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Terrible Writing Advice

Terrible Writing Advice

5 жыл бұрын

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No drama is complete until the comic relief shows up to ruin it. Terrible Writing Advice will show a writer how to utilize a comic relief character to properly sink a story through the use of excessive catch phrases, bumbling slapstick, and just all around annoying your audience at every opportunity.
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@soy6707
@soy6707 5 жыл бұрын
Don't forget to feature them in a trailer for a movie, where all the music stops and the character says a joke where nobody laughs. And then cut to "THIS SUMMER"
@ChaosRayZero
@ChaosRayZero 5 жыл бұрын
_"It smells like body spray and an old ham sandwich."_ *THIS NOVEMBER*
@VainerCactus0
@VainerCactus0 5 жыл бұрын
OH GOD I HATE IT WHEN THEY DO THAT
@mnm1273
@mnm1273 5 жыл бұрын
For certain films it can be a good sign. It gives you a chance to judge their humour (Marvel movies usually end with a funny joke for instance) and it means you can know if the film takes itself too seriously
@louisduarte8763
@louisduarte8763 5 жыл бұрын
"Rob Schneider is..."
@archivehans
@archivehans 5 жыл бұрын
@@louisduarte8763 your father
@SmartAlec1
@SmartAlec1 5 жыл бұрын
Comic relief characters are not allowed to have any depth or development or else you might actually like them.
@CombatSportsNerd
@CombatSportsNerd 5 жыл бұрын
Good idea!
@KingsSpaghetti
@KingsSpaghetti 5 жыл бұрын
Like Sokka?
@SmartAlec1
@SmartAlec1 5 жыл бұрын
@@KingsSpaghetti But the thing is, the fact that he's competent by the end is a problem. It should be like other characters who are obnoxious the whole time and contribute nothing.
@KingsSpaghetti
@KingsSpaghetti 5 жыл бұрын
@@SmartAlec1 Sokka doesn't have super powers. He doesn't deserve anything.
@SmartAlec1
@SmartAlec1 5 жыл бұрын
@@KingsSpaghetti Very true. Just ask Goku: Hard work only gets you somewhere if your lineage is born superior to even more hard working humans.
@theimperviousfirecracker7934
@theimperviousfirecracker7934 4 жыл бұрын
these make me want to write the most generic, terrible story ever.
@maestromouse2578
@maestromouse2578 4 жыл бұрын
DO IT! Do it, do it, do it! (And then, watch everything burn...)
@waharadome
@waharadome 3 жыл бұрын
please try AI dungeon and set randomness to low
@Speed_Zamaa
@Speed_Zamaa 3 жыл бұрын
WRITE IT! WRITE IT! WRITE IT!
@vale3242
@vale3242 3 жыл бұрын
ya done yet?
@thebeltcameback1553
@thebeltcameback1553 3 жыл бұрын
make sure to secretly subvert literally everything, I'm sure that will go well
@babyvision6924
@babyvision6924 3 жыл бұрын
Villain: **literally burns down an entire town and kills everyone in it** Comic relief character: *_ZAPPERS!_* **finger guns** these guys aren't looking too hot.
@lefrymo
@lefrymo 3 жыл бұрын
Or rather , THEY’RE DOING *TOO* HOT *Laugh track*
@kmac291
@kmac291 3 жыл бұрын
Hahaha- GUILTY *The comic relief character was then sentenced to 12 years to life in prison, it would’ve been 2 years had he not made that horrible pun*
@zinkheroofyoutube8004
@zinkheroofyoutube8004 3 жыл бұрын
Menacing Cheese Why do you do this
@jenniferl.8111
@jenniferl.8111 3 жыл бұрын
Zuko: Sokka:
@pandorasangel2747
@pandorasangel2747 3 жыл бұрын
*looks at a city burning down* Wakka: "Like happy festival fireworks!" Every Final Fantasy Character: ....
@draxiss1577
@draxiss1577 5 жыл бұрын
You . . . denied the Comic Relief a Love Triangle? That is perhaps the purest form of hatred I have ever seen you give something.
@firewolf1814
@firewolf1814 4 жыл бұрын
I would argue its more of a mercy for the Comic Relief.
@idktbh4385
@idktbh4385 4 жыл бұрын
Fire Wolf Or relief for the comic relief haha uh oh does this make me the comic relief?
@nomobobby
@nomobobby 4 жыл бұрын
@@idktbh4385 yup, now whatever you do, *don't* trip and shatter the the vase holding the great evil one.
@andystellar
@andystellar 4 жыл бұрын
@@nomobobby Zappers, sorry dude, I just tripped and shattered a vase that was holding the great evil emperor Darth Voldemort! Zappers, what will we do now? Zappers!
@floskywalker6220
@floskywalker6220 4 жыл бұрын
Jamie The Joker and now I, Damsel Distressa, have been kidnapped again. Thanks again
@Greywander87
@Greywander87 5 жыл бұрын
A comic relief, but it's revealed that they're actually the victim of a dark curse, tormented by cruel gods into being nothing but an eternal joke, forced against their will to be "funny". That moment when you realize all that slapstick humor was actually legit suicide attempts, but they just won't let him die. ...I think my comic relief character needs a comic relief.
@ChaosRayZero
@ChaosRayZero 5 жыл бұрын
That first paragraph sounds like the singing goat from Hoodwinked. After clicking the "Read More" button, your comment got a little too dark to match up with him anymore though.
@ahniandfriends123
@ahniandfriends123 4 жыл бұрын
So basically the gold Cancer saint from Saint Seiya.
@akechijubeimitsuhide
@akechijubeimitsuhide 4 жыл бұрын
So basically Sheogroath/Jyggalag from The Shivering Isles DLC.
@Hypnotiqgenes
@Hypnotiqgenes 4 жыл бұрын
Dr. Light
@Defectum138
@Defectum138 4 жыл бұрын
This sounds amazing
@coreycleven8414
@coreycleven8414 4 жыл бұрын
Imagine in reality YOU are the comic relief; you are barely in the foreground of your best friend's story, unfit and underqualified for success outside of the shadow of someone else. Your only 'value' is tossing awkward one-liners around in conversations to which you weren't invited, hoping to maybe get a chuckle from the lowliest dullards in the crowd, and eye-rolls from the rest.
@yourehereforthatarentyou
@yourehereforthatarentyou 3 жыл бұрын
i dont have to imagine that. stop posting about my life publicly, please
@DaShoopdahoop
@DaShoopdahoop 3 жыл бұрын
Is it bad that this made me hurt by the sheer accuracy of it?
@danielkhan1
@danielkhan1 3 жыл бұрын
:(...>:(
@danielkhan1
@danielkhan1 3 жыл бұрын
@@iksskan9147 dw bro, it ain't about the character traits that make a protag, it's the character arc 😤 😤
@ThatOneRandomSteve
@ThatOneRandomSteve 3 жыл бұрын
Look, high school was 2 years ago ok? That's all in the past
@thirdtemple9179
@thirdtemple9179 4 жыл бұрын
"Now I am become comic relief, destroyer of stories."
@jesalt8230
@jesalt8230 3 жыл бұрын
Nice reference
@imvegan1994
@imvegan1994 3 жыл бұрын
of the popular manga and anime
@swaggerdagger8976
@swaggerdagger8976 3 жыл бұрын
388
@randomasian8715
@randomasian8715 3 жыл бұрын
Shiva be like:
@arthurdias6860
@arthurdias6860 3 жыл бұрын
The Ultimate Comic Relief, has the power to destroy even the best of the stories, with his bad and forced jokes.
@GMMReviews
@GMMReviews 5 жыл бұрын
You could always go the Marvel route, and just make *EVERY* character the comic relief!
@peppinoandweskerfriendsfor3450
@peppinoandweskerfriendsfor3450 5 жыл бұрын
I can totally take half the universe dying seriously when the Hulk dabs
@peppinoandweskerfriendsfor3450
@peppinoandweskerfriendsfor3450 5 жыл бұрын
@@ChrisJBT2 I didn't see the joke like that- I thought it was just trying to make me angry.
@Rus-nu9li
@Rus-nu9li 5 жыл бұрын
@@ChrisJBT2 to be fair, it takes a very high IQ to understand hulk dabbing
@idktbh4385
@idktbh4385 4 жыл бұрын
That’s just writing jokes
@f.i.r.e.5119
@f.i.r.e.5119 4 жыл бұрын
@@ChrisJBT2 And don't forget Clint! He goes on a grief-motivated killing spree!
@blueflare7687
@blueflare7687 5 жыл бұрын
Make sure for the comic relief character to get a terrible spin off we'll all forget about. _looks at Planet Sheen_
@Treviisolion
@Treviisolion 5 жыл бұрын
KING FREAKING CRIMSON. Minions
@highcouncil1302
@highcouncil1302 5 жыл бұрын
I remember being so excited for Planet Sheen thinking yay they're doing a Jimmy Neutron sequel but then I watch the show...
