Miraculous ALLY (Bonds Beyond Fate Part 18)

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Welcome to Part 18: Miraculous Ally, in which we continue from the last part after Chloe had her heart-to-heart with Ms. Bustier and received her punishment for tormenting Marinette and Alya (but mostly Marinette). It is now Alya's turn to pay for her lapse in judgement for slapping Chloe. Perhaps Alya can say something to convince Ms. Bustier to not punish her....?
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Miraculous Ladybug is a show with fundamental issues and its canon origin for the characters does not escape from being problematic. So out of my disappointment, and with a sprinkle of inspiration, I rewrote the origin story into something I think would be more enticing as a show. I think this version works out some of the frustration that the current iteration of the show has including giving Master Fu and Cat Noir reasons for existing, doing away with the love square as soon as possible, providing the opportunity for stakes that actually matter, making Gabriel more interesting, and actually connecting Gabriel to Marinette. Are all of these things necessary to make Miraculous Ladybug better? No! The current elements of the show are mostly fine, the execution just needs some help. Nevertheless, I tampered with the story anyway =P
Are there any problems you have with Miraculous Ladybug? Do you like my rewrite?
Let's chat!
(Don't forget to watch out for the hidden Starlight Glimmer!)
Original character belongs to hooded_raire on Discord!
TIMESTAMPS:
00:00 Intro
00:56 Previously On…
01:34 Witness
03:13 De-escalation
07:04 State Your Case
14:38 The Jig is Up
24:15 Silver Lining
Playlist of Miraculous: Bonds Beyond Fate
• Miraculous: Bonds Beyo...
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My name is Aloubell and I am a hobbyist digital artist as well as a published children's book author. I've been drawing for as long as I can remember, and, thanks to the Lord, my art journey continues! As a Christian, I give full acknowledgement that all success I get from art and life in general is thanks to my Lord and Savior, Jesus Christ. I'm proud to say He has helped make each and every art piece of mine possible.
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@phenjaws569 3 ай бұрын

Loved this part. I also love how you gave the miraculous holders a character in authority who can support them like Alfred for Batman

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you 💖✨

@nathanspradlin8570 3 ай бұрын

Wow, that actually makes a lot of sense

@marcoscruz8431 3 ай бұрын

Ok but having Trixx to help you on homework might a great thing! Think of it, Trixx have thousands if not millions of years! Imagine how much they would help you on history or math (Trixx was probably there when it was invented), and other lenguages class (kwamis speak all lenguages). I think Alya will be just fine 😅. Also hope Miss Bustier don't get akumatized so soon.

@nutmeg_4886 3 ай бұрын

I love the metaphor for the ice pack and Chloe

@rawdasalmataman7908 3 ай бұрын

I don't know how i feel about Miss bustier knowing about the secret but I hope it brings good results and makes the kids feel safe and reassured talking about their troubles as superheroes. I love Miss bustier here and I think she is wise enough to help them and give them advice when they need it. I live for the last scene it was so sweet and just so amazing it genuinely warmed my heart. Like chloe and adrien 's realionship is so beautiful

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you for watching! 🥰

@lashizzal7095 3 ай бұрын

Loving the Chole and Ayla conflict!🤫

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

😁

@Ro994 3 ай бұрын

🤫 Oooo, what a plot twist! 👀 I for real was not expecting that Miss Bustier already knew about Alya and Marinette's secret, but I like the potential this has! Alya's right, other heroes wished they had that advantage xD And with how reliable, trustworthy and supportive your version of Miss Bustier is, I know this is info she can be trusted with. I'm also glad we got a small peak at what kind of incidents have happened between Chloé and Marinette in the past, but we still haven't seen what THE incident was. That was a clever way to tease that reveal for later. 😉 Also just wanted to appreciate that ending with Chloé and Adrien. That was a sweet little moment. 😊 It's always such a delight to get new parts of this story, and I'm sure it's only gonna keep getting even better moving forward!

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you always for such enthusiastic and encouraging comments! I'm glad you're enjoying the story 🥰✨

@StealthyPumpkin 3 ай бұрын

🤫 I've said it before, and I'll say it again. I love the way you handle character interactions. That's an aspect of writing that I personally struggle with. Keep up the good work, and feel free to take your time. This stuff is worth the wait.

