usually don't write anything unless the transition is part of the narrative context. Yes ok it always is, but sometimes it is more than others.
@TheStoryDepartment21 сағат бұрын
Hey Renato, Thank you for the comment. Totally in agreement with you. What I didn't sufficiently emphasise is the need for continuity, and the importance of continuity in the transition. Have you seen the latest video? Your comment would have applied in that context, too. ;) Cheers, Karel
@GriffynBachtaКүн бұрын
Super clear and helpful video!
@sibyjosemailbox3963Күн бұрын
great
@alexanderdurig44742 күн бұрын
you had me the moment you used the phrase 'emotional logic' TQ~~
@leticiasocarras25763 күн бұрын
❤I❤SICARIO❤
@anthonywritesfantasy9 күн бұрын
It's adapt or die. It comes down to storytelling - humans will always find new ways to tell stories. Just keep capturing the moment, and you'll weather it!
@nikoletta_12 күн бұрын
You mentioned a line of dialogue in the film that's not in the script. Why does this happen in script vs. screen? Do the actors improvise and add these extra lines or are they added at some other kind of final draft of the script (or by the director perhaps)?
@JamesFleming113 күн бұрын
How is Usual Suspects not on this examination of endings?
@misspatcleveland15 күн бұрын
Thank you
@anthonywritesfantasy17 күн бұрын
Premise, Structure, Character, Story, Dialogue. That seems like a pretty good curriculum!
@jasminekaram88018 күн бұрын
I wonder what credentials he has? Cause what he says counters what Media AI researcher Yves Bergquist and Ai researchers like Gary Marcus and more. Which stress that we are in or near the peak of so called generative AI. That the limitations of the tech will not be overcome by scaling and using even more data, resources and energy. Scaling them only increases the statistical possibilities but does not make the tech more cognitive complex. It does not then understand. They still just predict based on internal biases and training dataset the statistically most likely word or phrase or in image pixels to follow. And no, I do not see why I should add hallucinating stochastic parrots in my work flow, and I think it is unethical to use models made by scraping peoples private data and copyrighted work without consent or compensation for commercial ends. Hence I say no to using anything made by Open AI.
@AllenUry18 күн бұрын
In 10 to 15 years, I expect to see the commercial film industry bifurcated. Studios will churn out AI-generated content that is intelligently cut-and-pasted to appeal to the widest possible audience. At the same time, independent studios will produce original, lower-cost fare to appeal to niche markets. The difference will be the same that differentiates "skill" from "art."
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu18 күн бұрын
Cool topic. So, you got cancelled already? Let's uncancel you then, shall we...? LOL
@user-ci6ii1dv6y20 күн бұрын
Wait did you say that it will disappear or all but disapwar like it won't?
@TheStoryDepartment19 күн бұрын
I wanted to suggest that while screenwriters may not disappear entirely, they will be reduced in number and significance.
@spenserdavis78825 күн бұрын
The fearmongering "Get your script out before it's too late" messaging is a bit ridiculous. I understand wanting to be curious about A.I. advancements, but using it to stoke anxiety or some sort of ticking clock is counter-productive.
@user-ci6ii1dv6y25 күн бұрын
exactly, the dude just discovered ai and is going down the rabbit hole expecting only negativity. Glad im' not the only one who hates this.
@TheStoryDepartment24 күн бұрын
That comment about the course was obviously tongue-in-cheek but I do believe that many people are in denial about what is really happening. Fear can be a motivator. And great storytellers will continue to find work, but that doesn't mean that the majority of jobs will likely disappear.
@Jesus.the.Christ24 күн бұрын
@@TheStoryDepartment It didn't sound tongue-in-cheek, it sounded like fear mongering you were pushing in order to sell more of whatever you're selling. Just another leech scrambling for the wanna-be screenwriter's wallet. You're blocked.
@user-ci6ii1dv6y25 күн бұрын
nice, another daily dose of fearmongering! don't you have feelings i doubt you got a million dollar to save you so why are you not hoping for a better future also you're **expert** just seems like a random dude experimenting with ai and giving his opinion like it's fact.
@TheStoryDepartment24 күн бұрын
I'm certainly hoping for a better future but at the same time I want to face it with open eyes. Cheers, Karel
@TheStoryDepartment24 күн бұрын
I don't think it was presented as fact and it's certainly a more reliable opinion than mine...
