The spacing really helped me. I realized my webtoon is like in 3x speed.

Gosh! I didn't notice you shared the video already, AAAA thank you so much, I'm the author of The Eighth

These are some of my favorite videos. ~ Always have some music, or walters videos in the background when I work on my Webtoon. ♤

This story sounds like it would be really good, it has a good idea and attractive art. I will read this 🤩

Learning so much from this. You're a fantastic teacher.

The art in The Eighth is really beautiful! These critique videos are always super helpful, so thanks for taking the time to make them so thorough! I recently published a WEBTOON called Rocked and noticed that there doesn’t seem to be a lot of info available to creators on which chapters the views correspond to or who is reading. Anyone have any tips on how to get more stats/navigate the creator page?

Really been enjoying these webtoon critiques! You've always got a lot of insightful advice!

I get so excited by these Critique videos 🤧🤧

Also, if the webtoon artist is reading the comments, your art is really pretty! And the storyline seems interesting too!

Judgment bunny was a great addition XD

i love watching these critiques they're so helpful :)

I'm learning so much from you! These review things were a great idea!

It was really hard specially if english was not my native language . But glad my cousin help me for that part . Can't wait my webcomic will get critique also . So i will learn alot from it 😊

I love these detailed critiques! Please keep doing them 🙏🏻

Awesome video! Once I’ve got a few chapters of my webcomic published I will offer it up as a sacrifice to the chopping block

Thank you for making this videos. These are always useful tips even when it's about someone else's comic. :)

I really liked into how much detail you went with the gutter space. It's something that gave me a lot of headache lately, so it really helped me. :) i was thinking that it might be interesting to give each critique a focus, so you can go into as much detail on other topics?

I really like this webtoon and the art and hope the creator will be able to update it soon. I love the art and I read it twice but what bothers me most is the story. At first I thought the villains like K and the demon of he motorcycle had evil secret plans that would be revealed after, but in some episodes it's shown that they don't really have a plan or intend to kill or harm the main protagonist. The motorcycle demon was just trying to have fun and accidentally burned something that is important to the story, he also stole I'd axe and I don't know why actually? The whole scene of the whole motorcycle and stealing axe was very confusing in general. I didn't understand the relation between the "villains" and heroes before I read the questions and answers. Wich also bothers me, like I like questions and answers but usually creator answers things that aren't related to the plot, it's like a bonus content. Like isayama from Shingeki no kyojin , he may answers of readers like "What's Levi's favorite juice?" But not "What is the origin of the titans?" IThe world is a bit confusing to me as well. Does people know angels and the forbidden fruit exists? Why does Evelyn went to leave with guys she didn't even met before? How long have they been searching for the fruit and Eve herself? Where is the fruit ? Is it in a secret place? Is there someone protecting or hidding it? So many questions 😔 Also the last actual chapter ( spoilers ) : there's a scene where the main character is kidnapped by a hat character Wich i don't remember the name. The scene is very good and I felt anxious and caring for Evelyn. When the other character was going to kill her I was so desesperate lmao 😂 Before she manages to kill the mc, Dereen appears and kills the killer, there's a panel with a bit of graphic violence and I was very shocked at the time. Blood spills all over Evelyn's face as she stares in shock. I thought she would freak out ( If I were in her situation I would ) , but then there's a panel of Darren smiling heroically with angels wings behind him. This may be a nitpick but I didn't understand this sequence at all. He says Evelyn is safe now, but is she...? That gal/boy he killed was once living in his house , I didn't think his act of killing them was heroic. And after the end of the episode there's a chibi versions of the two, Wich is funny, but I think it could be been in the next chapter. Because putting the chibis there kinda cut off the dramatic tone of the episode.

i always find it hard to organically introduce the names of my characters in my comic. does anyone have tips?

I learned something new today and I’m happy.

I love these videos sooooo much

A very helpful artcritic.I see many things what I could fix in my own Comic.

I was touched when you said the artist might want to try an art trade to get someone to check their dialogue! Can't explain this without getting overly personal but yes! Value people's time and they'll value yours! Another great and helpful review! Yay ☺️

I wanna go read this one! Thank you for another great video!

The eighth omg!! I love that webtoon

Thanks again Walter

This webtoon got some nice artwork.

Love ur videos ❤

Love this series

This vid had alot of panel help ♡, and id like to ask a question if youre able to give your opinion. When i make my webtoon, i try to keep either 1 or 2 panels to fit onto a phone screen at a time. I like to be able to see both panels at once if they go together instead of putting more spacing but the second panel gets cut in half. But sometimes, if both panels are a bit chunky, but not enough to keep the screen for itself, the two panels will a bit close together. Do you think its better to have them a bit closer? Or do you think it makes better sense to put better spacing???

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How can I contact the editors? Can you help me with this

Hi Walter Ostlie I was wondering how Webtoon pay more than one creator? Do they split the same amount they would give one creator or do they pay them both they're own amount, maybe not 100% each but maybe they pay them 60% each. I would love if you could clarify this, I want to know what more than one creator would get out of this.

How do you get critiqued? Do you have to do his patreon, or do we ask him?

How my webtoon can be reviewed? :c