@littlefieryone2825
@littlefieryone2825 5 жыл бұрын
_Looks at Cars 2 harder._
@Treviisolion
@Treviisolion 5 жыл бұрын
Cars 2
@jojothebard6687
@jojothebard6687 5 жыл бұрын
*We never talk about Planet Sheen.*
@JeremyMaldonadoSTK
@JeremyMaldonadoSTK 4 жыл бұрын
"Zappers! Those orphans burned up worse than my odds of finding a date this weekend" Bruh
@docrofreborn7497
@docrofreborn7497 4 жыл бұрын
Too soon...
@mwplaylist2890
@mwplaylist2890 4 жыл бұрын
Not gonna lie, I found the joke darkly humorous. But then again I am a person who, in person, will ask people why [insert evil act] isn't the logical solution to [insert problem] just to see the look on their face.
@messyartdesk8141
@messyartdesk8141 4 жыл бұрын
Ikr?
@ShibuNub3305
@ShibuNub3305 4 жыл бұрын
*Mood*
@twoscarabsintheswarm9055
@twoscarabsintheswarm9055 3 жыл бұрын
Me
@carolinehorn8843
@carolinehorn8843 4 жыл бұрын
Ron Weasley in the books: Witty, funny, only cracks jokes at the right time Ron in the movies: Idiotic, not funny, straight up stupid
@eladatta708
@eladatta708 3 жыл бұрын
No truer words have been spoken
@imveryangryitsnotbutter
@imveryangryitsnotbutter 3 жыл бұрын
Knowing now what Joanne is really like, I think it's just because she was too lazy to come up with more jokes while writing the books, which accidentally made him just the perfect level of comedic.
@SylentVoidkeeper
@SylentVoidkeeper 3 жыл бұрын
@@imveryangryitsnotbutter Eh, considering most of Ron’s good moments in the books get transferred to Hermoine in the movies, I’d say it’s likely they made Ron an idiot so they could both hype her up more and give them the perfect trio (Harry as Everyman, Hermoine as OP Girlboss, and Ron as Slapstick)
@Mega-rx9sr
@Mega-rx9sr 3 жыл бұрын
True
@lahasainaypayaso3386
@lahasainaypayaso3386 3 жыл бұрын
What's more insulting is Ron is such a street smart and also tend to save Hermione and Harry's asses in the books by using his wit and good at problem solving yet in the films they stripped away that good quality in him and some of his important and smart lines were given to Hermione in the film. the directors doesn't really care about his character and thinks he's just those typical comic relief characters. the only thing that the film was rightly portrayed about Ron is his flaws especially in the 3rd book where Ron becomes so jealous of Harry's popularity and pushing him away.
@Just_Some_Guy_with_a_Mustache
@Just_Some_Guy_with_a_Mustache 5 жыл бұрын
"Y'know, I lost my mom when I was 15. I don't think I'll ever be able to be close to another person again." "Well, we can't get your mom back. But, you still have a family, pal." " _smirk_ I guess you're right." _hugs_ *out of freaking nowhere:* "Geez, get a room you two! AMIRIGHT?!" _laughter ensues_
@CombatSportsNerd
@CombatSportsNerd 5 жыл бұрын
Why does this aggravate me?
@resolutionblaze363
@resolutionblaze363 5 жыл бұрын
Comic relief characters is the living embodiment of this meme: Nobody: Comic Relief Character:
@chimaeraarts
@chimaeraarts 5 жыл бұрын
Nice to see you Just Some Guy with a Mustache.
@orngjce223
@orngjce223 5 жыл бұрын
One of my favorite roleplay moments was replying to the line "Get a room, you two!" with "This _is_ our room. What are you doing here?"
@soccerandtrack10
@soccerandtrack10 5 жыл бұрын
your algerithem must be really advanced.
@Samuel_Freakin_Adams
@Samuel_Freakin_Adams 5 жыл бұрын
Sokka from Avatar and Drax from Guardians of the Galaxy are two examples of great characters who also serve the role of comic relief.
@fantasyshadows3207
@fantasyshadows3207 4 жыл бұрын
Leo Valdez
@fantasyshadows3207
@fantasyshadows3207 4 жыл бұрын
Jace Herondale being sassy
@isabelguzmanmiranda5025
@isabelguzmanmiranda5025 4 жыл бұрын
Aaaaaah! Epiphany moment! I always wondered why Sokka was having so much luck with the ladies... It was the scriptwriters of Avatar killing another cliché, just as when they crushed Zutara and made love relationships be based on friendship, trust and shared experienced. Well, except for Sokka, who is just a stud, which is not what the comic relief character, which... And if he hadn't been the stud, we wouldn't have memorable moments like "My first girlfriend died and became the Moon". And his great: "But the effects were good".
@frankwest5388
@frankwest5388 4 жыл бұрын
Spence I liked how in the hero’s Olympus books the new Demi-gods were so thematically fitting to their storylines to give hope to kids with problems. It’s one of the few times where SJW writing really enhanced the story instead of distracting from it
@frankwest5388
@frankwest5388 4 жыл бұрын
Spence he was especially a good “gay teen”. As a teen he is still unsure about his sexuality and hides. It makes him an outsider who doesn’t feel like he belongs, even if people like him. Something perfectly represented by him being the literal son of hades. He feels as if he were born to be hated. But I personally prefer Frank. Who is supposed to show that no matter what kind of outsider you were l, you can became anything. Perfectly symbolized by his multi mixed mess of a family line and shapeshifter powers.
@samboujaiteh3331
@samboujaiteh3331 4 жыл бұрын
Idea: After the comic relief’s bumbling releases the Dark Lord, the party begins to suspect that the comic relief character is an agent of evil there to sidetrack and sabotage all their progress and turn on him. Twist is, he’s not, and it turns into a thriller where he is forced to flee the party and has to try and fix his mistake, while the party is actively trying to hunt him down.
@mrboerger1620
@mrboerger1620 3 жыл бұрын
That's actually a really good story idea.
@beanzilla9513
@beanzilla9513 3 жыл бұрын
I’d read it
@the_man_emperor_of_mankind
@the_man_emperor_of_mankind 3 жыл бұрын
Not only does it sound cool, it's unique enough to draw some attention and it is a thriller so it could earn plenty of money
@thedukeofnothing6421
@thedukeofnothing6421 2 жыл бұрын
That sounds like a unique idea that I feel like should’ve been done long ago.
@CantRead1
@CantRead1 2 жыл бұрын
Sounds like Jar Jar
@huvarda
@huvarda 3 жыл бұрын
Don't forget to make the comic relief the MAIN CHARACTER OF THE *SEQUEL* !
@GeekNewz
@GeekNewz 3 жыл бұрын
you ever heard about percy jakson- he was the comic relif of is on serise and it wasnt the sequel
@SamuraiDoggo14
@SamuraiDoggo14 3 жыл бұрын
*cough* Cars 2! *cough* *cough*
@treehousegames7903
@treehousegames7903 3 жыл бұрын
*cough cough* Emperor's New Groove *cough cough*
@lumpyshaker2604
@lumpyshaker2604 3 жыл бұрын
*cough* *cough* The goofy movie *cough* *cough*
@almosthuman2398
@almosthuman2398 3 жыл бұрын
*cough cough* Dory *cough cough*
@popstarchamp
@popstarchamp 5 жыл бұрын
Scrappy-Doo's greatest joke: Being the main villain of a live-action movie for being disliked in-universe by everyone.😂
@megashark1013
@megashark1013 5 жыл бұрын
The only genius part of that film.
@idktbh4385
@idktbh4385 4 жыл бұрын
Megashark 101 excuse you but the live action scooby doo is a cinematic masterpiece Tarantino quakes
@TheShinyFeraligatr
@TheShinyFeraligatr 4 жыл бұрын
Scrappy Doo wasn’t even honestly that bad until they axed half the cast and tried to have him fill all their roles for some inane reason - he was mostly a way to keep the previous comic relief characters have an actual reason to get involved in conflict other than being forced into it.. And even then he was still better than shit like Scooby Dum and Flim Flam.
@darthtroller
@darthtroller 4 жыл бұрын
When I was a lil kid, I couldn't understand him being the villain, however I recognized it's a sort of joke I couldn't understand
@battlion507
@battlion507 4 жыл бұрын
Although for Scooby and the gang to kick Scrappy out in the desert is a bit much and out of character. And yes, I know he peed on Daphne, cuz 2000's humor yo.
@melonyrobinson9944
@melonyrobinson9944 5 жыл бұрын
Thank you Sokka, for being a comic relief AND a good character
@derrickcarter4165
@derrickcarter4165 5 жыл бұрын
Yeah, he was funny but never really out of stupidity. His comedic effect was usually either him being witty and jokey or his over-the-top reactions to things, which made it never seem forced when we get to see his strategic skill and other good qualities. If you write a comic relief character, sokkas one of the best references to go by
@grizzlyowlbear3538
@grizzlyowlbear3538 5 жыл бұрын
Smart comic relief characters give me life.
@nechocat1234
@nechocat1234 5 жыл бұрын
Have you read shaman king? If you like good comic reliefs you make like chocolove
@fancyb.p.6122
@fancyb.p.6122 5 жыл бұрын
Plus his starring episode was super fun!
