I love the fact that they have created a narcissistic, immature, incompetent woman as a self insert for themselves without even realising that the average misogynist can't write women this insultingly.

"Women understand each other, and they hate each other" is the entire theme of female written and led tv shows nowadays

The worst part? This is the first time Jen in Non She-Hulk form actually acted like she was SUPPOSED to. Jen's supposed to be a shy, mousy, pushover, while the She-Hulk personal is more outgoing and confident.

Don't choose writers based on sex, race, sexuality ect. Choose them based on their inherent talent and ability to write something meaningful. - Sincerely, a female writer.

They wrote Jen to be such an unlikable bint, they had to make literally everyone around her *cartoonishly awful* so she can seem decent by comparison. Tearing others down so she can seem better…hmm, you mean like a narcissist does?

Yep, She-Hulk was one of the "popular girls" of Marvel so it is not really surprising to see female writers utterly destroying her character and brand value. They must've had immense joy dragging her into the mud with this show.

The biggest issue, is the writrers having NEVER READ THE SOURCE MATERIAL. If they had, they would have so much to work with, like how the change affects Jen's mindset. Her dead mother, and the reason she became a lawyer. But, this show is going to continue to be irredeemable garbage

It isn't that the writers realized what you said and made any conscious changes; it's that there are different writers for different episodes, and each of them write Jen as a self-insert instead of a consistent character, so she changes to how the writers see themselves. Perfect girlboss Jen is when Jessica Gao writes her. Flawed Jen is from Dana Schwartz and others, but even then nothing is ever really her fault but the fault of crappy men and mean girls.

Terrible people surrounded by terrible people write terrible characters. It's the only thing they know. To the coastal lower-upper class this is probably just a very correct depiction of reality.

Every time I see that "INFINITELY more than you!" clip, I cringe so hard. So empowering.

Hey, that guy with all the wives should be praised. Look at the incredible inclusivity of all the women he married.

It cant commit to being a legal show or a sitcom and instead is a show about what Jen finds annoying with each episode including a "bash men" segment. A legal show would have been terrific and new. Instead we got a 15 minute show about what women find annoying.

Literally the focus of this show should be the court room. And how to resolve issues that anger us within the justice system and not taking it into our own hands. And that means they should be making it seem like a real court room as much as possible.

Diversity in the writing room shouldn't be important, unless it's on ideas, characters, and stories.

I couldn't believe what I was hearing when at the wedding, Jenn states 'i just want people to recognize how incredible of a career I have...'. The type of person who insists on relating this at someone else's wedding is terrible.

As a divorcee, that's exactly how they act when money comes up.

If you get a bad male writer he'll write bad male characters. It's not about the sex, it's about talent.

im glad someone else noticed that jen was written as the most toxic type of woman and clearly dysfunctional

I love how there's no reason given for Titania's power in the show. She's just enormously powerful (and shockingly weak compared to Jen) and nobody comments on it or has any curiosity. Was she born that way? Was it a lab accident? Was she created by Dr. Doom? Show doesn't care and the characters don't care. And what's the point of her anyway? A rival for Jen? Titania was a joke the second she appeared on screen. I figured she'd be a one-off, because once you do that you can't expect the viewers to take her seriously as a threat. In that case you can kinda get away with not explaining it, just say she went to jail and call it done. But she keeps showing up while being as effective as she was in her introduction.

Weird how in Falcon and Winter soldier they didn’t change the title card to Captain America and the White Wolf, but they’ll change She-Hulk’s to Just Jen for a one off

I’m glad you mentioned the fact that her character did a 180. I really feel like the writers are dropping the ball. They are trying so hard to be woke that they’re doing the opposite. Like why is most of the show just She-Hulk dating and jumping in bed with people? Since when do we write superheroes that way? At this point, I’ve seen her on more dates than occasions where she actually saves people.

"Don't try to understand women, women understand women and they hate each other." --- Al Bundy

They wrote women to be narcissists

Honestly I love shows like these, make me feel better and special about my writing 😂

So if the show is almost 100% women and all of them are the boss, who is actually doing the work?

Maybe this show is a test, Disney wants to see if people will side with literal psychopaths if they make them girlbosses 💅

One only has to ask oneself this question: “How would a female writer depict women, if her main experience of women’s nature were the example set by Hollywood?”. And everything else follows logically.

