I liked this idea, good video c:

Eek i asked for unfamiliar for Christmas (1 & 2!) i really hope i get it

YES! YES.

hello! what app do you use to draw? i want to try drawing on computers.

@@UnhealthyCatObsession.. I think she uses photoshop

HELL YES

fr

I read this as she said it 😭

REALL

Can i ask what a prose is? •3•

DONT DO HER LIKE THAT BHAHAAHHA

Bro she looks like a fucking Lego character lmfao

As someone built like a refrigerator I can confirm

Nah she’s built like a roblox char

@@SemiCollon2she looks like tgat one body package?? Like the woman one but with the rounded feet instead of the blocky ones 😭

Tbh, if this book realy is about horrors of modeling agency, than description of main character realy got the point across and could be considered actualy good

exactly i took it as a hyperbole for how thin you must be to be considered in the modelling industry

Could be, but I ain’t gonna read to book find out.

@@Marrianno I doubt, the title of the book is "Easy Prey". "orz

That description was the creepiest for me. Talking about a sixteen year old giving birth in her description like that.

I THOUGHT I WAS THE ONLY ONE-

YES, EXACTLY HER

Who the heck is that? 🤔

​@riverselive_kdmz_8458 the main antagonist of Kuzko's life 😂

I was thinking Curella De Vill lol

🤣🤣🤣

Or somewhere in between where her toungue is extra long but so are her lashes 😂

She is straight up a lizard

you could even go as far as to say it isnt her tongue or lashes that are short or long but infact her face is so incredibly short that her tongue reaches her lashes

All of these replies are horrifying i love them

Wait, is that what it said????

LMFAOOOOO

​@@greenapple9477yes, usually I see that describing someone's gaze (f*ck-me eyes), or something, never seen anyone describe shoulder blades that way...

NAHH

Sometimes people should just....think what they're doing.

"She walked though the door and gazed into my eyes. She looked like the most hideous creature I have ever seen."

​@@kikosawaLMFAOOO

​@@kikosawaHELP THAT MADE MY DAY

Or: “Great, that bruise STILL hasn’t healed, I should get that checked out.”

"Dang. I guess them eyebags are permanent huh"

@@spam-el3ee Relatable as a guy, too.

Sometimes when I look in to the mirror, I start to think about how weird and bald humans look compared to other animals and I start to freak out... XD

@@Pupsuli We have the worst skin. Other mammals have hair that keeps them warm, but we have to purchase our equivalent. Now we're more vulnerable to cold temperatures and sunburns.

not just any car... late 80's, 90's cars..

Your comment actually made me snort out loud! Can't help but to think of Queen's "I'm in love with my car", written and sung by Roger Taylor: 🎵🎶 I'm in love with my car Got a feel for my automobile Get a grip on my boy-racer Rollbar Such a thrill when your radials squeal 🎵🎶

is that a Queen reference? haha

I’m in love with my car too lowkey but I’d never describe my chest that way 💀

...is she a transformer?

Same, it’s just disturbing tbh

Right like it can be a genuine medical concern to have narrower hips in the context of birth. So, it weird to throw that out so flippantly

agreed, whenever they do it it just feels like they only see women as baby making tools :[

People said that a few times to me when I was a teen (which makes it worse) and I found it so creepy.

But is basic biology, lol.

Where and why

THIS HAS NO REASON TO MAKE ME LAUGH AS MUCH AS I JUST DID 😭✋

IM DEAD BRO

LMAOOO NOOO

a content creator friend once had "be there or be square" title on their live stream, i saw it going live on discord but didn't have time to watch.. but for some reason i had time to do simple "photoshop" (iirc i used ms paint) where i changed spongebob square pants color, clothes and face to reflect my avatars features and i shared that pic on discord with "i guess i am square then"

girl WAS there, and she WAS square as well. get you a girl who can do both

i could not get over it,,, i could not move on

​@@LavenderTownepraying they meant the entire coil and NOT a singular wire

Dude, authors like these loveee to specify puberty features when it comes to young girls and teens. It's like their fav thing to point out "budding breasts" or "growing hips" or birthing ability specifically towards young characters. Major creep vibes, to be that focused on a young girl's growing process.

@@TNP- damnit now thats making me giggle even more lmaooo

@@ettaetta439 yeeah, its why i tend to avoid older books. but [unfortuneately] it happens in a LOOOOT of fanfics too. its one thing to want to describe your characters well enough that the reader can visualize them as if they knew them in the real world. but pointing out things like uhm...that? yeah no. its like an immediate ick for me. bonus points if the reader has actually had experience with a pedo preying on them like that..

