships with their colleagues in the workplace, which is more difficult to do when working online. Through online meetings people are less likely to interact with each other, leading to poor connections and relationships. I understand Ronald’s positivity towards spending less time commuting, but I think he misses another critical point. Having flexible schedules and spending the majority of our days at home might lead to sedentarism, a harmful problem that affects our overall well-being. In light of the reasons mentioned, I strongly believe it is crucial to maintain the traditional way of working for a healthier world with less mental health issues.
@kerkenikhouloud6515
@kerkenikhouloud6515 9 ай бұрын
Thank you Michael I know this is off topic but I'm going to ask you anyway. While I was practicing, I encountered this part of a paragraph: ‘’when a company diversifies its operations, it secures its continued existence. This can be challenging. some business entities might find it hard to evolve, BUT EVOLVE THEY MUST.” This last phrase, In upper case, is not intelligible to me. Could you explain it please? thank you so much I really appreciate it 😁
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
That is like a rhetorical flourish. To add emphasis, people sometimes write "but VERB they must" instead of "they must VERB." It is used right after the VERB has already been stated. Don't do it in your TOEFL responses.
@KashifAli-gf6ds
@KashifAli-gf6ds 9 ай бұрын
hello, is it crucial to mention student idea or just we have to put our own idea
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
You can just mention your own idea. That's totally fine.
@mahdizahedi7317
@mahdizahedi7317 9 ай бұрын
Hey Michael, tnx in advance for your feedback: I am perssonally of the opinion that remote work can provide people eith many advantages, and is indeed beneficial. Although I cannot deny the fact that remote work can reduce individuals' chance to earn promotions, I am not on the same page as Karen. In my opinion, she has missed some points. To begin with, I think that people working from their home have more free time. As Roland mentions, people in this case, will not waste their time commuting, and this can be very benefcial. People engaged with remote works can expand their horizons learning new skills and abalities, spending their free time in attending advantegous activities. Since they are at their homes, they might even feel that they are more indepedent. In this regard, they would not feel that they are being controled by their boss or supervisors. That in turn, can affect how productive they can be. In my opinion, people are more productive when they think they are not controlled by others. Thus, remote work is a beneficial choice for people.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Your grammar is excellent, but watch out for spelling mistakes like "perssonally" and "eith". You even spelled the dude's name wrong. :) Note the proper comma usage: "That, in turn, can..." I think this one would score about 26 points. Nice work.
@alirezanoroozi9945
@alirezanoroozi9945 9 ай бұрын
While it is a very controversial topic, I do Believe that remote working is not efficient, despite as Ronald mentioned the positive points of remote working but the getting around of co-workers and having lunch times in workplace and hanging out with them is an important part that people are missing with working online from home. In the other way, there is a point about efficiency, and it is different for each people someone who cannot focus on assignments in the house, they should go to the work to do their tasks while for another guy that lives far from his workplace there is a good opportunity to working remote and does not waste his time in traffic to get to work.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 19 points. I like your ideas, but there are grammar and language use errors in just about every sentence. That's a problem. Run your work through something like "Grammarly" to get an idea of the sorts of mistakes you make most frequently.
@reza_najarzadeh
@reza_najarzadeh 10 ай бұрын
From my perspective, the disadvantages of remote working outweigh its advantages, aligning with Karen's viewpoint. I'd also like to add that the most productive environment, as published in some statistical research, is offices where there are all employees and bosses. This is because individual workers try to be more punctual and responsible when they know they are precisely monitored. Thus, working in offices can be more beneficial in terms of having a more dynamic and productive working environment. What's more, the time needed for commuting can be wisely used by workers. Actually, their boss can either assign them to prepare some abstract feedback on their duties at this time or to do some background study of the cutting-edge technologies related to their work in order to be more well-rounded workers. Ronald's viewpoint sheds light on the advantages of remote working; however, my perspective leans more toward going physically to offices since remote working might not be equally effective.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Your opening line is a bit awkward. I would omit "aligning with Karen't viewpoint." Or maybe try to put that into a NEW sentence like "Therefore, my opinion aligns with Karen's view." Don't use "statistical research" to support your argument. Just make your point. Change "assign them to VERB" to something like "ask them to VERB." You may wish to slow down a bit. Write less. Concentrate on quality instead of quantity. Overall, I think this one would score about 23 points... but I am sure you can do better.
@reza_najarzadeh
@reza_najarzadeh 9 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources thanks for your time sir
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
My pleasure! When will you take the test?
