Webtoon Critique and Review: Palissandra
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Күн бұрынI'm a full-time professional Webtoon and Comic creator and I'll be reviewing viewer submitted comics and Webtoon Canvas. I will look at art, storytelling, lettering, etc. This is to try to help you learn how to get better at comics by giving an honest critique.
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Today we look at Palissandra
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This video critique was requested by the creator. I don't offer unsolicited advice because I don't believe it is appropriate to force your opinions on someone you don't know, even if you have good intentions. Imagine walking up to a stranger on the street and saying "yellow's not your color."
I'm not going to focus much on anatomy and other aspects of drawing that simply require practice and time to learn. Saying "Draw better biceps" isn't super helpful. All artists are always and forever trying to draw better biceps.
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@mink2882 3 жыл бұрын
"Judge it unmercifully, doesnt that sound like fun?!" Me: starts nodding furiously
@jesstellstales2113 3 жыл бұрын
Wow! This was so lovely! Thank you so much for taking the time to do such a thorough review, Walter! This was not as painful as I was afraid it might be. That darn line going through the rope though... 😞I'm so ashamed... 🤣Really though, you made some great points and now I want to go back and put some more care into some of those consistency issues. Also, I didn't consider that about episode length! I was actually working on a super long episode and now I think I'll cut it in half. Again, thank you so much for this advice. It's so valuable to hear from someone with so much experience. And I'm so happy you enjoyed the story! Adventure Games really are a dying breed, so we have to bring them back. Thanks again for the critique! I definitely encourage everyone to go support Walter's Patreon if you can! He puts so much time into helping other creators, he deserves all the support and hugs! Looking forward to more of your awesome content!
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you very much. It means a lot that you wanted to hear my thoughts about your work. I'm honored. And yeah, love adventure games. I know there are new ones being made, so not everyone's forgotten, they just aren't as flashy as other games. If I ever made a game, it would prolly be point-and-click or side scroller.
@jesstellstales2113 3 жыл бұрын
@@walterostlie I could see that. Adventure games seem to have more of a focus on art and story, so it makes sense to me that comic artists would gravitate toward that style of game. Same here. Again thanks for the critique and encouragement, Walter!
@delfi__arts 3 жыл бұрын
Missed opportunity of april fools: making an alt account for a short comic with everything wrong especially lettering and a review video complimenting everything about it 😂 happy easter Walter!
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
Hah, next year, next year
@maddmaxxwolf205 3 жыл бұрын
"All artists are always and forever trying to draw better biceps", lol
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
This is the way.
@saranimator6746 3 жыл бұрын
@@walterostlie the way to greatness.
@Tikkibombom 2 жыл бұрын
I'm addicted to this series, @walter, please bring this back!
@antonioa3078 3 жыл бұрын
Yessss, always loved these videos! Been a great help through my first time making a webtoon. ♤
@Nikke283 3 жыл бұрын
Again, every single critique you did (and probably do) brings some new aspects to think about- according my own work. I tend to do plans (especially for this project) and I split the plot in Episodes, but after all these years ( and even after writing actually books) i noticed I can`t probably tell how much panels i actually need until I haven`t done at least the thumbnails.(or in case of a novel, writing a rough version) So if If write my episodes Its more like "I have the Goal in this chapter" and if i figure its getting to long (or to short) I split/ add. For my current project the goal is like 40- 50 Panels (duh) and if I notice I need more time to tell - well then its a bit more. When I notice its a way to less story ...Well I have so much story to do-so I can easily add some. Im not to worried about the cliffhange thing. Cliffhangers don`t need to be always a actual "woah my main Char is in the worst trouble" thing but more subtile but still making curious. My main Problem is that I come physical on my limits since my time sitting for 16 hours straight/ the whole night (or some insane stuff) in front of a computer screen gives me a) backpain from hell and tires me up. b) I do have a life to manage- even in deepest lookdown. So I am kinda perfectionistic. I am deeply worried, that I never ever make it in a decent time shedule. Thank you for the wonderful Videos and Comics :)
@musicmaker977 3 жыл бұрын
All of his videos are so useful!! Thank you for all your work!
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
Thanks! Appreciate you watching!
@aeestha 3 жыл бұрын
I never know when the video ends haha thank you yet again!! Will def use them for my own projects!
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
I'm super sneaky!
@saranimator6746 3 жыл бұрын
ah yes I love judging unmercifully with best girl judgment bunny
@charzzart 3 жыл бұрын
This was an awesome video! I enjoyed listening to what you had to say!
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
Thank you! Appreciate you watching.
@ameru3258 3 жыл бұрын
I shall wait for the registration of critiuqes to be open.