@AnEnemySpy456
@AnEnemySpy456 5 жыл бұрын
What's great about Sokka is his comic relief role evolved along with his more serious character arc. At the beginning the jokes were at his expense because he was too full of himself and needed to be taken down a peg to break him out of his toxic overtures of insecure masculinity and as he came into his own the humor came from what a loveable dork he was.
@apertureAI-jw1iz
@apertureAI-jw1iz 4 жыл бұрын
I love how he clearly despises this trope even in character.
@vizthex
@vizthex 6 ай бұрын
same af.
@Birdofman
@Birdofman 3 жыл бұрын
Person: *is bleeding out of his head on the floor* Comic relief: zApPeRs
@Neon99
@Neon99 3 жыл бұрын
Lol
@MrGoose-cz9gm
@MrGoose-cz9gm 3 жыл бұрын
"Zappers!" *"You sure are more of a joke than me, zappers."*
@shinhook2k280
@shinhook2k280 3 жыл бұрын
Only good comic relief character is cayde 6
@generalstaal7075
@generalstaal7075 3 жыл бұрын
"Zappers! Talk about keeping an open mind!"
@PRGME7
@PRGME7 2 жыл бұрын
@@generalstaal7075 that made me feel something that I can really only describe as “no”
@AlgaeNymph
@AlgaeNymph 5 жыл бұрын
"So what do _you_ contribute to the party?" "Absolutely nothing, so if you need to make a sacrifice I'm your guy!"
@PreciousIvy
@PreciousIvy 5 жыл бұрын
actually that almost sounds like nagito from danganronpa, even though he isn't really a comic relief character
@NatalieAliciaRavenfire
@NatalieAliciaRavenfire 4 жыл бұрын
AlgaeNypmph, I see a story in what you posted.
@AlgaeNymph
@AlgaeNymph 4 жыл бұрын
@Emma Brennan I was _so_ happy when Gurgi died, the pestering load. Pity he came back for more crunchies & munchies. Maybe he's better in the books?
@MrFelblood
@MrFelblood 4 жыл бұрын
@@AlgaeNymph Nah, In the books, the bard is even more annoying.
@newbestfriend5867
@newbestfriend5867 4 жыл бұрын
@@PreciousIvy I want to respond but I can't think of anything to say with Ryoma staring into my soul.
@teal_m_101
@teal_m_101 5 жыл бұрын
"We've tried the cushions and comfy chair, but we have other ways of making you talk" "You merciless swine!" "Bring forth the comic relief"
@fire-nrg7962
@fire-nrg7962 5 жыл бұрын
Woah! I never thought I'd run into you here! OwO
@louisduarte8763
@louisduarte8763 5 жыл бұрын
I wasn't expecting the Spanish Inquisition.
@teal_m_101
@teal_m_101 5 жыл бұрын
@@louisduarte8763 Nobody expects the Spanish Inquisition! Our chief weapon is surprise; surprise and fear.
@teal_m_101
@teal_m_101 5 жыл бұрын
@@fire-nrg7962 UwU
@soygato2722
@soygato2722 5 жыл бұрын
Teal Marjira Mmmm UwO
@Alex-24610
@Alex-24610 4 жыл бұрын
My catchphrase is: “I am vengeance. I am the night! -Aling.”
@WoodsAreBeautiful
@WoodsAreBeautiful 4 жыл бұрын
Baz I am batman is mine
@Alex-24610
@Alex-24610 4 жыл бұрын
Brad 17 it’s destiny
@isabelguzmanmiranda5025
@isabelguzmanmiranda5025 4 жыл бұрын
I just realized -aling is great for everything: Zapaling, Zoomaling... I'm keeping that one.
@docrofreborn7497
@docrofreborn7497 4 жыл бұрын
Mine is: Never miss the shot.
@goldsrcorsource2551
@goldsrcorsource2551 4 жыл бұрын
Mine is Wow I am batman!
@nathanwise3453
@nathanwise3453 3 жыл бұрын
In summary, make a comic relief CHARACTER, not a COMIC RELIEF character.
@appouhal
@appouhal 3 жыл бұрын
Yes, exactly!
@casualcyberguy1314
@casualcyberguy1314 5 жыл бұрын
How to write an episode of terrible writing advice
@merrittanimation7721
@merrittanimation7721 5 жыл бұрын
All the memes.
@calswartz615
@calswartz615 5 жыл бұрын
Step 1) Pick a trope/cliche Step 2) Reference to love triangle Step 3) Sarcasm
@Percival917
@Percival917 5 жыл бұрын
@@calswartz615 Don't just sarcasm, SLATHER THE SCRIPT WITH PURE SARCASM.
@remixtheidiot5771
@remixtheidiot5771 5 жыл бұрын
T.G W.H.M.V don't forget the unnecessarily well written sponsorship subplot arcs.
@xChikyx
@xChikyx 5 жыл бұрын
@@remixtheidiot5771 did you mean "the part when I close the video?"
@JorneDeSmedt
@JorneDeSmedt 5 жыл бұрын
PLOT TWIST! The comic relief character was actually an evil genius all along.
@CCLOSPINA
@CCLOSPINA 5 жыл бұрын
Jester in Devil May Cry 3. Tobi in Naruto
@sophiagomez5619
@sophiagomez5619 5 жыл бұрын
Tobiiiii
@mariusmglestue1234
@mariusmglestue1234 4 жыл бұрын
Darth Jar Jar
@ally939
@ally939 4 жыл бұрын
Scrappy Doo
@Ryu1ify
@Ryu1ify 4 жыл бұрын
"That damn bitch..." Not really an evil genius, per se, but still
@kmac291
@kmac291 3 жыл бұрын
I like to think the comic relief character is really depressed and every scene they’re not in it’s because they’re off in the distance crying to themselves
@VioletNKisHere
@VioletNKisHere 2 жыл бұрын
Ha ha ha ha ha!
@cooldicool7019
@cooldicool7019 Жыл бұрын
literally dazai
@ajardoor
@ajardoor 9 ай бұрын
That’s the Jester from the Darkest Dungeon games.
@TheDarkraiDimension491
@TheDarkraiDimension491 Ай бұрын
basically sayori
@potato_723
@potato_723 Жыл бұрын
Perrito from Puss in boots: the last wish is the only comic relief character I don't groan when they're on screen. The fact he contributes to the story instead of ruining the heroes plan by accident really helps
@valentinkambushev4968
@valentinkambushev4968 Жыл бұрын
Not to mention that he knows when to take things seriously.
@nationalinstituteofcheese3012
@nationalinstituteofcheese3012 6 ай бұрын
@@valentinkambushev4968And because he also does lighten the mood without being annoying. We also see him use his skills of being a therapy dog so it’s not just a stupid throw away fact
@bunnywithmonocle5324
@bunnywithmonocle5324 5 жыл бұрын
"Too bad I can't turn you fossils into fuel." I love everything the business villain says
@valentinmitterbauer4196
@valentinmitterbauer4196 5 жыл бұрын
Must be a comic rel... Wait. Waaaiiiiit.
@nomobobby
@nomobobby 5 жыл бұрын
I love the war for the sponsors. They have the best writing in the series
@RyelynCaster
@RyelynCaster 5 жыл бұрын
Funny Story: My teacher showed us the characterization terrible writing advice episode during Creative writing class. It really taught me so much about how characterization is not necessary at all, and that the audience will better identify with cardboard cutouts and archetypes. Thank you :)
@emilianorios4761
@emilianorios4761 5 жыл бұрын
I wish my teacher would show us videos like this
@owlblocksdavid4955
@owlblocksdavid4955 5 жыл бұрын
Actually, archetypes are great. But you have to develop them.
@ChaosRayZero
@ChaosRayZero 5 жыл бұрын
@@emilianorios4761 I had a Spanish teacher introduce me to the "Que hora es" comedy sketch and "The One Semester of Spanish Love Song."
@gone41214
@gone41214 5 жыл бұрын
Zappers!
@RWAsur
@RWAsur 5 жыл бұрын
That's sincerely amazing.
@HotRoseTea.
@HotRoseTea. 4 жыл бұрын
Anime comic relief character: High pitched voice Short Huge pervert 5 people like them THICC
@itzelramirez4801
@itzelramirez4801 3 жыл бұрын
Mineta?
@sophie6744
@sophie6744 3 жыл бұрын
@@itzelramirez4801 yea except nobody likes him i hope
@greentea2670
@greentea2670 3 жыл бұрын
@@sophie6744 Tsuyu and Sero are on friendly terms with mineta, even though they call him out Midoriya and Kaminari are also good friends with him. r/churchofmineta also exists lmao
@mrboerger1620
@mrboerger1620 3 жыл бұрын
@Rawfie that actually exist.
@itzelramirez4801
@itzelramirez4801 3 жыл бұрын
@Rawfie ughh I need that visual bleached from my head
@appouhal
@appouhal 3 жыл бұрын
Everything he described regarding the comic relief character reminds me of Gilligan, the bumbling idiot from “Gilligan’s Island” who keeps messing up all the castaways’ attempts to escape the island.
@frosjafrosja2731
@frosjafrosja2731 3 жыл бұрын
ок
@magnusprime962
@magnusprime962 2 жыл бұрын
Except if you actually look at the track record, 2 out of 3 times their escape attempts weren’t foiled by Giligan at all. And many of the ones he does mess up wouldn’t have worked anyways. Giligan may be dumb, but he isn’t really any more of a hindrance than any of the other characters.