@aileene985725 күн бұрын
Wow! A lot of bitter writers on here. If you’ve got a great script, it will be recognized. If you suck, then it’s on you. A negative attitude gets you nowhere!
@martins.muleya574225 күн бұрын
Please don't ever put phoebe waller-bridge in the same sentence as Billy wilder.
@TheStoryDepartment25 күн бұрын
Fair request! 😂 It’s just for her fans who have never heard of BW. Cheers, Karel
@paulpasadena26 күн бұрын
I love how they treat the reveal of the teacher in THE WHALE like it's some big reveal. In reality, they'd be shocked for like 7 seconds and then they'd be like, "Oh. Our teacher's fat. Moving on." It really wouldn't be a big, epic revelation like they treat it in the movie.
@TheStoryDepartment26 күн бұрын
Hi Paul, Thanks for your comment! I hadn't thought about it that way but it makes perfect sense. It also reflects the teacher's own anxiety about it. The tension in his mind is expressed on the screen through the tension created by the black screen. The obvious irony here is that in the real world, often the teacher's screen is one of the few that has the camera on. If they can, students often leave their cameras off. Cheers, Karel
@ManUnhappyКүн бұрын
The age difference would reflect that this scene is more about the teacher’s anxiety about it, not the students. He’s had years of intolerance and jeers and all that. Yes the kids likely wouldn’t care but it’s a lot for someone to overcome after that kind of conditioning.
@NR-tr4tq27 күн бұрын
Great video. Equally great t-shirt. Really looking forward to Eggers' version of Nosferatu.
@TheStoryDepartment27 күн бұрын
Believe it or not: I had not made the connection!
@NR-tr4tq27 күн бұрын
@@TheStoryDepartment I thought it was subtle foreshadowing 😏
@ladyheroin.v414327 күн бұрын
This channel needs millions of subs. So much knowledge
@TheStoryDepartment26 күн бұрын
Thank you for the kind words. Not sure how realistic it is, but it would be nice. Please keep coming back, and spread the word! Cheers, Karel
@mercurialhypersprite955626 күн бұрын
Facts brother. So true my friend.
@DannyBoy44328 күн бұрын
Has he written anything on his own though? lol
@TheStoryDepartment26 күн бұрын
Does it matter? Great analysts don't have to be (successful) writers. I was a successful teacher for many years before I applied my theory. Cheers, Karel
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu28 күн бұрын
"Sofia wanted to...". "Hmmm... No." Thank you, bro! We all needed that.
@TheStoryDepartment27 күн бұрын
Dude - you have no idea the stuff I get to read... Sometimes I'm thinking no matter what people pay to get notes, it's worth more to just put the damn thing down...
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu28 күн бұрын
Dude, you're a darn sweet-talker, eh...
@TheStoryDepartment27 күн бұрын
You're talking to me? I always wonder which part of the video you're referring to... Cheers, Karel
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu21 күн бұрын
@@TheStoryDepartment Yep. All of it, lol! Srsly, you made a very compelling argument - also funny. Win-win. Good job!
@TiagoCavalcanti-ji6hu28 күн бұрын
Glad to see you again! Nice hook, BTW!
@TheStoryDepartment27 күн бұрын
Hey, thanks!
@roshanhill600928 күн бұрын
Fantastic info 🎉 thank you indeed
@TheStoryDepartment27 күн бұрын
Glad it was helpful!
@roshanhill600928 күн бұрын
Lol
@TheStoryDepartment27 күн бұрын
Glad you're having fun, Roshan. BTW - Meetup this afternoon! ;)
@TheStoryDepartment28 күн бұрын
I HAVE ADDED A NEW AND BETTER VIDEO TO THE CHANNEL: kzfaq.info/get/bejne/r7mdfLOevJqsoYk.html Watch that one instead of this.
@thatsreelcreative29 күн бұрын
Thank you.