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Aww thank you! 🥰 I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!

@Wendeta-hq2cp 3 ай бұрын

Bustier is so much cooler here. This rewrite series is so good!🤫🤫🤫

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you! 😁

@47ratsinahoodie 3 ай бұрын

Ms Bustier is SO awesome 😭 I love the handling of Alya and Chloe's punishments, and I'm glad Bustier actually helps her students. Fantastic work once again! And I can't say it enough, I LOVE how chibi Mona came out, I'm excited to see the army growing 🤫

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you so much for watching! And Mona was fun to draw! Thanks for the opportunity! 😁✨

@Lilybelle-vr3ho 3 ай бұрын

OMG ITS HERE ITS HERE ITS HERE

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

😎👍✨

@redballoon9007 3 ай бұрын

Welp this was an unexpected chain of events. 1. I said it before and I’ll say it again. I LOVE Ms. Bustier in this rewrite. She’s literally everything I wanted her to be in canon and more. But I’m anxious about the reveal that she knows Alya and Marinette’s secret identities (as well as Adrien’s to an extent) This makes me wonder if this could lead up to anything big (like Bustier possibly getting a miraculous. I’ve never seen it happen in an AU and I’m not sure how I’d feel if she got the bee instead of Chloe but I also don’t know what other changes you made to canon sooooo). But you protrayed her sternness and her compassion really well in this. Though I will say, Alya’s punishment was a bit harsh compared to Chloe’s (especially since suspending her isn’t gonna stop her from going out and stuff…I think) 2. I also like how you handled Alya in this little mini arc. You portrayed her anger at Chloe well but also her regret. She obviously still cares about Chloe to some extent and just like Bustier I’m also rooting for her, Chloe and Marinette to eventually find some common ground and MAYBE even restart a friendship. Not sure how the others are going to take Bustier knowing their identities though….if Alya tells them at all. 3. Chloe wasn’t in this as much (cus it was a more Alya centered episode) but I still wanna talk about her. I’m inclined to think she also cares about Alya to an extent too. Otherwise she wouldn’t have asked why Alya was apologizing. She knows she had the punch coming (at least in her mind) and she knows the pranks she did were wrong. And she was so close from saying something because if it. I do hope the time away from school will clear her head. Tho I feel like something big is going to happen revolving her while she’s away. 4. The little segment with Adrien and Chloe was really sweet. I like how this Adrien is still willing to express his frustration with Chloe while being a true friend to her.

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you always for such enthusiastic and encouraging comments! I like hearing how things are going from my audience's perspective! I'm glad you're enjoying the story 🥰✨

@nathanspradlin8570 3 ай бұрын

I LOVE that Ms. Bustier only already knew about Alya and Marinette's (and possibly Adrien's) secret identities BUT is also willing to assist them in a non superhero way. I know you probably don't take requests for this AU fanfic Alou. But I love it in the story where Ms. Bustier not only meets and interacts with Master Fu, but suggests that Chloe becomes Queen Bee so not only would it help Chloe's redemption arc not get character development between Marinette, Alya, Adrien (and maybe Nino too). Overall I want to bless for this AU and hope and find success in your KZfaq Career. Thank you and God bless you for this AU series but also hope you find success discussing and rewriting for other series as well because I don't want you to get "trapped" and make content you want.

@redballoon9007 3 ай бұрын

Here’s the thing about this, we don’t know if Chloe’s going to be Queen Bee or not in this. Aloubell changed a lot already in this series and in her Chloe video essay, she mentioned that she believes Chloe can change even without the bee miraculous. And Ms. Bustier knows more about the superhero thing than Chloe does which means when the time comes, unless something big positively happens between Chloe and the others, Bustier has a better shot at being the bee holder than Chloe does. And this is coming from a person that does want Chloe to be Queen Bee in this rewrite.