@silhouettoofaman2935
@silhouettoofaman2935 2 жыл бұрын
There's a key difference between Gilligan and all other dime-a-dozen comic relief characters: Gilligan is actually funny.
@sertorrhenclegane
@sertorrhenclegane Жыл бұрын
I think everyone also forgets that Gilligan's Island was a sitcom not searing drama about a desperate battle for survival on an uncharted island. Narrative context is also important when one considers the characters and their relationship to the story.
@WildBluntHickok
@WildBluntHickok Жыл бұрын
@@sertorrhenclegane The writer confirmed fan theories that the 7 characters in Gilligan's Island represent the 7 deadly sins. So "don't read too much into it" doesn't really apply to that show.
@Sabo991
@Sabo991 5 жыл бұрын
If anything, I've always pitied the comic relief character; they're this sad, lonely creature who wanders aimlessly through the plot, forced by the author's incompetence to be the only living thing around with a sense of humor (an AWFUL sense of humor, but still) and surrounded by people who can only react to their desperate banter and lame jokes with either amused confusion or undisguised contempt. In a world of overly-serious and joyless characters, the comic relief walks alone: the one cheap neon light of levity drifting away in the vast darkness...
@lettylunasical4766
@lettylunasical4766 5 жыл бұрын
Makes me think of Rosencrantz and Guildenstern.
@steelungol4373
@steelungol4373 4 жыл бұрын
That description actually has some potiental...
@Rainbowthewindsage
@Rainbowthewindsage 4 жыл бұрын
This would be a great concept for a meta-story.
@newbestfriend5867
@newbestfriend5867 4 жыл бұрын
Putting this on the list of real meta stuff I need to write about.
@Katie-ws7xp
@Katie-ws7xp 4 жыл бұрын
Someone should make a novel about life from a comic relief characters point of view.
@maxumusjesus
@maxumusjesus 5 жыл бұрын
To be fair, the extremely outdated meme is so outdated that I don't think most of us remember it from anywhere other than terrible writing advice
@nathanclark2424
@nathanclark2424 5 жыл бұрын
Also in defense of TWA it's pretty much this entire time been a visual gag that hasn't had attention drawn to it at every single fucking opportunity. Unlike many certain "funny" characters nowadays.
@freetoplayking7362
@freetoplayking7362 5 жыл бұрын
true
@kimifw58
@kimifw58 5 жыл бұрын
And YMS.
@BonaparteBardithion
@BonaparteBardithion 5 жыл бұрын
It's old enough that I can't even remember what context it was usually used in. It's just been there....since the dark times of the universe.... Like Chuck Norris.
@bowldawg4394
@bowldawg4394 5 жыл бұрын
Troll Face anyone?
@dragonick2947
@dragonick2947 3 жыл бұрын
Here's some catchphrases for you to use: "I am vengeance! I am the night! *oinks"* _"Bazwe"_ "Wow, I am Batman!"
@generalstaal7075
@generalstaal7075 3 жыл бұрын
*"Bazwe"*
@lordanubis1458
@lordanubis1458 Жыл бұрын
I'm stealing that last one, and you can't stop me!
@WildBluntHickok
@WildBluntHickok Жыл бұрын
"I am the shadow that flaps in the night!"
@user-qi6pv9jh7o
@user-qi6pv9jh7o Жыл бұрын
*_COPROGRIND NOISES BUT LONGER_*
@yarraidalg
@yarraidalg 7 ай бұрын
ok but honestly bazoinks is kind of a vibe
@toasturhztoastbunz896
@toasturhztoastbunz896 2 жыл бұрын
Imagine if the Comic Relief was actually a twist villain. With his covert attempts at murdering the heroes being disguised as simple "bumbling around". And his klutzy, silly and annoying persona being a facade to hide his true devious nature. And the fact that comic relief characters are often seen as pathetic or useless to the plot to many viewers doesn't help either.
@lordanubis1458
@lordanubis1458 Жыл бұрын
So... Tohru Adachi...?
@chelonianmobile
@chelonianmobile Жыл бұрын
That happened in the Deptford Histories, kind of, except the characters hated the "comic relief" too.
@ConnanTheCivilized
@ConnanTheCivilized Жыл бұрын
That somewhat reminds me of the Chief Inspector from the (original) Pink Panther movies. He’s constantly trying to murder the main character, but comes off as comic relief.
@noahalcantar2431
@noahalcantar2431 3 ай бұрын
Lol
@dannymcgroovell4993
@dannymcgroovell4993 24 күн бұрын
So Handsome Jack?
@jakeswierdfriend7204
@jakeswierdfriend7204 5 жыл бұрын
The sad thing is, when done right, comics reliefs are some of my favorite characters
@jiangciyang3860
@jiangciyang3860 4 жыл бұрын
some times protagonists use comic relief and a personality mask to make his enemy not take him seriously. however when the serious issues come in, he proves very competent and takes his enemy by surprise.
@loganmason5421
@loganmason5421 4 жыл бұрын
@@jiangciyang3860 either that or they're legitimately stupid, to the point they think friendship is a flavor of ice cream (I still like these type of heroes, just pointing out)
@isabelguzmanmiranda5025
@isabelguzmanmiranda5025 4 жыл бұрын
Sokka and Jaskier are great... Then again, they don't fulfill their cliché and are VERY competent in their skills.
@ethanchoi7036
@ethanchoi7036 4 жыл бұрын
Kronk is an excellent example
@wooyeah1738
@wooyeah1738 4 жыл бұрын
Leo Valdez rules at being a great comic relief
@Dr.DreadFeather
@Dr.DreadFeather 5 жыл бұрын
Of all the character designs, your comic relief guy looks the most bad ass.
@davadreviewer5509
@davadreviewer5509 4 жыл бұрын
Jay Nevermore He looks Casually bad ass
@scottmantooth8785
@scottmantooth8785 4 жыл бұрын
*perhaps he's merely the Anti-Comic Relief Character*
@wisemankugelmemicus1701
@wisemankugelmemicus1701 4 жыл бұрын
He looks like Star Lord
@moh.syafrianabie8899
@moh.syafrianabie8899 3 жыл бұрын
He looks like that annoying guy who serve no purpose than being weirdo in Avengers
@kmac291
@kmac291 3 жыл бұрын
Which one, the one with the jacket or the clown? Both will do
@birdiejett3163
@birdiejett3163 4 жыл бұрын
“There IS no relief from Comic Relief” So, basically every American animated movie since 1992?
@jackcooper1448
@jackcooper1448 4 жыл бұрын
What happened in 1992?
@multilad816
@multilad816 3 жыл бұрын
@@jackcooper1448 Genie, Iago, and Abu from Aladdin, but mostly Genie and Iago
@khatunamezvrishvili6211
@khatunamezvrishvili6211 3 жыл бұрын
@@multilad816 at least the genie was a good character
@thewanderingmistnull2451
@thewanderingmistnull2451 3 жыл бұрын
You realize that films before then had comic relief as well, don't you? The Little Mermaid had Sebastian & the seagull, Cinderella had the rats, Wizard of Oz is basically three comic relief characters stuck with a normal person, etc.
@canaisyoung3601
@canaisyoung3601 3 жыл бұрын
@@thewanderingmistnull2451 Shh. He's probably a millennial. Anything before the 1980s or 1990s doesn't exist (unless it's cherrypicked historical atrocities, like slavery and The Holocaust).
@Mrhellslayerz
@Mrhellslayerz 4 жыл бұрын
Being denied the love triangle is like being denied any semblance of character development. You're not even worthy of the bad tropes. Damn...
@firockfinion3326
@firockfinion3326 5 жыл бұрын
So the author hates the comic relief character because he hates himself... I sense a meta plot brewing throughout these episodes...
@nomobobby
@nomobobby 4 жыл бұрын
I think the serious critic is his a manifestation of his disappointment in himself. He became a writer to make the next "To Kill a Mockingbird" but ended up writing the next Twilight or something.
@multilad816
@multilad816 4 жыл бұрын
According to Caligula Effect, people sometimes get disgusted the very others that have similar, yet extreme version, mentalities to themselves. Ex - Mifue Shinohara
@aalloy6881
@aalloy6881 4 жыл бұрын
I dislike them because being useless is always a core part of this obsolete trope meant for creating a cast of caricatures. I can think of a ton of 'the wacky one' characters that not only have all the qualities that made the concept of a comic relief viable for centuries, but are also as much of an asset to the adventure as the 'cooler' heroes of their pack, even sometimes becoming the voice of reason when everyone else loses perspective.
@seldomstudios6351
@seldomstudios6351 5 жыл бұрын
“Jar-Jar is they key to all of this” -Greorge Lucas *JAR JAR WAS BEHIND THE WAR THIS WHOLE TIME*
@ZKP314
@ZKP314 5 жыл бұрын
That is true from a certain point of view.
@stevenbobbybills
@stevenbobbybills 5 жыл бұрын
@@ZKP314 he did help elect Palpatine, I believe.