Say what you want about She-Hulk, but it inspires me. A lot 😁 Every episode reminds me "If this shit writing can get a million-dollar show, then I'm a shoe-in!" 🤣🤣

I didn't watch this episode, and I'm really irritated that they think any lawyer could walk into a courtroom with half her chest exposed, wtf is this

Mr. Immortal in the comic has a really complicated history and sympathetic story (involving spirits of death and uncontrollable rage calmed by his part-dinosaur lover from the Savage Land,) and this show turned him into an unfunny joke that doesn't even make any sense. Kind of a microcosm of everything they did to She-Hulk, really.

"Sisterhood is powerful. It kills. Mostly sisters."

When I look at the way the writers implemented the characters, I can't help but think that they have a lot of personal problems. I'm not saying this in order to make fun of them, I'm actually being serious that these people are broken and need some sort of outlet.

this show could black pill so many people LMAO

I also asked why Titania isn't in jail, let alone have her own company and stuff - and people just dismissed me with "She is rich, duh!". Not sure how much many you have to have to get not convicted of attempted murder.

Honestly I'm kinda warming up to She Hulk just by everything it admits to. That the modern woman never grew past their "mean girl" phase in high school.

She Hulk writers: Suicide is really funny! 🙄

Lol I say it all the time no one hates Women like Women do. 😂I jokingly called my best Friend who is close enough to me for me to call my Sister a Misogynist to her face and she just agreed with me.

this is a good reason why you keep your super hero persona secret. you could attack she hulk with phony beauty products but her normal persona would not suffer because of it.

has it even been explained why titania is not in jail?

It’s really disheartening to watch shows with poor portrayals of women and then have some men genuinely believe all women are like this.

Naming her 'Titania' is an interesting choice given her Twitter namesake.

Actually, her completely changing personalities makes since if you view her as bipolar.

There's a saying that I've heard before, "Men don't really want to understand women. Women understand women and they hate each other."

Pug is a nickname because his last name is Pugliese. But, yeah, he's strangely the only male character not being torn down. And it is an interesting connection that it could be because it's also a dog.

The only way to maintain the idea that with women in charge there would be no wars is to have never met one. Not that I'm saying men are any better, but if anything that if we're going to improve culture it'll be in understanding our commonalities; the good and the bad.

I love hwo the most positive thing that can be said about She Hulk is "It's not rings of Power"

The secret to writing a good female character is being able to write a good character period. If the character is well written they could be a turtle or even a chair and they’d still be relatable

Didn't need the show to learn that. It's a universal truth.

Making this show a representation of "current year womanhood" couldn't have been a better (though ironic) anti-thesis to both who She-Hulk is and what a superhero should be. At least in her origin (Savage She-Hulk), she was a tough on crime attourney that was going after a mob boss that killed her mother, almost killed her (that made Bruce use his own blood to stabilize her before getting her to the hospital, almost getting caught by the police since he's a fugitive) and later succeeded in killing her best friend (who's alive and kicking in this series) and frame it on her. While Jeniffer indeed got a confidence boost by becoming She-Hulk, she wasn't a doormat (at most she was comic relief to the writer in the "Sensational" run). She has also never thought being She-Hulk as a curse or that it would cause any impediment to her life. She welcomed it with open arms and was extremely grateful to Bruce, who would feel guilty for spreading his "curse" on her (back then Hulk was still a tragic character). Jennifer was competent, but after becoming She-Hulk she got enamorate with the reality of being a superhero, of not being ordinary and having the power to do even greater good. Sensational She-Hulk's run was more sex positive and a lot more humorous in tone, but she was still exciting, heroic and never a bore. Just self-aware (literally, for better or worse). Unlike the best of She-Hulk in the comics, this show's Jennifer is an ironically self-aware bore who does nothing about it because of current year victimhood.

it's not women fault for she hulk, it's not men fault for she hulk. It's the production and writers fault for she hulk. i understand that comedies does not always have a storyline throughout multiple episodes. But those kind of comedies are usually not a superhero show in a connected universe, who use cliffhangers

Midnight's Edge, here on YT, have claimed that She-hulk has had several reshoots. AND that the episodes are out of the planned order. The "first episode" was a much later episode but test screenings rated the season poorly. Show runners switched this season's episode order around, almost back to front, and reshot new scenes in an attempt to patch the continuity. Tom and Andre claim the original plan was to spend time with meek Jen and have her become She-hulk half way though. Test screeners were displeased with not seeing She-hulk, so showrunners had to jam She-hulk into the first ep.

This reminds me of how when children lose thier turn (control) with a toy (show) they just break (spitefully do the opposite) that toy instead then immediately turn around to blame it on you.

