This is actually a well-written story. Bear. MC is scared. Ally shows MC not to be scared, not to assume the bear is a danger. Troll. MC learns lesson, goes from passive to active, and convinces troll not to eat the Ally that saved MC in first conflict. Brothers. They came, they saw, they got scared. This reinforces the idea not to be scared. Climax. Dragons. MC uses lessons learned, makes friends with Dragons, and they become friends (tea party is symbolic of that). Basic narrative structure. Now, the car wash? No idea.
@tedarcher9120Ай бұрын
I like novellas that are packaged in a collection with a theme. Like Machine Learning by Howie or Academic Exercises by Parker are my favourite
@tedarcher9120Ай бұрын
Don't write 500 words a day. Write a scene, or a chapter, or at least a sequence. If it's more than 500 - great, if it's less - also great
@tommylerberg2258Ай бұрын
you. are. awesome. I feel inspired and motivated now. You got a new subscriber
@21stCenturyWriterАй бұрын
Really glad it was helpful :)
@musicnotes4755Ай бұрын
You just turned perceived drudgery into much more fun. Thank you for sharing this perspective!
@ConfusedSpaceCapsule-nu8bcАй бұрын
Helpful. Thank you
@somedorkydude64832 ай бұрын
I think the reason we like sad endings isnt necesarily because it feels more realistic it feels more honest. The universe isnt cruel its indifferent. Happy endings do exist but they arent always given. So sad endings take a more honest approach and say hey its ok to be sad. I would not say this is universal I feel like great endings come with a sacrifice. A long victory, bittersweet ending, or straight up sad endings.
@EmmaRosenBooks2 ай бұрын
This is so cool
@m.f.87522 ай бұрын
Hi. Thank you for your video. I found this quite helpful. I’m curious, because I tend to do the same, what do your handwritten notes look like? By that I mean are you jotting ideas, playing with phrases and sentences, making character notes? …
@21stCenturyWriter2 ай бұрын
Hi! Actually I try to switch off the critical side of my brain and just write. Write the story, however it comes out, without overthinking. Then later when I type it up, I'll edit it. Most of my notes are written as emails to myself on my walks to and from work. Hope your writing is going well :)
@Auxik3 ай бұрын
I finished my rough draft last year. Gave it out to about 20 friends/family that were all readers. Everyone says it's amazing and told me they loved it. I never thought of getting it published as I wrote it for my late brother. I've almost completed my final edit and I've started sending query letters to agents. So far I've heard five rejections and nothing from the other ten. I can't imagine actually hearing a full request from an agent but my fingers are crossed. I wish everyone in my situation the best and hope we all get published.
@21stCenturyWriter3 ай бұрын
Best of luck :)
@erikv93663 ай бұрын
I had a short stint writing 3000 words a day or at least attempting that, (I was unemployed at the time so I could dedicate the hours) in 2 weeks I don’t want to write anymore lol
@21stCenturyWriter3 ай бұрын
Woah, that is a lot. 500 seems really manageable, I think.
@marielavoie91883 ай бұрын
I'm just discovering your channel. I love how calm you are in explaining a concept. It's refreshing to have the time to understand and ponder your words on the moment.
@21stCenturyWriter3 ай бұрын
Thank you, I'm glad you've enjoyed it :)
@markphillips75384 ай бұрын
I believe the last page is a lead-in for the next adventure he dreams up going through a carwash.
@21stCenturyWriter4 ай бұрын
Of course! Why didn't I think of that?
@xomemma4 ай бұрын
Thank you very much for this video. It's brief and elaborate❤
@21stCenturyWriter4 ай бұрын
Glad it was helpful :)
@hisalexness84784 ай бұрын
Extremely helpful to me. I’m writing my first novel and have discovered a lot of these lessons the hard way.
@21stCenturyWriter4 ай бұрын
Well you're very welcome. Best of luck with the novel :)
@OmegaEmpire5 ай бұрын
Making sense of this is simply too complicated and convoluted 😂
@ShitCoveredStatue6 ай бұрын
Hey Ben, great video! I find that watching your channel is really great for my motivation, which is often the most difficult part of writing for me. Thank you!
@21stCenturyWriter6 ай бұрын
You're welcome, I'm glad you're finding them useful :)
@KingOskar46 ай бұрын
Pinging a comment so that I am return later for my writing work I am gonna start This Year of 2024.
@21stCenturyWriter6 ай бұрын
I hope you find it useful :)
@Michaelschizophernic6 ай бұрын
Subscribed!
@21stCenturyWriter6 ай бұрын
Hey, thank you :)
@cliffhamrickwrites23786 ай бұрын
Yep! You just listed all of my philosophies towards writing. I still type my new words into a laptop rather than hand writing, though I might give that a try and see how it works.
@21stCenturyWriter6 ай бұрын
Glad I'm not the only one! Hope the hand written work goes well.