@LeoArmada 3 жыл бұрын
''just take a break if you need it'' honestly i think i do, i don't feel the same level of excitement,hype and motivation as i did a few days ago so prob the best thing to do, is to just stop for a little while, but then i feel guilty on skipping a day and pushing my remaster release further up...sadge
@catherineabena5720 3 жыл бұрын
perhaps write down a bunch of things that made you start, why you’re excited to make it and then creating a mood board of stories that inspire you or just anything that inspires you then write down the names of scenes you’re most excited to create. then put it on a wall? so you’re always motivated :)
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
Totally understand. But take that break, don't think about your comic, and feel good about it. You deserve it!
@halululi634 3 жыл бұрын
I hope there is a tutorial for explosions and other elements for action ✨
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
I'll see what I can do.
@nootnootman6353 3 жыл бұрын
noot noot
@aerop6395 3 жыл бұрын
Could you critique and review my webcomic? It’s called Indignity. I would love to hear how I can improve.
@InvasionAnimation 3 жыл бұрын
Do you think that to make a webtoon it would be better if I used an already established universe (For example using the characters from fallout, and the settings of fallout.) Or would it be better to make everything yourself , creating the world, and how it works, with original characters. I ask because I had an idea for a comic based on fallout, but then I had an idea I liked much better, but does not have the supported audience that fallout already has.
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
Technically, it's illegal to make a comic based on someone else's property. However most companies will ignore it because there are too many people doing it and it's too much hassle. It can be fun making short fan-comics for properties you love and a good way to get a quick boost in readers, but if you want to make your own serious comic, I'd suggest coming up with your own world/characters because I wouldn't want to put all that effort into someone else's ideas. You can always make your comic in world and story similar to fallout, that's okay, but with your own locations/people/story. Better to make your own fans.
@InvasionAnimation 3 жыл бұрын
@@walterostlie That sounds great! I will focus on creating my own world! Thank you for the advice!
@ooexo21 3 жыл бұрын
thinking the same thing
@r.s.j.creations3943 3 жыл бұрын
Dope video Walter! Will your video critique tier be available around mid-June?
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
Quite possible. I'll prolly rework submissions so I don't get such an avalanche all at once. I don't want my content to be 100% comic critiques but I also don't want to make people wait months for their critiques.
@r.s.j.creations3943 3 жыл бұрын
@@walterostlie Understandable. These critique videos inspire me to keep working on my webcomic.
@bunsoterd1117 3 жыл бұрын
I hope Walter will set an Art contest event (fan art, the more likes will win) with his supporters soon 🤭🥴😅
@bunsoterd1117 3 жыл бұрын
and the prize DRAWING TABLET ( just suggesting ) what do you think? 😁🤣😍
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
I'll think about it. Do you know any other youtuber that's run a contest recently?
@bunsoterd1117 3 жыл бұрын
@@walterostlie Yeah, but a different strategy depends on you,@hachipaws doing it but different style to join in the Contest, they need to register and pass fan art become our requirement to join a spin to the wheel, there's a first 10 people, will remove and can't get a chance to win a grand prize and 2nd 5 people will receive an internet load and for the 3rd, 3 people will choose to receive anything gift from other sponsor's and at last, finally the Amazing GRAND PRIZE THE XPEN DRAWING TABLET!. someone received it last week.😍 but after that there is impostor who wanted to get the winner prize that time, you need to make sure about the verification Email's and official's name of your members so that you have a hint to recognize the real person.
@bunsoterd1117 3 жыл бұрын
@@walterostlie but its depends on you if you will do something fun with your supporters (just suggesting )😅
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
@@bunsoterd1117 Cool. I just wanted to see how other people had handled award the prize, shipping and all that stuff can get tricky. I'll look into it.
@tfasidz 3 жыл бұрын
if i were to, how would i submit a comic for critique by you? I'm sorry I don't really know how to
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
Usually through Patreon/Ko-FI or a submission site, but I am booked up until June/July right now, so I closed submissions
@AgentEmbey 3 жыл бұрын
Another Comic sacrificed to better comics everywhere.
@sora1696 3 жыл бұрын
a- im really early hello
@bunsoterd1117 3 жыл бұрын
I have a question; how does webtoon consider you to become a featured creator?.🤔
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
They look at the comics you've created and shared with the world, then they decide if you would be a good fit for their company. So you have to get your comics out into the world or posted on webtoon canvas for the webtoon editors to find you.
@bunsoterd1117 3 жыл бұрын
@@walterostlie now I knew, I was can't stick to my comic I am so scared to publish it on webtoon cause I was afraid of someone judging me into my English grammar XD
@walterostlie 3 жыл бұрын
@@bunsoterd1117 There may be some people who judge you, but ignore them. Do your best and you'll get better. You got this.
@bunsoterd1117 3 жыл бұрын
@@walterostlie aw~
@maeryum 3 жыл бұрын
I really hope Walter can critique my Webtoon one day 🥺❤️
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