@spartandelta2756
@spartandelta2756 5 жыл бұрын
+Steven Bobby Bills Jar Jar Binks helped Palpatine gain emergency powers, allowing him to be more autonomous in governing the entire Republic. That said, Jar Jar Binks was definitely a unique addition to Star Wars and I do not hate him.
@henryrichard7619
@henryrichard7619 5 жыл бұрын
He’s a funnier character than we’ve ever had
@maaxorus
@maaxorus 5 жыл бұрын
Then, should it be called the Jar Jar War?
@thekaticorn99
@thekaticorn99 5 жыл бұрын
I would love to see a story where the heroes use a comic relief character to annoy the villains into revealing their secrets or stopping their plans
@R.P.McMurphy
@R.P.McMurphy 3 жыл бұрын
Freakazoid
@Eris250
@Eris250 2 жыл бұрын
Or the opposite. The comic relief character is working for the villain. They are trying to annoy the heroes to death so they give up on their quest.
@lordanubis1458
@lordanubis1458 Жыл бұрын
So, Sponge out of Water...
@michaelagarner1282
@michaelagarner1282 Жыл бұрын
@@Eris250 But it ends up having the opposite affect with the heroes desperately trying to finish their goal so they don't have to be around the comic relief character
@user-zc7qx9ob4c
@user-zc7qx9ob4c 8 ай бұрын
They do that in "Spongebob out of water"
@tacticstories7159
@tacticstories7159 2 жыл бұрын
7:30 "Could I choose a more pleasant fate, like being devoured alive by Cthulu?" That's an amazing line :D
@nothinmulch
@nothinmulch 5 жыл бұрын
"Remember, there is no relief, from *comic* relief" Damn. That shit's so chilling that I feel inspired to write a comic relief supervillain. 😏
@felipeopazo8375
@felipeopazo8375 4 жыл бұрын
Congrats! You just invented the Joker
@ninnikins4768
@ninnikins4768 4 жыл бұрын
doofenshmirtz evil incorporatedddddddd
@theakiwar9118
@theakiwar9118 4 жыл бұрын
Ninnikins Honestly Doofenschmirz is a great written character. Especially in the new series
@ninnikins4768
@ninnikins4768 4 жыл бұрын
@@theakiwar9118 new series
@ninnikins4768
@ninnikins4768 4 жыл бұрын
@@theakiwar9118 come again
@past874
@past874 5 жыл бұрын
Wait, wait, wait, you're doing it all wrong. The comic relief character absolutely has to be in the final battle! The story might get too edgy, and that's exactly what we want to avoid since we made the comic relief character. He should be brought into battle, even if he has zero combat capabilities, just so he can repeat his one tired gag like a broken record and make sure the mood is broken every five seconds.
@Ditidos
@Ditidos 5 жыл бұрын
Yes, of course! You can also make the comic relief character make everyone fail at their mission so that there could be a full sequel afterwards!
@agiar2000
@agiar2000 5 жыл бұрын
Also, if the final confrontation involves a large battle with lots of faceless soldiers, make sure to throw in a Wilhelm scream in the middle of the carnage to remind the audience not to take the deaths of background characters too seriously. At the same time, however, we need to be reminded of how compassionate our hero is by having him lament the loss of those same faceless soldiers at whose deaths we just laughed.
@CCLOSPINA
@CCLOSPINA 5 жыл бұрын
Mantis in Endgame
@Shizukomi
@Shizukomi 4 жыл бұрын
"I think that enemy got the point"
@agiar2000
@agiar2000 4 жыл бұрын
@@Shizukomi _"I_ think that enemy got... _the point!"_
@TsulaAngenati2292
@TsulaAngenati2292 4 жыл бұрын
“I call that the zapper zapper” XD nice move Gandalf
@cyborgbob1017
@cyborgbob1017 2 жыл бұрын
I honestly hate it sooo much when the comic relief character is irrationally bullied and taken advantage of by everyone in the show, for seemingly no reason other then: "oh its ok he's just a nerd he doesn't matter. Its soooo toxic!
@0ctopusComp1etely
@0ctopusComp1etely 5 жыл бұрын
I'm pretty sure I subconsciously no longer think of Skillshare as an actual man-made service, but as a nebulous force of power that has passed through the eons altering the very courses of fate tied to whatever planets it happens to grace with its omnipotent presence.
@glanni
@glanni 5 жыл бұрын
haha yes same!
@arempy5836
@arempy5836 4 жыл бұрын
Now that's marketing!
@waytoohypernova
@waytoohypernova 4 жыл бұрын
this made me go "hnhnhnhnhnhHiiIIIIiiiIIIiiIIIIIINNNNNhnhnhnhnhhhheh"
@Viktoria_Selene
@Viktoria_Selene 4 жыл бұрын
but, bfore we continue, have you heard about; Raid, shadow legends ?
@CerealExperimentsMizuki
@CerealExperimentsMizuki 4 жыл бұрын
Not really, it is Omnipotent to Humans and Mortals but it's mearly a single entity known as Hyplexier, he's part of a gigantic and powerful race of Immortal beings known as the Celesti'Argyioun, he's just a random scout that was forced into a random Universe in this Macrocosm and he happened to come across Earth, a few Dozen Million Years ago, he then settled and wait, eventually he witnessed the man known as Anios, the Angelicus, he punished him for killing off his first creation, the Dinosaurs, which where originally called something incomprehensible to the English Language. Eventually Hyplexier regained a miniscule part of his power back, enough to power a Trillion Suns but this was absolutely nothing compared to his original, highly suppressed power. After a while he noticed some upright walking Creatures similar to how Hyplexier looked, then he had a brief fleeting thought that the man he met beforehand may have been responsible for such a creation, so he observed then, studied them he had watched for Tens of Thousands of Years until he came across someone who was wearing lots of Gold. This Gold Man was known as a Pharaoh, and he wanted to build something great, something never before seen by any "Human"
@kenanschlueter7326
@kenanschlueter7326 5 жыл бұрын
I’ll have you know Darth Jar Jar is not comic relief
@RashidMBey
@RashidMBey 5 жыл бұрын
Tbh, Darth Jar Jar would have subverted the entire trope in a spectacular way.
@christophergarcia9022
@christophergarcia9022 5 жыл бұрын
@@RashidMBey we all know they don't have the balls to pull darth jar jar
@Noah-kd6lq
@Noah-kd6lq 5 жыл бұрын
@@RashidMBey tbh, Darth jar jar is the reason I have seen episode 1 more than the other prequels. I like imagining what could have been the anti-Yoda.
@chesterstevens8870
@chesterstevens8870 5 жыл бұрын
@@christophergarcia9022 Maybe Lucas did. But Hollywood? Definitely not.
@Titleknown
@Titleknown 5 жыл бұрын
Didn't they kinda have that in the Yuuzhan Vong arc of the old Expanded Universe? How well was that recieved?
@IceSpoon
@IceSpoon 4 жыл бұрын
Jokes aside, I'm glad how Star Wars treated Jar-Jar in The Clone Wars TV series. Even though he's as clumsy and hateable as in Phantom Menace, it has a few episodes where he's actually the hero. It makes life harder to Mace Windu, but his innocence and loyalty are actually highlighted, and those are traits that neither Yoda, Obi-Wan nor Padmé have, only Jar-Jar has.
@Meepo007
@Meepo007 3 жыл бұрын
Clone Wars has amazing writing.
@generalstaal7075
@generalstaal7075 3 жыл бұрын
@@Meepo007 Clone Wars is Star wars given The Last Airbender (cartoon, not movie) treatment.
@Meepo007
@Meepo007 3 жыл бұрын
@@generalstaal7075 I know
@erikjohnson7141
@erikjohnson7141 3 жыл бұрын
Since I was a kid when TPM came out, I actually loved Jar Jar. But I'm sorry I absolutely hated CW Jar Jar. Which made me sad a bit.
@Archon3960
@Archon3960 2 жыл бұрын
@@Meepo007 Yeah. I can't help but feel that The Clone Wars would have been better if it was, you know, free of Canon. Maybe with a team of completly original characters who don't have plot armor and could interact with the main cast in a set period in the setting. But enough about Rebels! XD
@Eric-py8yy
@Eric-py8yy 2 жыл бұрын
How to make a good character relieve: My answer: Sokka, make him funny but giving him traits that doesn't make his only trait being a jokester and make his jokes be on determined circumstances when appropriated and don't stick with catchphrases because the chance of them getting old fast is easily achievable
@hyenaedits3460
@hyenaedits3460 5 жыл бұрын
The salt in this video is enough for an entire movie theater's popcorn.
@PartyDude_19
@PartyDude_19 5 жыл бұрын
Remember, the Comic relief *MUST* be stupid
@avastoyboxandarcade
@avastoyboxandarcade 4 жыл бұрын
*looks at Patrick Star*
@ahniandfriends123
@ahniandfriends123 4 жыл бұрын
*Wheezes in Cosmo*
@fantasyshadows3207
@fantasyshadows3207 4 жыл бұрын
*Laughs maniacally in Sokka, Drax, Leo, Lance, Sassy Jace, Sassy Harry, sassy protagonists and side characters*
@GLu-tb1pb
@GLu-tb1pb 4 жыл бұрын
The Doctor laughs in his smartness
@kaexewires7531
@kaexewires7531 4 жыл бұрын
ooohooo so you're saying that boom Sonic is stupid? sounds about right...