@reza_najarzadeh
@reza_najarzadeh 9 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources in 2 weeks
@youngskywalker7163
@youngskywalker7163 10 ай бұрын
Hey it is my first time writing this task, It will be great if you grade it for me and give me some advice While some people still prefer original workplace, I think letting your employees work remotely would increase the productivity of their work. Since they do not leave their houses and spend their time on transportation, they are more alived because being in a traffic jam and worrying about getting in your office on time is tiresome and being exhausted while working cannot have a great result for even workers and for the company. While interacting with some of your co-workers and having chat with them on your free time can be relaxing, so resting in your home can be better than being outside of it and not be comfortable with others.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Welcome back, young Skywalker. There are grammar and language use errors throughout this response, like: "still prefer original workplace" (should be something like "still prefer to work in an office" "they are more alived" (should be something like "they are more active") "having chat with them" (should be "chatting with them") There are other mistakes, but I will leave it at that. Overall, I think this one would score about 19 points.
@youngskywalker7163
@youngskywalker7163 9 ай бұрын
@@Toeflresources thanks❤️❤️
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
My pleasure!
@parwana-e-aatish9641
@parwana-e-aatish9641 6 ай бұрын
Hi Micheal, thank you for do great effort for us. Could you please give me few second from your precocious and time rate my essay. Please kindly also assist me which areas I have to do exertion to get 5 score “The topic of working remotely has generated much discussion in recent years. I personally believe that it has had a largely negative impact on a person's life and a company's progress. While I acknowledge Ronald's views that it provides a flexible environment to a person to work more efficiently, But I would argue that it has great effect on person's thinking, when he consistently work without any social interaction. This is because a person who is stuck at any point can not resolved the problem until discussing with other group members. But, working with group members could be beneficial for a person to get solution easily. Recent studies also have also demonstrated that human mind often produces minimal output when working in a group as opposed to working individually. For these reasons, I personally prefer to work in group than in home
@LubnaKraiday-rx2iw
@LubnaKraiday-rx2iw 7 ай бұрын
Hello.. can you please evaluate my response? From my viewpoint, I think that remote work has more disadvantages than advantages ones. And that's for several reasons. First of all, working from home needs a special and calm place for helping you concentrate on your job without any distracting things around you. Also remote work will deniey you from collaborating and interacting with your workmates and if you needed any help you would have find yourself alone and then you should wasting your time on calling and masseging your team members and this may affect negatively on your overall job or mission. So I do believe that going to work daily will make you more productive than staying and working from home and that's my illustration.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
Don't use both "from my viewpoint" AND "I think." Just pick one. Don't start sentences with '"and." The e-rater doesn't like that. Don't use "that's for several reasons." I would just omit that sentence, but if you must have a transition you can use something like "There are several reasons why I feel that way." I think this one would score about 20 points.
@rutelopesart
@rutelopesart 9 ай бұрын
While I can see the benefits of the traditional in person work, I believe that remote work is a very good trend. Working from home can bring many benefits, having more schedules that are flexible and being in the comfort of your own house is stimulating. In addition, many people find that they can be more productive at home. I understand Karen’s point that being in a face-to-face work area is a completely different atmosphere, and you are more able to socialize with deferent people and coworkers. However, remote work can be way more helpful then you think, when it comes to people that are unable to go work for some medical reason or any other adversity, remote work is the best solution to keep working and receiving money.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
This is pretty good, but there are a few language use issues. Like: 1. You should hyphenate "in-person" when it is used as an adjective. 2. "can bring many benefits" is awkward. Change that to something like "can be very beneficial." 3. Start a new sentence: "For instance, having a flexible schedule and being in the comfort of your own home is stimulating." I will leave it at that, but I think you get the point. Overall, I think this one would score about 22 points. Maybe 23.
@mohammadmoridkargar102
@mohammadmoridkargar102 5 ай бұрын
Hello, dear respected teacher, hoping you are doing. Here is my sample response. I'd be glad if you could provide me effective feedbacks and tell me how much this response will score. In my perspective, it is a convincing idea for employees to work from home rather than in the office. Because it avoids a huge amount of time consumption, instead the company can add to the employee's working hours, and by doing that, they can increase their payment. When a worker works in the office, they have to allocate a specific amount of time to get to work on time and also come back home. They usually get out earlier because they might stick in traffic and not arrive at their workplace on time. Therefore, in order to prevent this kind of problematic situation, remote work is the best possible option.