@TheStoryDepartment28 күн бұрын
You're welcome! I like your avatar thumb ;) Have you considered subscribing? Cheers, Karel
@thatsreelcreative27 күн бұрын
@@TheStoryDepartment Of course I've subbed! It's Caleb. :)
@RoninSerradaEscrimadoreАй бұрын
This movie sucked. Don't care about the characters, don't care about the war, we're never told why it's happening which lends to the two former complaints, wrote by a Brit who is fccking clueless on American politics, filled with woke bullshht, and the premise of "celebrating journalists" falls flat after nearly every news company in America have engaged in censorship. These so-called heroes of journalism were lock-step with the orders to filter news and stories to achieve a political agenda. We don't have journalists here, we have woke activists. So Alex Garland should stick to zombie movies and stay the fcck out of American politics. Maybe we should write a movie about how woke UK should be named "Britainistan" with the capitol of "Londonabad". Maybe Alex would love to see us making movies about how Britain all been taken over by terrorists and woke ideology. Fcck Alex Garland. Fcck Civil War. Lmao
@codybeavers4971Ай бұрын
Dude, your screen doesn't show the actual examples. We can only see you talking. Did you not watch the video before you posted it??
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Hey Cody - It was my first KZfaq video, and obviously I was an ignorant noob. It just so happens that I'm working on a new version of this video, which is 2000% better in terms of examples and production values. Sorry about the trouble with this one! The text is in the video description, if you can be bothered... ;) If I remember, I'll post a link here once the new video is live. Thanks for your feedback! Cheers, Karel
@TheStoryDepartment28 күн бұрын
The new video is up! kzfaq.info/get/bejne/r7mdfLOevJqsoYk.html
@yorkipudd1728Ай бұрын
Productivity, not quality. The whole creative market needs to be tested. No point in frequent films if no one watches, and there will need to be a human aspect or no one will care. Plus age ratings still need to be adhered to across a global market. The people will decide this one, but my main issue is that the children will be the test base because they won't know any better. Scary.
@TheStoryDepartment28 күн бұрын
Thanks for your note. 100% with you on the age ratings. How children are 'left to their devices' is scarier than the power of tech in itself. Cheers, Karel
@Brisco1Ай бұрын
@1:27 Instead of apologizing or making excuses, she doubles down on why the script was so bad, I love it 😂
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
She knows writers. He was going to ask "But why??" 🤣
@k9jazzy121Ай бұрын
The bottom line is if you’re already very good at something then AI will make you an expert. If you’re okay at something the AI will make you very good at it and eventually you can become an expert. But the more you know about the subject the better you can prompt the AI. For instance if you’re an accomplished writer and you’re talking to your editor about rewriting a chapter, you may discuss creating more tension or conflict or changing the POV or doing some foreshadowing. Well that’s how you have to talk to the AI. You can’t just tell it to write a scene about a guy walking into a bar and getting into a fight with the bouncer. It’s not going to give you much in its first response. But I think the people who are critical about AI writing capability are missing the point. The AI can take you from a blank page to first draft in a couple of days. And then you start editing and using your experience to turn it into something. Using AI is like having a team or writers that you can collaborate with. I think it would be foolish for a writer to ignore this breakthrough in technology.
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Great summary. Thanks! Cheers, Karel
@georgevillalba2810Ай бұрын
Tylor Sheridan hates notes. Specially when it’s an original script. He says none can give notes to an original script. I don’t think he’s 100% right on that.
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Where did you found out about Sheridan's attitude to notes? I'm not surprised, as it is consistent with everything else I've heard him say. Did you see my Sicario series? I think Villeneuve made some significant changes for the better.... Cheers, Karel
@georgevillalba2810Ай бұрын
@@TheStoryDepartment been watching a lot of videos on Sheridan. And in one of those videos, might have been on DP/30 , or at a Q/A at a festival, he says he doesn’t take notes on original. Sicario and Hell or high water were both original and he didn’t do notes or rewrites on those. The movies were shot based on the first draft. Now I also heard that Deni and Del toro made changes to the shooting script, removed almost 90% of Del toros dialogue in Sicario.
@georgevillalba2810Ай бұрын
Gonna hire this guy
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
He won't disappoint! Cheers, Karel
@RasKalevthesouljournerАй бұрын
So great he answered this bc hollywood is the one job you really have no idea or way to really break in. It’s like a club and the only invite is through a lucky connection.
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Good point. People often overlook that breaking in means different things depending on where you live and what you want to achieve.
@shashmishraАй бұрын
Hi Karel - would you be able to tell me which of your immersion classes best covers dialogue ?