@doritodorito492
@doritodorito492 2 жыл бұрын
This just makes me love Camilo Madrigal even more than I already do. When Casita fell apart, he wasn't like "Bazoinks, our house is broken!", he came in with a realistic remark that still managed to shift the tone for a bit. Along with that, he does seem to have a lot of characterisation besides being comic relief, like when he tries to calm his mum down, showing that he cares about her. He's really well written for a character with five minutes of screentime. Also, he doesn't have an annoying voice.
@Hellwolf36
@Hellwolf36 4 жыл бұрын
I honestly find this is the hardest character archetype to write. Especially if your sense of humor is unique and only you understand it. Most of the funny characters usually end up getting stale as time goes on.
@fraydizs7302
@fraydizs7302 5 жыл бұрын
Bad guy: believe me when I say the death of your master was nothing personal. He was just at the wrong place at the wrong timee. Comic relief character: B a z i n g a Laugh track: GAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
@demi-femme4821
@demi-femme4821 5 жыл бұрын
I'd have the villain say: "Guess who else is in the wrong place at the wrong time?" Comic relief: "The President!" Villain: "Close enough." **kills comic relief**
@rolfneve
@rolfneve 4 жыл бұрын
[ B A Z I N G A]
@ginogatash4030
@ginogatash4030 4 жыл бұрын
@@demi-femme4821 that makes me wonder, you think he should do a terrible writing advise on "social issues" wich for some of writers, especially in comic books, seems to be a code name for "shoving my political ideas down the reader/viewer's throat"?
@kashim4351
@kashim4351 4 жыл бұрын
@@ginogatash4030 I think it would be best if he put that one aside.
@ginogatash4030
@ginogatash4030 4 жыл бұрын
@@kashim4351 yeah, he doesn't seem to want to touch on "controversial" topics, the closest he ever got was world building, and even then he just went "you deal with it". though, i think it's important to teach how to not turn your story into a sad excuse for preaching politics, and handling other touchy subjects as well, because you really don't want to fuck up in that department.
@Espeon804
@Espeon804 5 жыл бұрын
Comic Relief characters. Aaaah. On the serious note, don't you love the shocking moment when the comic relief character actuslly has a serious moment? Like they step in and say something serious or pull off some epic move? Makes you have to stop reading and question everything. Lol I love books like that.
@klop4228
@klop4228 5 жыл бұрын
You seen Death Note? Climax of that is one of those moments
@tlshortyshorty5810
@tlshortyshorty5810 5 жыл бұрын
Or it could be like Kingsman, where the main characters/protagonist _is_ the comic relief character in some ways, or one of the intended comic relief characters is actually needed in the plot and saves the protagonist a few times. God bless thee and Rest In Peace, Merlin.
@klop4228
@klop4228 5 жыл бұрын
@@tlshortyshorty5810 Or where the whole cast is comical sometimes and also useful. Thanks, Pirates of the Caribbean. Although there the tone of the film is comical anyway
@Jamie-tx7pn
@Jamie-tx7pn 5 жыл бұрын
ZAPPERS
@someonefromsomewhere7181
@someonefromsomewhere7181 5 жыл бұрын
I've seen you before on pmd videos comments
@anon2447
@anon2447 4 жыл бұрын
Comic relief character actually done amazingly: Stella from winx club, she is aware of tension and dangers and does crack jokes to break the tension and when she gets critisiced about it by other characters she literally tells them to stfu because humour is literally human's only self-defense mechanism to seriously psychologically harming threats and the darkest parts of human's psyche and points out that many war veterans will tell you is that the last thing they saw their comrades doing before being anihilated is smiling or laughing, she literally roasts someone like this to the point where the character that critiscized her has no other option but to answer "well, you better crack a really good one right now",
@saranemcova5448
@saranemcova5448 Жыл бұрын
*Stella in the first 3-4 seasons
@sotakovatereza352
@sotakovatereza352 Жыл бұрын
​@@saranemcova5448 (there's an English vesion of my coment too, don't worry) Jo, Stella po tom, co Winx Club začal bý víc dětský, zblbla.Stella v sériích 1-4 byla vtipná a ráda se bavila, ale byla i silná, dokázala brát věci vážně a starala a bála se o své přátele a rodinu. Upřímně se mi moc líbí jak se Winx Club vyhnul klišé zlé holky nebo hloupé blondýny. Stella je blondýna, je bohatá (jelikož je princeznou) a je fashionista. Tohle jsou tři věci, z kterých se tyhle archetypy velmi často skládají, a i když Stella není úplně nejchytřejší postava a škola jí někdy moc nejde, stála je v prvních čtyřech sériích daleko chytřejší a vážnější než v těch novějších. (Ty novější série celkově se neberou moc vážně.)🙄🙄🙄 Yeah, Stella became pretty dumb after Winx Club became more childish. Stella in seasons 1-4 was funny and fun loving, but she was also strong, could take things seriously and cared and worried about her friends and family. Honestly, I really like how Winx Club avoided the cliché of mean girl or dumb blonde. Stella is blonde, she's rich (since she's a princess) and she's a fashionista. These are the three things that these archetypes very often consist of, and even though Stella isn't exactly the smartest character and sometimes doesn't do well in school, she was far smarter and more serious in the first four seasons than in the later ones. (The newer seasons generally do not take themselfs very seriously.)🙄🙄🙄
@fortniteballs57
@fortniteballs57 Жыл бұрын
holy fuck, I would need a really good comic relief too after that
@TsulaAngenati2292
@TsulaAngenati2292 4 жыл бұрын
“Shame I can’t turn you old fossils into fuel.” That’s good writing, wait, that’s illegal.
@Bacillus4
@Bacillus4 5 жыл бұрын
How to write the ending to a series! No seriously, considering how many good shows seem to crash and burn in the final season.
@ginogatash4030
@ginogatash4030 4 жыл бұрын
or just don't have any good seasons at all after a while.
@user-xq9cx9ky9m
@user-xq9cx9ky9m 3 жыл бұрын
Or just announcing that the next season is cancelled, even though the plot was left far away from the end.
@kirstywalker6950
@kirstywalker6950 3 жыл бұрын
Yeah the last season was rubbish haven’t watched the later episode only the last one
@nameslesss
@nameslesss 3 жыл бұрын
Cough voltron cough
@bluelandyaandgreenlandya1788
@bluelandyaandgreenlandya1788 3 жыл бұрын
@@user-xq9cx9ky9m "and at this moment a endless field of wails could be heard from TAWOG fans"
@SPDYellow
@SPDYellow 5 жыл бұрын
And remember when it comes to humor, there’s no such thing as gallows humor, where a character acknowledges the horrible situation they’re in and tries to cope by making a somewhat tasteless joke about it. Whaddya mean “You have to laugh to keep from crying?” Why would someone do that?”
@ilovemydog8825
@ilovemydog8825 3 жыл бұрын
And if it somehow does exist, reverse it by stripping the character of all character development by giving them a girlfriend! *cough cough Caleo cough cough*
@jellyfish0311
@jellyfish0311 3 жыл бұрын
You're giving me a great idea, this could work with a healer type of character, given the rather stressful nature of the role.
@littlemoth4956
@littlemoth4956 2 жыл бұрын
Dragon Quest 11 does this well, I think.
@snowystarflakes7700
@snowystarflakes7700 2 жыл бұрын
Why make an actual character, when you can just have a walking joke machine? It’s so much easier, and definitely won’t make the audience want to strangle me!
@kaylasilverstein4137
@kaylasilverstein4137 Жыл бұрын
OH MY GOD. “Walking joke machine” is the best way I’ve EVER heard anyone describe bad comic relief characters. I’m stealing that LOL
@blacksonder9252
@blacksonder9252 3 жыл бұрын
In a personal project I'm working on, the comic relief uses humor as a means of coping due to his constant fears of being alone and forgotten. So mine would clearly fail as a true comic relief.
@dakotasherman632
@dakotasherman632 5 жыл бұрын
I've been waiting for this since the romantic subplot episode lol.
@amberbaum4079
@amberbaum4079 5 жыл бұрын
Same. I hate these fuckers. Especially the magical small creature variant that are supposed to be "cute".
@arandomzoomer4837
@arandomzoomer4837 5 жыл бұрын
Same
@wakanakamulan2152
@wakanakamulan2152 5 жыл бұрын
That means the romance Genre is next
@namingisdifficult408
@namingisdifficult408 5 жыл бұрын
Same
@joewoods532
@joewoods532 5 жыл бұрын
Same
@Buford-kz7ky
@Buford-kz7ky 5 жыл бұрын
*Me*: Please, I've given you everything I had! *The comic relief character ascending into the air, eyes burning like molten steel*: Zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers zappers
@johnny_my_penls_is_small_but
@johnny_my_penls_is_small_but 5 жыл бұрын
What is that referencing
@theweakestbrazilianmale3398
@theweakestbrazilianmale3398 5 жыл бұрын
*MEESA MEESA MEESA MEESA MEESA MEESA MEESA MEESA MEEEEEEEEEEEEESAAAAAAAAAAA*
@melgibsonafter5beers626
@melgibsonafter5beers626 5 жыл бұрын
Zap to the extreme!