@user-ll2kf4su5e
@user-ll2kf4su5e 9 ай бұрын
The topic of remote working has generated much discussion in recent years. In my opinion, remote working is not a good concept if done on a regular basis. When a person is present physically in the office, the work environment allows him to focus well, and the overall productivity improves. This is not possible while working remotely. I understand Ronald’s concern about the disturbance from coworkers, but he misses a critical point of physical interaction with coworkers, which is important for overall personality development. To sum up, remote working should be considered only as a short-term option till physical presence is not possible due to unavoidable reasons.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
You are a bit weak when it comes to articles. Consider studying that aspect of grammar as you move forward. Use "until" instead of "till." I think this one would score about 23 points, but I am sure you can do better!
@user-ll2kf4su5e
@user-ll2kf4su5e 9 ай бұрын
Thank you for your valuable feedback@@Toeflresources
@CashflowChronicles12
@CashflowChronicles12 7 ай бұрын
Even though working from home is becoming the new normal, I believe working in the office is more beneficial to the company and to an individual. Most employees are more focused while in the office unlike when working remotely where majority are distracted by either family members, pets friends and even other things like cleaning and cooking. I believe that when one prepares and leaves the house to go to the office they are physiologically prepared to work and they are not easy distracted. Also working in the office brings people together, it builds t friendships something that is not easy while working from home. While I respect Karen’s argument I am convinced that working in the office is way better compared to working remotely.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 23 points. A few things are worth mentioning here. They are: -change "to the company and to an individual" to "for companies and individuals" -change "where majority" to "where most" -change "not easy" to "not easily." There are other issues, but I will leave it at that for now!
@wk9450
@wk9450 7 ай бұрын
Hi Mike, thanks for your help. I really appreciate it. Could you please grade my response and share some comments to improve. thanks. I believe working from home is a great idea. As Roland mentioned, this would save people a lot of time. Additionally, people could care for their family in case they need to be at home during working hours. The majority of the employee scheduled to work from eight in the morning till four O'clock in the afternoon, however, some emergencies required us to be at home, during the working hours, so if employer allow his crew to work from home to avoid such emergencies' needs, employees would appreciate this opportunity to care for their family. For instance, my cousin move to live with his mother because she is getting older and needs help, consequently he asked his manager if he can work from home, so he can care for his mom, and the manager agreed. Since that time he could care for his mom and give her the medicine and the help she needed.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 7 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 23 points. There are quite a few grammar and language use issues, so consider running it through something like "Grammarly" to get an idea of the sorts of mistakes you make most frequently.
@xinyangli3986
@xinyangli3986 9 ай бұрын
Hi Micheal, thanks for the video, here is my response: I concur with Karen’s statement that remote working should not become a new normal, since its online nature. On one hand, working remotely could detract people from notifications. When working on a computer, people will easily be distracted by notifications, game tabs, and even emails. This will lead to a decrease in productivity and efficiency of the work. Moreover, working online prohibits people from socializing with colleagues, thus, disabling people from practicing socializing skills which is essential for interacting with clients. On the other hand, it is undeniable that remote working offers people a more flexible schedule to maintain their daily operations. However, I believe that during the working days, even if people are working online, they do not really receive much leisure time to spend as opposed to working in person. Therefore, I believe working remotely should not be considered as an optimal working method.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I don't really know what you mean by "since its online nature" at the end of the first sentence. Same for "detract people from notifications." There are a lot of little grammar and language use errors in this answer, so I recommend running it through a service like "Grammarly" to get an idea of the sorts of mistakes you make most frequently. I think this response would score about 20 points, but I am sure you can do better.
@famouspeople8611
@famouspeople8611 Ай бұрын
me and my friend going to take the exam tomorrow , I hope we get above 100 in the test .
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 22 күн бұрын
Hey, how did it go?
@famouspeople8611
@famouspeople8611 22 күн бұрын
I got 90
@oluwaseunvalentine318
@oluwaseunvalentine318 9 ай бұрын
It's no longer as scary as it was some months back 😂
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I'm glad you are feeling more comfortable about it!
@mr4everlover932
@mr4everlover932 28 күн бұрын
I like your voice.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 22 күн бұрын
I like to be liked!