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Thanks for your comments! I have responded to your email.
@shashmishraАй бұрын
Hi Karen - which of the immersion classes would be the best one to learn dialogue?
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Immersion Script is a great starter. But if you have more time and want to go deeper, Immersion Film & TV are longer running courses, so you'll have even better training.
@briansimerl4014Ай бұрын
Very interesting discussion. Thank you for sharing!
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Did you see the other video with Michael as well? Cheers, Karel
@briansimerl4014Ай бұрын
@@TheStoryDepartment I've seen a few others. Will be viewing others soon.
@dustyhills8911Ай бұрын
Exactly. Great concept, some great imagery (some bad CGI) but horribly executed. A lot of cliche conflict and on the nose dialogue early on. Then the second act meandered without understanding the stakes
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
I wasn't bothered by the CGI. But someone told me some of it was created using A.I. And while I didn't mention this in the video, I'm with you on the dialogue issue. Cheers, Karel
@dustyhills8911Ай бұрын
One specific image made me laugh out loud. The Lincoln Memorial. That rocket and explosion shot was almost cartoonish. I enjoy the videos from here in the Midwestern US. Usually during my morning caffeinating session before I write. Thanks for the reply
@sreekanthdokuburra9847Ай бұрын
The greatest irony of our times is that you( a human) have to verify with a computer that you are not a robot by selecting few random pics. But the thing is AI or a robot or computer or whatever it is can put forward an answer or a line or a script by scouring through the data but whereas we humans can write a whole damn script just by starting with a single picture as a plot point. So no fucking hell no! AI can be used instead of a human but can never replace a human.
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
It can never replace a human. But the real question is: how many writers' jobs will A.I. obliterate. And from my conversation with Oren, I'm afraid the answer is: most. Cheers, Karel
@franksmith7247Ай бұрын
I'm hoping Michael's pilot ("O.U.R.S") is developed. His concept for the adventure/mystery series is quite unique.
@shashmishraАй бұрын
This was superb. I love the hero’s journey and thought I really knew it until this talk. I’m right in the middle of my third act in a current screenplay and this helped light the way in a big way.
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Pleased to hear! Cheers, Karel
@GriffynBachtaАй бұрын
Great interview! There's a lot to learn here from Michael.
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Thanks!
@1234aabcАй бұрын
Headphone warning at 6:45!
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Thanks so much for flagging! I've edited out a few frames, so the problem should be fixed soon. Cheers, Karel
@nikoletta_Ай бұрын
The idea of copying a screenplay to learn from it is so interesting and I'm definitely going to try it! How do I choose which screenplay to copy? (One of my favourite films is "Half Nelson" and I was thinking about copying that..)
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Half Nelson is amazing. The Immersion training provides a selection of perfect scripts. It also explains what scripts are suitable for this method. I had a quick glance at the shooting draft (share.zight.com/YEuwy28L). Except for a few long-ish description paragraphs and unorthodox use of parentheticals, it looks like an excellent script to copy. Have fun! Cheers, Karel
@nikoletta_Ай бұрын
Hey Karel, thanks! I noticed a lot of deleted scenes and dialogue in the script of Half Nelson (seems like this happened during editing and because of the film's editing style?) and also, to my understanding, a lot of stuff was improvised and given more depth by the actors. Why are there so many differences from script to screen (particularly since it's the white script)? Is it because of the independent cinema style? Thanks again! I think I have so much to learn from copying this script!
@nikoletta_13 күн бұрын
@@TheStoryDepartmentHello again Karel! I've already started copying the script I chose (for me, it was Half Nelson) and I'm on page 24 now. The whole process is very enjoyable and, most of all, it's a really valuable lesson in screenwriting. Thanks so much for recommending this technique!
@danielogilvie3079Ай бұрын
I agree, he is one of my favorites too. Wind River and Sicario are are couple of the most impactful films I've watched more recently. I read sicario but not wind river (yet). I just checked out his IMDB... the man is a beast!
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Yep. And the pundits were a little late to catch on. Cheers, Karel
@MagasafayalaАй бұрын
Interesting helpful vid.
@TheStoryDepartmentАй бұрын
Glad you liked it! Cheers, Karel
@DazgulАй бұрын
He should have read Rebel moon, then tossed it in the trash.