@nathanspradlin8570 3 ай бұрын

@@redballoon9007 I get it, but to be fair, the "miraculous holder from Japan" hasn't appeared either and we don't if it's even Kagami in this version. All I'm saying is that I wish that Chloe and Ms. Bustier would be even MORE involved in the story than they already are. All I'm trying to get from the story is more Allies (superhero or not) to help in defeating the villain. Heck, we don't even if LILA will be in this version or not. All I'm trying to get across is that I want more character development and an eventual third act to this epic story.

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you for your encouragement! 🥰 As for Ms. Bustier, the little she knows about everything, the better, so there probably won't be too many, if any, interactions with Fu. Besides, I don't think she'd want Chloe to have a miraculous. Chloe is already going through a lot and having to put her life on the line AND having such an enormous responsibility is not added stress that Ms. Bustier would want for her. I'm not saying Chloe will or won't get a Miraculous, I'm just saying that Bustier wouldn't want her to have one right now. Bustier doesn't even want Alya and her friends to be superheroes (for their safety), but she accepts that this is reality and is willing to support them when able.

@nathanspradlin8570 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubell honestly, that's completely fair. However you decide to tell the rest of the story is your decision to make. I was giving my two cents about the story and makes A LOT of sense for her to not get involved and know little as possible so she doesn't get akumatized. But I'm very intrigued when the main plot finally comes back with Gabriel and Nathalie and the overall story will get back on track. Again thank you and hope you branch out in your content.

@danielkapekele1462 2 ай бұрын

Chloe sort of maybe taking accountability. Me: "She's cleared of all charges. -_-"

@obsessedstar 3 ай бұрын

One does not simply remove dough from their hair

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

lol that's true XD Hence Alya's frustration!

@Ninja52157 3 ай бұрын

🤫I did NOT expect that plot twist to happen! Can’t wait to see what happens next. Also, that was really nice of Adrien to help Chloe.

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you ✨🩷

@QuietStorm44777 3 ай бұрын

16:23 welp.. The Lulu is out of the bag now😂

@PancakeRights 3 ай бұрын

Thank you so much I am really enjoying bonds beyond fate. Today I'm watching it after a long party at home with guests while getting on with some homework, homemade brownies and chocolates by my side. Love you Aloe! You helo my mental health and help me relax!

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Aww, I'm glad I can help you relax! 🩷✨ I hope you're having a lovely day! Thank you for watching! 😁

@itz_Hunter_Lumine 3 ай бұрын

This is SO FRICKING GOOD!! DARE I SAY BETTER THAN MOST SHOWS AND ESPECIALLY MLB!!

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

THANK YOU!! 💖🥰

@QuietStorm44777 3 ай бұрын

Ahh now I see why you chose the 🤫 emoji especially after 7:28😂 very clever! Great job as always and a great job on the chibi Mona made by Hoodedraire! Lovely job both of you! 👏👏👏

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you so very much!! 😁

@bartoszraczkowski3984 3 ай бұрын

🤫 omg its so amazing i just adore this mini arc

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thanks so much! 😁❤️

@besthuman8964 3 ай бұрын

Glad we have a competent teacher

@Bluiidayz 3 ай бұрын

Oh my gosh I never expected ms bustier to know XD also Alya’s lie was sooo bad she could have said she was volunteering for a charity or something and didn’t want to disappoint or that they were relying on her etc. like come on now ‘secret job’ whatt 😭 amazing writing as always Alou!

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Lol thank you! ❤

@viktoriaschweizer8724 3 ай бұрын

I love your rewrite, Aloubell 🤫

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you 🥰

@viktoriaschweizer8724 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubellYou are welcome Alou 🤫☺️

@timotheebrasseur6188 3 ай бұрын

You're a really really really good writer!

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Aww thank you! 🥰

@C.DWoods 3 ай бұрын

WOOOO NEW Bonds beyond fate!🤫

@masterm1863 3 ай бұрын

Bonjour Aloue, je ne suis pas sur si tu comprend le français, mais j'apprécie bien tes efforts tu place quand tu fais tes bons videos sur Miraculous et d'autres dessin animé ! Tres bien, j'apprécie beaucoup tes efficacités dans tes videos ! Bonne Journée !