@livewireOrourke6 ай бұрын
Dean Koontz writes like that too.
@21stCenturyWriter6 ай бұрын
I love a bit of Dean Koontz. I especially enjoyed The Taking.
@scottjackson1636 ай бұрын
Does a history of self-publishing help you in any way to later get traditionally published?
@21stCenturyWriter6 ай бұрын
Speaking purely for myself, I'd have to say no. Other than the writing practice. But it was still an interesting experience.
@scottjackson1636 ай бұрын
Great advice. I can relate to all that you said. I’m 7 chapters into a novel and just yesterday I wrote three sentences of a kind that I’ve been trying to write for the past 6 months.
@21stCenturyWriter6 ай бұрын
That's amazing! Wishing you the best of luck :)
@scottjackson1636 ай бұрын
@@21stCenturyWriter I am especially pleased to know that there are other writers - writers who know more about writing than I do - who remain immersed in the work of selected “exemplary” authors. I go back continually to James Joyce, but only to certain short stories of his from the collection Dubliners. I wonder if I will ever be able to write 90,000 words that approach the elegance of “She sat at the window watching the evening invade the avenue” (from Eveline, Dubliners).
@ninjamango56 ай бұрын
Best video on writing I've come across 👍 Thanks, this will really help me get going!
@21stCenturyWriter6 ай бұрын
You are very very welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)
@PatriciaMizen6 ай бұрын
Outstanding! Thank you !!!
@21stCenturyWriter6 ай бұрын
You're welcome :)
@yuchow56527 ай бұрын
It is because the scenes don't fit the direction of the story. The writer makes it so generic that the readers do not even know what to expect other than "there must be something fantasy ahead". Since they are not sure where the story is going, they can't make sense why and how scenes matter. IMO the motivation of characters are not strong enough to carry the story going along, as they are not expected to die/injure or they really want to know what dragons are. I do not know much about kid's books so I do not know if there is some limitations on the content. Can we write something about fear? school? friendship? parents? hardship? I don't know. I can imagine there are many things could be the "bear" or "troll" and it could be more interesting as the structure of Life of Pi.
@RmhGames7 ай бұрын
Thank you buddy this video really was the thing I needed the most at this time. I even downloaded it and saved it in a folder aptly named "The Most Important Thing" just in case KZfaq has shutdown or you decided to delete this video for whatever reason I want to have and treasure this video for eternity once again thank you for this Video <3
@21stCenturyWriter7 ай бұрын
Wow, I'm glad it had such an impact :) You're very welcome.
@0chuklz07 ай бұрын
I try to keep one thing in mind when designing my characters; they did not spring wholly developed from a vacuum. Who they are, how they see the world, what matters to them are all functions of how and where they grew up. You present some very good questions to keep in mind, but they aren't what I specifically use. I imagine the process I use makes use of the same information, just generated in a different manner. Thanks for the video.
@21stCenturyWriter7 ай бұрын
These points are so important. That's a really useful way of looking at it.
@TheJohnCooperShow7 ай бұрын
I started crying at this
@21stCenturyWriter7 ай бұрын
I'm glad it meant something to you :)
@TheJohnCooperShow7 ай бұрын
@@21stCenturyWriter so emotional
@owend55388 ай бұрын
Thanks for making this, I’ve started working on a new project I was struggling to motivate myself for the last idea I had but I now I feel like I’ve been writing better then ever before (or so I like to think). However, with exams and other stuff coming up I’m worried that I’m gonna have to disconnect from it for a bit and I might lose what’s going so well now. If you don’t mind me asking, do you ever find yourself loosing the vibe of something if that makes sense and is there a method to keep doing what we enjoy through distractions?
@21stCenturyWriter8 ай бұрын
I've so funny that you've asked this because it's something I've thought about a lot recently. Check out a blog post I wrote on my website recently called "The Feel pt. 2" (bmreeves.com). Essentially, I think it's crucial to hold onto the "feel" of what your project is, at all costs. You can do this with notes, with music, and so on. However, I've also started to believe that the "feel" will inevitably fade the longer you work on the project. Because you're getting it out of your system. You're literally extracting that feeling from your mind bit by bit, and incorporating it into whatever you're creating. And this is okay. This is all part of it. You just need to keep going. Sometimes it's useful to look back on your favourite parts of the project, and try to create more of that. I've definitely started to lose the feel of the latest project I'm working on, but that's because it's nearly done. If I still had lots of "feel" left, it'd probably mean that I'm far from done. I just need to keep going. It feels a bit more like work now, but that's okay. It's all a part of the ride.
@owend55388 ай бұрын
Thanks for the response, I will have a look at that blog and I totally agree about the feel and I’ll see how it goes 👍
@johnphares33588 ай бұрын
Thanks! Just ordered the book.