@Buford-kz7ky
@Buford-kz7ky 5 жыл бұрын
Johnny, The Tormentor Nothing specifically
@shadowcattt
@shadowcattt 5 жыл бұрын
@@johnny_my_penls_is_small_but referencing the video which in turn is referencing Ja Ja B
@rockgirl6786
@rockgirl6786 2 жыл бұрын
Something I like for comic relief is when the comic relief doesn't completely overthrow the tension. Example: tense action scene with many characters running around. Two characters bump into each other and fall over or one character slips on something and falls before getting up٫ quickly saying "I'm ok!" and going back to fighting. By doing this there's a quick laugh that doesn't completely ruin the moment.
@Harold_Wilson
@Harold_Wilson 3 жыл бұрын
You forgot the part when the main characters confront the comic relief character shot so the troubles he's caused, making him sad, compelling the main characters to apologise to him, despite him not earning an apology in the first place.
@someeejit
@someeejit 5 жыл бұрын
Please make and episode about killing a character
@butterscotch4208
@butterscotch4208 4 жыл бұрын
John Stenson y e s
@cbbblue8348
@cbbblue8348 4 жыл бұрын
Whats killing a character, this is a story made by me so I can bring him back with whatever dark magic or end of story upgrade.
@cbbblue8348
@cbbblue8348 4 жыл бұрын
@A Personthen just purify him with the power of friendship, sure he might die again (well that's a good thing since I can lazily recreate another sad scene without putting much thought in it) and also gives the main character one last upgrade.
@scottmantooth8785
@scottmantooth8785 4 жыл бұрын
Act Five Syndrome...from Shakespeare...EVERYONE DIES!!!!!
@DavidLLambertmobile
@DavidLLambertmobile 4 жыл бұрын
SPOILER: Ben Affleck's SF characters sudden death in Triple Frontier was a good example of how to create suspense, tension.
@ChaosRayZero
@ChaosRayZero 5 жыл бұрын
I now have the urge to teach an Animal Crossing character to end their sentences with "zappers."
@demi-femme4821
@demi-femme4821 5 жыл бұрын
Please don't.
@ChaosRayZero
@ChaosRayZero 5 жыл бұрын
@@demi-femme4821 Why not? I only have City Folk and Wild World, so it's not like they'll go out into the world via online play or anything. The only person who it'll likely ever affect- _the only person who will likely ever see it-_ is me. =^p
@aalloy6881
@aalloy6881 4 жыл бұрын
Still beats "How wude!"
@underrated1524
@underrated1524 3 жыл бұрын
(You can do that in Animal Crossing?)
@ChaosRayZero
@ChaosRayZero 3 жыл бұрын
@PartySlime76 I'd have to delete my old data for that. Not willing to go _that far,_ thank you.
@bigredwolf6
@bigredwolf6 4 жыл бұрын
If life were a movie, Epstein’s death would be a murder mystery and 4chan would be the comic relief character.
@GameyGaming
@GameyGaming Жыл бұрын
Sokka is a comic relief character done right. You know, because they made him an actual CHARACTER. An expanding moral point of view, a backstory, strong traits of leadership, skills and special abilities in combat, a cunning, strategic mind and so much more. A character can be funny and fleshed out at the same time, which is apparently a bunch of writers don’t understand. The way they developed Sokka and his complex personality is why he is perhaps my favorite character in Avatar.
@rrtkddigimon0
@rrtkddigimon0 5 жыл бұрын
"No love triangle for you pal, you are the comic relief." Adam Sandler : *cracking knucles* .
@bryanmanuel4945
@bryanmanuel4945 5 жыл бұрын
Remember every one a Comic Relief Character must say a joke when there is a heart felt or sad scene.Hey it's not like it will break tension and cause a huge tone shift people will buy it any way.
@panlis6243
@panlis6243 5 жыл бұрын
Also it's not like our comic relief is able to have any emotions and actually have a personality and attachment to certain characters
@jonsnor4313
@jonsnor4313 5 жыл бұрын
Dont dare to use a joke that adds something significant to the tone o a dramatic scene.
@gone41214
@gone41214 5 жыл бұрын
Zappers!
@arte0021
@arte0021 5 жыл бұрын
Marvel is guilty of this. Looking at you Thor Ragnarok.
@Dynakirby63
@Dynakirby63 5 жыл бұрын
Wow, that must be why Layton vs Wright was so well-recieved. This has truly opened my eyes.
@helloweasel1295
@helloweasel1295 4 жыл бұрын
"SLAP-A-POW!" -Sokka, c. 100 AG
@lordofsticks8493
@lordofsticks8493 4 жыл бұрын
Thanks! Now I can make the *perfect* comic relief character, with the equally amazing cathphrase "I am vengeance! I am the night! oinks"
@lordanubis1458
@lordanubis1458 Жыл бұрын
I am Batpig!
@failedleopard3685
@failedleopard3685 5 жыл бұрын
Is it just me or is there an increase in honesty and character breaking in these last couple of videos? C-could it be... *GASP* character development?! into Good Writing Advice?!
@nomobobby
@nomobobby 5 жыл бұрын
FailedLeopard don’t. Worry. He’ll be hitting the reset button in the next video.
@ginogatash4030
@ginogatash4030 4 жыл бұрын
that's more character progression.
@qtulhoo
@qtulhoo 4 жыл бұрын
...Through a transition of Mediocre Writing Advice.
@DaywalkerNL94
@DaywalkerNL94 5 жыл бұрын
If your comic relief is successful make sure that he TAKES OVER THE ENTIRE STORY to the point of throwing away every other character with actual traits and storyarcs.
@johnterpack3940
@johnterpack3940 5 жыл бұрын
Sounds vaguely like a recent nautical franchise I think I once saw.
@dekucake4395
@dekucake4395 5 жыл бұрын
Looking at you, Frozen, Despicable Me, and Jimmy Neutron
@ginogatash4030
@ginogatash4030 4 жыл бұрын
@Minisheep it's so weird seeing the fandom portray Sans as this annoying comic relief character that never shuts the hell up, and always spews some bad puns, when in the game he made like 2 jokes.
@cbbblue8348
@cbbblue8348 4 жыл бұрын
@@ginogatash4030 The fandom treated the sans as the protangonist, badass, Gary stu and comic relief despite he done so little in game.
@ginogatash4030
@ginogatash4030 4 жыл бұрын
@@cbbblue8348 well, in the genocide ending he turned out to be overpowered, but yeah.
@0rbeez
@0rbeez 3 жыл бұрын
My favourite thing about comic relief characters is how often the fans look at them and say “that one. That’s who we’re writing all the angst about. Every vent fic? Going to this one.” Every time I go to see what the fans think of a comic relief character, like half of it is angst, sometimes so much that it warrants its own tag (looking at you, Lance from VLD)
@mckaylamarille8630
@mckaylamarille8630 3 жыл бұрын
It's, kind of funny how that happens. The fanbase makes the most positive characters depressing and the brooding ones wholesome xD
@snorf525
@snorf525 3 жыл бұрын
i love how you can see, hear, feel, smell, and taste the sarcasm when he says "how tragic"
@MegaAgamon
@MegaAgamon 5 жыл бұрын
Honestly, Soka from Avatar is one of the best comic relief characters ever!
@isabelguzmanmiranda5025
@isabelguzmanmiranda5025 4 жыл бұрын
Much more after seeing this video. Because he was A CHARACTER first, and then comic relief. The same thing happened with Toph. She was funny as hell, BESIDES having a personality.
@PurpleMoth459
@PurpleMoth459 4 жыл бұрын
Yes I love both of those characters! Them being funny isn't their entire personality!
@TheDr502
@TheDr502 4 жыл бұрын
As awesome as Soka is (he was my favorite character in Avatar), he's a rare exception who proves the norm.
@ethanmcfarland8240
@ethanmcfarland8240 3 жыл бұрын
He was a Badass, who was funny
@pyroshrimp4073
@pyroshrimp4073 3 жыл бұрын
@@TheDr502 you dare oppose uncle iroh?
@paymo14
@paymo14 5 жыл бұрын
Make the protagonist a comic relief character. Its as easy as the LOVE TRIANGLE.
@ChaosRayZero
@ChaosRayZero 5 жыл бұрын
Better yet, have 2 goofy members of the heroic team- one pretty much unquestionably has all the deus ex machina powers to justify his place on the team; the other is a "lovable coward" with a funny accent whom you have to question why they keep him around other than the fact that it's a silly kid's show. They're both technically in a love triangle with the brains of the group, but it's clear her choice is the hero, and the bumbling scardey-cat keeps trying and/or angsting about his lack of chances with the girl anyway _because it's funny._ -It's totally not like this is an actual description of the dynamic between Sonic, Antoine, and Sally respectively on Sonic SatAM, this summary being written by someone who actually adores the show. ^_^- Edit: Forgot to mention protag/funnyguy1 is the one who's always spouting _mondo, way past cool_ catchphrases! _Gotta juice!_
@paymo14
@paymo14 5 жыл бұрын
@@ChaosRayZero Better idea: we make every single character in the story comic relief, except each one has they're own funny attribute. Ranging from Jar Jar Bink's levels of annoying to an apathetic, Bill Murray style sarcasm. Hell, make the antagonist funny too. Make him a clown! Turn it into a horror story! Base it off a book! Make it take place in- Wait
@malachiowens3423
@malachiowens3423 5 жыл бұрын
That's not a bad idea. The main MC may have to save the world but he doesn't take it seriously enough so the foil would be serious AF....... Wait that’s the Aquaman movie.