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

I don't understand too much French, though I got the gist of what you're saying! (And Google Translate helped lol) Merci beaucoup mon ami! 💖💖

@masterm1863 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubell I have been living in France for over 4 years so I definitely got used to the language since I communicate with it a lot in school ! Also, ngl French people are pretty funny whenever they try to speak English in front of me ! 😄

@solei5678 Ай бұрын

Love how every character gets their time ❤

@TheArtisticAloubell Ай бұрын

Thank you! 💖

@bellsdels 2 ай бұрын

14:41 OH MY GOD??? I was NOT expecting that ‼️

@dannyloves6844 3 ай бұрын

I quote one of your subscribers, we poor ppl can finally watch this. Yay.thank you! ❤

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank YOU for watching! 🥰

@Amokzzzz-hv5jz 3 ай бұрын

Love this! Why is Hawkmoth being awfully quiet.... I'm scared. Also love the plot twist!💖

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

If you recall from a few parts ago, Hawkmoth DID attack the morning that all of this drama went down. The fight just happened off screen because it wasn't super important. It was just to show that he's still doing stuff, but I wanted the focus to be on what's going on between the kids. Trust me, Hawkmoth will get his time to shine soon 😁

@AnimeStarSky 3 ай бұрын

Your stories are the best!..... 😁

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you so much! 😊

@AnimeStarSky 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubell welcome!..... 😁

@eduardolflores3481 3 ай бұрын

It's been ages but she is back... also Did you know about the AU Miraculous Team by SonicPossible00?

@Wendeta-hq2cp 3 ай бұрын

Which one?

@eduardolflores3481 3 ай бұрын

@@Wendeta-hq2cp SonicPossible00

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Unfortunately, I've never heard of them before!

@eduardolflores3481 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubell don't worry just search in Google and read it! It's incredible it's like a Hidden jewel 💎 of Miraculous

@QuietStorm44777 3 ай бұрын

Lol I wasn't expecting to find glimmy from looking back at some of the interesting timestamps! Whhhhhhhhhoooooooooo! 🥳

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Nicely done! ✨🍪✨

@Chloe_GachaTubez 3 ай бұрын

Loved the new video!!! It was interesting to watch!!! Keep up the great work, Alou!!! 🤫

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Many many thanks! 💖

@dazzledoodle 3 ай бұрын

How do you make these stories THAT good? Like, if there was a show with this kind of arc I'd watch it and love it

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Aww thanks

@DishonorableMentions452 3 ай бұрын

Are you actually serious right now 😬 bustier knows...

@yamysindragnov 3 ай бұрын

🤫❤❤LOVE your vids

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you! 💖✨

@starbright592 3 ай бұрын

Love you and your channel. 🤫

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

I appreciate you so much! 🥰

@starbright592 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubell thank you

@alicjazurek5550 3 ай бұрын

luv yah aloubell looking forward to the next video or whaterever idea you have in mind

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

thank you

@eeveestars3668 3 ай бұрын

As a writer myself I respect you having Trix knowledge The foreshadowing, giving yourself an extra pat on the back I see 😅. BTW if somehow Mrs Bostaye ever finds out about any of the heros identitys in my rewrite I am totality taking that joke from you 😅

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

@mr-saiya-jin 2 ай бұрын

Hmm, how interesting. This rewrite is turning out quite well. I never really comment on your videos, but just this once, I’ll say this. Your style of writing is honestly a breath of fresh air and inspiring. Listening to the entire story for the first time, I could see everything you portrayed. It made me interested in the characters, direction, and what would come in the future. It made me eager to see more. I don't know how else to put it. I also watch some of your non-Maculous content, too. It’s very fascinating to watch and listen to. Above all, I wish the best for you. Keep up the incredible work.

@TheArtisticAloubell 2 ай бұрын

I very much appreciate your comment! Thank you for watching and for your support

@Blazexiao 3 ай бұрын

Hmmm maybe if alya is unavailable to be Rena then she has miss bustier to count on to be her backup holder 🤫🧏

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Remember in this story that the miraculous are bound to their users until death. So, Bustier couldn't fill in for Alya that way, unfortunately~ But I like your speculation! 😁

@Blazexiao 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubell oh yeah, I haven’t seen the earlier parts in ages 😂

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

@@Blazexiao no problem XD

@danielkapekele1462 2 ай бұрын

Ok Darn it >:v we get it Chloe is a menace. Giving me a concussion with how hard your hitting my head with it. Though I hadn't been considering the larger ramifications of her threats up till now so I suppose its fair.