This show has massively innovated on the Self Own. The writers hate themselves so much and they show it in the final episode

I’ve been using the term “broken women” for a few years now. And it’s the best way of describing what’s happened to women since social media and feminism and the internet in general broke them.

I think the core problem may be something surprisingly simple: these are the kinds of writers who don't know how to write funny characters who aren't assholes or idiots.

It's always nice to see a new upload from you.

Men never get out of their boy phase. Their toys just get bigger and more expensive. Women never grow out of their "mean girl in high school" phase, their tactics just get more passive aggressive. :P

It's not just how they're written; but how they're dressed/made up. I think the only one who avoids this unfortunate treatment is Jen's lawyer. Jen always looks unwashed/disheveled - damned near greasy looking, even in a court setting. As awful as the CGI She Hulk can look at times, she looks far better than her human counterpart; but even she doesn't catch a break when made to wear that hideous dress for the gala event. Titania just looks like a fashion disaster no matter what she's wearing. Her makeup is also just atrocious.

Wokeism is fundamentally similar to narcissism, when you really think about it. That may be why wokeoids can literally ONLY write characters that are terrible people.

I also knew from the beginning that when Daredevil showed up, he is going to be a competent lawyer while Jen remains incompetent and gets schooled in the courtroom. Because the female writers think that it's "cute" for Jen to act like a ditzy teenager and be incompetent.

Women don't really have friends... at best I would say they have frenemies that they are locked in near-constant silent warfare with like the Chaos Gods from Warhammer to determine who is in control of the metaphorical doll's house.

another thing needed is Likeable characters or Unlikable characters getting they're just deserts, it's practically writing 101, and you can't just have a character do a 180 without reason either, but at this point, they're unconsciously likely trying to prove they can't do it to get petty points and have a shield against criticism

College lesbians only know how to write one character guess which one that is. And guess who's writing for the show. I get sick of being reminded about the rings of power every time I try to go on Amazon to watch Doctor House MD episodes

I like how Sitch still uses the exact same dog sound effect from his very first video. *Roof* 🐶

a bad show is one thing, but it’s just so much more frustrating because things like this actually hurt the causes it’s suposed to be helping

I like how the simps for the show are like "You musthate the comics cuz it's JUST like the comics".. when Titania is obviously nothing like the comics.."One wrong note eventually ruins the entire symphony."

So glad you’re doing videos again !

You pointing out flaws in the script and the immortal is way more funny than the show itself! 😂

Having a show that centered around a superhero lawyer dealing with the deconstruction element of the legal ramifications of the business would have made it one of the most interesting shows ever made. We don't even deserve that, looks like.

At this point I wouldn’t be surprised if the big bad turns out to be some guy Jen bullied in high school and that the show is so out touch Jen would turn out to have been a horrible bully but it’ll make her out to be the victim and he should have just got over it.

Remember, She-Hulk talked about his good looking boyfriend saying : “It’s not important if he is good looking. But it’s important”

If they explained she was only a girl boss around banner cause they were family, that would help explain it

Haven't watched the show, but from these critiques, one thing puzzles me. Everyone seems to hate Jen, and everyone seems to love She-Hulk. But everyone _also_ knows they're the same person. I... huh?

Great to see you uploading regularly again 😊 Extra points for that sweet castlevania music at the end 🤩

The sheer fact that this show was written by all women and all female characters are horrible people says a lot about how women think.

Sitch you can bet 100% that writers of this show see your videos. I know many of these self- absorbed producers and writer types and they obsess, nonstop, on anything that's adjacent to their image or work. When not on thr job they are sifting through videos and twitter in a egomaniacal prison of their own making. They spend equal time reveling and triumphing in their echo chambers as they seeth and execrate to their detractors (you). They are deserving of our pity, however their ambitions wish opposition harm so we must keep ridiculing them. Keep up the great work, Sitch 👍💪

Characters doing a 180 after heaps of criticism is a huge sign of amateur writing to me.

FMAB is written by a woman (Arakawa Hiromu) and has amazing female characters like Riza, Izumi, Olivier etc ♥️

Not to defend the writting (and I havent seen it), but I heard that Disney is looking for the cheapest of talents. Cheap CGI, inexperience writters, all to maximize profit. They go all in on "brand will sell" that they dont bother with good writters. There's a huge difference writting for a show that airs at midnight that no one watches vs a MARVEL series. Maybe a lot of flack wouldnt be thrown at She-Hulk if it wasnt as prominent. Bad writters gonna bad write, but they will get better... eventually. I would put more blame on DIsney than anything else.