@jonsnor4313
@jonsnor4313 5 жыл бұрын
My name is earl falls pretty much into it. You have earl with the karma mostly on his side and a very comical list off bad things he did and the lovely doofus randy his brother. Key is really giving them a good relationship and the hero a story arc and let him grow. And everyone is zany.
@captaindak5119
@captaindak5119 5 жыл бұрын
@@ChaosRayZero is this a reference to something specific?
@MasterSpud
@MasterSpud 3 жыл бұрын
The opening good traits for a comic relief character to have is pretty much exactly what Saul Goodman embodies in Breaking Bad. He’s a great example of a comic relief character done right.
@jgf4224
@jgf4224 2 жыл бұрын
If a laser blast shoots out every time the comic relief shouts out "zappers" he would be the protagonist with even more interesting story.
@MoonPatch
@MoonPatch 5 жыл бұрын
The most important thing to remember when writing a comic relief character is to not actually give them a CHARACTER, they must be comic relief and only comic relief Nor should you explain WHY they constantly try to be zany, maybe it's their way of coping with stressful situations, or they genuinely want to cheer up their friends, or maybe it's a sort of defensive habit to deflect their own insecurities, that sounds difficult to write and TOTALLY not interesting! Also, comic relief characters must be the only ones who even attempt to lighten the mood, no matter how out of place it makes them seem in the group of serious, brooding heroes
@catzdog9357
@catzdog9357 4 жыл бұрын
@@LendriMujina kzfaq.info/get/bejne/psWRf81oxNzWeZc.html
@LendriMujina
@LendriMujina 4 жыл бұрын
catz dog In my defense, that wasn't my intention. The character in question is in personal things that I write for myself, not any work that would even benefit from advertising. I was basically trying to see if I understood the OP's advice correctly. If it came across as marketing, I apologize. I've deleted the comment, at any rate. Again, sorry.
@nont18411
@nont18411 4 жыл бұрын
This comment is so sad. The second paragraph is just you describing me.
@TheKersey475
@TheKersey475 5 жыл бұрын
Missed Opportunity: "Perhaps we can actually utilize the fact that the other characters look down on the comic relief for characterization opportunities. Because the other characters underestimate the comic relief, maybe they could let their guard down around the clown and thus make their own character flaws more apparent in the process. Pfft. Nah. let's just have all the characters merely say the comic relief sucks and leave it at that cause merely acknowledging the problems without actually doing anything about them automatically fixes everything!" I bring up Michelangelo from the "Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles" franchise as a good example as his comedic antics and immaturity often brings out his brothers' character flaws like Rafael's wrath or Leonardo's over protectiveness.
@manuelm2300
@manuelm2300 3 жыл бұрын
Think my favorite comic relief is Ussop from one piece. Since he's not as physically strong and is always running away really show how he uses jokes to cope with his situation and that he isn't just a punchline since he has as much emotion as the rest of the cast even more
@jakeystarsuper
@jakeystarsuper 3 жыл бұрын
Yeah and Michelangelo being written like a tool comic relief annoys me.
@jakeystarsuper
@jakeystarsuper 3 жыл бұрын
What's Donnie flaws
@conspiracypanda1200
@conspiracypanda1200 3 жыл бұрын
@@jakeystarsuper Misunderstanding and occasional apathy towards his relationships with his family's actions/emotions because he's too absorbed in completing his own tasks, I think
@cheeselord3655
@cheeselord3655 2 жыл бұрын
@@jakeystarsuper he is flawless
@hngh6404
@hngh6404 3 жыл бұрын
Real talk: imaginary Hitler from jojo rabbit is a perfect example of how a comic relief character SHOULD be. He relieves tension and is genuinely funny, but he also conflicts Jojo and (kind of spoilers) makes him choose between Germany and the Elsa.
@SorowFame
@SorowFame 4 жыл бұрын
2:18 I wonder if "I am vengeance, I am the night-inga" would work as a catchphrase for a comic relief character?
@user-qv2qf1jk5o
@user-qv2qf1jk5o 5 жыл бұрын
Extra points if you make them (and only them) your representation of a marginalized group!
@ahniandfriends123
@ahniandfriends123 5 жыл бұрын
Every "diversity for the sake of diversity" group ever.
@scottmantooth8785
@scottmantooth8785 4 жыл бұрын
*and go out of your way to deliberately draw eye rolling attention to that fact at every opportunity imaginable and in the most forced and contrived manner possible during conversations that have absolutely NOTHING to do with the given plot narrative or situational crisis to the point where it becomes the primary focus of the plot and all else becomes secondary*
@yaruyaru
@yaruyaru 4 жыл бұрын
yea pizza
@catherinestickels2591
@catherinestickels2591 4 жыл бұрын
@@scottmantooth8785 More importantly the character's status as a minority has no bearing on their backstory, outlook, how they interact with others, or how they are treated according to the rules of the setting. It's just an accent.
@jman9978
@jman9978 4 жыл бұрын
SKIDS AND MUDFLAP
@SaltyRocksPew
@SaltyRocksPew 5 жыл бұрын
The absolute enthusiasm in your voice at 2:05 had me dying. "The LOVE triangle!"
@f.i.r.e.5119
@f.i.r.e.5119 5 жыл бұрын
He's gotta work it into the video somewhere... Even if it's putting _himself_ in a love triangle _with_ the love triangle...
@reagame8700
@reagame8700 4 жыл бұрын
This is what I hate about sequels is when they take the comic relief and turn them into the protagonist. I'm looking at you, Cars 2.
@johnqsample5119
@johnqsample5119 4 жыл бұрын
okay now i want to see a "comic relief" character who's always messing things up and it turns out they're doing it on purpose to aid the villain (or the villain is actually THEIR henchman).
@Fangoros
@Fangoros 5 жыл бұрын
Best Comic Relief Character is obviously The Joker, duuh
@maadtee6281
@maadtee6281 5 жыл бұрын
I thought it was Lord jar jar
@emilianorios4761
@emilianorios4761 5 жыл бұрын
Ive laughed at some of his jokes
@ArbitraryOutcome
@ArbitraryOutcome 5 жыл бұрын
We truly live in a society.
@wisemankugelmemicus1701
@wisemankugelmemicus1701 5 жыл бұрын
Wilson The Joker is the best comic relief character....actually. Think about it. That’s what makes him a great villain.
@SomeFreakingCactus
@SomeFreakingCactus 5 жыл бұрын
Technically, I think The Joker is classified as a Force of Nature character.
@TheChaoticAsexual
@TheChaoticAsexual 5 жыл бұрын
3:43 sad finger guns is always the way to do angst for a comic relief character
@bobthebox2993
@bobthebox2993 Жыл бұрын
I absolutely love Sokka from Avatar:The Last Airbender. Comic relief character done extremely right.
@maxime2445
@maxime2445 3 жыл бұрын
Honestly that's probably the most effective torture, requiring you to listen to more and more comic relief jokes. Which is why he's important in the story
@trondordoesstuff
@trondordoesstuff 5 жыл бұрын
*I am vengeance! I am the night!* oinks Wow, I am Batman!
@emeraldeelentertainment8988
@emeraldeelentertainment8988 5 жыл бұрын
This was funnier than it should've been.
@deliriousboi2052
@deliriousboi2052 4 жыл бұрын
I rolled a 3 and a 6 and was trying to find a comment to this effect but you did this
@sanfransiscon
@sanfransiscon 5 жыл бұрын
*uses JarJar as an example of comic relief gone wrong* You are gravely mistaken. Do not underestimate the true master of the sith...
@scottmantooth8785
@scottmantooth8785 4 жыл бұрын
Jar Jar should have been a very bitter and cynical freelance mercenary, heavily scarred, missing one eye and having it replaced with a cybernetic implant...and voiced by an unscripted Samuel L. Jackson...he would have been loved/adored and cherished by the fans the moment he appeared on screen
@LendriMujina
@LendriMujina 4 жыл бұрын
Scott Mantooth You have a point. Visually speaking, gungans don't have a bad design, and they could have been interesting if they were written (very) differently.
@caligulasaquarium7637
@caligulasaquarium7637 4 жыл бұрын
@@victory7213 A film theory
@mmicb0b
@mmicb0b 3 жыл бұрын
I feel like a comic relief character works when they can dial it down/not crack jokes endlessly when they need to do so
@thewrustywrench21
@thewrustywrench21 4 жыл бұрын
A really good example of comedy relief is the 5 OG Percy Jackson novels. Handled very well in my opinion, it’s not trying too hard, it’s witty and charismatic, and adds depth to the characters.
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