@danielkapekele1462 2 ай бұрын

User of the fox miraculous fails to be cunning.

@QuietStorm44777 3 ай бұрын

8:04 Ms Butstier confirmed to be Mona's (no not that one in this video! Or the genshin one 😂The one made by Aloe herself in a different video! 😉) long lost wayyyy 0.09999 % relative! Lol jk 🤣

@boredblue9686 3 ай бұрын

🤫 The plot twist midway through was so unexpected but also so exciting! I love it SO much!! May I ask something though? I didn't understand what Alya meant when she said she was protecting someone else as well during the fight. Did she mean Adrien? Nino? Do I have to figure it out on my own like Chloe? 😂😂

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you 💖 And yeah, you'll have to figure out what Alya meant x3

@boredblue9686 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubell Darn! 😂😂

@danielkapekele1462 2 ай бұрын

Bonds beyond fate forever. Kinda weird youtube doesn't suggest it and I'm always late.

@TheArtisticAloubell 2 ай бұрын

I'm glad you're here ^^

@danielkapekele1462 2 ай бұрын

*Deducts adult points for the teacher*

@danielkapekele1462 2 ай бұрын

WHAT! Ms bustiyai are YOU really a time traveler?

@LigeraDays 2 ай бұрын

It's my joke theory that that Ms Bustier is the European Guardian. I've got no proof. Just point this out there

@pjklockner5683 3 ай бұрын

Great video. It was a little slow at the beginning, but I love the reveal and the directions of the character conflicts. If I may ask, why does Alya's voice echo like that from 22:02 to 22:20? Also, sorry for being five days too late. 🤫

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Thank you 🩷 The echoey parts are her thinking. I try to make thinking sound different than regular talking haha

@pjklockner5683 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubell Okay, that makes much more sense. Thank you for clarifying.

@coolfireboy6673 3 ай бұрын

Have you seen The Prince of Egypt? I'm curious for your thoughts

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

I LOVE the Prince of Egypt ✨🥰 It's probably my favorite DreamWorks film. The animation is beautiful, the music is fantastic, and I love how much it respects the story of Moses. So much time and effort went into this movie and I just adore it. ☺️

@coolfireboy6673 3 ай бұрын

Cool! Thanks for responding! I think it is a really good film

@fratercr5262 3 ай бұрын

🤫

@The_Watcher_0 3 ай бұрын

Why is an independent KZfaqr better at writing a show than the people who created it? 💀💀

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

thank you

@The_Watcher_0 3 ай бұрын

@@TheArtisticAloubell I'll be honest, I've probably watched this 3 times over. As in the whole series.

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

@@The_Watcher_0 Oh! thank you very much! that makes me feel very good as a writer

@rumarahman5154 3 ай бұрын

I think you should write a novel

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

Maybe one day ^^

@LittleRedTea 3 ай бұрын

🤫Bustier being a good teacher! Yes! Can't wait to see where you take this next! Jesus loves you! Have a blessed day!

@TheArtisticAloubell 3 ай бұрын

God bless! 🥰✨💖✝️🩷 Thank you for reading!

@alicjazurek5550 3 ай бұрын

yeeeeeeah

@graynight3478 Ай бұрын

What seasons and episode does this correspond to?

@TheArtisticAloubell Ай бұрын

It doesn't haha. I made up this storyline ^^

@Leeroy2029 3 ай бұрын

Bernadetta

@andrewpeacock716 2 ай бұрын

🤫🤫🤫

@neerajoshi5473 3 ай бұрын

Hello artistic Annabelle I was wondering if you would be interested in making a video on my original story of miraculous I made my own original miraculous story, so can you please make a video on it someday when I posted online this is my own original miraculous story it’s not a rewrite it is my own original story with different characters different miraculous and all the different things the story takes place in Japan so I wish you will make a video on my original miraculous story in the future I won’t be able to post it right now because of my exams but once my exams over, I will post it and I hope you’ll make a video on it someday