I don't even know what that means can someone explain 😂 Who eats bees? like i stepped on a bee expression ?

In the video, Lavendertown says that the lips are so big and swollen, the girl looks like she ate a bee/ was stung by a bee on the mouth. I thought that would make a good bad descricption of big lips in a woman descritpion written by a man :D@@chixkgoddess8499

@@chixkgoddess8499 I think she was comparing this woman's lips to the lips of someone with a bee allergy getting stung.

At least she would have been eating something, poor dear.

@@nineblackgoatsYeah. Is bailing wire girl eating okay? I am actually a little concerned for her.

NOOOO THE BEES :((((((

My friend said something like "the winner of the yearly nettle-sucking competition" once. I was reminded of that.

​@@elainez'least she has those shoulder blades

Huh

You joke but when I pass I mirror I genuinely think "Damn"

​@@galaxyjam3742ngl same, I always think I'm kinda ugly the moment I'm not looking at my reflection...then when I actually see myself I am pleasantly surprised.

@@galaxyjam3742​​⁠ *_Passes mirror_* *_Bites lip_*

no like srsly i look at myself and think "how am i single"?@@galaxyjam3742

Yeah that must look kinda creepy😅

ONLY SOMETIMES?? do they fluctuate in length?

how do you lick your lashes??? it literally makes no sense

In this day and age all you have to do is add more then just pale hour glasses and your practically the best male writer dont worry. (Partly joke)

You know you can just ask women for their experiences. You don't have to know anything or learn anything. Just listen and take notes.

My advice would be to always remember that women are not aliens or a different species, so most of their experiences are simply people experiences, just like the ones you have.

nah bro/girl, they are kinda pretty.

It’s thanks to her artstyle

No, they’re very cute in her style

the way haley draws makes everything look pretty

it's the art style

THANK YOU!

Yo that confidence

What is writing females correctly means

Good on you, not feeling the need to apologize for something you're not responsible for.👍

well you start by not using the term "females" to describe people@@devilslayer3548

It’s very shojou 😅

Haha same. It looks weird but I love it. The big eyes makes her look cute

And this foot, mmmm

it’s her art style i think

Yet they described her body in the finest details giving it all the protagonism, but when describing her face the author just wrote "and her face is pretty too" like 💀

She is honestly sounds like the most unique of them

Yeup

@@DanGabrielle The author's name is Moto Moto

Her description is weird for unique reasons. The author could do better, but it’s not awful. Besides looking like she’s shoplifting boxes, she looks the most human.

Those guys saw a woman their whole life and decided to take inspiration from kitchen appliances and infrastructure

OH MY GOD A WILD SPOOKY MONTH FAN!!!!!!!! HI!!!!!!

@@drfluffff YES HAIIIIII

Men tend to have a problem with thinking women are always about trying to look pretty, or be feminine all the time. I have no idea why so many men have so much difficulty when writing women, you literally just write a character Who goes by she/her It’s not hard

@@Soapz_drawzzz AAAAAAA ITS SO RARE TO FIND US OUTSIDE OUR NATURAL HABITAT!!!!!!!! HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!

IM GONNA CRYYYYYRHDGGDGDGGWGQYYSHSD

Someone please do that I will read it immediately!

With the majestic box girl has the mc

Or maybe an animated reality TV show bc 😂

It would make a great Newsground satire show

I might do it lol

"What? You mean to tell me women don't try to lick their eyelashes???" - male author

I hate how it reminded me about The Man from Nantucket 😭

No because the picture of eyelashes that long isnt even attractive at all anymore. 😭

Imagine waking up and your eyelashes are so long, they got tangled and fused with eye boogers, your eyes can't open. 😂😂

@@ItsDaJax I remember a show that had a "city" girl with mascara so thick her eyelashes had trouble opening sometimes. It was played for laughs.

That’s actually kinda true! I read the book and there is a heaven “gay-but-don’t-say-gay-because-it’s-the-90s” vibe the whole series. They even kinda get married later in the series but… not really it’s weird.