@21stCenturyWriter8 ай бұрын
I hope you find it as useful as I did :)
@johnparnham59458 ай бұрын
My first book isn't well structured but it's not boring. It needs some revision but I know people who really enjoyed it. I am now more clued up as to what makes a good book and I will use my knowledge to create better fiction but I agree that it has to be entertaining. My second was much better structured and now I'm working on my third, I hope to combine all the elements of good structure, good writing and most of all enjoyable fiction to give the reader the best that I can for their satisfaction. Wish me luck. Oh! and keep making the videos. .
@johnparnham59458 ай бұрын
Ben, You've finally convinced me about theme. I write middle grade and for me, up until now, theme wasn't important to me. It was adventure that was my primary goal but for the current book that I'm writing, theme is very important. I don't want to preach to my young readers but I can now see that theme will give me a framework to work with. You have really made me think.
@21stCenturyWriter8 ай бұрын
This is great to hear! I thought the same way about theme for a long time. But it can actually be a lot of fun to wrestle with, and I think it often results in a stronger book.
@gregahunt8 ай бұрын
loved this
@21stCenturyWriter8 ай бұрын
Thank you!
@johnparnham59458 ай бұрын
I have just discovered this channel and although I'm not a complete beginner, I like your clarity of thought and communication. I will be watching all of your videos because I am sure that I can learn a lot.
@21stCenturyWriter8 ай бұрын
Thank you for this, John! Good luck with your writing, and I hope you find the videos useful.
@barelyillegal798 ай бұрын
Very clear and simple way of describing the process
@21stCenturyWriter8 ай бұрын
Thank you! I'm glad you found it clear.
@NA-gg7uy8 ай бұрын
Just ordered my copy of How to Write. I've been doing this writing thing for roughly two years now, taking a bunch of classes and polishing my stories in between child rearing and I've seen a massive improvement over time. However, reading about the craft and improving my English grammar (I completed a Copyediting course) was what really set me on a different path. I still struggle with outlining though and that's why my novels haven't been working (I've written three short ones ,none of which are published) and I really want to come to grips with it before I continue. I am so thankful for people like you Ben! Generous with your knowledge when most are not. Cheers!
@johnphares33588 ай бұрын
Keep on keeping on! Do you use the heros journey or Dan harmons story circle? I find that if you can figure out your major beats, it's easier to fill those small spaces in-between each one to make an outline.
@tomlysaght42838 ай бұрын
They apparently had some drawings and tried to fit a story around them
@shebreathesingold80438 ай бұрын
You ARE good enough to get an agent. That is the bottom line. Even if it didn't work out. Agents know what is good writing and a good story. I actually feel this was just not a good fit. I think the editor saw something they loved, and sort of went, "Gimme, Gimme!" without realizing whether they were the right fit for it. Because an editor has a role and this role is to improve a book. Sometimes they just can't do it. But someone can, including yourself. In a future time, you may look back and realize what the book needed. Sometimes, the book didn't need anything. This was one person's POV. They could have been the wrong audience.
@michaelgallegos41778 ай бұрын
Honestly, this makes me wonder if you have a hard time taking notes from a critic who is honestly trying to help you improve. How did you work with the suggestions the agent and editor gave you? It sounds like that is something you could work on. I'm not trying to discourage you because you've gotten further than almost everyone. Keep writing!
@21stCenturyWriter8 ай бұрын
You might be right there... It was a long time ago, but I believe I took the comments on board. Maybe I just wasn't a good enough writer to make the changes effectively. Live and learn!
@michaelgallegos41778 ай бұрын
I wrote my 1st novel 25 years ago and my house burned down and I lost it. Looking back it was such crap! Love and learn. Only thing you can do is keep trying
@agordon40678 ай бұрын
Finally! Someone who doesn't suggest I edit 100,000 words of plot holes and chicken scatch that was never fully thought out. It's way hard enough editing a regular literature all ready to go and legible as is.
@carolzhou84788 ай бұрын
Excellent questions. I wish this video had come up in my feed sooner.
@21stCenturyWriter8 ай бұрын
I'm glad you found them useful :)
@0chuklz08 ай бұрын
I am in the middle of querying for an agent for my second novel now, I did end up self-publishing my first one due to a lot of the reasons you said you wanted to. There is definitely a sense of accomplishment to doing that. I have made next to no money, but I do know that some of the purchases were done by people who do not know me, and just wanted to read my story. That being said, I won't go the self-publishing route again except for extreme circumstances. I don't use social media almost at all, and that is the primary space you are expected to use to promote your novel. I despise those platforms for the vacuous pits of surface level 'experts' that exist there. I have come to accept that I do not have the mindset to do the promoting that needs to be done for any level of success. Thanks for the video, you certainly clarified a lot of the half understood concepts that had been floating inside my head.
@21stCenturyWriter8 ай бұрын
You're very welcome, and thank you for sharing. I feel exactly the same way, especially with regards to social media. It's just not me. Best of luck with your second novel :)