@shahadnedhal2190
@shahadnedhal2190 9 ай бұрын
Hi Michael! I really like your channel and your videos. Thanks for being super helpful. Would you please check my response This is indeed a challenging topic, but I really think that remote work is a great idea. One of the reasons why is because it makes employees much more creative and helps them to relocate with their loved people. To be more specific, working from home provides a huge flexibility to choose where to live. Recently, I read an article in a local San Francisco newspaper about how working remotely had an immense impact on moving many employees from San Francisco to cheaper areas like Sacramento. For instance, I have a friend who works as a software engineer. Moreover, before the pandemic he was working in an office in San Francisco, but after the pandemic he was able to move to Sacramento since his company allowed remote working. Consequently, he bought a house and that made him more creative and relaxed. Actually, if his company had not started working from home, hw would not have been able to buy a house and feel more creative.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Thanks for your kind words! I am happy to help a bit! Don't call people "loved people." Call them "loved ones." Your use of "provides a huge flexibility to choose where to live" is mangled. I would simply write "gives people more flexibility when they choose where to live." Otherwise, this is quite good. I think it would score about 24 or 25 points. Nice work.
@hamidfaju
@hamidfaju 9 ай бұрын
While I appreciate the points mentioned by Ronald and Karen, I think that remote work is not beneficial. First of all, you and your team can solve a problem quickly when they all work in person at the company. For instance, a IT company is working to create a new software for a client. When all team members work in the company building, they can easily reach togethr and ask a question. In contrast, in a remote work, you need to send an email to them to find a solution. As we know, chat and email take more time. Some people may feel that remote work is better for individual life, but I think the team work in a company have more advantage.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
I think this one would score 20 or 21 points. There are just too many grammar and language use errors to score much higher than the low 20s. Consider using something like "Grammarly" to check your work to see the kinds of mistakes you make most frequently.
@hamidfaju
@hamidfaju 9 ай бұрын
Thanks Michael, I got my TOEFL score, and the writing score was 21, exactly you said. @@Toeflresources
@dipchhetri4800
@dipchhetri4800 10 ай бұрын
❤❤
@skygrey4867
@skygrey4867 3 күн бұрын
While communicating...., so can talking.... What does While mean in this sentence structure? I can't get it.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 3 күн бұрын
It means something like "while it is true that" or just "even though".
@skygrey4867
@skygrey4867 3 күн бұрын
@@Toeflresources Thank you for your explanation. I mean is "While...so "a fixed sentence structure to use?
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 3 күн бұрын
Honestly, I don't think you should memorize that structure. Your question has shown me that my usage is somewhat tricky. It is probably better to use "while" in the more common way, like in the examples here: www.toeflresources.com/blog/usingwhile/
@skygrey4867
@skygrey4867 3 күн бұрын
@@Toeflresources Thank you so much 😊
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 3 күн бұрын
@@skygrey4867 My pleasure! When will you take the test?
@aat_k9830
@aat_k9830 8 ай бұрын
In my opinion, companies should expand their remote working policies. Single parents and mothers who are breastfeeding their young ones are able to take advantage of this opportunity. Single parents have a lot of responsibilities like taking their children to school and taking care of the household which limits their ability to commute to work everyday. People with different abilities would benefit from this scheme as well. They do not have to commute and struggle with traffic. They would also feel positive about themselves and not isolated if they are able to contribute to a cause or a project by working from home. Moreover, college goers with limited time in their hands and a lot on their plate find these remote jobs attractive. In conclusion, companies will have the opportunity to enhance diversity and inclusivity through this scheme. Thank you.
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 8 ай бұрын
I think this one would score about 26 points. Nice work.
@user-xk6tj9wb8j
@user-xk6tj9wb8j 10 ай бұрын
Hi Michael! um really appreciative of the hard work that U consistently put in order to help so many people have kinda better understanding of how to do pretty well on the real test. About writing more than 130 words thing, when I practice, I sorta type 188 words which makes me not able to check my mistakes, and once I take a screenshot of my response, I find at least 10 misspelled words and I end up getting 4. However, once I decided to minimize the number of words to 130 or 140 ,I found my score boosted to 5. The question is, does having over 5 words misspelled can drop the score to 4???🥲
@thematrix1308
@thematrix1308 10 ай бұрын
I think we have the same problem. I write about 150 words, and I don't have the time to check my spelling and grammar. When I put it in Grammarly I see a lot of spelling mistakes. I think it is because of my bad typing. I type really slowly. However, when I rewrite it carefully I just get the 5. I do not know what should I do? My exam is on October 4, and I still don't know how to type correctly, let alone speaking. I haven't even started that yet.
@levsiii
@levsiii 9 ай бұрын
@@thematrix1308wih you both all the luck ❤
@Toeflresources
@Toeflresources 9 ай бұрын
Yes, it seems that spelling mistakes can be a problem. Read this blog post: www.toeflresources.com/blog/more-toefl-e-rater-explorations/
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