If you're talking about the last one - the series has explicitly homosexual relationships that are common and unremarkable in society, meaning there is no stigma behind them. The culture of the woman doing the describing of her friend is such that talking about the physical form of another person is not a sexual thing. They see nothing wrong with nudity even between sexes, and are open about sexual relationships (not to say they are all just constantly screwing, they aren't). The woman talking about her friend is supporting her and listing her good qualities, and knows that the man she's talking to DOES like her friend (he is not the same culture as them). There is nothing wrong with this in her culture. HIS culture is very restrained, so it seems exaggerated even more to him. If he didn't stop her from talking more, then she would have gone into more detail and talked about her personality too. BTW, tomatoes don't have to be super red, they can be pale pink and other shades too. And "fine and well-rounded" bosom doesn't mean big, it just means that the shape is nice. The other commenter talking about the 2 women being "married" is incorrect about what the relationship is between them. They both love the man, and he loves them (and gets both pregnant), but there is no marriage. The women do NOT have a sexual relationship between them, they are friends as close as sisters. The relationships are important to the story as they are exploited by the antagonists, especially one who loved a previous incarnation of the man and is now extremely jealous of the women.

"you might wonder how I ended up with these scars..."

Ah yes, the ol' Jenny Knifecheeks.

@mer-acle8101 “My father… he wasn’t a very good man”

JENNY KNIFECHEEKS 🤣@@omegabet3912

Edwina Scissorcheeks

I’m pretty sure I’ve seen something on there about describing a 13-year-old as having “budding breasts” 🤢

@@genesisofthebetween That's typically the time they start getting them, if not sooner.

​@genesisofthebetween to be perfectly fair, I was a double d at 13 and had friends who were just beginning to develop. The context in which a description like that happens is of more concern to me. It could be very normal and kinda basic or super creepy depending on the perspective it's coming from.

@@oneechanknowsbest615yeah but it’s still weird…why are you describing a child’s breasts

@@urcryingteacup Writers, I assume, have this tendency to want to be extremely specific so you can visually imagine the character in your mind. You could see someone like this in real life, and it'd be perfectly normal. All they are doing is describing that perfectly normal thing so you know what you're looking at. If it were a drawing of a teenager, you'd expect their to at least be some sort of chest size on a female character as opposed to a male one and wouldn't bat an eye if it was just an innocent drawing, but for some reason, having it described in a book is weird? I think people are overthinking it, honestly.

i would love a part 2 of this

Its just incels who write this stuff. So long as your not an incel, I presume your writing will stay fine

Right? Like...do you have any self-awareness or understand that you're writing book that everyone would see and read, not just you?

I was about to take serious that "men writing women" subreddit, but then I remember that she hulk and captain marvel are written by women, and Kim Wexler and Carmela Soprano are written by men. Reddit just being reddit.

​@@dollycheesecakes3658 The writers who are criticized in that subreddit have wives and kids, wtf are you talking about? "Incels are men who do something I don't like".

You don't? I do. I just don't write it.

I thought the exact same thing I just didn't know how to say it. It looks like it could be someone with a disability.

It's kind of funny to think that if they actually went with the route the character would have looked less nightmare fuel

I don’t think it changes your waist and hips size though?

@@HiBuddyyyyyywell of course not but in a cartoon art style things can be exaggerated

@@jellyfishfingernail oh yeah, that makes more sense. Sorry for misunderstanding.

1. Natural red lips exist, not that red like the drawing, but exist. 2. Shaving exists since first humans.

@@SuperiorGothCat You missed my point. Most people don't have bright red lips without make up. And like, many cultures did not shave legs. Many cultures to this day do not shave legs. Oh sure the greeks and egyptians might've, but the english until the modern era didn't. It wasn't a beauty standard in america until razor companies started pushing it in like the 40s.

​@@SuperiorGothCat You're such a bad troll. You comment bullshit but then when people call you out on it you don't reply because there is no defense for the nonsense you're saying.

@@SuperiorGothCat OP: it's not natural for people to have ruby/cherry led lips You: it's not natural for people to have lips just like how you literally just described, but I will mention that natural red hued lips do exist because I want to argue against something you never even said bro you either lack comprehension skills or just want to argue for the sake of arguing... or both

Rosacea and that a large percentage of the world doesn't naturally have that much body hair, I guess. My mother doesn't have very much body hair because that's not a trait common to her ancestors from western africa and south east asia (neither have that much body hair naturally) but I wouldn't know what ethnicity the character in your story was.

Literally, like man had to seriously add in the "her FACE is pretty" Like what about the rest.

And it was described after it already seemed to be done with her physical description and was getting into describing how she walks, as if the author was like "Alright, finally described my character properly, now I can get into the actual story...but why do I feel like I'm forgetting som- OH, right, her face! Uhhh, I guess it's just...pretty?"