Well done as always!

solid analysis.... must discuss with my therapist..."we are indeed drifting in the arena of the unwell, making an enemy of our own future" (I, Withnail, & I)

After Endgame, the CGI looked like something from the first Hulk movie.

That intro dude, great video as always! 👏

I'm sure plenty of women enjoy the idea of a twerk dance being good for little Susie to see. lol

Yes, the writers are watching your episodes and retroactively changing their scripts🙂

bro i miss when they wrote diverse characters properly like black panther, falcon or black widow wtf happend! edit: aleast they tried

It's pretty rare I watch any shows made in the west these days (US/Europe) because even if they have a promising start, they usually can't pay off any of their setups, or fall into extremely bad writing tropes due to them trying to "subvert expectations".

I have not heard even 1 person say that they enjoy this show

I still can’t get over how she tries to mansplain controlling anger to the man who spent years containing the destructive power of an atom bomb from destroying the world. And the fact that while doing so she has an emotional outburst just to prove how much better she is at controlling her anger over trivial things.

That As Good as it Gets scene has lived in my head ever since the first time I saw it in the trailer.

The show has painted Jen as a narcissist from the getgo, so her being insanely insecure through most of the season so far oddly makes sense to me. Doesn't make her likable, just that it's an attempt at a character arc because she is stuck in her learning "great power, great responsibility" phase, which I wonder if she'll ever grow out of.

All the audience of any show/movie wants is for the characters to be written as human first, and male/female as a much more secondary priority. Start by setting up a loose character archetype, such as for example "Lawyer" or "Doctor" or "Scientist" or "Parent" or etc. Layer in some personality traits associated with this, and perhaps a few here and there that typically aren't but can still work for what you are using them for to give the character some flare as an individual. Once you have all that set up, you can start layering in some gender traits as a lower priority thing to help establish the completed identity of the character without their gender outright defining them. The characters should be flawed by design, which means the writers are aware of what these character flaws are and are deliberately structuring the plot around said flaws. This is where the comedy, drama, and character development comes from. A flawed character doesn't have to develop if they're not the main character, but if they don't then their lack of change should be a character interaction with other characters that is of much more consequence to said other characters over time. There's a number of different roles these unchanging characters can fit, such as acting as a comparison point to highlight the growth of the main character over time, or to act as a running gag, or etc. If a character does change over time, it should always, ALWAYS be because of something in the plot naturally and believably molding them into this new "shape". If you have a character go from bold and confident to meek and submissive, it should be because of something in the plot believably diminishing away their confidence, such as trauma and/or guilt. Likewise, if a character is going from bratty and self-absorbed to polite and compassionate, it should be because something in the plot has shaped them into that new role. A character suddenly changing for no apparent reason and with no explanation given is jarring and unnatural, and simply doesn't work in a plotline that's meant to be taken seriously as the characters personal story. It's what you expect to see in low level fan fiction that exists to fulfill someone's personal fantasy, not in an official product. The shortcoming of these writers is that they are so obsessed with gender that they've forgotten to write their characters as human. Gender is top priority in the identity of each character, and who they are as a person is directly shaped by this obsession. It's even to the point that individuals can't even do their jobs properly because the gender politics of "woman good, man bad" is all that matters and is clearly the only thing that motivates these writers. So much so to the point that when criticized for it, they jump to their isms defense immediately even though all the critics want is for them to treat their characters as human beings instead of as gender stereotypes.

That “WEEEEEEEEEeeeellllllll” within two minutes. Fantastic 👌

"If women were in charge there would be no more wars" Laughs in Margaret Thatcher

The name Pug is a dogwhistle that he likes to get pegged. They would have just called him that, but Peg is already a name.

it's like my Korean web comics about being reincarnated as a noble lady in a fantasy world that I can't stop reading

I love you sitch, really couldn’t care less about this I checked out a long time ago, but you watched it for me.

This show should've been a PERFECT inside view of the Marvel world from the "normal" non super powered ppl in Marvel. Like what happens when the Hulk smashes stuff in your neighborhood and you need to call the insurance company or sue ppl for super hero related battles ,etc..🤷‍♂️

The community clip of Pierce really got me lmao

IIRC Bridesmaids actually has a job supporting the Bride. If the Bride is all dressed up and suddenly has to use the bathroom or something she needs a BFF help her take care of business without messing up her dress. Everyone is supposed to come together to support her on her special day.