He first checked out her assets and then only found her face , like a true man 😂

To be fair if you saw someone like that their face is not gonna be the defining feature lol, so it’s just an afterthought there too

This would be definetly me but with plots. I imagine the most detailed, especific and complex lore and then I just wake up and remember that I need a plot.

"He'll probably give us 40 lashes!" "Ohh noo!"

Oh no, not the dude apologizing for other dudes to whom he has no relation.

Lucy Steele and Hot Pants:

@@ucantknowwhoiamformyownsaftey *Steel Is that a m*therfucking JoJo reference?

As a trans man I'm just here for the entertainment. Why did I specify that I'm trans? Idk why did you make your comment? 😂

​@@ucantknowwhoiamformyownsafteyyeah, Araki is some of the few male authors who knows how to write characters regardless of their gender. But he explicitly said he got some help from his wife (basically, ask people of your opposite gender how they feel or act in a certain situation and you'll learn how to write them)

I’m sorry, you’ve dropped this, you beautiful human being: 👑 But fr, let’s normalize this sheet!

When I found that subreddit, I aspired to never be a subject of scrutiny.

"Her hips were breedable in the most anatomical way possible"

let's not forget the f-me shoulder BLADES (???) ... mixing predatory sexual desires with knives 2x already (cheek/jaw, I forget..)

*pubescent teen. Not child.

​​@@strangeanimations588does it matter? Either way it's wired as hell teens may not be little kids but there definitely not adults and there like older children in a way if that makes sense

@@strangeanimations588 still a child though, any adult would still refer to a teen as a child. I'm almost 16 and I still feel very young

@@iam_crumb Yeah, I'm 16 and before I was a teen, I would definitely not think of 14+ as "child" just "underage" but now that I am sixteen, I do still feel that me and even other people my age are still children.

Nah. They say pretty often that the Maidens sleep with guys. I don't remember any references to them sleeping with other women, and I've read the series several times. They're explicit with other characters having homosexual or even bisexual relationships, so RJ wouldn't have been coy about it. Especially with the Aiel.

Robert Jordan apparently goes overboard with equally describing everything. Wheel of Time is actually a really good fantasy series but even the fans joke how ridiculously over-board Jordan's descriptions go.

Imagine them just getting stuck in your eye aswell 😭

imagine having to wear glasses with these

And yet she is probably the most described character in the books

What, you've never seen a woman? She probably looks somewhat like them

@@kikosawawhat’s a woman

@@AshKittenPKXD a man, but different

​@@kikosawawhat's a man

If you write them better than Hollywood, you are doing everything right. If you write them like real people, than your audience would love to read more of your books

That's a compliment to your side and an insult to Hollywood

It's a compliment, but it's a low bar.

@@bluelfsuma 🥲

@@joetheartbro2859don’t be discouraged; even if it’s a low bar you’re still doing something right!

ITS HILARIOUS

☠️☠️☠️☠️

Ur mom looks like she's been eating bees

When I read the books way back then I thought that Aviendha had a crush of her own on Elayne and was in fact a bisexual disaster... Which, I mean, considering how (keeping it spoiler free) the whole thing ends up working out with Rand, well, that's just a plus

@@CrescentMond That's definitely a possibility. Doesn't exactly work with the whole "sisters" thing they go for, but still possible. I don't think it's strictly what was intended, especially with how subtle he had to be at the time with "pillow friends" etc, but it was certainly something he WAS inserting into the plot.

I'm just here annoyed at the people in the comments missing the context.

I was searching for this comment, and I want to add that it wasn't just the crush, it was also Aiel culture lol

@@CrescentMond They literally went through the process to become sisters. Like, not in the sorority way, but in the "we are family" way. That's really, really disturbing thinking that. You wouldn't think of someone in a sexual way and then try to become their sibling. Homosexual relationships aren't stigmatized and they even blatantly say that there are characters who are not straight. If Aviendha was into women, then that would have come across at some point.

Eu tava procurando alguém pra explicar isso KKKKKKKKKK tanto que quando ela leu eu imaginei uma boca com um lip tint bem vermelho e com gloss por cima

Siiiim

Definitely not. He meant tomatoes, but probably not the bright/intense red ones. They come in other colours/less intensity.

The female character describing her friend is doing that on purpose... and they later go through a process to become sisters. Like, actual sisters, not the sorority type. They do not have a sexual relationship of any kind.

YES